Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9EWX2H7N41NCR3ZV3Z8A3

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 53s
Cost:
$0.044565
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung inward with a creak that echoed through the narrow hallway, revealing Lucien Moreau framed in the dim glow of the Brick Lane streetlamp. Rain slicked his platinum hair, droplets tracing paths down his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixing on her with that unreadable intensity she'd tried to forget. His tailored charcoal suit clung to his frame, damp from the downpour, and he leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the one that hid secrets sharper than any blade. Rory froze, her hand still gripping the knob. The scent of curry from the shop below mixed with the wet night air, but all she smelled was him—sandalwood and smoke, a reminder of nights she'd buried deep. "Lucien." Her voice came out flat, edged with the steel she'd forged after their last goodbye. He tilted his head, a ghost of a smile playing on his lips, though his eyes betrayed the storm brewing. Water dripped from his cuff onto the worn doormat. "Aurora." He pronounced her name like a caress, drawing out the syllables in that Marseille accent that once melted her defenses. "Or should I say Rory? You always preferred the nickname when things got... intimate." She stepped back, but didn't close the door. Not yet. The flat's clutter pressed in behind her—stacks of Eva's books teetering on every surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table like forgotten promises. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound around her ankles, oblivious to the tension thickening the air. "What are you doing here?" She crossed her arms, hiding the small crescent scar on her left wrist, the one he'd traced with his fingers once, in a different life. He didn't move forward, respecting the invisible line she'd drawn. His cane tapped once against the threshold, a soft, deliberate sound. "Unfinished business. The kind that doesn't vanish just because you walk away." Her pulse quickened, memories flooding back unbidden. The way he'd shown up in her life after Evan, pulling strings in London's shadows to keep her safe. Attraction had sparked fast—his sharp wit matching her out-of-the-box thinking, stolen kisses in hidden corners of supernatural dens. But then the hurt: his demonic heritage rearing up, secrets he'd kept about deals in Avaros, leaving her questioning if any of it was real. She'd bolted, things left unsaid, a messy tangle of desire and betrayal. "Unfinished?" She laughed, short and bitter, stepping aside just enough to let him in if he dared. Rain pelted the window behind her, a relentless drum. "You mean the part where you vanished for weeks, chasing shadows in Marseille, and I woke up to an empty bed with no explanation?" He entered then, his presence filling the cramped space like smoke. The door clicked shut behind him, sealing them in with the weight of what they'd left behind. Ptolemy hissed once, then darted under the couch, tail flicking. "Explanations aren't my forte." He set his cane against the wall, shedding his wet jacket with precise movements, revealing the crisp white shirt underneath, now translucent in spots from the rain. His eyes never left hers. "But you knew that when you let me in the first time." She turned away, busying herself with a stack of Eva's notes on the table, fingers brushing faded ink. The flat felt smaller with him here, bookshelves looming like witnesses to their history. "Eva's out. If you're here for her research, it'll have to wait." "Not Eva." He moved closer, his steps silent on the threadbare rug. Heat radiated from him, cutting through the chill she'd carried since their parting. "You. Always you." Her breath caught. She faced him, bright blue eyes locking onto his mismatched gaze. The attraction surged back, electric, pulling at the edges of the hurt. "Don't. We ended this. Or did you forget the fight? The one where you admitted your father's realm calls louder than anything here?" His jaw tightened, a flicker of pain crossing his features before he masked it. He reached out, fingers hovering near her shoulder-length black hair, not quite touching. "I remember every word. Especially the ones you didn't say. Like how you looked at me that night, Rory—like I was the monster you always feared I'd be." She swallowed hard, the unsaid truths bubbling up. Hurt had built walls, but his nearness chipped at them. "You were. Are. Half-demon, fixer of the underworld. What did you expect? I fled one cage in Cardiff, I wasn't about to lock myself in another." He closed the distance, his hand finally brushing her arm, sending sparks through her skin. The room's clutter faded, leaving just them, the rain a distant roar. "And yet here I am, unannounced, because some cages are worth breaking into." Her heart hammered. She didn't pull away. Instead, she gripped his shirt, the damp fabric cool under her fingers. "Why now? After all this time?" His amber eye softened, the black one deepening like an abyss. He leaned in, breath warm against her ear. "A lead on Evan surfaced. He's circling back, sniffing around London. I couldn't let that touch you without warning." She shoved him back a step, anger flaring hot alongside the pull. Evan—the abusive scar from her past, the reason she'd run to Eva's pleas and this chaotic life. "You think I need your protection? I'm not that girl anymore." "No." He caught her wrist gently, thumb grazing the crescent scar, a touch that ignited old flames. "You're stronger. Sharper. But strength doesn't mean facing it alone." She twisted free, but lingered close, their bodies inches apart. The air crackled with tension, history weaving through the hurt like threads in a tapestry. Attraction hummed, undeniable, stirring the things left unsaid—the way she'd missed his voice wrapping around her name, his quick mind challenging hers in the dead of night. "Then say it." Her voice dropped, challenging. "What you couldn't before. Why you really left." He hesitated, rain streaking the window like tears. His hand found her waist, pulling her flush against him, the cane forgotten against the wall. "Because loving you meant risking everything. My world devours weakness, Rory. And you... you make me weak." The admission hung between them, raw and exposed. She searched his face, the slicked-back hair now tousled from the rain, eyes holding storms