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Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9CXHKHQ9X0J13MVRY750X
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Model:
Grok 4
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
1m 52s
Cost:
$0.046125
Provider:
xAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
93.65%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
30.11%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
66.67%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
50.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
70.55%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
97.55%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
0.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
69.52%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
39.68%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
37.38%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
83.33%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
81.2814%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off
the rickety metal ladder into the dim glow of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden.
Flashlight beams sliced through the
dust-choked air, illuminating cracked tiles and rusted tracks that hadn't seen a train in decades. Uniformed officers milled about, their radios crackling with static, while forensics techs in white suits knelt over chalk outlines and evidence markers.
The air hung heavy with
mildew and something sharper, like ozone after a storm.
Quinn adjusted the worn leather
watch
on her left wrist, a habit from her military days, and
scanned
the scene with sharp brown eyes.
This place screamed wrong—officially sealed
off for years, yet someone had breached the barriers above and dragged a body down here.
Sergeant Wilkes, a burly man
with sweat beading on his forehead despite the
chill
, approached her with a nod. "Detective Quinn. Glad you're here. Dispatch called it in an hour ago. Anonymous tip led us straight to the body. Male, mid-thirties, no ID yet. Looks like a stabbing, but..."
She brushed past him, her
boots
echoing
on the platform. "But what?"
Wilkes gestured toward the center
of the platform, where the body sprawled face-down in a pool of congealed blood. "See for yourself. Knife wound to the chest, clean through. Problem is, the blood's all wrong. Too thick, almost like it's been cooked. And no weapon on site." Quinn crouched beside the corpse, pulling on gloves.
The man's skin paled to
an unnatural gray, veins bulging like they'd
been injected
with ink.
She tilted his head with
a finger, noting the
etched
symbols on his neck—swirls and lines that resembled no gang tattoo she'd encountered.
The platform around him scattered
with oddities:
shattered
glass vials, scraps of parchment with faded runes, and what looked like a brass trinket half-buried under his arm. She picked it up
carefully
.
A small compass, its casing
green with verdigris, needle twitching erratically despite no
magnetic
interference down here. "Something off about this whole setup,"
Wilkes muttered, hovering behind her
. "No signs of struggle. No footprints in the dust except ours and the vic's. It's like he just... appeared here and dropped dead."
She straightened, pocketing the compass
for now.
Her gaze swept the arched
ceiling, where faint scorch marks blackened the tiles in patterns that twisted like vines.
The evidence nagged at her—too
neat, too contained. Eighteen years on the force, and she'd seen her share of staged scenes, but this one whispered of the inexplicable, like the night DS Morris had vanished three years back. Unexplained circumstances, the report said. Supernatural bullshit, her gut insisted.
A voice echoed from the
far end of the platform, drawing her attention. "Detective? Over here—I think I've found something." Quinn turned.
Eva Kowalski stood near a
crumbling wall, her curly red hair tucked behind one ear, round glasses perched on her freckled nose.
She clutched a worn leather
satchel bulging with books, looking every bit the academic out of place among the cops. Quinn knew her vaguely—research assistant from the British Museum, pulled in on odd cases involving artifacts. Wilkes had mentioned consulting her for the runes. Eva waved her over, green eyes bright with urgency. "Harlow—er, Detective Quinn. You need to see this." Eva pointed to a section of wall where bricks had
been pried
loose, revealing a hidden alcove stuffed with more parchments and vials. "These aren't just random scribbles. They're wards—protective sigils from ancient grimoires. And that body? The symbols on his neck match Sumerian bindings for shadow entities." Quinn crossed her arms, military bearing straight as a ramrod. "Bindings? You're saying this is some cult ritual gone wrong?" Eva adjusted her glasses, tucking a stray curl behind her ear again. "Not a cult. More like a market transaction. Look at the residue on those vials—alchemical compounds, banned stuff. This station? It's not just abandoned. Whispers in the archives call it a nexus point, a spot where... well, things slip through." Wilkes snorted from behind them. "Slips through? Come on, Kowalski. We've got a dead body, not a ghost story. Probably a drug deal. Those vials test positive for hallucinogens, I'll bet. Vic gets high, stabs himself in a frenzy. Evidence points to suicide or accident—blood's coagulated funny because of whatever he ingested." Quinn ignored him for a moment, kneeling to examine the alcove. Dust patterns showed recent disturbance, but no human prints.
Just faint, elongated marks, like
claws dragged across stone.
She pulled out the brass
compass again, watching its needle spin wildly, pointing
not north but toward the alcove's depths
. "And this? Found it under the body. Needle's going haywire." Eva's
eyes widened
as she took it, fingers
tracing
the
etched
sigils on its face. "A Veil Compass. Crafted by Shade artisans—points to supernatural rifts. If it's reacting like this, there's a portal nearby. Or was. This place, it's the Veil Market. Hidden black market for enchanted goods. Moves every full moon, but sometimes
echoes
linger." Wilkes laughed, shaking his head. "Market? In an old Tube station? You're both seeing things that aren't there. Look, the blood spatter's contained—no arterial spray, which fits a self-inflicted wound. And those marks on the wall? Vandals. Kids break in all the time. We wrap this as a junkie overdose with a knife twist, call it a day." Quinn's jaw tightened.
She paced the platform, piecing
it together. The body positioned too
perfectly
, wounds precise but blood unnaturally viscous, as if flash-frozen mid-flow. No drag marks leading in—how had the victim even gotten down here without breaching the surface seals?
She stopped at the edge
of the tracks, shining her flashlight into the tunnel. Faint glow emanated from the darkness, a shimmer like heat haze over pavement. "Eva, those sigils— they bind shadows, you said. What if the killer wasn't human?" Eva nodded, flipping open a book from her satchel. "Exactly. The Veil Market deals in rifts. Someone could have opened one, let something through. The compass is attuned to that energy—it's why the needle's spinning. Your colleague's interpretation fits a mundane crime, but it ignores the anomalies. No weapon, no entry wounds on the barriers above, and this patina on the compass? Verdigris from exposure to rift essence." Wilkes crossed his arms. "Rift essence? Listen, I've been on this force fifteen years. People kill people. Not shadows or whatever fairy tale you're spinning." Quinn held up a hand, silencing him.
She crouched again by the
body, lifting the man's sleeve. Underneath, a bone token dangled from a chain—entry requirement for the Market, if Eva's intel held. The pieces clicked:
not a random killing, but a deal soured in a place
that shouldn't exist. Morris's case flashed in her mind—similar scorch marks at his last known location, unexplained vanishing. Supernatural origins she hadn't understood then, but now... She stood, turning to Eva. "Show me where that compass points strongest." Eva handed it back, needle jerking toward the tunnel. "Down there. But be careful—rifts can pull you in." Wilkes grumbled. "You're not seriously buying this?" Quinn shot him a look, sharp jaw set. "Evidence doesn't lie, Sergeant. Yours adds up to a tidy suicide. Mine? Points to something crawling out of the dark. Let's see which holds." They moved into the tunnel, flashlight beams piercing the
gloom
. The air grew thicker,
charged
with that ozone tang. Quinn's
watch
ticked louder in the
silence
, her steps
measured
. Ahead, the shimmer intensified, walls
etched
with more sigils that glowed faintly. The compass needle stabilized, locking onto a crack in the tunnel floor—a fissure pulsing with ethereal light. Eva whispered. "That's it. A rift
echo
. Whatever came through killed him, then sealed itself." Quinn knelt, fingers brushing the edge. Heat radiated, but no burn. Deduction solidified: the victim, a Market trader, had summoned something with forbidden alchemy.
It backfired, entity struck, left
the body as warning. No human killer, explaining the lack of footprints. Wilkes's theory crumbled under the
weight
of what she saw—supernatural intrusion, just like Morris. "Call in backup," Quinn ordered Wilkes. "But not the usual. We need containment." Wilkes hesitated, then radioed it in. Eva adjusted her satchel, green eyes reflecting the rift's glow. "You believe me now?" Quinn pocketed the compass, its needle still humming. "Belief's got nothing to do with it. Facts do. And these facts say we've missed the real crime—the one hiding in the shadows." The tunnel
echoed
with their breaths, the rift's
pulse
a low thrum. Quinn's mind
raced
, connecting this to her partner's death. Same patterns, same impossibilities. She observed the fissure closer, noting how the light bent unnaturally, defying physics. Others had dismissed Morris's case as accident. Not her. Not anymore. Eva pointed to a scrap of parchment near the crack. "Look—coordinates. For the Market's next location." Quinn snatched it, unfolding the runes. Her brown
eyes narrowed
. This wasn't over. The clique she suspected—the ones dabbling in this hidden world—they'd slipped up, leaving a trail. She tucked the parchment away, deduction sharpening into
resolve
. Wilkes shifted. "So what now? We chase ghosts?" "No," Quinn replied. "We chase whatever's real enough to kill."
They pressed on, the rift's
glow fading behind them, but its implications burned bright in Quinn's thoughts. The evidence had shifted, revealing layers she'd overlooked before. Supernatural or not, justice demanded pursuit.
created_at
"2026-02-20T19:46:01.406Z"
2/20/2026, 7:46:01 PM
model
"x-ai/grok-4-07-09"
4/7/2009, 12:00:00 AM
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182717
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true
cancelled
false
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25377
moderation_latency
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generation_time
111752
tokens_prompt
1149
tokens_completion
2502
native_tokens_prompt
1660
native_tokens_completion
2845
native_tokens_completion_images
0
native_tokens_reasoning
790
native_tokens_cached
680
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
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false
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"stop"
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"completed"
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provider_responses
0
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false
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147
model_permaslug
"x-ai/grok-4-07-09"
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"xAI"
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200
api_type
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
4
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
30
tagDensity
0.133
leniency
0.267
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
93.65%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1574
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"perfectly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
30.11%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1574
totalAiIsms
22
found
0
word
"scanned"
count
1
1
word
"chill"
count
1
2
word
"echoing"
count
1
3
word
"etched"
count
3
4
word
"shattered"
count
1
5
word
"magnetic"
count
1
6
word
"echoed"
count
2
7
word
"depths"
count
1
8
word
"tracing"
count
1
9
word
"echoes"
count
1
10
word
"gloom"
count
1
11
word
"charged"
count
1
12
word
"silence"
count
1
13
word
"measured"
count
1
14
word
"echo"
count
1
15
word
"weight"
count
1
16
word
"pulse"
count
1
17
word
"raced"
count
1
18
word
"resolve"
count
1
highlights
0
"scanned"
1
"chill"
2
"echoing"
3
"etched"
4
"shattered"
5
"magnetic"
6
"echoed"
7
"depths"
8
"tracing"
9
"echoes"
10
"gloom"
11
"charged"
12
"silence"
13
"measured"
14
"echo"
15
"weight"
16
"pulse"
17
"raced"
18
"resolve"
66.67%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
2
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
1
"eyes narrowed"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
91
matches
0
"t with urgency"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
2
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
91
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
117
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
60
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1545
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
12
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
50.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
57
wordCount
1006
uniqueNames
12
maxNameDensity
1.79
worstName
"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity
3.5
worstWindowName
"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow
1
Quinn
18
Tube
1
Camden
1
Wilkes
12
Morris
4
Kowalski
1
British
1
Museum
1
Market
2
Eva
12
Supernatural
3
persons
0
"Harlow"
1
"Quinn"
2
"Wilkes"
3
"Morris"
4
"Kowalski"
5
"Museum"
6
"Eva"
places
0
"British"
globalScore
0.605
windowScore
0.5
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
70
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"looked like a brass trinket half-buried u"
70.55%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
2
per1kWords
1.294
wordCount
1545
matches
0
"not north but toward the alcove's depths"
1
"not a random killing, but a deal soured in a place"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
117
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
37
mean
41.76
std
26.72
cv
0.64
sampleLengths
0
121
1
49
2
12
3
47
4
96
5
34
6
74
7
20
8
77
9
56
10
20
11
52
12
52
13
59
14
56
15
58
16
69
17
14
18
68
19
25
20
73
21
12
22
18
23
7
24
32
25
58
26
15
27
55
28
13
29
20
30
31
31
49
32
16
33
37
34
8
35
10
36
32
97.55%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
91
matches
0
"been injected"
1
"been pried"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
194
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
11
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
10
totalSentences
117
ratio
0.085
matches
0
"This place screamed wrong—officially sealed off for years, yet someone had breached the barriers above and dragged a body down here."
