Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9DWPHCQWT4QDWP740CX3G

Run Details

Duration:
33.5s
Cost:
$0.001274
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bell above the shop door jangled as Rory stepped in from the damp evening, rain streaking her cheek. She hung her jacket on the hook by the door—the same hook where she’d hung Evan’s coat last winter, before she’d cut the throat of his favorite tie with her pocketknife. The memory flickered, then dissolved. Outside, a pub radio blared, but here, in Yu-Fei’s back room, the air smelled of star anise and hot sesame oil. She dropped the delivery bag onto the worktable, and a pair of dumplings rolled out, landing in a puddle of soy sauce. *Great*, she thought, kneeling to scoop them up with a paper towel. The owner, Yu-Fei, grunted from behind the counter. “Still wet out, love.” Rory tossed the dumplings in the trash, rubbing her hands on her apron. “Wet’s better than what’s underfoot otherwise.” Yu-Fei snorted, but her eyes softened. “You’ll catch your death. Take the rest of the night off. I’ll send someone cover.” Rory opened her mouth to protest—she needed the money for her electricity bill—but Yu-Fei raised a hand. “Done. Now go. Before the rain turns to ice.” The door to Yu-Fei’s Golden Empress swung shut behind her, and Rory drew in a breath of cold air. The alley behind the restaurant was narrow, lit by a single flickering bulb. A cat darted past, and she flinched, her left wrist stinging—old habit, from when Evan used to grab her there. She flexed her hand, rubbing the crescent scar. *Stop*, she told herself. *He’s gone.* Her flat was above a curry house, so the smell of cardamom followed her up the stairs. She fumbled with her keys, the lock sticking. *Silas must’ve leaned on it again*, she grumbled, jiggling it until it gave. The floorboards creaked as she stepped inside. “Ptolemy,” she called, setting her bag down. “Where are you—” A shadow detached itself from the armchair by the window. The tabby cat padded over, tail twitching, and rubbed against her ankle. Rory laughed, bending to scratch his ears. “You’re supposed to be napping.” Ptolemy meowed, a sound that was half complaint, half demand, and trotted to the desk, where a stack of scrolls and a half-empty mug of tea sat. Rory followed, pulling a chair out and dropping into it. Her legs ached—twenty trips up and down Brick Lane, plus the dumplings. She reached for her phone, intending to text Eva, her childhood friend who’d bailed her out of Cardiff, but the screen flickered black. *Of course*, she thought. The landlord had cut the power again for the third time this month. A *knock*—sharp, deliberate, not the casual thump of Silas checking if she’d locked the door—made her jump. She spun, hand on the desk drawer where she kept a paring knife. The knock came again, slower this time. “Who is it?” she called, voice tight. “Rory. It’s Lucien.” Her chest tightened. *Lucien*. She hadn’t seen him in two years, since he’d shown up at her flat at three a.m., all sauge and cologne, with a case file from the supernatural underworld and a half-finished sentence about a demon who’d stolen a relic. Then he’d left, just as suddenly, without a goodbye. No note, no text. Just a voicemail that started with *“I’m sorry”* and ended with static. She slid the knife back, stood, and crossed to the door. The peephole was smudged, so she pressed her eye to it. Lucien stood in the hallway, backlit by the light from the landing. He was taller than she remembered, his platinum-blond hair slicked back, as always, with a single strand falling over his forehead. He wore a charcoal suit, the cuffs twisted up to show a sliver of pale wrist, and his cane—ivory handle, carved with vine patterns—leaned against the wall beside him. His eyes, that heterochromatic pair, amber and black, locked onto hers through the hole. She stepped back, heart pounding. *What does he want?* After two years of silence, he couldn’t just show up. Not here. Not now. The knock came a third time. “Open the door, Rory. We need to talk.” She hesitated, then turned the deadbolt. It clicked. The door swung inward. He didn’t move for a second, just looked at her. She did the same—at his face, the scar above his left eyebrow (new?), the way his suit hung on him like a second skin, the cane at his side. She noticed his hands, too: calloused, fingers short, a faint tattoo of a pentagram on the back of his wrist. *Demons*, his mother had been human, his father a demon from Avaros. She’d seen him fight once, years ago, when a werewolf had broken into her flat. He’d crushed its windpipe with one hand, eyes black as pitch, and then he’d looked at her, and the amber eye had flickered back. *Alive*, she’d thought, and *frightened*. “Hi,” he said, finally. She stared. “You haven’t changed a bit.” “Neither have you.” His voice was lower, rougher, like he’d been smoking something pungent. He nodded at her wrist. “Still got that scar.” She touched it, self-conscious. “Childhood accident. My dad was an idiot with a kitchen knife.” He moved closer, and she stepped back, pressing her back to the door. The wall was cold. “I shouldn’t have left.” The words hung in the air, heavy. She’d spent two years replaying them: *I’m sorry. I have to go. It’s not safe.