Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9MDX3W612QAKATDZ0636K

Run Details

Duration:
19.6s
Cost:
$0.000202
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted of overripe fruit and something metallic, like old blood. Rory adjusted the strap of the Heartstone Pendant, its faint warmth a small anchor in the unsettling quiet. Beside her, Nyx shifted, a ripple in the shadows clinging to their form. “It’s…dense,” they murmured, their voice a breath of wind through dry leaves. “Unlike anything I’ve encountered.” Isolde moved ahead, her silver hair swirling around her like mist. “Patience, my dear. The Veil thins here. It’s a shifting threshold, and not always gentle.” Her footsteps left no trace on the moss-covered stones of the path. The path itself wasn’t a path at all, not really. It was an accumulation of slick, obsidian-like tiles that seemed to have grown from the earth itself, spiraling downwards into a darkness that swallowed the weak light from the bruised purple sky. Above, strange, bioluminescent fungi clung to the gnarled branches of trees that pulsed with a sickly green light. They resembled coral more than anything else, twisting and branching in impossible geometries. “The solstice,” Isolde said, her voice laced with a detached observation. “It’s weakening the barrier. Allowing us a glimpse.” Rory gripped the Fae-Forged Blade tucked into her belt. The cold metal was a steady reassurance, a tangible link to the familiar. “Let’s not linger to admire the view, shall we?” she said, her voice clipped. The air pressed in on them, thick and heavy, laden with the scent of decay and something sweet, cloying, that made her head swim. They descended for what felt like an eternity, the slick tiles beneath their feet a constant, unsettling reminder of the unnatural nature of this place. The sound was bizarre – not silence, but a constant, low thrum, like a swarm of bees trapped beneath the earth. Occasionally, it was punctuated by the drip, drip, drip of some unknown liquid. Then, the tunnel opened into a vast cavern. It wasn’t a cavern in the traditional sense – no jagged rock faces or echoing chambers. Instead, it resembled a colossal, petrified orchard. Trees, taller than any Rory had ever seen, stood frozen in perpetual bloom. Their branches, heavy with iridescent, plum-colored fruit, were laden with what looked like solidified honey. The ground was covered in a carpet of fallen petals, each one shimmering with an internal light. It felt… wrong. Beautiful, undeniably, but profoundly *wrong*. “Dymas,” Isolde stated, without inflection. “Prince Belphegor’s domain.” Nyx tilted their head, a subtle movement that somehow conveyed a deep scrutiny. “The essence of indulgence. A fitting prison for the gluttonous.” They stepped forward, their shadow detaching slightly from their form, lengthening and distorting in the strange light. A low, guttural chuckle echoed through the orchard. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. Rory raised the Fae Blade, the cold steel a stark contrast to the humid air. “Who’s there?” A figure emerged from the shadows under one of the massive trees. It was a man, impossibly tall and slender, adorned in robes woven from what looked like solidified gold. His face was obscured by a grotesque, gilded mask that resembled a smiling skull. He carried a massive goblet filled with a viscous, shimmering liquid. "Welcome, travelers," the figure said, his voice a smooth, oily drone. "To Dymas. I am Lothar, purveyor of delights. Care for a taste of Ambrosia?” He gestured towards the goblet with a skeletal hand. “We don’t take invitations from masked skulls,” Rory said, keeping the Blade trained on him. Lothar’s smile didn’t falter. “A regrettable habit. But let’s be pragmatic. You’ve stumbled upon a threshold. A ripple in the Veil. Such anomalies are rarely observed. I offer you a chance to prolong your stay, to immerse yourselves in the pleasures of Dymas." He gestured to the orchard, the shimmering fruit glowing with an enticing, almost hypnotic light. "Here, there is no constraint. Only satisfaction.” As he spoke, the orchard seemed to shift. The trees pulsed with a brighter light, the honey-like petals swirled in a hypnotic dance, and the air grew thicker, heavier. Rory felt a strange, almost irresistible pull, a yearning for the sweetest, most decadent thing she could imagine. It was a forceful, insidious craving. “Leave us,” Isolde said, her voice sharp. “This place feeds on desire. It will consume you.” Before Rory could respond, a cascade of the plum-colored fruit began to fall from the trees, raining down around them. As they struck the ground, they didn't burst, as one might expect. Instead, they dissolved into clouds of shimmering dust that clung to their skin, their clothes, their hair. Each touch sent a jolt of exquisite pleasure through Rory's body, a sweet, dangerous temptation. Nyx moved with unnerving speed, intercepting the falling fruit with a hand that seemed to flicker in and out of existence. "The essence of gratification. It seeks to bind,” they hissed, pushing Rory back slightly. "Don’t resist," Lothar’s voice flowed around them, laced with seductive persuasion. "Embrace the sensation. Let it wash over you." He took a slow, deliberate sip from his goblet, the shimmering liquid catching the light like liquid starlight. Rory glanced down at the Heartstone Pendant around her neck. It pulsed with a stronger warmth now, a desperate attempt to ground her, to anchor her to reality. She focused on the pulsing stone, trying to wrest control from the overwhelming desire. Suddenly, the ground beneath them began to tremble. The trees swayed violently, their branches creaking and groaning. From the depths of the orchard, a monstrous shape began to rise. It was vaguely humanoid, but composed entirely of writhing, golden honey. It had multiple arms, each ending in wickedly sharp claws, and its face was a swirling vortex of viscous sweetness. “A Guardian,” Isolde said, her voice barely a whisper. "Dymas protects its treasures." The honey-monster lumbered towards them, its movements slow and deliberate, yet terrifyingly powerful. As it approached, Rory noticed something within the swirling mass of honey – a flicker of something intelligent, something malevolent. "You cannot escape," the honey-monster rumbled, its voice a chorus of buzzing sweetness. "Dymas demands a tribute." Nyx stepped forward, their form subtly shifting, becoming denser, more substantial. They raised a hand, and a tendril of shadow snaked out, wrapping around the honey-monster’s arm. The monster roared in fury, shaking violently, but the shadow held firm. “A fleeting shadow,” Lothar observed with detached amusement. “A paltry defense against the heart of an indulgence.” Rory knew they couldn't stay. This place, this celebration of excess, was actively trying to break them. She gripped the Fae Blade tighter, steeling herself for a fight, for a desperate scramble back to the fading Veil. "Let’s go," she commanded, turning towards the spiraling path leading back into the darkness. As they moved, she could feel the sweet, seductive pull of Dymas trying to drag her back, promising her an eternity of effortless pleasure. The last image she had before they plunged back through the Veil was Lothar, watching them go, his gilded mask tilted in a silent, knowing smile.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lothar’s voice flowed around [around]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.056
78.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1175
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"wickedly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
2"suddenly"
3"wickedly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1175
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"tangible"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"dance"
count1
11
word"yearning"
count1
12
word"desire"
count2
13
word"flicker"
count2
14
word"depths"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"fleeting"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count1
18
word"effortless"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"footsteps"
2"pulsed"
3"tangible"
4"familiar"
5"reminder"
6"silence"
7"echoing"
8"echoed"
9"stark"
10"dance"
11"yearning"
12"desire"
13"flicker"
14"depths"
15"whisper"
16"fleeting"
17"could feel"
18"effortless"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences77
matches
0"d in fury"
12.99% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1171
ratio0.001
matches
0"wrong"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount991
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Nyx4
Isolde5
Rory12
Fae-Forged1
Blade4
Fae3
Lothar4
Veil2
Dymas1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Isolde"
2"Rory"
3"Blade"
4"Lothar"
5"Dymas"
places
0"Heartstone"
1"Veil"
globalScore0.895
windowScore0.833
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like an eternity, the slick tiles"
1"looked like solidified honey"
2"looked like solidified gold"
3"hand that seemed to flicker in and out of existence"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.854
wordCount1171
matches
0"not silence, but a constant, low thrum, like a swarm of bees trapped beneath"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean39.03
std21.22
cv0.544
sampleLengths
059
138
273
319
460
559
68
776
88
940
1018
1117
1255
1334
1415
1565
1653
1716
1864
1935
2037
2142
2260
2313
2433
2517
2639
2717
2875
2926
91.59% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences77
matches
0"was punctuated"
1"was covered"
2"was obscured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs167
matches(empty)
43.19% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences86
ratio0.035
matches
0"The sound was bizarre – not silence, but a constant, low thrum, like a swarm of bees trapped beneath the earth."
1"It wasn’t a cavern in the traditional sense – no jagged rock faces or echoing chambers."
2"As it approached, Rory noticed something within the swirling mass of honey – a flicker of something intelligent, something malevolent."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount995
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03819095477386935
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.019095477386934675
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean13.62
std7.82
cv0.574
sampleLengths
012
118
213
312
44
511
627
710
832
918
1013
1111
128
139
1413
1514
1624
1725
1821
1913
208
2116
227
2313
2415
2517
262
271
285
295
303
3113
3227
338
3410
3515
362
3712
3818
3914
4011
4111
4223
4315
444
4554
467
478
4821
4918
75.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.46511627906976744
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences75
matches
0"Occasionally, it was punctuated by"
1"Then, the tunnel opened into"
2"Instead, it resembled a colossal,"
3"Instead, they dissolved into clouds"
4"Suddenly, the ground beneath them"
ratio0.067
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences75
matches
0"they murmured, their voice a"
1"Her footsteps left no trace"
2"It was an accumulation of"
3"They resembled coral more than"
4"she said, her voice clipped"
5"They descended for what felt"
6"It wasn’t a cavern in"
7"Their branches, heavy with iridescent,"
8"They stepped forward, their shadow"
9"It seemed to come from"
10"It was a man, impossibly"
11"His face was obscured by"
12"He carried a massive goblet"
13"He gestured towards the goblet"
14"He gestured to the orchard,"
15"It was a forceful, insidious"
16"they hissed, pushing Rory back"
17"He took a slow, deliberate"
18"It pulsed with a stronger"
19"She focused on the pulsing"
ratio0.333
53.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences75
matches
0"The air tasted of overripe"
1"Rory adjusted the strap of"
2"they murmured, their voice a"
3"Isolde moved ahead, her silver"
4"Her footsteps left no trace"
5"The path itself wasn’t a"
6"It was an accumulation of"
7"They resembled coral more than"
8"Isolde said, her voice laced"
9"Rory gripped the Fae-Forged Blade"
10"The cold metal was a"
11"she said, her voice clipped"
12"The air pressed in on"
13"They descended for what felt"
14"The sound was bizarre –"
15"It wasn’t a cavern in"
16"Trees, taller than any Rory"
17"Their branches, heavy with iridescent,"
18"The ground was covered in"
19"Isolde stated, without inflection"
ratio0.813
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Before Rory could respond, a"
ratio0.013
51.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"It was an accumulation of slick, obsidian-like tiles that seemed to have grown from the earth itself, spiraling downwards into a darkness that swallowed the wea…"
1"The air pressed in on them, thick and heavy, laden with the scent of decay and something sweet, cloying, that made her head swim."
2"His face was obscured by a grotesque, gilded mask that resembled a smiling skull."
3"Instead, they dissolved into clouds of shimmering dust that clung to their skin, their clothes, their hair."
4"Nyx moved with unnerving speed, intercepting the falling fruit with a hand that seemed to flicker in and out of existence."
5"As they moved, she could feel the sweet, seductive pull of Dymas trying to drag her back, promising her an eternity of effortless pleasure."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"they murmured, their voice a breath of wind through dry leaves"
1"she said, her voice clipped"
2"the figure said, his voice a smooth, oily drone"
3"He gestured, the shimmering fruit glowing with an enticing, almost hypnotic light"
4"Isolde said, her voice sharp"
5"Isolde said, her voice barely a whisper"
6"the honey-monster rumbled, its voice a chorus of buzzing sweetness"
1.85% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"Isolde stated (state)"
2"they hissed (hiss)"
3"Lothar observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.741
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.296
74.9384%