Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9DV79KRPH03SDC0GCFB7K

Run Details

Duration:
51.2s
Cost:
$0.000312
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against Detective Harlow Quinn’s face, blurring the neon sign of a kebab shop into a smeared red glow. She tasted grit and exhaust fumes. Her leather jacket, usually enough protection against a London chill, was soaked through. Across the street, a figure darted into the gloom beneath a railway arch. Tomás Herrera. She’d been tailing him for three nights, a prickling instinct telling her he was a conduit, not a perpetrator, but a conduit to something foul. She pushed off from the wall she’d been leaning against, her sensible boots splashing in the puddles. Herrera moved with a deceptive casualness, the way a seasoned runner lulls a pursuer into overconfidence. Quinn wasn't fooled. He was fast, too fast for a former paramedic. She hadn't expected him to *run,* not like this. It confirmed her suspicions. The archway opened onto a narrow alley, barely wide enough for a single car. The air grew thick, smelling of damp concrete and something else… something metallic and faintly sweet. The alley ended abruptly at a metal grate set into the pavement. Herrera didn’t hesitate. He pulled a small, bone token from his pocket, swiped it across a recessed scanner beside the grate, and it shuddered open with a groan of protesting metal. He disappeared into the darkness. Quinn slowed, her breath misting in the cold air. She stopped at the edge of the opening, peering down. It wasn’t a sewer. It was a staircase, spiraling down into what looked like a vast, cavernous space. A faint, pulsating throb of music and voices drifted up from below, overlaid with the drip, drip, drip of water. The Veil Market. She'd heard whispers. Rumors among the city’s lowlifes, the sort who dealt in stolen antiquities and illicit substances. A black market for things that shouldn't *be* sold. Things that shouldn't *exist*. She’d dismissed them as barroom boasts. Until now. She checked her watch, the worn leather strap cold against her wrist. 23:47. A Friday night. The Market moved with the full moon, using abandoned spaces, lost tunnels; tonight it was beneath Camden. The reports had mentioned a bone token, a symbol of… admission. A chill that had nothing to do with the rain ran down her spine. The investigations surrounding DS Morris’s death three years ago kept looping back into the realms of the impossible. A case that had started with a seemingly straightforward robbery gone wrong had devolved into a tangle of strange symbols, archaic rituals, and a primal fear she hadn’t known she possessed. Officially, it was closed. An armed response failure. But Quinn knew better. She’d *felt* something that night, something cold and ancient, clinging to the edges of reality. She glanced back at the rain-slicked street. Empty. No backup responding to her silent call for assistance. She hadn’t told them where she was going, not exactly. Just that she had a lead. A strong one. And she hadn't given them Herrera's name. Not yet. The consequences of entering that underground world could be… unpredictable. Her career, for a start. She was operating outside of protocol, chasing shadows and hunches. But the thought of Herrera disappearing down there, potentially connecting with whoever – or *whatever* – was pulling the strings, was enough to override her caution. She took a deep breath, the damp air filling her lungs. Military precision, she reminded herself. Assess, plan, execute. She scanned the alley again, double-checking for witnesses. Nothing. No cameras that she could see. Good. She needed to remain untracked. The grate was heavy, reinforced steel. Someone had gone to considerable effort to conceal this place. The descent was steeper than she’d anticipated. The steps were slick with moisture, and a faint, sickly-sweet odor grew stronger with each downward spiral. The pulsating music resolved into a fractured beat, layered with exotic instruments and guttural chants. The voices below were a jumble of languages she didn't recognize, interwoven with the harsh consonants of London argot. When she reached the bottom, she found herself in a vast, labyrinthine space. The arched ceiling was lost in shadow, supported by crumbling brick pillars. Makeshift stalls lined the corridors, illuminated by flickering gas lamps and strange, glowing crystals. The air was thick with smoke, incense, and the scent of a thousand unidentifiable substances. This wasn't just a market. It was a warren, a den of iniquity, a festering wound beneath the city. People – and *things* – milled about, their faces obscured by hoods or masks. Figures with shimmering scales, others with unnaturally pale skin, creatures that looked like they’d stepped out of a nightmare. They haggled over vials of luminescent liquids, ornate daggers with curved blades, and bizarre artifacts carved from bone and stone. Quinn’s hand instinctively went to her sidearm, but she hesitated. Displaying a weapon here would be…provocative. Unduly so. This wasn't a street bust. This was something else entirely. She needed to observe, to blend in, to find Herrera. She moved slowly, keeping to the shadows, her eyes constantly scanning the crowd. The sheer audacity of the place was unsettling. The open flaunting of the forbidden. The casual acceptance of the impossible. Then she saw him. Herrera was further down the corridor, talking to a man with eyes like polished obsidian and a silver ring on every finger. He was handing over something small and wrapped in black velvet. Quinn quickened her pace, trying to get closer, but the crowd was dense, a swirling mass of bodies and otherworldly creatures. She brushed against a cloaked figure, catching a whiff of something cold and reptilian. She forced herself to keep moving. As she neared Herrera and the obsidian-eyed man, she picked up snippets of their conversation. “…the extract, as promised,” Herrera said, his voice low and tense. The man examined the velvet packet, a predatory smile spreading across his lips. “Exquisite. The Alchemist will be pleased. And your… contact?” "Safe. For now." “‘For now’ is a fragile promise, Tomás.” The man’s voice was like grinding stones. “This is a delicate transaction. Any disruption… and both your safeties are forfeit.” Quinn stopped a few feet away, pretending to examine a display of oddly shaped crystals. She needed to hear more. She needed to know what Herrera had just delivered. The man with obsidian eyes handed Herrera a handful of what looked like dried herbs. “A small payment. For your trouble.” Herrera nodded, avoiding the man’s gaze. He tucked the herbs into a pouch at his belt. Then, the man’s eyes swept across the crowd and landed on Quinn. He paused, his gaze lingering for a beat too long. A flicker of recognition crossed his face. “Well, now,” he said, his voice a silken threat. “What have we here?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"resolved"
count1
6
word"fractured"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count2
9
word"quickened"
count1
10
word"otherworldly"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"gloom"
2"throb"
3"down her spine"
4"scanned"
5"resolved"
6"fractured"
7"scanning"
8"velvet"
9"quickened"
10"otherworldly"
11"flicker"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
1"A flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords6
totalWords1119
ratio0.005
matches
0"run,"
1"be"
2"exist"
3"felt"
4"whatever"
5"things"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1071
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn8
London2
Herrera12
Veil1
Market2
Friday1
Camden1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Market"
4"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.94
windowScore0.5
20.13% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like a vast, cavernous space"
1"started with a seemingly straightforward rob"
2"looked like they’d stepped out of a night"
3"looked like dried herbs"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.894
wordCount1119
matches
0"not a perpetrator, but a conduit to something foul"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean38.59
std20.48
cv0.531
sampleLengths
079
158
278
357
442
558
676
745
851
919
1037
1158
1254
1319
1453
1538
1633
1737
1841
1915
2011
2122
223
2327
2429
2521
2616
2729
2813
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"was lost"
54.28% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs183
matches
0"was going"
1"was operating"
2"was pulling"
3"was handing"
68.32% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences115
ratio0.026
matches
0"The Market moved with the full moon, using abandoned spaces, lost tunnels; tonight it was beneath Camden."
1"But the thought of Herrera disappearing down there, potentially connecting with whoever – or *whatever* – was pulling the strings, was enough to override her caution."
2"People – and *things* – milled about, their faces obscured by hoods or masks."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1071
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, sickly-sweet odor"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03361344537815126
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.015873015873015872
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean9.73
std6.23
cv0.64
sampleLengths
020
16
213
313
42
525
617
716
83
99
109
114
1214
1311
145
1512
163
1728
185
199
2010
214
2214
2320
243
253
2615
279
284
296
302
3112
321
333
3417
3510
361
3714
3818
3931
404
414
424
4315
447
451
469
4710
486
493
51.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.39473684210526316
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences100
matches
0"Officially, it was closed."
1"Just that she had a"
2"Then she saw him."
3"Then, the man’s eyes swept"
ratio0.04
80.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences100
matches
0"She tasted grit and exhaust"
1"Her leather jacket, usually enough"
2"She’d been tailing him for"
3"She pushed off from the"
4"He was fast, too fast"
5"She hadn't expected him to"
6"It confirmed her suspicions."
7"He pulled a small, bone"
8"He disappeared into the darkness."
9"She stopped at the edge"
10"It wasn’t a sewer."
11"It was a staircase, spiraling"
12"She'd heard whispers."
13"She’d dismissed them as barroom"
14"She checked her watch, the"
15"She’d *felt* something that night,"
16"She glanced back at the"
17"She hadn’t told them where"
18"Her career, for a start."
19"She was operating outside of"
ratio0.35
35.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences100
matches
0"Rain lashed against Detective Harlow"
1"She tasted grit and exhaust"
2"Her leather jacket, usually enough"
3"She’d been tailing him for"
4"She pushed off from the"
5"Herrera moved with a deceptive"
6"Quinn wasn't fooled."
7"He was fast, too fast"
8"She hadn't expected him to"
9"It confirmed her suspicions."
10"The archway opened onto a"
11"The air grew thick, smelling"
12"something metallic and faintly sweet."
13"The alley ended abruptly at"
14"Herrera didn’t hesitate."
15"He pulled a small, bone"
16"He disappeared into the darkness."
17"Quinn slowed, her breath misting"
18"She stopped at the edge"
19"It wasn’t a sewer."
ratio0.85
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A case that had started with a seemingly straightforward robbery gone wrong had devolved into a tangle of strange symbols, archaic rituals, and a primal fear sh…"
1"Figures with shimmering scales, others with unnaturally pale skin, creatures that looked like they’d stepped out of a nightmare."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Herrera said, his voice low and tense"
1"he said, his voice a silken threat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.4377%