Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9K4HGNZMBAMKJNC4VT90A

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Duration:
4.1s
Cost:
$0.000274
Provider:
Mistral

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something wild—like crushed petals and the first breath of spring after winter’s silence. Aurora stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft moss beneath her, the small crescent scar on her left wrist prickling faintly at the edges of her awareness. The standing stones loomed around her like silent sentinels, their bark etched with patterns that pulsed faintly, as if breathing. She had heard whispers of this place—Isolde’s grove, a pocket between realms where time bent and secrets whispered—but nothing had prepared her for the sheer *weight* of it. Nyx moved beside her, their form shifting between solid and shadow, their violet eyes reflecting the light from the trees in a way that made Aurora’s pulse quicken. They didn’t speak, but the way they watched her—like she might vanish at any moment—left her breath shallow. Aurora clutched the Heartstone pendant at her throat, its deep crimson glow warm against her skin, a reminder of the world beyond this one. The pendant had been a gift, a fleeting connection to something she’d thought lost. Now, it felt like a tether to something far more dangerous. “You’re sure this is the right place?” Aurora asked, her voice low. Nyx’s form flickered, their voice a whisper carried on the wind. *“The Veil thins here. The Fae Court’s breath lingers.”* Isolde stepped into the clearing, her silver hair catching the light like scattered stars. She moved without sound, her pale lavender eyes scanning the group with a gaze that didn’t quite meet theirs. *“You’ve come,”* she said, her voice a melody of riddles. *“The hunger grows. The Veil weakens.”* Aurora’s fingers tightened around the Fae-forged blade at her belt. It was cold to the touch, its moonsilver edge humming faintly, as if alive. Isolde had given it to her, a gift wrapped in warnings. *“This place is not for the faint of heart,”* she had said. *“But the choice is yours.”* They followed the path deeper into the grove, the trees parting to reveal a clearing where the air smelled of honey and something metallic, like old blood. The ground beneath their feet was uneven, the earth shifting beneath their soles. Aurora’s pulse hammered in her ears as she stepped onto a patch of moss that gave way under her weight, revealing a hidden pool of water that shimmered with an unnatural sheen. The water didn’t reflect her, didn’t mirror anything—it *absorbed* the light, leaving only a faint, shifting outline of her silhouette. Nyx hovered near the edge, their form dissolving into the shadows. *“The Veil here is thin,”* they murmured. *“The Fae Court watches.”* Aurora’s stomach twisted. She had come seeking answers, but what if this place was a trap? What if the visions she sought were not in the grove, but *here*, coiled in the dark? Isolde knelt beside the pool, her fingers tracing the water’s surface. *“The hunger is coming,”* she said, her voice dropping to a whisper. *“The Helbound souls are restless. They seek passage.”* Aurora’s breath caught. She had heard of Dymas, the realm of gluttony, where Helbound souls were trapped, forced to feast on the excess of the living. But this—this was something else. Something older. Something that *hungered*. A rustling came from the trees. Aurora turned, her blood turning to ice. A figure emerged from the foliage—a Helbound soul, their form twisted, their eyes hollow. They were gaunt, their skin stretched too tight over their bones, their lips peeled back in a grin that wasn’t quite human. *“You’ve come to the right place,”* they rasped, their voice like dry leaves scraping stone. *“The Veil is thin. The Fae Court’s hunger is sated. Now, the Helbound hunger.”* Aurora’s hand flew to the blade at her belt. She had never fought before, but she had trained. She drew it, the moonsilver catching the light as it gleamed against her palm. The Helbound soul lunged, their fingers clawing at her throat, but the blade cut through their magic like it was nothing. The soul shrieked, their form unraveling into smoke, their screams swallowed by the grove’s silence. Nyx stepped forward, their form solid now, their voice a low growl. *“Enough.”* Isolde stood, her presence a force. *“The Veil is thinning,”* she said. *“The choice is yours. Stay, and you will be bound to the Fae Court. Leave, and you will be lost.”* Aurora’s heart pounded. She had come seeking answers, but now she understood—this was not a place for mortals. It was a place for those who were willing to pay the price. She turned to the pool, her fingers hovering over the water’s surface. *“What do you see?”* she asked. Isolde’s eyes gleamed. *“The hunger,”* she said. *“The hunger for more.”* Aurora swallowed hard. She had come seeking escape. But now, she wondered if she had come seeking something far worse.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount827
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount827
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"sentinels"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"fleeting"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count2
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"shimmered"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count1
14
word"tracing"
count1
15
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"loomed"
2"sentinels"
3"etched"
4"pulsed"
5"weight"
6"pulse"
7"reminder"
8"fleeting"
9"flickered"
10"whisper"
11"scanning"
12"shimmered"
13"stomach"
14"tracing"
15"unraveling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans21
markdownWords111
totalWords819
ratio0.136
matches
0"weight"
1"“The Veil thins here. The Fae Court’s breath lingers.”"
