| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |
| 73.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 573 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 573 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 22 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 23 | | totalWords | 565 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "leaned" | | 1 | "mouth" | | 2 | "sound" | | 3 | "\"You shouldn’t be here.\"" | | 4 | "\"The stones remember. The earth remembers. And so do we.\"" | | 5 | "wrong" | | 6 | "\"You shouldn’t have come,\"" | | 7 | "inside" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.87% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 547 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.46 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.769 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something like rusted iron and crushed petal" | | 1 | "as if reaching for something just beyond her sight" | | 2 | "felt like a *mouth*, waiting" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 565 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 18.83 | | std | 14.71 | | cv | 0.781 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.085 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something older—something like rusted iron and crushed petals." | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of her messenger bag, fingers brushing the cold metal of her phone—dead." | | 2 | "Then—movement." | | 3 | "Then—footsteps." | | 4 | "Then—a hand closed around her wrist." | | 5 | "Then—movement." | | 6 | "Its eyes—black pits, empty and endless—locked onto hers." |
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| 65.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 555 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.08288288288288288 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009009009009009009 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 6.89 | | std | 4.46 | | cv | 0.647 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 40.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.2926829268292683 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course not." | | 1 | "Just the trees, just the" | | 2 | "Just the grove, just the" | | 3 | "Just the *sound* of something" | | 4 | "Too many voices, layered like" | | 5 | "Then—a hand closed around her" | | 6 | "Just the pendant, glowing brighter," |
| | ratio | 0.103 | |
| 96.47% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d felt it the moment" | | 1 | "They *leaned*, their branches twisting" | | 2 | "She’d come for answers." | | 3 | "It felt like a *mouth*," | | 4 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 5 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" | | 6 | "She spun, but when she" | | 7 | "Her breath came faster." | | 8 | "She shouldn’t have come alone." | | 9 | "She didn’t hear words." | | 10 | "She clutched the pendant, her" | | 11 | "She backed away, her heel" | | 12 | "She stumbled, but forced herself" | | 13 | "She turned, but the grove" | | 14 | "She yelped, whirling." | | 15 | "She pulled her wrist free," | | 16 | "It wasn’t human." | | 17 | "Its eyes—black pits, empty and" | | 18 | "it said again, but this" | | 19 | "It was *inside* her head." |
| | ratio | 0.309 | |
| 77.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped past the" | | 2 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 3 | "She’d felt it the moment" | | 4 | "The trees here weren’t just" | | 5 | "They *leaned*, their branches twisting" | | 6 | "Wildflowers bloomed in clusters too" | | 7 | "Rory exhaled sharply, her breath" | | 8 | "She’d come for answers." | | 9 | "The pendant had led her" | | 10 | "It felt like a *mouth*," | | 11 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 12 | "The grove had swallowed that" | | 13 | "A twig snapped." | | 14 | "The sound came from the" | | 15 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" | | 16 | "A flicker of motion at" | | 17 | "She spun, but when she" | | 18 | "Her breath came faster." | | 19 | "She shouldn’t have come alone." |
| | ratio | 0.765 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 67.67% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 19 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped past the gnarled oak standing stones, her boots sinking slightly into the mossy ground." | | 1 | "They *leaned*, their branches twisting as if reaching for something just beyond her sight." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |