Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9GFG602E5PKKH2NHH9B1D

Run Details

Duration:
27.8s
Cost:
$0.001385
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory Carter slipped through the iron gate of Richmond Park long after dusk swallowed the city skyline. The pendant hung heavy against her chest, its crimson gem no longer cool silver chain but a insistent throb, like a second pulse syncing with her own. Eva's cryptic note had dragged her here—*Meet me at the grove. Midnight. Trust no one else.*—but Eva never showed. Rory checked her phone: no signal, battery draining faster than it should. She pocketed it, gripped the torch tighter, and plunged into the treeline. Deer paths twisted underfoot, brambles snagging her jeans. Richmond Park sprawled vast and empty at this hour, a relic of old kings where stags roamed free and joggers feared the dark. She knew the spot from Eva's drunken ramble weeks back: past the Isabella Plantation, skirt the ancient oaks till the ground dipped. The air thickened as she walked, carrying a sweetness that cloyed the throat, like honey left too long in the sun. Wildflowers shouldn't bloom now—November chill nipped at her knuckles—but petals glowed faint phosphorescence under her torch, nodding in a breeze she barely felt. The path ended abrupt at a circle of oaks, trunks gnarled into shapes mimicking menhenge stones, bark etched with spirals that caught her light wrong. Too smooth, those grooves, as if carved yesterday by unseen hands. Rory crossed the boundary, boots sinking into moss that cushioned like fresh carpet. The grove unfolded: a clearing no bigger than her flat above Silas's bar, ringed by those oaks, floor carpeted in flowers that pulsed soft light—violets, foxgloves, blooms defying season. Moonlight filtered through branches overhead, but stars wheeled wrong above, constellations she half-recognised twisted into unfamiliar huntsmen. She stood alone. Heartstone warmed further, a steady heat now, not the frantic pulse from that alley near the Thames last month. Eva swore this place held answers—about the shadows chasing Rory since Cardiff, since Evan’s fists left that crescent scar whitening on her wrist. *Fae-touched, she called it. A door.* Rory snorted into the quiet, breath fogging. Superstition. But the delivery runs had piled up strangeness: packages vanishing mid-shift at Golden Empress, Yu-Fei’s wary glances, whispers of portals in the kitchen steam. A rustle stirred the far oaks. Squirrel, maybe. She swung the torch. Nothing. Beam swept empty air, flowers undisturbed. The rustle came again, closer, from behind—like fabric dragging over thorns. Rory spun. Her light carved shadows that stretched too long, oak trunks leaning inward as if listening. She backed to the centre, gravel crunching underfoot—no gravel here, just moss. Footprints? Her own, sure, but laced with others, faint impressions blooming where she'd stepped. "Okay, Eva," she muttered, voice flat in the hush. "Joke's over. Show yourself." Silence answered, thick as fog off the Thames. The flowers dimmed, then brightened in rhythm, a slow heartbeat matching the pendant's warmth. Rory touched it, chain slick under fingers. Too warm. She yanked her collar, scanned the ring. One oak differed: bark split wide, a vertical maw leaking sap that gleamed like tears. Inside, darkness swirled, not empty but layered, depths folding on themselves. Wind sighed through the grove—no, not wind. Whispers layered it, voices too soft to parse, overlapping in languages that tugged memory. Irish lilt from Da's courtroom tales? Welsh cadences from Mam's lessons? Rory shook her head, blue eyes narrowing. Tricks of the ear. She edged toward the split oak, torch probing. Sap dripped rhythmic, plink-plink on moss. Each drop birthed a flower, stem uncurling instant, petals unfurling to mirror the moon's face. The whispers sharpened. *Rory.* Her name, exhaled from the leaves. She froze. Torch beam jittered. Leaves rustled without breeze, fronds brushing her shoulders though the nearest oak stood paces off. Something skittered peripheral—dark shape darting behind the stone-oaks, low to ground, elongated limbs folding wrong. She whipped the light. Empty. But the moss showed prints now: clawed, splayed toes overlapping hers, leading inward. Heartstone burned. Rory clawed it free, held it aloft. Crimson glow bloomed, illuminating the circle in bloody wash. Flowers recoiled, petals folding shut like eyes. The whispers laughed, tinkling bells edged with thorns. *Carter. Laila. Malphora.* Aliases from shadows past, names Evan hissed in rages, names Eva flung in warnings. How? She pivoted slow, torch carving arcs. The grove shrank—or did she? Oaks loomed closer, trunks inching with each blink. No. Imagination. Breathe. Count the stones: eight, nine? Ten now, encircling tighter. One sapling sprouted mid-clearing, trunk twisting upward in seconds, branches clawing sky. Rory retreated. Her back hit bark—solid, but pulsing under palm like flesh. Scratch. From the split oak, nails on wood, deliberate. She aimed the torch. The maw yawned wider, edges writhing with rootlets that probed air. A shape resolved within: slender, pale limbs unfolding, joints bending reverse. It paused at the threshold, eyes—too many—glinting wet. Rory's breath caught. Not Eva. Taller, elongated, skin marbled like oak veins. It tilted head, flowers blooming along its arms in her torch's glare. Run. Legs locked. The thing stepped forward, moss parting silent. Whispers swelled: *Stay. Play.* Pendant scalded skin. Rory flung it—chain snapped, gem arcing to land amid flowers. Glow erupted, crimson flare banishing shadows. The thing recoiled, limbs folding inward, but others stirred now—edges of vision crawled with motion. Shapes peeled from oaks, silhouettes mimicking deer but heads crowned thorns, antlers dripping nectar. She bolted for the boundary. Oaks blocked seamless, trunks merged into wall. Claws scraped behind, gaining. Rory slammed shoulder into bark—gave way, sap slicking her jacket. Through. But the grove followed, flowers sprouting in her wake, whispers chasing. *RoryRoryRory.* Prints multiplied, circling her path. Torch died. Darkness absolute. She fumbled phone—dead screen. Heat bloomed chest: pendant, back around neck? No time. Shapes closed, breaths hot on nape—multiple, ragged. One brushed her hair, fingers twig-thin, plucking strands. Rory swung wild, fist connecting soft yield. Squeal pierced night, not animal. She ran blind, brambles real now, tearing skin. Richmond Park? Trees thinned, but stars still wrong, moon bloated low. Footfalls dogged—patter of claws, rustle of leaves mimicking feet. Heartstone throbbed guide, pulling left. Glow faint through shirt, lighting path in pulses. Cleared the treeline. Grass underfoot, open park. Distant sodium lamps flickered London's edge. Safe? No. Shapes halted at treeline, eyes winking from oaks—dozens now, watching. Whispers faded to sigh, but certainty rooted: they waited. She'd return. The grove called home. Rory stumbled toward the gate, pendant cooling slow. Phone buzzed—signal back, Eva's text: *Where r u? Missed u at grove.* Timestamp: five minutes past midnight. She glanced back. Oaks swayed. Flowers bloomed gate-side, defying frost. The gate clanged shut behind her. Streetlights buzzed welcome. But in pocket, phone warmed. New message, unknown number: *Play again soon, Malphora.* She deleted it. Walked faster. Night deepened. Rustle in the hedge beside the pavement. Claws? No. Leaves. Her wrist scar itched, crescent moon mocking. Torch reignited somehow—flicker in her grip. Beam caught reflection: in a puddle, her eyes gleamed not blue, but marbled crimson. She blinked. Blue again. Footsteps echoed hers, just out of sight. The pendant pulsed once more.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:47:58.096Z" 2/20/2026, 7:47:58 PM
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native_tokens_reasoning703
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1196
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1196
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"throb"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"maw"
count2
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"lilt"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
12
word"loomed"
count1
13
word"resolved"
count1
14
word"glinting"
count1
15
word"throbbed"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
17
word"flicker"
count1
18
word"footsteps"
count1
19
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"throb"
1"pulse"
2"chill"
3"etched"
4"pulsed"
5"silence"
6"warmth"
7"scanned"
8"maw"
9"depths"
10"lilt"
11"rhythmic"
12"loomed"
13"resolved"
14"glinting"
15"throbbed"
16"flickered"
17"flicker"
18"footsteps"
19"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences155
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences155
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords34
totalWords1168
ratio0.029
matches
0"Meet me at the grove. Midnight. Trust no one else."
1"Fae-touched, she called it. A door."
2"Rory."
3"Carter. Laila. Malphora."
4"Stay. Play."
5"RoryRoryRory."
6"Where r u? Missed u at grove."
7"Play again soon, Malphora."
62.50% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"*Fae-touched, she called it."
81.15% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount1162
uniqueNames29
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter2
Richmond3
Park3
Eva7
Isabella1
Plantation1
November1
Silas1
Thames2
Rory16
Cardiff1
Evan2
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Silence1
Da1
Mam1
Aliases1
Pendant1
Prints1
London1
Timestamp1
Heartstone3
One3
Whispers3
Torch3
Oaks3
Shapes3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"November"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"Yu-Fei"
7"Silence"
8"Pendant"
9"Prints"
10"Heartstone"
11"One"
12"Whispers"
13"Torch"
14"Oaks"
15"Shapes"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Isabella"
3"Plantation"
4"Thames"
5"Cardiff"
6"Golden"
7"Da"
8"Mam"
9"London"
10"Timestamp"
globalScore0.812
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if listening"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.568
wordCount1168
matches
0"no longer cool silver chain but"
1"not empty but layered, depths folding on themselves"
2"not blue, but marbled crimson"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences156
matches
0"left that crescent"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean43.26
std29.89
cv0.691
sampleLengths
087
197
295
383
473
513
664
772
863
951
1055
1167
1262
1344
1444
1541
1640
1725
1810
1922
207
2110
227
2320
244
257
265
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences155
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs265
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount23
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences21
totalSentences156
ratio0.135
matches
0"Eva's cryptic note had dragged her here—*Meet me at the grove."