2"“You’ve come,”"
3"“The hunger grows. The Veil weakens.”"
4"“This place is not for the faint of heart,”"
5"“But the choice is yours.”"
6"absorbed"
7"“The Veil here is thin,”"
8"“The Fae Court watches.”"
9"here"
10"“The hunger is coming,”"
11"“The Helbound souls are restless. They seek passage.”"
12"hungered"
13"“You’ve come to the right place,”"
14"“The Veil is thin. The Fae Court’s hunger is sated. Now, the Helbound hunger.”"
15"“Enough.”"
16"“The Veil is thinning,”"
17"“The choice is yours. Stay, and you will be bound to the Fae Court. Leave, and you will be lost.”"
18"“What do you see?”"
19"“The hunger,”"
20"“The hunger for more.”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.89% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount705
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Isolde6
Aurora12
Heartstone1
Nyx4
Fae-forged1
Dymas1
Helbound3
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Aurora"
2"Nyx"
places(empty)
globalScore0.649
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if breathing"
1"felt like a tether to something far mor"
2"quite meet theirs"
3"quite human"
77.90% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.221
wordCount819
matches
0"not in the grove, but *here*, coiled in the dark"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean43.11
std29.57
cv0.686
sampleLengths
0106
195
212
320
449
552
692
722
833
931
1036
1178
1268
1313
1432
1531
1618
1711
1820
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs122
matches
0"were willing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences66
ratio0.106
matches
0"The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something wild—like crushed petals and the first breath of spring after winter’s silence."
1"She had heard whispers of this place—Isolde’s grove, a pocket between realms where time bent and secrets whispered—but nothing had prepared her for the sheer *weight* of it."
2"They didn’t speak, but the way they watched her—like she might vanish at any moment—left her breath shallow."
3"The water didn’t reflect her, didn’t mirror anything—it *absorbed* the light, leaving only a faint, shifting outline of her silhouette."
4"But this—this was something else."
5"A figure emerged from the foliage—a Helbound soul, their form twisted, their eyes hollow."
6"She had come seeking answers, but now she understood—this was not a place for mortals."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount713
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.019635343618513323
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0070126227208976155
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean12.41
std7.63
cv0.615
sampleLengths
029
129
220
328
428
518
624
714
811
912
1011
119
1214
1319
1410
156
1610
1714
1811
1912
205
2127
2213
2332
2420
2511
267
274
283
2913
3017
3111
3212
338
343
3523
365
372
383
396
407
4114
4222
4315
4414
459
469
4714
4821
4915
39.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.22727272727272727
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners15
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.54% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences52
matches
0"She had heard whispers of"
1"They didn’t speak, but the"
2"She moved without sound, her"
3"she said, her voice a"
4"It was cold to the"
5"she had said"
6"They followed the path deeper"
7"She had come seeking answers,"
8"she said, her voice dropping"
9"She had heard of Dymas,"
10"They were gaunt, their skin"
11"they rasped, their voice like"
12"She had never fought before,"
13"She drew it, the moonsilver"
14"She had come seeking answers,"
15"It was a place for"
16"She turned to the pool,"
17"She had come seeking escape."
ratio0.346
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences52
matches
0"The air in the grove"
1"Aurora stepped forward, her boots"
2"The standing stones loomed around"
3"She had heard whispers of"
4"Nyx moved beside her, their"
5"They didn’t speak, but the"
6"Aurora clutched the Heartstone pendant"
7"The pendant had been a"
8"Aurora asked, her voice low"
9"Nyx’s form flickered, their voice"
10"Isolde stepped into the clearing,"
11"She moved without sound, her"
12"she said, her voice a"
13"Aurora’s fingers tightened around the"
14"It was cold to the"
15"Isolde had given it to"
16"she had said"
17"They followed the path deeper"
18"The ground beneath their feet"
19"Aurora’s pulse hammered in her"
ratio0.923
96.15% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"Now, it felt like a"
ratio0.019
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Aurora stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft moss beneath her, the small crescent scar on her left wrist prickling faintly at the edges of h…"
1"The standing stones loomed around her like silent sentinels, their bark etched with patterns that pulsed faintly, as if breathing."
2"Nyx moved beside her, their form shifting between solid and shadow, their violet eyes reflecting the light from the trees in a way that made Aurora’s pulse quic…"
3"She moved without sound, her pale lavender eyes scanning the group with a gaze that didn’t quite meet theirs."
4"It was cold to the touch, its moonsilver edge humming faintly, as if alive."
5"Aurora’s pulse hammered in her ears as she stepped onto a patch of moss that gave way under her weight, revealing a hidden pool of water that shimmered with an …"
6"They were gaunt, their skin stretched too tight over their bones, their lips peeled back in a grin that wasn’t quite human."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Aurora asked, her voice low"
1"she said, her voice a melody of riddles"
2"she said, her voice dropping to a whisper"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.111
68.2759%