* *It’s never safe with you*, she’d wanted to say. Instead, she crossed her arms. “You should’ve tried to send a text. Or… I don’t know. A carrier pigeon. Something.” “I didn’t think I’d get the chance to.” He reached into his coat, pulled out a manila folder, and held it out. “Eva texted me. Said you were in trouble. Said Evan—” “—is dead,” she said. It was quiet, too quiet. She’d heard it six months ago, from a bouncer at a pub in Camden. Evan had been drunk, arguing with a barmaid. He’d pulled a knife. Someone else had pulled a gun. Lucien nodded. “I’m sorry.” “Again?” She laughed, bitter. “Save it, Lucien. What do you want? The folder? Yu-Fei’s gonna be mad if I don’t deliver the rest of the orders.” He didn’t hand over the folder. He just stood there, looking at her, like he was trying to memorize the way her hair fell over her cheek, the way her blue eyes narrowed when she was angry. “I’m not here about the orders.” “Then what are you here about?” She took a step toward him, crowding into his space. He smelled like rain and sandalwood, the same as always. “You left, Lucien. You *abandoned* me. And now you show up, and it’s ‘we need to talk’? What, you got bored of your demon fixer games? You miss me?” He didn’t flinch. “I miss *you*. The woman who once outsmarted a vampire by hiding in a coffin full of garlic. The woman who laughed when I told her I couldn’t feel pain, because ‘at least you’re honest.’” He reached out, his fingers brushing her cheek, and she didn’t pull away. “I made a mistake. A big one. But I need your help. There’s a demon in Whitechapel. It’s stealing souls. And it’s… it’s mine. Well, not mine. But it’s from Avaros. And it’s hunting me.” She pulled back, staring. “A demon hunting you? Since when does *your* kind get hunted?” “Since I stole a relic from its master. A relic that belongs to them, but… it was also mine.” He tilted his head, the amber eye glinting. “My father. He gave it to me before he died. Told me not to trust it. But I needed it. To protect you.” Silence. She thought of the voicemail, the *I’m sorry*. *He was trying to protect me*, a voice in her head said. *But he should’ve asked.* “You could’ve called,” she said, softer. “I did. Once. Left a message. You didn’t call back.” “You said it was ‘not safe’! I didn’t know if it was you or—” “A demon? Yeah. I know.” He stepped closer, the cane clinking against the wall. “But it’s gone now. Or it was. Until three days ago, when it showed up at my office. Attacked one of my clients. And it *smelled* you. Like you were…” He stopped, swallowing. “Like you were close. And I need to know if you’re in danger. If it’s coming for you.” She touched his chest, felt the steady thump of his heart. “You shouldn’t have come here. I’m not the same girl you left.” “I know.” He caught her hand, brought it to his lips, kissed the inside of her wrist. The scar. “You’re smarter. Harder. And that’s why I need you. The relic’s power—” “What relic?” “—it can keep the demon away. But it’s dangerous. It’s been in my family for centuries, but it feeds on emotion. On *souls*. And the last time it was used, it…” He paused, his black eye darkening. “It drove a man mad. He killed his wife. His kids. I couldn’t let that happen. So I hid it. But the demon’s after it. And it thinks you have it. Because you heard me talking about it once. When we were… when we were together.” She frowned. “I never told anyone about that. Not even Eva.” “I know. But the demon can track magic. And youyou have a little. From your mother. The Ellis family. They were witch hunters, centuries ago. Strong magic.” He let go of her hand, took a step back, and opened the folder on the desk. Inside, there was a vial of liquid silver, and a leather-bound book, the cover etched with runes. “You need to use it. To hide the relic. To keep the demon away. But you’ll have to let it into your magic. Let it feed a little. Just enough to make it think the relic’s not here.” She stared at the vial, then at him. “You want me to play bait?” “I want you to be safe. And if that means I have to watch you risk your life… well, that’s an old pain, but I can live with it. If it means I get to keep you—” He stopped, running a hand through his hair. “If it means I get to *try* to make this right, then I can do it.” A car horn blared outside, but they didn’t move. The cat purred on the desk, watching. She thought of Evan, of the way he’d made her feel small. Of Lucien, of the way he’d crushed a wolf’s windpipe like it was a grape, and then looked at her like she was the only thing that mattered. “You’re an idiot,” she said, but there was a smile in her voice. He cracked a laugh. “You’ve always said so.” She reached for the vial, picked up the book. “How do I use it?” He stepped closer, guiding her hand, his fingers wrapping around hers. “Like this.” His voice was warm against her ear, and she shivered. The cat mewed, jumping down from the desk. *Cover for us, you little shit*, she thought, but she didn’t mind. Not with him here. Not after two years of silence. “Lucien,” she said, turning to face him. “If this goes wrong—” “I know. I’ll fix it. I always do.” He cupped her face, his thumb brushing her lower lip. “I’m sorry I left you. I’m sorry I took so long to come back. But I’m here now. For as long as you’ll let me.” She leaned in, pressing her forehead to his. “Don’t make a habit of it.” “I’ll try.” The rain pattered against the window, and somewhere down the alley, a dog barked. They stood there, in the dim light of the flat, the folder on the desk, the cat asleep by the radiator, and for a moment, the world felt right. The doorbell rang. Rory tensed. “Did you bring guests?” He pulled back, a faint smile. “Probably Silas. He’s been asking after you. Said you owed him a drink.” She laughed. “I’ll kill him. Tell him I’m tied up.” “Be sure to leave the door open. I’d like to hear how it goes.” He turned to leave, then paused, looking at her over his shoulder. “Rory?” “Yeah?” “Next time, answer the phone. Please.” She opened her mouth to tell him he was a fool, but he was already gone, the door clicking shut behind him. Ptolemy yawned, stretching across the papers. She set the vial and book on the desk, sat down, and picked up her phone. The screen still didn’t work, but maybe Silas would bring over a charger. Or maybe she’d just call Yu-Fei. Or Eva. Or… She smiled, reaching for the folder. Whatever. For once, the future didn’t feel like a storm. It felt like a door, ajar. And on the other side, there was Lucien. Alive. Here. For now.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.284
leniency0.567
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2178
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2178
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count3
1
word"pounding"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pounding"
2"silence"
3"eyebrow"
4"glinting"
5"etched"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences144
matches
0"was angry"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences144
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences190
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans24
markdownWords61
totalWords2157
ratio0.028
matches
0"Great"
1"Stop"
2"He’s gone."
3"Silas must’ve leaned on it again"
4"Of course"
5"knock"
6"Lucien"
7"“I’m sorry”"
8"What does he want?"
9"Demons"
10"Alive"
11"frightened"
12"I’m sorry. I have to go. It’s not safe."
13"It’s never safe with you"
14"abandoned"
15"you"
16"your"
17"I’m sorry"
18"He was trying to protect me"
19"But he should’ve asked."
20"smelled"
21"souls"
22"try"
23"Cover for us, you little shit"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"*Stop*, she told herself."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1420
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Yu-Fei"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Evan4
Yu-Fei6
Golden1
Empress1
Brick1
Lane1
Eva2
Cardiff1
Silas3
Avaros1
Camden1
Silence1
Lucien5
persons
0"Rory"
1"Evan"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Empress"
4"Eva"
5"Silas"
6"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
3"Avaros"
4"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
99.49% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like rain and sandalwood, the same"
1"felt like a door, ajar"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2157
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences190
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean30.38
std28.9
cv0.951
sampleLengths
0122
119
221
326
466
555
634
789
844
93
1069
1122
1276
1323
1414
158
164
17115
184
197
2023
2115
2221
2351
2432
2541
264
2726
2843
2955
3086
3115
3250
3325
346
3510
3614
3765
3823
3931
402
4183
4211
43100
4414
4561
4656
4713
488
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences144
matches
0"was smudged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs270
matches
0"was trying"
1"was trying"
37.59% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences190
ratio0.037
matches
0"She hung her jacket on the hook by the door—the same hook where she’d hung Evan’s coat last winter, before she’d cut the throat of his favorite tie with her pocketknife."
