"Eva was out chasing leads on some occult relic—three deadbolts for a reason in this city—and Rory had the place to herself."
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"His platinum blond hair gleamed slicked back, not a strand astray, and his charcoal suit hugged his frame like it was tailored by devils themselves—which, given his lineage, it might've been."
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"One amber eye caught the light like molten honey; the other, black as abyss, swallowed it whole."
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"The last time she'd seen him, they'd been tangled in a Soho alley after a deal gone bloody—his blade flashing from that cane, her quick thinking saving his half-demon arse from a pack of ghouls."
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"Lucien's mismatched gaze flicked over her—tank top clinging from the humid night, shorts riding high on her thighs, black hair tousled from futile attempts at sleep."
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"The door clicked shut behind him—three deadbolts?"
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"He filled the cramped space, the scent of his cologne—sandalwood and brimstone—overpowering the curry haze."
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"\"You're precisely that girl if you think bravado saves you.\" He set his cane against the wall, freeing his hands—long fingers, scarred knuckles from fights she hadn't witnessed."
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"Books loomed like silent judges—Eva's occult tomes on demons, bindings frayed from use."
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"Amber warmth, black void—drawing her like gravity."
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"His mouth claimed hers before she could retort—fierce, demanding."
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"Tongues battled—hers defiant, his conquering."
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"The scar on her wrist brushed his skin; he kissed it, reverent."
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"\"Childhood.\" Lie by omission—Evan's bruises faded faster than this old mark."
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"Books toppled nearby—some demonology treatise thudding to the floor."
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"Intelligent Rory saw the abyss in his black eye—his father's realm, pulling."
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"Her shorts vanished next, his hands everywhere—knowing, possessive."
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"\"Always you. The human who outthinks demons.\" Amber eye met her blue—vulnerable."
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"He fetched her shorts, knelt to slide them on—tender fixer."
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"Outside, Brick Lane hummed—drunk laughter, curry scents wafting."
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"His platinum blond hair gleamed slicked back, not a strand astray, and his charcoal suit hugged his frame like it was tailored by devils themselves—which, given…"
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"He looked every inch the fixer, the information broker who'd slithered into her life six months ago and slithered out just as smoothly, leaving claw marks on he…"
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"The last time she'd seen him, they'd been tangled in a Soho alley after a deal gone bloody—his blade flashing from that cane, her quick thinking saving his half…"
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"Ex-Evan, the bruise-leaver who'd driven her from Cardiff."
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"She shoved him back, but only to the sofa's edge, tumbling with him onto sagging cushions."