1"Trust no one else.*—but Eva never showed."
2"Wildflowers shouldn't bloom now—November chill nipped at her knuckles—but petals glowed faint phosphorescence under her torch, nodding in a breeze she barely felt."
3"The grove unfolded: a clearing no bigger than her flat above Silas's bar, ringed by those oaks, floor carpeted in flowers that pulsed soft light—violets, foxgloves, blooms defying season."
4"Eva swore this place held answers—about the shadows chasing Rory since Cardiff, since Evan’s fists left that crescent scar whitening on her wrist."
5"The rustle came again, closer, from behind—like fabric dragging over thorns."
6"She backed to the centre, gravel crunching underfoot—no gravel here, just moss."
7"Wind sighed through the grove—no, not wind."
8"Something skittered peripheral—dark shape darting behind the stone-oaks, low to ground, elongated limbs folding wrong."
9"The grove shrank—or did she?"
10"Her back hit bark—solid, but pulsing under palm like flesh."
11"It paused at the threshold, eyes—too many—glinting wet."
12"Rory flung it—chain snapped, gem arcing to land amid flowers."
13"The thing recoiled, limbs folding inward, but others stirred now—edges of vision crawled with motion."
14"Rory slammed shoulder into bark—gave way, sap slicking her jacket."
15"She fumbled phone—dead screen."
16"Shapes closed, breaths hot on nape—multiple, ragged."
17"Footfalls dogged—patter of claws, rustle of leaves mimicking feet."
18"Shapes halted at treeline, eyes winking from oaks—dozens now, watching."
19"Phone buzzed—signal back, Eva's text: *Where r u?"
20"Torch reignited somehow—flicker in her grip."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1190
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.025210084033613446
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008403361344537816
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean7.49
std5.93
cv0.792
sampleLengths
017
127
211
31
47
512
612
78
823
922
1021
1123
1225
1311
1413
1529
1617
173
1819
1923
204
219
221
2324
246
252
264
271
286
2911
302
3115
3212
331
3413
359
364
378
3814
397
402
417
4215
4311
447
4514
466
475
487
494
85.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5128205128205128
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners80
28.25% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"Too smooth, those grooves, as"
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences118
matches
0"She pocketed it, gripped the"
1"She knew the spot from"
2"She stood alone."
3"She swung the torch."
4"Her light carved shadows that"
5"She backed to the centre,"
6"Her own, sure, but laced"
7"she muttered, voice flat in"
8"She yanked her collar, scanned"
9"She edged toward the split"
10"She whipped the light."
11"She pivoted slow, torch carving"
12"Her back hit bark—solid, but"
13"She aimed the torch."
14"It paused at the threshold,"
15"It tilted head, flowers blooming"
16"She bolted for the boundary."
17"She fumbled phone—dead screen."
18"She ran blind, brambles real"
19"She glanced back."
ratio0.186
57.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences118
matches
0"Rory Carter slipped through the"
1"The pendant hung heavy against"
2"Eva's cryptic note had dragged"
3"Rory checked her phone: no"
4"She pocketed it, gripped the"
5"Deer paths twisted underfoot, brambles"
6"Richmond Park sprawled vast and"
7"She knew the spot from"
8"The air thickened as she"
9"Wildflowers shouldn't bloom now—November chill"
10"The path ended abrupt at"
11"Rory crossed the boundary, boots"
12"The grove unfolded: a clearing"
13"Moonlight filtered through branches overhead,"
14"She stood alone."
15"Heartstone warmed further, a steady"
16"Eva swore this place held"
17"A door.* Rory snorted into"
18"A rustle stirred the far"
19"She swung the torch."
ratio0.805
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The air thickened as she walked, carrying a sweetness that cloyed the throat, like honey left too long in the sun."
1"The path ended abrupt at a circle of oaks, trunks gnarled into shapes mimicking menhenge stones, bark etched with spirals that caught her light wrong."
2"Her light carved shadows that stretched too long, oak trunks leaning inward as if listening."
3"Whispers layered it, voices too soft to parse, overlapping in languages that tugged memory."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she muttered, voice flat in the hush"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
73.2199%