1"Rory opened her mouth to protest—she needed the money for her electricity bill—but Yu-Fei raised a hand."
2"A cat darted past, and she flinched, her left wrist stinging—old habit, from when Evan used to grab her there."
3"Her legs ached—twenty trips up and down Brick Lane, plus the dumplings."
4"A *knock*—sharp, deliberate, not the casual thump of Silas checking if she’d locked the door—made her jump."
5"He wore a charcoal suit, the cuffs twisted up to show a sliver of pale wrist, and his cane—ivory handle, carved with vine patterns—leaned against the wall beside him."
6"She did the same—at his face, the scar above his left eyebrow (new?), the way his suit hung on him like a second skin, the cane at his side."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1440
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.03194444444444444
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0020833333333333333
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences190
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences190
mean11.35
std9.65
cv0.85
sampleLengths
019
131
25
321
422
512
68
74
813
96
106
1115
1217
139
1419
1513
1620
178
184
192
2017
218
2213
237
247
253
2610
2712
287
295
3027
3110
3212
3323
344
3513
3617
3713
387
397
403
413
421
4340
449
454
4612
4711
4811
4912
48.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3263157894736842
totalSentences190
uniqueOpeners62
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences125
matches
0"*Of course*, she thought."
1"Then he’d left, just as"
2"Just a voicemail that started"
3"Instead, she crossed her arms."
ratio0.032
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount71
totalSentences125
matches
0"She hung her jacket on"
1"She dropped the delivery bag"
2"She flexed her hand, rubbing"
3"Her flat was above a"
4"She fumbled with her keys,"
5"she called, setting her bag"
6"Her legs ached—twenty trips up"
7"She reached for her phone,"
8"She spun, hand on the"
9"she called, voice tight"
10"Her chest tightened."
11"She hadn’t seen him in"
12"She slid the knife back,"
13"He was taller than she"
14"He wore a charcoal suit,"
15"His eyes, that heterochromatic pair,"
16"She stepped back, heart pounding."
17"She hesitated, then turned the"
18"He didn’t move for a"
19"She did the same—at his"
ratio0.568
36.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences125
matches
0"The bell above the shop"
1"She hung her jacket on"
2"The memory flickered, then dissolved."
3"She dropped the delivery bag"
4"The owner, Yu-Fei, grunted from"
5"Rory tossed the dumplings in"
6"Yu-Fei snorted, but her eyes"
7"Rory opened her mouth to"
8"The door to Yu-Fei’s Golden"
9"The alley behind the restaurant"
10"A cat darted past, and"
11"She flexed her hand, rubbing"
12"Her flat was above a"
13"She fumbled with her keys,"
14"*Silas must’ve leaned on it"
15"The floorboards creaked as she"
16"she called, setting her bag"
17"A shadow detached itself from"
18"The tabby cat padded over,"
19"Rory laughed, bending to scratch"
ratio0.848
40.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"*But he should’ve asked.*"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Ptolemy meowed, a sound that was half complaint, half demand, and trotted to the desk, where a stack of scrolls and a half-empty mug of tea sat."
1"She reached for her phone, intending to text Eva, her childhood friend who’d bailed her out of Cardiff, but the screen flickered black."
2"She hadn’t seen him in two years, since he’d shown up at her flat at three a.m., all sauge and cologne, with a case file from the supernatural underworld and a …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"she called, voice tight"
1"he said, finally"
2"She laughed, bitter"
3"He tilted, the amber eye glinting"
4"she said, softer"
5"He stepped, the cane clinking against the wall"
6"He paused, his black eye darkening"
7"she said, turning to face him"
8"He cupped, his thumb brushing her lower lip"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.104
leniency0.209
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.03
82.8636%