of their own. Hurt twisted inside her, but so did want, the kind that had burned bright before crashing. "Weak?" She pressed her palm to his chest, feeling his heartbeat race under the shirt. "Or human?" His laugh rumbled low, genuine, cutting through the heaviness. He cupped her face, tilting it up. "Both. Always both with you." Their lips met then, fierce and unyielding, a collision of past and present. She tasted rain and regret on him, her hands tangling in his hair as he backed her against the bookshelf. Books shifted, a scroll tumbling to the floor, but neither cared. The kiss deepened, tongues dancing in a rhythm they'd perfected months ago, before the complications tore them apart. He broke away first, forehead resting against hers, breath ragged. "I didn't come here just for Evan. I came because the unsaid words have been choking me." She traced his jaw, fingers lingering on the stubble there. "Then spit them out." "You terrify me." His voice roughened, hands sliding down her sides. "Not because of what you are, but what you make me feel. Human. Alive. Things my father's blood tries to bury." Her own confessions clawed up. The hurt of his absence, the attraction that never faded, the words she'd swallowed to protect herself. "I waited, you know. After you left. Days turned to weeks. I thought maybe you'd come back, explain the demons pulling you away." He pulled her closer, their bodies aligning in the familiar way that sent heat pooling low. Ptolemy emerged from under the couch, meowing indignantly, but they ignored him. "I should have. But pride's a demon all its own." She kissed him again, slower this time, exploring the contours of his mouth, the heterochromatic eyes closing as he surrendered. The flat's chaos mirrored their reunion—messy, overflowing, impossible to contain. Rain hammered harder outside, wind rattling the panes. "Stay." The word escaped her before she could reel it in, laced with the vulnerability she'd hidden. His fingers wove through her straight black hair, tugging gently. "For tonight? Or longer?" She didn't answer with words. Instead, she led him toward the bedroom, stepping over scattered notes and books, the three deadbolts on the front door a forgotten barrier now. His cane clattered as he followed, shedding the last of his reservations. In the dim light of Eva's bedroom, cluttered with more research and a narrow bed, they shed clothes like old skins. His shirt hit the floor, revealing the lean muscles she'd memorized. She traced the lines of his body, fingers finding scars she hadn't known before—marks from his demonic heritage, perhaps. "You've changed." He murmured against her neck, lips brushing skin as he lifted her shirt over her head. "Survival does that." She arched into his touch, nails digging into his back. They fell onto the bed, a tangle of limbs and rediscovered heat. His hands explored her with the precision of a man who'd never forgotten, eliciting gasps that filled the room. She flipped them, straddling him, taking control in a way that made his black eye flash with desire. "Slow down," he growled, but his grip on her hips urged her on. "No." She rocked against him, building the rhythm, chasing the edge where hurt met healing. Time blurred, the rain a constant backdrop to their reunion. Whispers of apologies mingled with moans, unsaid things finally spilling out in fragments—how she'd dreamed of him during lonely deliveries for Yu-Fei Cheung, how he'd watched over her from afar, pulling strings to keep Evan at bay. Later, as they lay entwined, sweat cooling on their skin, Ptolemy jumped onto the bed, curling at their feet. Lucien's arm draped over her waist, his breath steady against her shoulder. "This doesn't fix everything." She stared at the ceiling, the weight of their history settling back in. "I know." His fingers traced patterns on her skin, lazy and content. "But it's a start." She turned to face him, bright blue eyes meeting his mismatched ones. The attraction burned steady now, tempered by the hurt they'd aired. Things left unsaid lingered, but lighter, like shadows retreating at dawn. Outside, the rain eased, leaving silence in its wake.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:47:06.283Z" 2/20/2026, 7:47:06 PM
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native_tokens_reasoning670
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.81
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1758
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1758
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"tension"
count2
6
word"traced"
count4
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"quickened"
count1
9
word"desire"
count2
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"looming"
count1
12
word"chill"
count1
13
word"electric"
count1
14
word"flicker"
count1
15
word"chaotic"
count1
16
word"tapestry"
count1
17
word"race"
count1
18
word"dancing"
count1
19
word"familiar"
count1
20
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"tracing"
2"unreadable"
3"intensity"
4"reminder"
5"tension"
6"traced"
7"pulse"
8"quickened"
9"desire"
10"weight"
11"looming"
12"chill"
13"electric"
14"flicker"
15"chaotic"
16"tapestry"
17"race"
18"dancing"
19"familiar"
20"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1743
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1378
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.29
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Lucien2
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Marseille1
Eva4
Evan3
London1
Avaros1
Rain3
Heat1
Time1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
4"Rain"
5"Heat"
6"Time"
7"Yu-Fei"
8"Cheung"
9"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite touching"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1743
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
90.16% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean34.86
std16.23
cv0.466
sampleLengths
079
137
216
329
435
548
630
733
881
950
1038
1148
1244
1328
1449
1555
1644
1740
1825
1938
2040
2127
2252
2315
2441
2542
2617
2721
2862
2927
3014
3132
3245
3338
3438
3517
3614
3741
3851
3918
4013
4149
4213
4315
4447
4531
4617
4716
4834
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs259
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences125
ratio0.072
matches
0"Rain slicked his platinum hair, droplets tracing paths down his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixing on her with that unreadable intensity she'd tried to forget."
