| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 64 | | tagDensity | 0.063 | | leniency | 0.125 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 73.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 950 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.58% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 950 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gleaming" | | 1 | "flicked" | | 2 | "charged" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "raced" | | 9 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 160 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 947 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "thunk" | | 1 | "click" | | 2 | "you" | | 3 | "more" | | 4 | "anything" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.05% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 722 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.94 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Voice | 1 | | Lucien | 14 | | Rory | 12 | | Ptolemy | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.53 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 97.92% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 947 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that sound" | | 1 | "chose that moment" | | 2 | "chose that moment" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 85 | | mean | 11.14 | | std | 10.66 | | cv | 0.957 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 140 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.57% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 160 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "The cat never hissed—he just went still, all sleek muscle and wide, unblinking eyes, as if he’d already accepted this." | | 1 | "The scar on her wrist—small, pale—caught the light." | | 2 | "The one from the night they’d—" | | 3 | "The last time they’d—" | | 4 | "The taste of him was familiar, intoxicating—like old memories and new promises." |
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| 89.14% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 725 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.05241379310344828 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015172413793103448 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 160 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 160 | | mean | 5.92 | | std | 5.05 | | cv | 0.853 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 44.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.25625 | | totalSentences | 160 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, slow, deliberate, he stepped" | | 1 | "Just watched Rory, arms crossed," | | 2 | "Just tilted his head, studying" | | 3 | "Just stood there, close enough" | | 4 | "Then, slowly, he closed the" | | 5 | "Then, just as suddenly, he" |
| | ratio | 0.069 | |
| 72.87% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She knew that sound." | | 1 | "His ears flattened." | | 2 | "His cane leaned against the" | | 3 | "She finally turned, leaning against" | | 4 | "She wouldn’t have." | | 5 | "He stopped at the bookshelf," | | 6 | "He glanced at her." | | 7 | "She wouldn’t think about that." | | 8 | "He didn’t deny it." | | 9 | "She could feel the weight" | | 10 | "He stepped closer." | | 11 | "She could smell the faint" | | 12 | "His jaw tightened." | | 13 | "His voice was low, dangerous" | | 14 | "Her voice was quiet, deadly" | | 15 | "She flinched, but didn’t back" | | 16 | "He reached out, brushing his" | | 17 | "She didn’t pull away." | | 18 | "His thumb traced the line" | | 19 | "His hand dropped." |
| | ratio | 0.368 | |
| 46.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt clicked shut" | | 1 | "Rory didn’t turn around." | | 2 | "She knew that sound." | | 3 | "Ptolemy’s tail lashed against the" | | 4 | "His ears flattened." | | 5 | "The cat never hissed—he just" | | 6 | "Rory exhaled through her nose," | | 7 | "The door swung open before" | | 8 | "Lucien Moreau stood there, filling" | | 9 | "His cane leaned against the" | | 10 | "Rory didn’t move." | | 11 | "The flat was small, cluttered" | | 12 | "Ptolemy chose that moment to" | | 13 | "Lucien didn’t flinch." | | 14 | "She finally turned, leaning against" | | 15 | "The scar on her wrist—small," | | 16 | "She wouldn’t have." | | 17 | "Lucien moved deeper into the" | | 18 | "He stopped at the bookshelf," | | 19 | "He glanced at her." |
| | ratio | 0.828 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She kissed him back just as fiercely, her hands gripping his suit jacket, pulling him closer." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 64 | | tagDensity | 0.063 | | leniency | 0.125 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |