Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9M29E3THZ5RMM67W4KZV4

Run Details

Duration:
3m 30s
Cost:
$0.017557
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow Quinn clutched a weathered bone token in her right hand as she kicked open the rusted metal door of the abandoned Camden Tube station. The damp air hit her first—thick with the ghost of burnt sage and the coppery tang of spilled alchemical fluid—before her flashlight beam carved a narrow path through the darkness. She stood at 5’9”, her Met detective uniform crisp despite the grime clinging to its cuffs, and her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught the faint glow of her light. Her sharp jaw set. She checked her worn leather watch, its strap frayed at the edges from 18 years of fidgeting during stakeouts and crime scene walks. 3:17 a.m. The full moon had dipped below the horizon 12 hours prior; the Veil Market should have cleared every trace of its existence by then. A distant rumble of a passing train above shook the damp tiles, sending a shower of dust from the cracked ceiling onto her shoulder. She brushed it off with a military precision flick of her wrist. Eva Kowalski followed close behind, her curly red hair matted with damp that dripped onto her freckled complexion. She tucked a strand behind her left ear—her nervous habit—before adjusting the strap of her worn leather satchel, its interior bulging with occult texts that thudded against her 5’4” frame with every step. Her round glasses fogged, and she wiped them on her sweater sleeve before glancing at the scattered debris: crushed jars of enchanted thyme, a broken vial oozing neon green fluid that sizzled when it touched a damp tile, and half a dozen bone tokens scattered across the floor—each carved with a tiny, unique sigil marking their owner’s market membership. Harlow’s military precision movements guided her to the body slumped against a chipped platform pillar. The man wore a tattered black cloak, its hem frayed from dragging across the tile, and his fingers curled into a fist at his side. She knelt, her knees creaking faintly, and avoided touching the corpse—coroner’s tape strung between the pillar and a nearby bench marked the perimeter. Her flashlight beam locked on the object peeking from the man’s fist: a small brass compass, its casing coated in a patina of verdigris, its face etched with intricate protective sigils that twisted in the light. She recognized it immediately from the occult case files Eva had shared with her after DS Morris’s death—files that tied the Veil Market to a string of unexplained fatalities across London. Sharp jaw tight, flashlight wandering to the man’s unmarked neck. The coroner’s initial report, faxed to her that morning, had flagged no trauma, no poison, no underlying health conditions that could explain his sudden death. Coroner’s report flagged no cause of death. Market cleared at midnight. His watch—stopped at 2:00 a.m. Eva tucked hair again, pulling a thick ancient history text from her satchel. The book’s spine was faded, its pages crinkled from years of being hauled between the British Museum’s restricted archives and her London flat. She tapped a page marked with a pressed clover, where a matching sigil stared up at them—its lines identical to the ones on the compass. That compass is a Veil Market exclusive. Shade artisans craft them to point to supernatural rifts. The sigils shield the user from the rift’s raw energy; without them, the energy incinerates the user from the inside out. Harlow stood, her military stance rigid, fingers brushing the face of her own watch. She’d found Morris’s body in a similar state three years prior—slumped against a warehouse wall, no cause of death, his watch stopped at 2:00 a.m., a faint sigil etched into his wrist that the coroner had dismissed as a random scratch. She’d spent months chasing dead ends, dismissing the supernatural angle until Eva had presented her with irrefutable evidence from the museum’s archives. Morris’s watch stopped at 2:00 a.m. too. His wrist had a scratch that matched that sigil. Eva’s freckled face creased into a frown, and she set the book down on a nearby bench—its surface sticky with spilled alchemical fluid. She knelt, her glasses slipping down her nose as she leaned in to study the compass. She didn’t touch it—she knew better than to handle enchanted goods without the proper protective gloves, a lesson she’d learned after a faulty alchemical vial burned her palm during a research trip to Oxford. Market rules say stragglers get marked with a branding iron sigil. This man has no mark. Someone wanted him left behind, to be found by the police—someone who knew we’d tie it to Morris’s case. Harlow leaned in, her flashlight beam narrowing on the compass’s sigil until the lines blurred. She spotted it then—a faint scratch cutting through one of the central sigils, its edges filled with a thin layer of dried black fluid that glinted faintly in the light. She’d missed it on her first pass, her mind clouded by the memory of Morris’s cold hand in hers as she’d knelt beside his body. Scratch on the sigil. Dried black fluid. Tampered with. Eva’s eyes widened behind her round glasses, and she tucks hair again—faster this time, a sign of her growing unease. She grabbed her book, flipping to a page with a diagram of banned alchemical fluids, each marked with a warning symbol. That black fluid is banished from the market. It’s made from crushed shadow moss and rift residue—breaks sigil protection in seconds. He didn’t know the compass was altered; he thought it was a legitimate trade. Harlow’s sharp jaw tightened further, and she stepped back, her boots crunching on a crushed alchemical vial that oozed neon green fluid. She glanced at the scattered bone tokens, and her flashlight beam caught one tucked inside the man’s cloak tear—its sigil different from the others, carved with a tiny raven that matched the vendor description Eva had shared with her months prior. Bone token in his cloak tear. Raven sigil. That’s the sabotage vendor you told me about. Eva tucked hair again, her satchel slipping off her shoulder as she leaned in to study the token. She caught the satchel, her fingers fumbling with the strap, and flipped to another page in her book—this one filled with handwritten notes about the raven-sigil vendor, a man named Kael who’d been exiled from the market for selling altered enchanted goods to unsuspecting customers. Kael. He sells altered compasses to tourists and novice occultists. He’s wanted by the market’s enforcers for breaking trade rules; they’ll kill him if they find him. Harlow’s flashlight beam wandered to the door, where the faint glow of dawn began to seep through the cracks. She checked her worn leather watch again—3:45 a.m. The sun would rise in 15 minutes, and the uniformed Met officers she’d delayed would arrive soon. She’d called in a favor from a fellow detective to hold them back, but she didn’t know how long the favor would last. We need to find Kael. He’s the link between this death and Morris’s. Eva pulled a small notebook from her satchel, her freckled fingers scribbling furiously. She wrote down Kael’s description—tall, bald, with a scar across his left cheek, always wearing a raven-feather cloak—and tore the page out, handing it to Harlow. He moves with the market. Next location is unknown, but the Veil Compass—if we fix its sigils—can point us to his current hideout. Harlow took the page, her fingers brushing Eva’s. She glanced at the man’s body, then at the Veil Compass in his fist. She’d spent three years in the dark, chasing the ghost of Morris’s death, but now she had a tangible lead—a compass that could guide her to the man responsible. Fix the sigils. I’ll get a team to secure the compass and the bone token as evidence. Eva tucks hair again, her eyes narrowing as she studied the compass. She pulled a small vial of clear fluid from her satchel—she’d brought it from the museum’s archives, a substance made from pressed moonflower petals that could repair broken sigils without damaging the artifact. She held it up, the fluid glinting in Harlow’s flashlight beam. I need a clean cloth. And a steady hand—one wrong move and the sigils break entirely. Harlow stepped to the bench, grabbing a discarded cotton cloth from a pile of market remnants—its surface free of alchemical residue, a rare find in the cluttered station. She handed it to Eva, her military precision ensuring her fingers didn’t shake. She watched as Eva unscrewed the vial’s cap, the faint smell of jasmine wafting through the air and cutting through the coppery tang of spilled fluid. Hurry. The sun will rise in 10 minutes. The uniforms will be here soon; they’ll dismiss this as a hoax and seal the station. Eva nodded, her freckled face set with determination. She dipped the cloth into the fluid, her fingers steady despite her earlier unease, and leaned in to dab the fluid onto the scratch. The black fluid dissolved instantly, and the sigil’s edges began to glow faintly—a soft gold light that hummed in the quiet station. It’s working. The sigil’s repairing itself. The compass’s needle will start spinning once the sigils are whole. Harlow checked her worn leather watch again—3:50 a.m. The sun was almost up, and she could hear the faint wail of a police siren in the distance. She stepped to the door, her flashlight beam scanning the darkness for any sign of uniformed officers. Uniforms will be here in five minutes. Wrap it up. Eva finished dabbing the fluid, her fingers pulling back as the sigil’s glow faded to a faint hum. She stood, her satchel thudding against her leg, and nodded at Harlow. The Veil Compass now sat in the man’s fist, its sigils intact, its needle beginning to spin slowly—twisting in circles before locking onto a direction: north, toward the Camden Lock. Compass is fixed. Its needle’s locked north. It’ll point us to Kael once we calibrate it with a rift sample. Harlow’s sharp jaw softened for a split second—a rare show of vulnerability tied to the hope that she’d finally get answers about Morris’s death. She grabbed the coroner’s tape, tearing a strip off to secure the compass to the man’s hand, ensuring it wouldn’t be damaged when the coroner’s team arrived. She needed to bring it with her, to have Eva calibrate it once they were safe from the uniformed officers. Grab your books. We’re leaving before the uniforms see us. Eva stuffed her book and notebook back into her satchel, her fingers fumbling with the strap as she hurried toward the door. She glanced at the body one last time, her freckled face creased with sympathy—she’d seen too many victims of the Veil Market’s criminal underbelly during her time at the museum. I’ve got a rift sample in my flat. We can calibrate the compass there. Harlow clutched the bone token she’d picked up earlier, its surface warm against her palm. She stepped through the door, her flashlight beam cutting through the fading darkness, and glanced back at the abandoned Tube station—at the body, the compass, the scattered bone tokens. She knew this was just the beginning, that Kael was only a pawn in a larger game, but for the first time in three years, she had a clear path forward. Lead the way.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva Kowalski followed close [close]"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
97.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1927
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1927
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"etched"
count2
1
word"intricate"
count1
2
word"tangible"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"ensuring"
count2
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"pawn"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"intricate"
2"tangible"
3"glinting"
4"ensuring"
5"scanning"
6"pawn"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences110
matches
0"t with determination"
1"d with sympathy"
38.96% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount6
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen120
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1890
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions73
wordCount1770
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Camden2
Tube2
Eva17
Kowalski1
Morris8
Veil6
Market5
London2
British1
Museum1
Oxford1
Kael6
Met1
Harlow14
Compass4
Lock1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Eva"
2"Kowalski"
3"Morris"
4"Harlow"
places
0"Camden"
1"Veil"
2"Market"
3"London"
4"Museum"
5"Oxford"
6"Kael"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1890
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"matched that sigil"
44.35% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean85.91
std26.22
cv0.305
sampleLengths
0173
1110
2130
351
498
593
6108
779
876
979
1090
1180
1262
1368
1472
1591
1671
1754
1880
1981
2066
2178
89.31% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences110
matches
0"was faded"
1"being hauled"
2"get marked"
3"is banished"
4"was altered"
5"been exiled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs293
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount33
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences34
totalSentences110
ratio0.309
matches
0"The damp air hit her first—thick with the ghost of burnt sage and the coppery tang of spilled alchemical fluid—before her flashlight beam carved a narrow path through the darkness."
1"She stood at 5’9”, her Met detective uniform crisp despite the grime clinging to its cuffs, and her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught the faint glow of her light. Her sharp jaw set. She checked her worn leather watch, its strap frayed at the edges from 18 years of fidgeting during stakeouts and crime scene walks. 3:17 a.m. The full moon had dipped below the horizon 12 hours prior; the Veil Market should have cleared every trace of its existence by then. A distant rumble of a passing train above shook the damp tiles, sending a shower of dust from the cracked ceiling onto her shoulder. She brushed it off with a military precision flick of her wrist."
2"Eva Kowalski followed close behind, her curly red hair matted with damp that dripped onto her freckled complexion. She tucked a strand behind her left ear—her nervous habit—before adjusting the strap of her worn leather satchel, its interior bulging with occult texts that thudded against her 5’4” frame with every step."
3"Her round glasses fogged, and she wiped them on her sweater sleeve before glancing at the scattered debris: crushed jars of enchanted thyme, a broken vial oozing neon green fluid that sizzled when it touched a damp tile, and half a dozen bone tokens scattered across the floor—each carved with a tiny, unique sigil marking their owner’s market membership."
4"She knelt, her knees creaking faintly, and avoided touching the corpse—coroner’s tape strung between the pillar and a nearby bench marked the perimeter."
5"She recognized it immediately from the occult case files Eva had shared with her after DS Morris’s death—files that tied the Veil Market to a string of unexplained fatalities across London."
6"His watch—stopped at 2:00 a.m."
7"She tapped a page marked with a pressed clover, where a matching sigil stared up at them—its lines identical to the ones on the compass."
8"The sigils shield the user from the rift’s raw energy; without them, the energy incinerates the user from the inside out."
9"She’d found Morris’s body in a similar state three years prior—slumped against a warehouse wall, no cause of death, his watch stopped at 2:00 a.m., a faint sigil etched into his wrist that the coroner had dismissed as a random scratch."
10"Eva’s freckled face creased into a frown, and she set the book down on a nearby bench—its surface sticky with spilled alchemical fluid."
11"She didn’t touch it—she knew better than to handle enchanted goods without the proper protective gloves, a lesson she’d learned after a faulty alchemical vial burned her palm during a research trip to Oxford."
12"Someone wanted him left behind, to be found by the police—someone who knew we’d tie it to Morris’s case."
13"She spotted it then—a faint scratch cutting through one of the central sigils, its edges filled with a thin layer of dried black fluid that glinted faintly in the light."
14"Eva’s eyes widened behind her round glasses, and she tucks hair again—faster this time, a sign of her growing unease."
15"It’s made from crushed shadow moss and rift residue—breaks sigil protection in seconds."
16"He didn’t know the compass was altered; he thought it was a legitimate trade."
17"She glanced at the scattered bone tokens, and her flashlight beam caught one tucked inside the man’s cloak tear—its sigil different from the others, carved with a tiny raven that matched the vendor description Eva had shared with her months prior."
18"She caught the satchel, her fingers fumbling with the strap, and flipped to another page in her book—this one filled with handwritten notes about the raven-sigil vendor, a man named Kael who’d been exiled from the market for selling altered enchanted goods to unsuspecting customers."
19"He’s wanted by the market’s enforcers for breaking trade rules; they’ll kill him if they find him."
20"She checked her worn leather watch again—3:45 a.m."
21"She wrote down Kael’s description—tall, bald, with a scar across his left cheek, always wearing a raven-feather cloak—and tore the page out, handing it to Harlow."
22"Next location is unknown, but the Veil Compass—if we fix its sigils—can point us to his current hideout."
23"She’d spent three years in the dark, chasing the ghost of Morris’s death, but now she had a tangible lead—a compass that could guide her to the man responsible."
24"She pulled a small vial of clear fluid from her satchel—she’d brought it from the museum’s archives, a substance made from pressed moonflower petals that could repair broken sigils without damaging the artifact."
25"And a steady hand—one wrong move and the sigils break entirely."
26"Harlow stepped to the bench, grabbing a discarded cotton cloth from a pile of market remnants—its surface free of alchemical residue, a rare find in the cluttered station."
27"The uniforms will be here soon; they’ll dismiss this as a hoax and seal the station."
28"The black fluid dissolved instantly, and the sigil’s edges began to glow faintly—a soft gold light that hummed in the quiet station."
29"Harlow checked her worn leather watch again—3:50 a.m."
30"The Veil Compass now sat in the man’s fist, its sigils intact, its needle beginning to spin slowly—twisting in circles before locking onto a direction: north, toward the Camden Lock."
31"Harlow’s sharp jaw softened for a split second—a rare show of vulnerability tied to the hope that she’d finally get answers about Morris’s death."
32"She glanced at the body one last time, her freckled face creased with sympathy—she’d seen too many victims of the Veil Market’s criminal underbelly during her time at the museum."
33"She stepped through the door, her flashlight beam cutting through the fading darkness, and glanced back at the abandoned Tube station—at the body, the compass, the scattered bone tokens."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1761
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.018739352640545145
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.006246450880181715
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean17.18
std14.93
cv0.869
sampleLengths
025
130
2118
351
459
515
625
723
836
931
1010
1125
127
134
145
1513
1623
1725
187
199
2021
2114
2241
2322
246
251
269
2723
2816
2934
3011
315
3219
3315
3430
3525
364
373
382
3920
4021
418
4213
4314
4422
4541
466
472
488
4918
43.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3181818181818182
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences104
matches
0"She stood at"
1"Her round glasses fogged, and"
2"She knelt, her knees creaking"
3"Her flashlight beam locked on"
4"She recognized it immediately from"
5"His watch—stopped at 2:00 a.m."
6"She tapped a page marked"
7"She’d found Morris’s body in"
8"She’d spent months chasing dead"
9"His wrist had a scratch"
10"She knelt, her glasses slipping"
11"She didn’t touch it—she knew"
12"She spotted it then—a faint"
13"She’d missed it on her"
14"She grabbed her book, flipping"
15"It’s made from crushed shadow"
16"He didn’t know the compass"
17"She glanced at the scattered"
18"She caught the satchel, her"
19"He sells altered compasses to"
ratio0.462
12.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences104
matches
0"Harlow Quinn clutched a weathered"
1"The damp air hit her"
2"She stood at"
3"Eva Kowalski followed close behind,"
4"Her round glasses fogged, and"
5"Harlow’s military precision movements guided"
6"The man wore a tattered"
7"She knelt, her knees creaking"
8"Her flashlight beam locked on"
9"She recognized it immediately from"
10"The coroner’s initial report, faxed"
11"Coroner’s report flagged no cause"
12"Market cleared at midnight."
13"His watch—stopped at 2:00 a.m."
14"Eva tucked hair again, pulling"
15"The book’s spine was faded,"
16"She tapped a page marked"
17"That compass is a Veil"
18"Shade artisans craft them to"
19"The sigils shield the user"
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Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
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Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount14
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0"Her round glasses fogged, and she wiped them on her sweater sleeve before glancing at the scattered debris: crushed jars of enchanted thyme, a broken vial oozin…"
1"She knelt, her knees creaking faintly, and avoided touching the corpse—coroner’s tape strung between the pillar and a nearby bench marked the perimeter."
2"Her flashlight beam locked on the object peeking from the man’s fist: a small brass compass, its casing coated in a patina of verdigris, its face etched with in…"
3"She recognized it immediately from the occult case files Eva had shared with her after DS Morris’s death—files that tied the Veil Market to a string of unexplai…"
4"The coroner’s initial report, faxed to her that morning, had flagged no trauma, no poison, no underlying health conditions that could explain his sudden death."
5"She spotted it then—a faint scratch cutting through one of the central sigils, its edges filled with a thin layer of dried black fluid that glinted faintly in t…"
6"Harlow’s sharp jaw tightened further, and she stepped back, her boots crunching on a crushed alchemical vial that oozed neon green fluid."
7"She glanced at the scattered bone tokens, and her flashlight beam caught one tucked inside the man’s cloak tear—its sigil different from the others, carved with…"
8"She caught the satchel, her fingers fumbling with the strap, and flipped to another page in her book—this one filled with handwritten notes about the raven-sigi…"
9"She’d spent three years in the dark, chasing the ghost of Morris’s death, but now she had a tangible lead—a compass that could guide her to the man responsible."
10"She pulled a small vial of clear fluid from her satchel—she’d brought it from the museum’s archives, a substance made from pressed moonflower petals that could …"
11"The black fluid dissolved instantly, and the sigil’s edges began to glow faintly—a soft gold light that hummed in the quiet station."
12"Eva finished dabbing the fluid, her fingers pulling back as the sigil’s glow faded to a faint hum."
13"She grabbed the coroner’s tape, tearing a strip off to secure the compass to the man’s hand, ensuring it wouldn’t be damaged when the coroner’s team arrived."
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Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
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uselessAdditionCount0
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100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
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