| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 827 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 827 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "sentinels" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "fleeting" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "scanning" | | 12 | "shimmered" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "tracing" | | 15 | "unraveling" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 21 | | markdownWords | 111 | | totalWords | 819 | | ratio | 0.136 | | matches | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "“The Veil thins here. The Fae Court’s breath lingers.”" | | 2 | "“You’ve come,”" | | 3 | "“The hunger grows. The Veil weakens.”" | | 4 | "“This place is not for the faint of heart,”" | | 5 | "“But the choice is yours.”" | | 6 | "absorbed" | | 7 | "“The Veil here is thin,”" | | 8 | "“The Fae Court watches.”" | | 9 | "here" | | 10 | "“The hunger is coming,”" | | 11 | "“The Helbound souls are restless. They seek passage.”" | | 12 | "hungered" | | 13 | "“You’ve come to the right place,”" | | 14 | "“The Veil is thin. The Fae Court’s hunger is sated. Now, the Helbound hunger.”" | | 15 | "“Enough.”" | | 16 | "“The Veil is thinning,”" | | 17 | "“The choice is yours. Stay, and you will be bound to the Fae Court. Leave, and you will be lost.”" | | 18 | "“What do you see?”" | | 19 | "“The hunger,”" | | 20 | "“The hunger for more.”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.89% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 705 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.7 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 6 | | Aurora | 12 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Nyx | 4 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Helbound | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.649 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if breathing" | | 1 | "felt like a tether to something far mor" | | 2 | "quite meet theirs" | | 3 | "quite human" |
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| 77.90% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.221 | | wordCount | 819 | | matches | | 0 | "not in the grove, but *here*, coiled in the dark" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 43.11 | | std | 29.57 | | cv | 0.686 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 106 | | 1 | 95 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 92 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 78 | | 12 | 68 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 122 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 66 | | ratio | 0.106 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something wild—like crushed petals and the first breath of spring after winter’s silence." | | 1 | "She had heard whispers of this place—Isolde’s grove, a pocket between realms where time bent and secrets whispered—but nothing had prepared her for the sheer *weight* of it." | | 2 | "They didn’t speak, but the way they watched her—like she might vanish at any moment—left her breath shallow." | | 3 | "The water didn’t reflect her, didn’t mirror anything—it *absorbed* the light, leaving only a faint, shifting outline of her silhouette." | | 4 | "But this—this was something else." | | 5 | "A figure emerged from the foliage—a Helbound soul, their form twisted, their eyes hollow." | | 6 | "She had come seeking answers, but now she understood—this was not a place for mortals." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 713 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 14 | | adverbRatio | 0.019635343618513323 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0070126227208976155 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 66 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 66 | | mean | 12.41 | | std | 7.63 | | cv | 0.615 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 39.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.22727272727272727 | | totalSentences | 66 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 81.54% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "She had heard whispers of" | | 1 | "They didn’t speak, but the" | | 2 | "She moved without sound, her" | | 3 | "she said, her voice a" | | 4 | "It was cold to the" | | 5 | "she had said" | | 6 | "They followed the path deeper" | | 7 | "She had come seeking answers," | | 8 | "she said, her voice dropping" | | 9 | "She had heard of Dymas," | | 10 | "They were gaunt, their skin" | | 11 | "they rasped, their voice like" | | 12 | "She had never fought before," | | 13 | "She drew it, the moonsilver" | | 14 | "She had come seeking answers," | | 15 | "It was a place for" | | 16 | "She turned to the pool," | | 17 | "She had come seeking escape." |
| | ratio | 0.346 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boots" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed around" | | 3 | "She had heard whispers of" | | 4 | "Nyx moved beside her, their" | | 5 | "They didn’t speak, but the" | | 6 | "Aurora clutched the Heartstone pendant" | | 7 | "The pendant had been a" | | 8 | "Aurora asked, her voice low" | | 9 | "Nyx’s form flickered, their voice" | | 10 | "Isolde stepped into the clearing," | | 11 | "She moved without sound, her" | | 12 | "she said, her voice a" | | 13 | "Aurora’s fingers tightened around the" | | 14 | "It was cold to the" | | 15 | "Isolde had given it to" | | 16 | "she had said" | | 17 | "They followed the path deeper" | | 18 | "The ground beneath their feet" | | 19 | "Aurora’s pulse hammered in her" |
| | ratio | 0.923 | |
| 96.15% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft moss beneath her, the small crescent scar on her left wrist prickling faintly at the edges of h…" | | 1 | "The standing stones loomed around her like silent sentinels, their bark etched with patterns that pulsed faintly, as if breathing." | | 2 | "Nyx moved beside her, their form shifting between solid and shadow, their violet eyes reflecting the light from the trees in a way that made Aurora’s pulse quic…" | | 3 | "She moved without sound, her pale lavender eyes scanning the group with a gaze that didn’t quite meet theirs." | | 4 | "It was cold to the touch, its moonsilver edge humming faintly, as if alive." | | 5 | "Aurora’s pulse hammered in her ears as she stepped onto a patch of moss that gave way under her weight, revealing a hidden pool of water that shimmered with an …" | | 6 | "They were gaunt, their skin stretched too tight over their bones, their lips peeled back in a grin that wasn’t quite human." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora asked, her voice low" | | 1 | "she said, her voice a melody of riddles" | | 2 | "she said, her voice dropping to a whisper" |
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| 94.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.389 | | leniency | 0.778 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |