Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9DHWXF8D7SJF6BV8ET5JM

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 55s
Cost:
$0.049232
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the rusted chain-link fence that cordoned off the entrance to the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Damp air clung to her skin like a second layer, carrying the faint rot of forgotten tunnels. Her boots crunched over broken glass and scattered debris as she descended the crumbling stairs, flashlight beam slicing through the gloom. The call had come in anonymous, a tip about a body down here, but something about the location gnawed at her. Abandoned stations weren't unheard of for dumpsites, yet this one felt off—too deliberate, too hidden from the usual vagrant paths. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist, noting the time: 2:17 AM. Eighteen years on the force, and instincts like hers didn't lie. The sharp jaw she inherited from her military days tightened as she pushed forward, bearing straight with that old precision drilled into her during basic training. At the bottom, the platform opened up, tiles cracked and peeling underfoot. Police tape fluttered in a draft from nowhere, and floodlights hummed, casting harsh shadows over a cluster of uniforms milling around a chalk outline. No body visible yet—probably already bagged and en route to the morgue. But the scene screamed wrongness. Scorch marks spiderwebbed across the platform walls, black and jagged, like lightning had struck indoors. Shattered vials littered the ground, their contents evaporated into iridescent stains that shimmered unnaturally under the lights. And in the center, a small brass object glinted—a compass, its face etched with strange symbols, needle frozen northward despite the underground disorientation. "Quinn," a voice called from the shadows. Sergeant Ellis, her temporary partner for the night, waved her over. He was a burly man in his fifties, mustache like a broom, always quick with the obvious. "You made it. Bloody mess, this. Victim's a John Doe, mid-thirties, no ID. Looks like he got fried—electrocution, maybe from exposed wiring down here. But get this: no burn source. Techs say the scorch patterns don't match any known electrical fault." Quinn crouched beside the chalk outline, her brown eyes narrowing. The outline showed the body sprawled, arms outstretched, as if reaching for something. She scanned the vials—remnants of some chemical spill, but the colors shifted, blues bleeding into purples without reason. "Wiring? In an abandoned station? Power's been cut for decades." Ellis shrugged, kicking at a shard of glass. "Gang hit, perhaps. Drug deal gone south. Those vials scream lab gear—meth or worse. Doe had track marks, but fresh ones, like he injected right before." She picked up the compass with gloved hands, turning it over. The casing bore a patina of verdigris, old and weathered, yet the needle quivered slightly in her palm, defying the stillness. "This yours?" "Nah, found it clutched in his fist. Some antique, probably. Pawn shop junk." Quinn's gaze flicked to the sigils on its face—protective runes, if her hazy memories from that unsolved case three years back served right. DS Morris had died in a similar setup: unexplained burns, no source. Supernatural origins she couldn't prove, but the doubt festered. She pocketed the compass for now, standing with military snap. "Evidence doesn't line up, Ellis. Scorch marks are radial, like an explosion from within the victim. No residue for accelerants, and those stains? They're moving." Ellis snorted. "Moving? You're seeing things, Quinn. Tired from the late shift? It's a dump job. Perp shocks the guy elsewhere, drags him here to rot." A new figure emerged from the tunnel mouth, curly red hair catching the floodlight glare. Eva Kowalski, all 5'4" of her, adjusted her round glasses and tugged at the worn leather satchel slung over her shoulder. Freckles dusted her cheeks, and she tucked a stray curl behind her left ear—a nervous tic Quinn had clocked during their brief prior encounters. Eva worked the restricted archives at the British Museum, a consultant on occult artifacts for the Met when cases veered weird. Quinn had called her in on a hunch, given the symbols. "Eva," Quinn greeted, voice clipped. "What do you make of this?" Eva knelt beside the stains, green eyes widening behind her lenses. She pulled a notebook from her satchel, scribbling furiously. "Harlow, this isn't your standard murder. Look at these residues—alchemical, not chemical. Banned substances, the kind traded in... well, places off the grid." Ellis crossed his arms. "Alchemical? Come on, Kowalski. You're the museum nerd, but this is real police work. No fairy dust involved." Eva ignored him, tracing a finger near the scorch marks without touching. "The patterns resemble rift burns. Supernatural energy discharge. And that compass you found? It's a Veil Compass—attuned to portals. Points to the nearest rift. This station... it's not just abandoned. Rumors in my circles say it's a hub for the Veil Market. Hidden bazaar, deals in enchanted goods. Moves every full moon, entry via bone token." Quinn's pulse quickened. Veil Market. The name echoed from Morris's last notes, scribbled before he vanished into a similar shadow. She held up the compass, watching the needle twitch. "Rift? Portal? Explain." Eva stood, brushing dirt from her knees. "Think of it like a door to another realm. Energy leaks through, warps reality. Your victim didn't get electrocuted—he crossed something he shouldn't have. Injected a substance to attune himself, maybe, but it backfired. Those vials held essence of shade bloom, illegal enhancer for crossing veils. See how the stains pulse? Residual magic." Ellis laughed, loud and barking. "Magic? Bollocks. Quinn, she's spinning yarns. This is Camden underground, not Hogwarts. Perp's a dealer, victim a junkie. Simple overdose, hallucinogens fry his brain, he wanders in here, touches a live wire we haven't found yet." Quinn paced the platform, boots echoing. She stopped at the far wall, where tiles formed a subtle mosaic—sigils matching the compass. Her sharp jaw clenched. Ellis's interpretation fit the neat police report, but it ignored the impossibilities. No wires exposed, no entry wounds on the body per the prelims she'd skimmed en route. And the compass needle now spun wildly, as if sensing her doubt. "Ellis, check the tunnel for drag marks," she ordered, buying time. He grumbled but complied, flashlight bobbing away. Alone with Eva, Quinn leaned in. "You've seen this before?" Eva nodded, tucking hair again. "In archives. Ancient texts describe markets like this—Veil Market, specifically. Sells info, artifacts, even lives. Your Doe clutched that compass like a lifeline. Maybe he was buying passage, or selling. But something ripped through him. Not human hands." Quinn examined the chalk outline again. Arms outstretched—not in agony, but supplication. Reaching for a token, perhaps? She scanned the ground, spotting a glint under debris: a small bone fragment, carved with runes. Bone token. She snatched it up, feeling a chill race up her arm. "Entry requirement," Eva murmured, peering over. "That proves it. This station hosted the market tonight. Full moon was yesterday— it just shifted." Quinn's mind raced. Morris had chased a lead on "shadow dealers" before his death. Unexplained burns, no body recovered fully—just ashes that defied forensics. If this Veil Market tied in, it explained the clique she'd suspected: a network peddling more than drugs, delving into the impossible. Ellis returned, shaking his head. "No drag marks. Clean entry. Maybe he walked in himself." "Or phased in," Eva countered. "Rift energy displaces matter. No footprints because he materialized." Ellis rolled his eyes. "Quinn, you buying this? We're wasting time. Log it as suspicious death, turf it to narcotics." But Quinn tuned him out, holding the bone token to the compass. The needle steadied, pointing deeper into the tunnels. A faint hum filled the air, like distant thunder. She followed it a few steps, flashlight revealing a wall that shimmered—illusion or barrier? Her hand passed through, cold as ice, emerging into a space that shouldn't exist: stalls remnants, tattered cloths draped over crates, air thick with incense ghosts. "Harlow?" Eva's voice followed, urgent. Quinn pulled back, the shimmer fading. Evidence didn't add up because it wasn't earthly. The victim hadn't been killed here; he'd been torn apart by crossing worlds. And that clique—supernatural criminals using places like this to operate unseen. "Ellis, secure the perimeter," she said, voice steel. "Eva, with me. We're going deeper." Ellis protested. "Deeper? It's a dead end!" "Not anymore." Quinn stepped forward, compass guiding, the bone token warm in her grip. The wall parted like mist, revealing the market's echo—a crime scene expanding into shadows she could finally chase. Eva hurried after, satchel bouncing. "This rift—it's unstable. We could get pulled in." "Then we pull back answers." Quinn's brown eyes gleamed with that old fire, the loss of Morris fueling her. The scorch marks made sense now: not electricity, but veil fire. The vials weren't drugs, but potions. And the compass? A map to the truth. They pressed on, the tunnel twisting unnaturally. Faint voices whispered from the walls, echoes of bargains struck. Quinn spotted more bone tokens scattered, as if a hasty evacuation had occurred. "Market fled when the rift went wrong," she deduced aloud. "Victim caused it? Or victim of it?" Eva nodded, glasses slipping. "Likely a botched deal. Shade artisans craft these compasses—points to rifts, but if tampered, it amplifies energy. Maybe he tried forcing a portal." A sudden gust whipped through, carrying the scent of ozone. The compass needle spun wildly. Quinn halted, spotting a figure's shadow darting ahead—humanoid, but elongated, unnatural. "Police! Stop!" she barked, breaking into a run. The shadow vanished around a bend. Quinn rounded it, finding only a dead end. But the wall pulsed, sigils glowing faintly. She pressed the bone token against it, and reality tore open—a glimpse of bustling stalls, ethereal figures bartering glowing orbs, before it snapped shut. "They're covering tracks," Eva gasped, catching up. "The market's guardians. We need to retreat—" "No." Quinn examined the wall, finding a fresh scorch: identical to the platform's. "This is where he died. Rift opened, sucked him in partially, spat him out burned." Ellis's voice echoed from behind, distant. "Quinn? Where'd you go?" She ignored him, piecing it. The colleague's mundane take blinded him, but Eva's insight cracked it open. Supernatural black market, hidden in London's underbelly. Her suspicions about the clique solidified—this was their playground. A low rumble shook the tunnel. Dust sifted from the ceiling. "Rift collapsing," Eva warned, tucking hair frantically. Quinn grabbed her arm, pulling back. They retreated to the platform, where Ellis waited, bewildered. "What the hell was that?" he demanded. "Evidence," Quinn replied, holding up the compass. "Not a gang hit. Something bigger." As uniforms swarmed, Quinn's mind whirred. The victim had sought the Veil Market, compass in hand, token ready. But interference—perhaps from that shadow figure—triggered the rift's fury. Morris's case mirrored this: a portal gone wrong, erasing him. She wouldn't let this one slip. The evidence added up now, in ways the force wouldn't accept. Yet. She'd chase the shadows herself, starting with Eva's archives. The night deepened, but Quinn's watch ticked on, marking the hunt's beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags37
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.617
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1857
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1857
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"fluttered"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count2
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count2
6
word"quivered"
count1
7
word"pawn"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"standard"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count2
12
word"quickened"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count2
14
word"echoing"
count1
15
word"mosaic"
count1
16
word"jaw clenched"
count1
17
word"glint"
count1
18
word"chill"
count1
19
word"race"
count1
20
word"raced"
count1
21
word"delving"
count1
22
word"echo"
count1
23
word"echoes"
count1
24
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"fluttered"
2"shattered"
3"shimmered"
4"etched"
5"scanned"
6"quivered"
7"pawn"
8"flicked"
9"standard"
10"tracing"
11"pulse"
12"quickened"
13"echoed"
14"echoing"
15"mosaic"
16"jaw clenched"
17"glint"
18"chill"
19"race"
20"raced"
21"delving"
22"echo"
23"echoes"
24"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences122
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen78
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1830
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions80
wordCount1464
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn22
Tube1
Camden2
Sergeant1
Ellis11
Morris5
Kowalski2
Eva15
Veil6
Compass1
Market5
Hogwarts1
Alone1
Doe1
Rift1
London1
Supernatural3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Ellis"
4"Morris"
5"Kowalski"
6"Eva"
7"Compass"
8"Market"
9"Doe"
10"Rift"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.749
windowScore0.667
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reaching for something"
1"as if sensing her doubt"
90.71% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.093
wordCount1830
matches
0"not in agony, but supplication"
1"not electricity, but veil fire"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"clutched that compass"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean34.53
std25.02
cv0.725
sampleLengths
0100
152
2108
376
451
534
634
713
879
926
1092
1111
1243
1322
1468
1532
1660
1741
1865
1918
2010
2143
2246
2322
2446
2515
2614
2720
2869
295
3038
3114
327
3332
3413
3544
3647
3727
3826
398
4045
4114
4228
4310
4433
4511
467
4715
487
4913
96.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences122
matches
0"get electrocuted"
1"been killed"
2"been torn"
3"get pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs309
matches
0"was buying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount22
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences21
totalSentences132
ratio0.159
matches
0"Abandoned stations weren't unheard of for dumpsites, yet this one felt off—too deliberate, too hidden from the usual vagrant paths."
1"No body visible yet—probably already bagged and en route to the morgue."
2"And in the center, a small brass object glinted—a compass, its face etched with strange symbols, needle frozen northward despite the underground disorientation."
3"She scanned the vials—remnants of some chemical spill, but the colors shifted, blues bleeding into purples without reason."
4"Quinn's gaze flicked to the sigils on its face—protective runes, if her hazy memories from that unsolved case three years back served right."
5"Look at these residues—alchemical, not chemical."
6"It's a Veil Compass—attuned to portals."
7"Your victim didn't get electrocuted—he crossed something he shouldn't have."
8"Quinn paced the platform, boots echoing. She stopped at the far wall, where tiles formed a subtle mosaic—sigils matching the compass. Her sharp jaw clenched. Ellis's interpretation fit the neat police report, but it ignored the impossibilities. No wires exposed, no entry wounds on the body per the prelims she'd skimmed en route. And the compass needle now spun wildly, as if sensing her doubt."
9"Ancient texts describe markets like this—Veil Market, specifically."
10"Quinn examined the chalk outline again. Arms outstretched—not in agony, but supplication. Reaching for a token, perhaps? She scanned the ground, spotting a glint under debris: a small bone fragment, carved with runes. Bone token. She snatched it up, feeling a chill race up her arm."
11"Full moon was yesterday— it just shifted.\""
12"Quinn's mind raced. Morris had chased a lead on \"shadow dealers\" before his death. Unexplained burns, no body recovered fully—just ashes that defied forensics. If this Veil Market tied in, it explained the clique she'd suspected: a network peddling more than drugs, delving into the impossible."
13"But Quinn tuned him out, holding the bone token to the compass. The needle steadied, pointing deeper into the tunnels. A faint hum filled the air, like distant thunder. She followed it a few steps, flashlight revealing a wall that shimmered—illusion or barrier? Her hand passed through, cold as ice, emerging into a space that shouldn't exist: stalls remnants, tattered cloths draped over crates, air thick with incense ghosts."
14"Quinn pulled back, the shimmer fading. Evidence didn't add up because it wasn't earthly. The victim hadn't been killed here; he'd been torn apart by crossing worlds. And that clique—supernatural criminals using places like this to operate unseen."
15"\"Not anymore.\" Quinn stepped forward, compass guiding, the bone token warm in her grip. The wall parted like mist, revealing the market's echo—a crime scene expanding into shadows she could finally chase."
16"Shade artisans craft these compasses—points to rifts, but if tampered, it amplifies energy."
17"A sudden gust whipped through, carrying the scent of ozone. The compass needle spun wildly. Quinn halted, spotting a figure's shadow darting ahead—humanoid, but elongated, unnatural."
18"The shadow vanished around a bend. Quinn rounded it, finding only a dead end. But the wall pulsed, sigils glowing faintly. She pressed the bone token against it, and reality tore open—a glimpse of bustling stalls, ethereal figures bartering glowing orbs, before it snapped shut."
19"She ignored him, piecing it. The colleague's mundane take blinded him, but Eva's insight cracked it open. Supernatural black market, hidden in London's underbelly. Her suspicions about the clique solidified—this was their playground."
20"As uniforms swarmed, Quinn's mind whirred. The victim had sought the Veil Market, compass in hand, token ready. But interference—perhaps from that shadow figure—triggered the rift's fury. Morris's case mirrored this: a portal gone wrong, erasing him."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount806
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02729528535980149
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008684863523573201
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean13.86
std13.57
cv0.979
sampleLengths
021
117
221
321
420
515
611
726
812
924
1012
115
1215
1317
1423
157
1611
1717
1841
1910
2013
2118
2210
238
2426
2511
2621
272
2813
2923
3012
319
3210
3325
342
3524
3615
3777
3811
3926
406
416
425
435
443
4510
464
4717
483
495
86.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5303030303030303
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners70
91.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences109
matches
0"Maybe he was buying passage,"
1"Maybe he walked in"
2"Maybe he tried forcing a"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences109
matches
0"Her boots crunched over broken"
1"She adjusted the worn leather"
2"He was a burly man"
3"She scanned the vials—remnants of"
4"She picked up the compass"
5"She pocketed the compass for"
6"You're the museum nerd, but"
7"It's a Veil Compass—attuned to"
8"it's not just abandoned."
9"Your victim didn't get electrocuted—he"
10"she ordered, buying time. He"
11"Your Doe clutched that compass"
12"We're wasting time."
13"she said, voice steel"
14"It's a dead"
15"We could get pulled"
16"They pressed on, the tunnel"
17"We need to"
18"She ignored him, piecing it."
19"She wouldn't let this one"
ratio0.183
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences109
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
1"Her boots crunched over broken"
2"The call had come in"
3"She adjusted the worn leather"
4"The sharp jaw she inherited"
5"Police tape fluttered in a"
6"a voice called from the"
7"Sergeant Ellis, her temporary partner"
8"He was a burly man"
9"Quinn crouched beside the chalk"
10"The outline showed the body"
11"She scanned the vials—remnants of"
12"Ellis shrugged, kicking at a"
13"She picked up the compass"
14"The casing bore a patina"
15"Quinn's gaze flicked to the"
16"DS Morris had died in"
17"She pocketed the compass for"
18"A new figure emerged from"
19"Eva Kowalski, all"
ratio0.688
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
59.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the rusted chain-link fence that cordoned off the entrance to the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden."
1"The casing bore a patina of verdigris, old and weathered, yet the needle quivered slightly in her palm, defying the stillness."
2"Quinn paced the platform, boots echoing. She stopped at the far wall, where tiles formed a subtle mosaic—sigils matching the compass. Her sharp jaw clenched. El…"
3"But Quinn tuned him out, holding the bone token to the compass. The needle steadied, pointing deeper into the tunnels. A faint hum filled the air, like distant …"
4"A sudden gust whipped through, carrying the scent of ozone. The compass needle spun wildly. Quinn halted, spotting a figure's shadow darting ahead—humanoid, but…"
59.78% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Quinn greeted, voice clipped"
1"Eva's voice followed, urgent"
2"Quinn's brown eyes, the loss of Morris fueling her"
16.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Ellis laughed (laugh)"
1"she ordered (order)"
2"Eva murmured (murmur)"
3"Ellis protested. (protest)"
4"They pressed on (press on)"
5"Eva gasped (gasp)"
6"Eva warned (warn)"
7"he demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.183
leniency0.367
rawRatio0.727
effectiveRatio0.267
82.3510%