"Harlow’s polished boot heels thudded over Camden’s rain-slicked cobblestones at dawn, the leather of her left wrist watch—Morris’s old one, the strap cracked where he’d caught it on a suspect’s knife three years before—digging into her pulse point."
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"The station’s platforms stretched into darkness beyond the barriers, the tracks overgrown with weeds that glowed faintly silver in the low light—a detail Jake hadn’t mentioned."
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"Curly red hair spilled over her round glasses, her freckled complexion flushed with frustration, and when she tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear—her nervous habit, Harlow noted instantly—she revealed a second bone token, identical to the one in Harlow’s pocket, tied to her wrist with a leather thong."
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"The woman’s eyes widened—green, bright as emeralds—and she fumbled in her satchel, pulling out a British Museum ID card."
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"The Veil Market—she’d heard whispers, but dismissed them as urban legend, the kind of garbage Morris used to joke about before he died."
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"It sounded like nonsense, but Jake’s confusion about the weeds, the marks on Leo’s skin, the bone token—none of it added up to a human crime."
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"“That’s a Veil Compass,” she said, stepping past Harlow’s outstretched hand—Harlow let her, too caught off guard to stop her."
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"“Midnight,” Eva said, pulling a tattered Oxford-pressed ancient history book from her satchel—proof of her master’s degree, Harlow noted."
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"Morris’s case files flashed through her mind: the swirling marks on his neck, the coroner’s dismissive fungal rash diagnosis, the missing bone token she’d found in his pocket after he died—she’d thrown it away, thinking it was a trinket from a suspect."
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"She grabbed Eva’s arm—gentle, but firm—her military training keeping her hands steady."
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"Jake yelped, dropping his radio, as a shadow slithered across the platform—too fast to be a rat, too dark to be a cloud."
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"The hum was coming from the rift, and she could see shadows swirling inside it—shapes that looked like people, but not quite, their forms shifting like smoke."
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"Jake was still muttering into his radio, the lab finally agreeing to send a supernatural specialist—something Harlow would have mocked a day ago."
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"She’d gotten the call at 4:17 a.m.: a body found in an abandoned Tube station beneath the market, no obvious cause of death, no ID, but graffiti that made the f…"
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"Harlow flashed her Metropolitan Police badge at the uniformed officer guarding the chain, his fingers fumbling to unhook a link so she could slip through."
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"At the bottom, the abandoned ticket barriers loomed, their glass shattered, their metal frames etched with swirling silver sigils that glinted in the forensics …"
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"The station’s platforms stretched into darkness beyond the barriers, the tracks overgrown with weeds that glowed faintly silver in the low light—a detail Jake h…"
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"Jake was still muttering into his radio, trying to explain the glowing weeds to the lab, his voice cracking when the weeds flared brighter for a split second."
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"Now, standing in an abandoned Tube station, holding a compass that pointed to a rift, she realized she’d thrown away the key to his death."
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"Now, standing in an abandoned Tube station, holding a brass compass that vibrated in her pocket, she couldn’t bury it anymore."
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"The silver weeds crunched under their boots, releasing a faint scent of burnt incense that made Harlow’s eyes water."
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"The hum was coming from the rift, and she could see shadows swirling inside it—shapes that looked like people, but not quite, their forms shifting like smoke."