Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9EXSF2MDHGRJR21AZWG31

Run Details

Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.002146
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory shoved the door to The Raven's Nest open, the green neon sign above buzzing like a trapped wasp. Hinges creaked. Dim light spilled from sconces bolted to walls papered in faded maps—yellowed charts of forgotten coasts, crisscrossed with pencil marks—and black-and-white photographs of stern faces staring out from another era. The air hung thick with peat smoke and spilled stout, undercut by the low rumble of a jukebox crooning some half-forgotten blues riff. She scanned the room. Three punters hunched at the bar, elbows carving territory in rings of condensation. A couple in the corner nursed pints, their whispers lost in the gloom. Rory claimed a stool at the far end, leather cracked under her weight. Her delivery shift at Golden Empress had dragged—another night dodging cabs and drunks in Soho's snarl. She needed this. One gin, straight, to blunt the edges. The bartender shuffled forward, back turned at first, pouring from a tap with practiced twist. Grey-streaked auburn hair caught the light, neatly trimmed beard framing a jaw set like granite. He pivoted, glass foaming over. Hazel eyes locked on hers. Froth slopped onto the scarred oak. He froze. Silver signet ring glinted as his knuckles whitened around the pint handle. "Rory Carter." Her pulse kicked. Straight shoulder-length black hair swung as she whipped her head up. Bright blue eyes narrowed. That voice—gravel wrapped in velvet—cut through years. Silas Blackwood. Taller than memory painted him, 6'1" of quiet bulk, but the left leg dragged now, a hitch from knee to floor. No trace of the spry fixer her da had trusted back in Cardiff days. "Silas." She gripped the bar edge, crescent scar on her left wrist pulling tight. "Christ. You own this place now?" He slid the pint aside, abandoned it. Grabbed a bottle from the rail—Bombay Sapphire, her poison from uni nights. Poured neat, no ice, no tonic. Pushed it across. His limp echoed as he circled to her side of the bar, vaulted the hatch with a grunt that betrayed the old injury. "Sit proper." He pulled a stool close, straddled it. Hazel eyes bored in, tracing the lines time had etched around her mouth. "Last I heard, you were buried in law books. Pre-Law at Cardiff. Brendan boasted enough." She snatched the gin, downed half in one pull. Fire bloomed down her throat. Set the glass with a clink. "Da boasted bollocks. Dropped out. London swallowed the rest." Silas nodded once, slow. Beard twitched. "London does that. Chews up the sharp ones." His gaze flicked to her wrist, the scar. "Still got that mark from the swing-set tumble. Age eight. You screamed blue murder till Jennifer stitched it herself." Rory twisted her arm, hid the crescent under her sleeve. Heat crept up her neck. "Photographic memory now? Or you spying on us Carters all these years?" He leaned back, signet ring tapping rhythm on his knee. "Brendan called me after Prague. That botched job. Needed a solicitor who wouldn't flinch at classified shite. Your da pulled strings. Kept my arse out of Leavenworth." "Prague." She echoed the word, tasted ash. Da's late nights, hushed calls. "He never said. Just that you were 'old mates from the service days.' MI6 whispers." Silas's mouth crooked. "Old mates. Aye." He shifted, left leg protesting with a creak of joint. "Ran ops together once. Him legal cover, me the boot on ground. Then the knee went. Bullet fragment. Retired to this." Swept a hand at the maps, photos. "Front for contacts. Quieter life." She swirled the gin, ice absent, clear as truth. "Quieter. Right. You look like you swallowed a storm cloud, Si." His laugh barked short. "And you? Shoulder-length black now, not that wild bob. Blue eyes sharper. But delivery bike? Yu-Fei's Golden Empress? Spotted you zipping parcels last week." Rory's stool scraped. "Stalking now? Eva dragged me here. Flat upstairs. Needed out after Evan. Abusive prick. Law school's a ghost." "Evan." Silas spat the name. Ring tapped faster. "Brendan mentioned a boyfriend. Said you sounded hollow on calls." She slammed the glass down. Splinter of pain in her palm. "Hollow. Good word. He broke ribs once. Twice. I bolted. Eva's fault—her idea, London escape. Now I sling chow mein for Cheung. You gonna lecture?" Silas held her stare. "No lectures. Regrets enough without." He rose, limped to the bar. Fetched his own glass—whiskey, peaty, neat. Returned. Clinked hers. "To ghosts." They drank. Silence stretched, broken by jukebox static. "You changed." Rory eyed his limp, the grey invading auburn. "No more field chases. Barstool king." "Field ended in mud. Limp's souvenir." He flexed the knee, winced. "You? Cool-headed Rory. Quick thinker. Pre-Law star. Now parcels and pints." "Life pivots." She rubbed her scar again. "Da pushed law. Mum wanted teacher like her. I ran. Regret that?" His hazel eyes softened fraction. "Brendan died two years back. Heart. Never forgave himself for pushing you. Wanted you safe. Ironclad." Rory's throat closed. Gin soured. "Safe. Bollocks. Heard from Eva. Funeral skipped. Too tangled." Silas nodded. "I went. Stood back. Raised glass to Brendan. Your da saved me once in Dublin. Cover story when IRA sniffed close. Owed him." "Owed." She leaned in, voice dropping. "Why'd you vanish after Prague? Da said you cut ties. No calls, no cards." He drained whiskey. Set glass deliberate. "Cut ties to protect. Brass leaned hard post-op. Enemies lingered. Didn't want splash on Carters." "Linger." Rory's fingers drummed. "Fled Cardiff anyway. Evan accelerated it." Silas poured refills. Hands steady, ring catching light. "See the Nest much? Live above, flat shakes when bands play below." "Delivery ends late. Avoid crowds." She sipped. "Tonight? Craved quiet. Found you." He grinned faint, beard shifting. "Quiet's lie here. Back room's for deals. Bookshelf hides it." Nodded to wall of maps. "Ever need out, say word." Rory traced a map's contour— jagged Welsh coast. "Out. Like Da's deals? You two schemed plenty." "Aye. He barristered for shadows. I fetched dirt." Silas's voice roughened. "Regret losing touch. Could've warned about Evan types." "Warned." She shot back. "Twenty-five now. Learn hard." "Harder alone." He stood, limped to jukebox. Flipped coin. New track growled—raw guitar, lamenting vocals. Returned. "Dance once? Cardiff pub, you sixteen. Da dared." She barked laugh. "Da dared. You spun me clumsy. Mum snapped photos." "Clumsy now too." He offered hand. Ring cool against her palm. Rory rose. No music pulled them close—just sway in place, bar emptying. His limp brushed her step. Grey hair brushed her cheek. "Missed this." Silas murmured low. "Family you were." "Was." She pulled back. Blue eyes searched hazel. "Changed, Si. Both." He released her hand. Sagged onto stool. "Time carves. Unspoken bits fester." Rory reclaimed her seat. Gin gone. "Fester. Da's regret—pushing law. Mine—dropping it. Yours?" Silas stared at ring. Twisted it. "Prague. Lost partner. Knee price small. Didn't call Brendan after. Pride." "Pride." She echoed. "Kills quiet." Bar door swung. Last punter stumbled out. Neon buzzed approval. "Stay." Silas poured last rounds. "Talk more. Years to fill." She nodded. Wrist scar itched. Maps watched. Photographs judged. "Years." Rory clinked glass. "Start now." He leaned forward, beard silver-flecked. "Eva mentioned you settled. Flat solid?" "Solid. Rattles, but mine." She flexed fingers. "Evan's ghost gone. Mostly." "Mostly." Silas's eyes crinkled. "Tell it. Details." Rory exhaled. Dove in. "Met at uni mixer. Charming first. Fists later. Broke nose once—told coppers self-defense. Da believed. Mum fretted." Silas listened. Nodded at turns. "Brendan suspected. Phoned me vague. 'Watch daughter,' he said." "Watch." She snorted. "You in Soho?" "Network reaches." He tapped temple. "Eva filled gaps when you landed." "Eva." Rory softened. "Childhood anchor. Pushed flat here. 'Silas safe,' she swore." "Safe." Silas chuckled dark. "Safe as shadows." Jukebox whirred end. Silence pooled. "You?" She prodded. "Post-Prague. Knee mends how?" "Doesn't." He patted leg. "Physio, cane ditched pride. Bar built network. Contacts trickle—old ops, new whispers." "Whispers." Rory leaned. "Still spy?" "Retired." Ring spun. "Nest spies for me." She glanced walls. Maps hid secrets. Photos held ghosts. "Regret retirement?" Voice low. "Regret silence." Silas met eyes. "To Brendan. To you." Rory swallowed. "Mutual." Glasses emptied. Bar clock ticked past midnight. Neon flickered. "Another?" Silas rose, limp softer now, warmed. "Aye." She stayed. Conversation flowed. Cardiff tales resurfaced—Da's barrister rants, Mum's Welsh hymns. Prague shadows hinted, never full. Evan's bruises faded in retell. Time's weight settled, heavy but shared. Silas fetched crisps. "Eat. Gin hollows." She crunched salt. "Bossy." "Always." He winked. Dawn hinted outside. Words bridged years. Regrets hung, unspoken no more. Rory checked watch. "Shift soon." "Yu-Fei waits." Silas cleared glasses. "Door always." She stood. Hugged quick—his beard tickled, ring pressed back. "See you, Si." "Count it." Door swung shut. Neon buzzed on.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags75
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Silas nodded once [once]"
1"He leaned back [back]"
2"You look like [like]"
3"She pulled back [back]"
dialogueSentences120
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.053
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1477
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1477
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count3
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"silence"
count3
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"dance"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count2
13
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"gloom"
2"weight"
3"pulse"
4"velvet"
5"echoed"
6"tracing"
7"etched"
8"flicked"
9"silence"
10"traced"
11"dance"
12"unspoken"
13"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences200
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences200
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences215
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1446
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions113
wordCount1080
uniqueNames43
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden2
Empress2
Soho1
Blackwood1
You6
Bombay1
Sapphire1
Pre-Law2
Cardiff3
Silas17
Jennifer1
Rory17
Carters1
Him1
Evan4
Said1
London2
Cheung1
Barstool1
Limp1
Cool-headed1
Mum4
Eva3
Brendan3
Dublin1
Da7
Avoid1
Craved1
Welsh2
Learn1
Bar3
Years1
Rattles1
Pushed2
Jukebox1
Knee2
Ring3
Conversation1
Dawn1
Gin3
Neon3
persons
0"Nest"
1"Empress"
2"Blackwood"
3"You"
4"Silas"
5"Jennifer"
6"Rory"
7"Evan"
8"Cheung"
9"Limp"
10"Mum"
11"Eva"
12"Brendan"
13"Da"
14"Bar"
15"Jukebox"
16"Knee"
17"Ring"
18"Conversation"
19"Dawn"
20"Gin"
21"Neon"
places
0"Raven"
1"Golden"
2"Soho"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
5"Dublin"
6"Welsh"
7"Years"
globalScore0.713
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1446
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences215
matches
0"got that mark"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs83
mean17.42
std14.72
cv0.845
sampleLengths
074
169
246
314
42
562
620
751
837
929
1041
1127
1237
1327
1449
1520
1628
1721
1818
1936
2026
218
2216
2322
2419
2521
2614
2725
2820
2921
3010
3120
3212
3325
3416
3519
368
3724
3812
3911
4022
418
4211
4312
4413
4517
465
4710
4810
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences200
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs268
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences215
ratio0.065
matches
0"Dim light spilled from sconces bolted to walls papered in faded maps—yellowed charts of forgotten coasts, crisscrossed with pencil marks—and black-and-white photographs of stern faces staring out from another era."
1"Her delivery shift at Golden Empress had dragged—another night dodging cabs and drunks in Soho's snarl."
2"That voice—gravel wrapped in velvet—cut through years."
3"He slid the pint aside, abandoned it. Grabbed a bottle from the rail—Bombay Sapphire, her poison from uni nights. Poured neat, no ice, no tonic. Pushed it across. His limp echoed as he circled to her side of the bar, vaulted the hatch with a grunt that betrayed the old injury."
4"Eva's fault—her idea, London escape."
5"Rory traced a map's contour— jagged Welsh coast. \"Out."
6"\"Harder alone.\" He stood, limped to jukebox. Flipped coin. New track growled—raw guitar, lamenting vocals. Returned. \"Dance once?"
7"Rory rose. No music pulled them close—just sway in place, bar emptying. His limp brushed her step. Grey hair brushed her cheek."
8"Da's regret—pushing law."
9"Mine—dropping it."
10"Broke nose once—told coppers self-defense."
11"Contacts trickle—old ops, new whispers.\""
12"Conversation flowed. Cardiff tales resurfaced—Da's barrister rants, Mum's Welsh hymns. Prague shadows hinted, never full. Evan's bruises faded in retell. Time's weight settled, heavy but shared."
13"She stood. Hugged quick—his beard tickled, ring pressed back."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount747
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.012048192771084338
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0013386880856760374
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences215
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences215
mean6.73
std6.4
cv0.951
sampleLengths
019
12
230
323
44
513
613
713
816
93
107
1115
1215
135
145
156
162
1712
182
193
2011
214
227
232
2435
2515
265
2751
2831
293
303
3123
322
334
349
3521
362
379
3818
399
4015
413
429
434
446
4515
4612
475
4815
498
97.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.6325581395348837
totalSentences215
uniqueOpeners136
71.43% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences140
matches
0"Bright blue eyes narrowed."
1"Just that you were"
2"Then the knee went."
ratio0.021
94.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences140
matches
0"She scanned the room."
1"Her delivery shift at Golden"
2"She needed this."
3"He pivoted, glass foaming over."
4"Her pulse kicked."
5"She gripped the bar edge,"
6"You own this place"
7"He slid the pint aside,"
8"He pulled a stool close,"
9"She snatched the gin, downed"
10"You screamed blue murder till"
11"He leaned back, signet ring"
12"Your da pulled strings."
13"She echoed the word, tasted"
14"Him legal cover, me the"
15"She swirled the gin, ice"
16"You look like you swallowed"
17"His laugh barked short."
18"She slammed the glass down."
19"He broke ribs once."
ratio0.314
92.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences140
matches
0"Rory shoved the door to"
1"The air hung thick with"
2"She scanned the room."
3"A couple in the corner"
4"Rory claimed a stool at"
5"Her delivery shift at Golden"
6"She needed this."
7"The bartender shuffled forward, back"
8"He pivoted, glass foaming over."
9"Hazel eyes locked on hers."
10"Froth slopped onto the scarred"
11"Her pulse kicked."
12"That voice—gravel wrapped in velvet—cut"
13"She gripped the bar edge,"
14"You own this place"
15"He slid the pint aside,"
16"He pulled a stool close,"
17"Pre-Law at Cardiff."
18"She snatched the gin, downed"
19"London swallowed the"
ratio0.736
71.43% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences140
matches
0"Now I sling chow mein"
1"Now parcels and"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He slid the pint aside, abandoned it. Grabbed a bottle from the rail—Bombay Sapphire, her poison from uni nights. Poured neat, no ice, no tonic. Pushed it acros…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags47
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She leaned in, voice dropping"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Brendan boasted (boast)"
1"You screamed (scream)"
2"His laugh barked (bark)"
3"Silas spat (spit)"
4"She barked (bark)"
5"Mum snapped (snap)"
6"Silas murmured (murmur)"
7"Silas chuckled (chuckle)"
dialogueSentences120
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.133
89.1974%