1
"She tilted his head with a finger, noting the etched symbols on his neck—swirls and lines that resembled no gang tattoo she'd encountered."
2
"The evidence nagged at her—too neat, too contained."
3
"Quinn knew her vaguely—research assistant from the British Museum, pulled in on odd cases involving artifacts."
4
"No drag marks leading in—how had the victim even gotten down here without breaching the surface seals?"
5
"Underneath, a bone token dangled from a chain—entry requirement for the Market, if Eva's intel held."
6
"Morris's case flashed in her mind—similar scorch marks at his last known location, unexplained vanishing."
7
"The compass needle stabilized, locking onto a crack in the tunnel floor—a fissure pulsing with ethereal light."
8
"Wilkes's theory crumbled under the weight of what she saw—supernatural intrusion, just like Morris."
9
"The clique she suspected—the ones dabbling in this hidden world—they'd slipped up, leaving a trail."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1022
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
30
adverbRatio
0.029354207436399216
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.010763209393346379
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
117
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
117
mean
13.21
std
10.2
cv
0.772
sampleLengths
0
20
1
20
2
22
3
14
4
24
5
21
6
19
7
30
8
10
9
2
10
19
11
28
12
8
13
16
14
23
15
27
16
5
17
17
18
11
19
23
20
7
21
19
22
8
23
30
24
5
25
5
26
13
27
7
28
2
29
22
30
20
31
16
32
8
33
9
34
31
35
25
36
10
37
10
38
12
39
40
40
5
41
47
42
11
43
9
44
9
45
20
46
10
47
15
48
41
49
5
69.52%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.42735042735042733
totalSentences
117
uniqueOpeners
50
39.68%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
84
matches
0
"Just faint, elongated marks, like"
ratio
0.012
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
17
totalSentences
84
matches
0
"She brushed past him, her"
1
"She tilted his head with"
2
"She picked it up carefully."
3
"She straightened, pocketing the compass"
4
"Her gaze swept the arched"
5
"She clutched a worn leather"
6
"She pulled out the brass"
7
"She paced the platform, piecing"
8
"She stopped at the edge"
9
"She crouched again by the"
10
"She stood, turning to Eva."
11
"They moved into the tunnel,"
12
"It backfired, entity struck, left"
13
"She observed the fissure closer,"
14
"Her brown eyes narrowed."
15
"She tucked the parchment away,"
16
"They pressed on, the rift's"
ratio
0.202
37.38%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
71
totalSentences
84
matches
0
"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
1
"Flashlight beams sliced through the"
2
"The air hung heavy with"
3
"Quinn adjusted the worn leather"
4
"This place screamed wrong—officially sealed"
5
"Sergeant Wilkes, a burly man"
6
"She brushed past him, her"
7
"Wilkes gestured toward the center"
8
"Quinn crouched beside the corpse,"
9
"The man's skin paled to"
10
"She tilted his head with"
11
"The platform around him scattered"
12
"She picked it up carefully."
13
"A small compass, its casing"
14
"Wilkes muttered, hovering behind her"
15
"She straightened, pocketing the compass"
16
"Her gaze swept the arched"
17
"The evidence nagged at her—too"
18
"A voice echoed from the"
19
"Eva Kowalski stood near a"
ratio
0.845
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
84
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
44
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"Flashlight beams sliced through the dust-choked air, illuminating cracked tiles and rusted tracks that hadn't seen a train in decades."
1
"The body positioned too perfectly, wounds precise but blood unnaturally viscous, as if flash-frozen mid-flow."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
4
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
83.33%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
3
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"Wilkes muttered (mutter)"
1
"Quinn ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences
30
tagDensity
0.1
leniency
0.2
rawRatio
0.667
effectiveRatio
0.133
81.2814%