"The deadbolts clacked open one by one—three heavy turns that echoed through the narrow hallway of Eva's flat like reluctant confessions."
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"The sight of him hit her like a sudden downpour—slicked-back platinum hair catching the light, his tailored charcoal suit impeccable even in the rain-slicked night, the ivory-handled cane hooked over his arm like an afterthought."
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"The small crescent scar on her left wrist itched under the sleeve of her oversized sweater—a remnant from a childhood tumble off her father's garden wall, back when life in Cardiff felt safe and scripted."
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"Up close, she could smell him—bergamot and something darker, like smoke from a realm she pretended not to believe in."
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"She'd been delivering takeout for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress, dodging rain-swept alleys, when Lucien had slipped her a tip not in pounds, but in whispers—warnings about shadows that hunted her after Evan, her abusive ex, had dragged her into dealings she never signed up for."
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"But when things with Evan escalated—bruises hidden under long sleeves, threats that echoed her father's courtroom battles—Lucien had pulled back."
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"But that wasn't why he was here; she could see it in the way his jaw tightened, the flicker of vulnerability in his amber eye."
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"The flat was too small for this—bookshelves groaning under tomes on Welsh folklore and demonic pacts, the single bedroom door ajar to reveal Eva's unmade bed piled with more papers."
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"Memories flooded in: his fingers tracing the scar on her wrist that first night, calling it a mark of resilience; the way he'd kissed her in the rain outside Silas' bar, promising secrets but delivering only half-truths."
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"Attraction had always simmered between them, a pull as inevitable as the Thames tide—his otherworldly allure against her quick, out-of-the-box mind."
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"She pulled away, but not far; the kitchen table pressed against her hips, trapping her in his orbit."
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"Hurt twisted in her gut, mingling with the undeniable pull—the way his suit clung slightly from the rain, outlining the lean strength she'd once mapped with her hands."
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"The flat faded—the books, the cat, the drizzle pattering against the window—like the world narrowed to this: the taste of rain and bergamot, the press of his body against hers."
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"They stumbled over a stack of scrolls, laughing breathlessly—her cool-headed facade cracking under his gaze."
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"Outside, Brick Lane hummed with late-night life—the sizzle of curries, the distant laughter from pubs—but inside Eva's flat, time suspended."
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"Rory lay against his chest, listening to his heartbeat—human-fast, demon-strong—knowing this reunion was no fairy tale, but perhaps the start of one worth the complications."
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"The deadbolts clacked open one by one—three heavy turns that echoed through the narrow hallway of Eva's flat like reluctant confessions."
1
"He was thirty-two going on eternal, a half-demon fixer who'd woven himself into the frayed edges of her life six months ago, only to unravel it all when she nee…"
2
"Ptolemy paused his circuit, eyeing the intruder with slit-eyed suspicion before darting under the couch."
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"She'd been delivering takeout for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress, dodging rain-swept alleys, when Lucien had slipped her a tip not in pounds, but in whispers—wa…"
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"But when things with Evan escalated—bruises hidden under long sleeves, threats that echoed her father's courtroom battles—Lucien had pulled back."
5
"She had been asking, piecing together the odd symbols that appeared on some of Yu-Fei's orders, ever since Silas mentioned whispers from his bar downstairs."
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"Lucien took the mug she offered, their fingers brushing, sending a jolt up her spine."
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"Hurt twisted in her gut, mingling with the undeniable pull—the way his suit clung slightly from the rain, outlining the lean strength she'd once mapped with her…"