1"The scent of curry from the shop below mixed with the wet night air, but all she smelled was him—sandalwood and smoke, a reminder of nights she'd buried deep."
2"The flat's clutter pressed in behind her—stacks of Eva's books teetering on every surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table like forgotten promises."
3"Attraction had sparked fast—his sharp wit matching her out-of-the-box thinking, stolen kisses in hidden corners of supernatural dens."
4"Evan—the abusive scar from her past, the reason she'd run to Eva's pleas and this chaotic life."
5"Attraction hummed, undeniable, stirring the things left unsaid—the way she'd missed his voice wrapping around her name, his quick mind challenging hers in the dead of night."
6"The flat's chaos mirrored their reunion—messy, overflowing, impossible to contain."
7"She traced the lines of his body, fingers finding scars she hadn't known before—marks from his demonic heritage, perhaps."
8"Whispers of apologies mingled with moans, unsaid things finally spilling out in fragments—how she'd dreamed of him during lonely deliveries for Yu-Fei Cheung, how he'd watched over her from afar, pulling strings to keep Evan at bay."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1392
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03017241379310345
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004310344827586207
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean13.94
std6.76
cv0.485
sampleLengths
026
125
228
38
429
516
620
79
821
914
108
112
1223
1315
1430
1510
1611
1712
187
1919
2018
2125
2212
2317
249
2524
2611
2717
2810
2931
305
3112
3218
3314
3412
3512
3613
373
383
3911
4012
4123
4214
4313
4428
458
4610
4726
4815
4912
64.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.384
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners48
67.34% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"Instead, she gripped his shirt,"
1"Instead, she led him toward"
ratio0.02
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount59
totalSentences99
matches
0"His tailored charcoal suit clung"
1"Her voice came out flat,"
2"He tilted his head, a"
3"He pronounced her name like"
4"She stepped back, but didn't"
5"She crossed her arms, hiding"
6"He didn't move forward, respecting"
7"His cane tapped once against"
8"Her pulse quickened, memories flooding"
9"She'd bolted, things left unsaid,"
10"She laughed, short and bitter,"
11"He entered then, his presence"
12"He set his cane against"
13"His eyes never left hers."
14"She turned away, busying herself"
15"He moved closer, his steps"
16"Her breath caught."
17"She faced him, bright blue"
18"His jaw tightened, a flicker"
19"He reached out, fingers hovering"
ratio0.596
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences99
matches
0"The door swung inward with"
1"Rain slicked his platinum hair,"
2"His tailored charcoal suit clung"
3"Rory froze, her hand still"
4"The scent of curry from"
5"Her voice came out flat,"
6"He tilted his head, a"
7"Water dripped from his cuff"
8"He pronounced her name like"
9"She stepped back, but didn't"
10"The flat's clutter pressed in"
11"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound"
12"She crossed her arms, hiding"
13"He didn't move forward, respecting"
14"His cane tapped once against"
15"Her pulse quickened, memories flooding"
16"The way he'd shown up"
17"Attraction had sparked fast—his sharp"
18"She'd bolted, things left unsaid,"
19"She laughed, short and bitter,"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The door swung inward with a creak that echoed through the narrow hallway, revealing Lucien Moreau framed in the dim glow of the Brick Lane streetlamp."
1"He closed the distance, his hand finally brushing her arm, sending sparks through her skin."
2"Hurt twisted inside her, but so did want, the kind that had burned bright before crashing."
3"He pulled her closer, their bodies aligning in the familiar way that sent heat pooling low."
4"His hands explored her with the precision of a man who'd never forgotten, eliciting gasps that filled the room."
5"She flipped them, straddling him, taking control in a way that made his black eye flash with desire."
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He moved, his steps silent on the threadbare rug"
1"Her voice dropped, challenging"
2"His voice roughened, hands sliding down her sides"
3"She stared, the weight of their history settling back in"
30.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"He pronounced (pronounce)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
2"She pressed (press)"
3"He murmured (murmur)"
4"he growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.119
leniency0.238
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.238
75.1589%