Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9MJQYJQB8PSNVD2B59HNX

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 51s
Cost:
$0.047642
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn pushed through the rusted metal gate that sealed off the forgotten entrance to the old Camden Tube station. Damp air hit her like a slap, carrying the metallic tang of stale water and something sharper, like ozone after a storm. Her boots crunched over shattered tiles, each step echoing in the cavernous dark. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist, noting the time: 2:17 AM. The call had come in anonymously, whispering about a body down here, but no one in the Met should have known about this place. Abandoned for decades, it lurked beneath the bustling streets, a relic buried under layers of London’s underbelly. Uniforms had already cordoned off the area above ground, their flashlights cutting erratic beams through the fog. Down here, though, the scene unfolded in a haze of emergency lamps rigged by the first responders. Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened as she descended the crumbling stairs, her military precision guiding every movement. Eighteen years on the force, and she’d seen her share of oddities, but this? Vendors’ stalls lined the platform edges, makeshift tables draped in faded cloths, scattered with trinkets that gleamed unnaturally under the lights. Jars of iridescent powders, feathers that seemed to twitch on their own, books with spines etched in symbols she didn’t recognize. An underground market, hidden in plain sight—or not so plain. “Detective Quinn,” a young constable greeted her at the bottom, his voice tight. He nodded toward the center of the platform, where yellow tape fluttered around a chalk outline. “Body’s over there. Male, mid-thirties, no ID yet. Looks like he took a nasty fall, but... well, you’ll see.” She strode past him without a word, her brown eyes scanning the chaos. The air hummed with a low vibration, like distant trains that never arrived. Stalls overturned, goods spilled across the tracks. A brass compass lay shattered near the edge, its needle bent at an impossible angle, pointing straight down into the abyss. Quinn crouched, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair catching the light. The casing bore a greenish patina, etched with swirling sigils that made her skin prickle. Footsteps approached from behind. Quinn glanced up to see a woman with curly red hair and round glasses, clutching a worn leather satchel stuffed with books. Freckles dotted her complexion, and she tucked a stray curl behind her left ear—a nervous tic, Quinn noted. Eva Kowalski, the research assistant from the British Museum. They’d crossed paths before, on that artifact smuggling case last year. What the hell was she doing here? “Detective,” Eva said, her green eyes wide as she adjusted her glasses. “They called me in. Said it might involve some... historical items. I got here twenty minutes ago.” Quinn stood, brushing dust from her trousers. “Historical items? This looks like a flea market raid gone wrong. Body?” Eva pointed toward the outline. “Over there. But look closer. The wounds aren’t from a fall.” Quinn moved in, kneeling beside the chalk marks. No blood pool, just faint scorch lines radiating from where the chest would have been. The platform showed no impact cracks, no signs of struggle. A faint shimmer hung in the air, like heat distortion over asphalt, but the station chilled her to the bone. “Constable thinks he jumped the tracks,” Eva continued, crouching beside her. “Or got pushed. But see those burns? They’re radial, like an energy discharge. And the air... it feels charged. I’ve read about rifts—supernatural tears in reality. This place, it’s not just an old station. It’s the Veil Market. Moves every full moon, entry by bone token only. Sells things that shouldn’t exist.” Quinn’s gaze narrowed. “Veil Market? Sounds like a ghost story for tourists. We’ve got a dead man, scattered goods, no witnesses. Evidence points to a botched robbery. Perp grabs what he can, shoves the victim onto the tracks, flees.” Eva shook her head, pulling a thick tome from her satchel. She flipped it open, pages whispering as she pointed to an illustration of a glowing portal. “Not a robbery. Look at that compass over there. It’s a Veil Compass—points to the nearest supernatural rift. Crafted by Shade artisans, brass with verdigris patina, sigils for protection. It’s shattered, needle jammed downward. If this was a rift event, the victim might have been pulled through, not pushed.” Quinn picked up a shard of the compass, turning it in her fingers. The metal warmed unnaturally against her skin, and for a split second, the sigils seemed to pulse. She dropped it, wiping her hand on her coat. “Rift event? You’re saying some portal sucked him in? That’s not evidence, Kowalski. That’s fantasy.” Eva tucked her hair again, voice steadying. “Fantasy with footnotes. I work in the restricted archives—master’s from Oxford in Ancient History. Places like this aren’t myths. The market deals in enchanted goods, banned substances. Alchemicals that bend reality. If a rift opened here, it could explain the lack of blood. Victim gets destabilized, body phases out partially. Those scorch marks? Residual energy from the tear closing.” Quinn circled the outline, her boots echoing sharply. She spotted a faint trail of glittering dust leading from the chalk to a nearby stall, where jars lay cracked open, spilling powders that shifted colors in the lamplight. No footprints, though. Just the dust, as if carried on a breeze that didn’t exist. “Dust trail. Leads to that stall. If it was a robbery, why leave valuables behind? And no defensive wounds noted in the prelim?” “The prelim’s wrong,” Eva insisted, following her gaze. “Check the body report again. I peeked—internal organs showed liquefaction, but externals intact except for those burns. A fall doesn’t do that. A rift does. Pulls you apart from the inside, like gravitational shear.” Quinn paused, crouching by the dust. She scooped a pinch, rubbing it between her fingers. It tingled, then vanished, leaving her skin unmarked. Her mind raced back to three years ago, DS Morris crumpled in that warehouse, eyes vacant, no cause of death but whispers of something unnatural. She’d buried it, called it unsolved. But this... echoes. “Assume your rift theory,” Quinn said, standing abruptly. “Why here? Why now? Market moves on full moons, you said. Last one was two nights ago. Someone forces a rift open, grabs what—information? Enchanted junk?” Eva nodded, excitement creeping into her tone. “Exactly. The compass points to rifts. If it’s broken like that, maybe the killer used it to locate one, then smashed it to cover tracks. But see the patina? Verdigris means age, but the break’s fresh. And look—” She pointed to the platform edge, where faint etchings marred the concrete, like claws had scraped through. Quinn leaned over, her breath catching. The scrapes formed patterns, not random—sigils matching the compass. Her military bearing held firm, but doubt flickered. “Not claws. Tool marks. Perp carves these to... what, summon your portal?” “Or stabilize it,” Eva countered, flipping another page in her book. “Ancient texts describe rifts as unstable. Sigils anchor them. This victim—he wasn’t random. Probably a vendor. Check his hands, if they bagged them. Calluses from handling artifacts, maybe residue from alchemicals.” Quinn waved over the constable. “Get forensics on the hands. Residue check, full spectrum.” The constable hurried off, radio crackling. Quinn turned back to Eva, voice low. “You’re pushing this occult angle hard. Why? Museum send you to reclaim stolen goods?” Eva’s freckles flushed slightly, but she met Quinn’s stare. “Not stolen. Protected. I’ve studied this market for years. It’s a hub for things that could unravel the world if misused. If a rift was involved, we’re not dealing with a mugger. We’re dealing with someone who knows the veil between worlds.” Quinn paced, piecing it. The humming air, the unnatural warmth of the compass shard, the dust that dissolved. Morris’s case had similar vibes—no blood, strange burns. She’d dismissed it as coincidence, but now? “Victim’s position. Outline shows arms outstretched, like reaching for something. Not falling—grasping.” Eva’s eyes lit. “Grasping at the rift edge. Trying to pull back. Yes! And the compass nearby—maybe he used it to navigate, but it overloaded.” Quinn stopped, staring at the shattered device. The needle, bent down, but upon closer look, it didn’t point straight—it angled toward a sealed door at the platform’s end, hidden in shadow. She approached, running her fingers over the frame. No dust, recently opened. A faint draft seeped through, carrying that ozone scent stronger. “Door’s been used,” Quinn muttered. “Not sealed like the rest. If your rift closed here, maybe an exit stayed open.” Eva joined her, satchel bumping Quinn’s side. “Or a portal remnant. Detective, this could lead to wherever the killer went. But we need a bone token to—” Quinn shoved the door. It creaked open, revealing a narrow tunnel lined with flickering bioluminescent fungi that pulsed in rhythm with the station’s hum. No ordinary maintenance shaft. “Token or not, evidence trail goes this way.” Eva hesitated, tucking her hair frantically. “This is Veil territory. Rifts aren’t stable. One wrong step...” Quinn glanced back, her sharp jaw set. “Then step careful. Your interpretation’s got holes, but mine’s cracking too. Body doesn’t fall without impact. Dust vanishes. Sigils match the compass. Someone orchestrated this, and it’s not human error.” They stepped inside, the tunnel swallowing the station lights. Fungi illuminated faint footprints—Quinn’s size, but leading deeper, as if someone had walked out, not in. “Footprints incoming,” Quinn observed, voice echoing. “Victim didn’t die here. He came through.” Eva gasped softly. “From the other side. Rift pulled him in elsewhere, spat him out here. Killer sets it up to look like a market hit.” Quinn nodded, the pieces slotting. Morris’s warehouse had similar fungi traces in the autopsy, dismissed as contamination. She’d missed it then. Not now. The tunnel curved, fungi brightening, revealing a chamber ahead where shadows danced unnaturally. A glint caught her eye—a second compass, intact, needle spinning wildly. Quinn reached for it, but Eva grabbed her arm. “Don’t! It’s attuned. Touch it, and you might trigger another rift.” Quinn pulled back, mind whirling. “Then the killer left it as bait. Draw in the curious, erase the trail.” Eva’s voice dropped. “Or open a door for something worse.” The chamber loomed, air thickening. Quinn’s watch ticked louder, as if time warped. She deduced the setup: not murder, but sacrifice. Victim lured through rift, body dumped to mask a larger play. The market’s goods scattered to feign robbery, but the real theft? Information, perhaps, on rifts themselves. “Call it in,” Quinn ordered, turning to Eva. “We seal this off. Your occult nonsense just became my lead.” Eva fumbled for her phone, signal flickering. “It’s not nonsense. It’s the truth you’ve been missing.” Quinn stared into the chamber, where a faint glow pulsed, like a heartbeat. The evidence finally added up—not in her world, but in this veiled one. She’d see what others missed, even if it dragged her into the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.488
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1840
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1840
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"shattered"
count4
1
word"echoing"
count3
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"fluttered"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"chilled"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"echoes"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"unravel"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"navigate"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count2
16
word"glint"
count1
17
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"echoing"
2"etched"
3"fluttered"
4"scanning"
5"footsteps"
6"chilled"
7"charged"
8"pulse"
9"raced"
10"echoes"
11"flickered"
12"unravel"
13"warmth"
14"navigate"
15"pulsed"
16"glint"
17"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
88.44% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1821
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1075
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.79
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn30
Camden1
Tube1
Met1
London1
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
Morris3
Eva19
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Morris"
4"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"British"
globalScore0.105
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"feathers that seemed to twitch on their own, books with spines etched in symbols she didn’t recognize"
35.26% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.647
wordCount1821
matches
0"no cause of death but"
1"not murder, but sacrifice"
2"not in her world, but in this veiled one"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences137
matches
0"carrying that ozone"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean43.36
std24.09
cv0.556
sampleLengths
0112
1116
248
379
471
529
619
716
853
963
1039
1176
1254
1366
1475
1542
1657
1734
1862
1935
2042
2114
2227
2351
2445
2525
2653
2720
2827
2936
3016
3137
3238
3326
3436
3531
3619
3710
3848
3919
4016
4139
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs211
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences137
ratio0.058
matches
0"An underground market, hidden in plain sight—or not so plain."
1"Freckles dotted her complexion, and she tucked a stray curl behind her left ear—a nervous tic, Quinn noted."
2"The scrapes formed patterns, not random—sigils matching the compass."
3"Morris’s case had similar vibes—no blood, strange burns."
4"The needle, bent down, but upon closer look, it didn’t point straight—it angled toward a sealed door at the platform’s end, hidden in shadow."
5"Fungi illuminated faint footprints—Quinn’s size, but leading deeper, as if someone had walked out, not in."
6"A glint caught her eye—a second compass, intact, needle spinning wildly."
7"The evidence finally added up—not in her world, but in this veiled one."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount829
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.030156815440289506
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006031363088057901
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean13.29
std10.14
cv0.763
sampleLengths
021
122
213
315
424
517
617
717
816
914
1021
1121
1210
1313
1416
1519
1613
1713
187
1921
2010
2115
224
2322
2418
259
2611
277
2812
2917
307
3112
325
3311
348
3515
3610
3720
3811
3952
403
4136
4211
4316
4449
4513
4617
479
4815
497
69.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.41605839416058393
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners57
33.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"Just the dust, as if"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences101
matches
0"Her boots crunched over shattered"
1"She adjusted the worn leather"
2"He nodded toward the center"
3"She strode past him without"
4"They’d crossed paths before, on"
5"She flipped it open, pages"
6"She dropped it, wiping her"
7"She spotted a faint trail"
8"She scooped a pinch, rubbing"
9"It tingled, then vanished, leaving"
10"Her mind raced back to"
11"She’d buried it, called it"
12"She pointed to the platform"
13"Her military bearing held firm,"
14"She’d dismissed it as coincidence,"
15"She approached, running her fingers"
16"It creaked open, revealing a"
17"They stepped inside, the tunnel"
18"She’d missed it then."
19"She deduced the setup: not"
ratio0.208
9.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences101
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn pushed through"
1"Her boots crunched over shattered"
2"She adjusted the worn leather"
3"The call had come in"
4"Uniforms had already cordoned off"
5"Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened as"
6"Jars of iridescent powders, feathers"
7"An underground market, hidden in"
8"a young constable greeted her"
9"He nodded toward the center"
10"She strode past him without"
11"The air hummed with a"
12"Stalls overturned, goods spilled across"
13"A brass compass lay shattered"
14"Quinn crouched, her closely cropped"
15"The casing bore a greenish"
16"Footsteps approached from behind."
17"Quinn glanced up to see"
18"Freckles dotted her complexion, and"
19"Eva Kowalski, the research assistant"
ratio0.901
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.37% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Jars of iridescent powders, feathers that seemed to twitch on their own, books with spines etched in symbols she didn’t recognize."
1"She spotted a faint trail of glittering dust leading from the chalk to a nearby stall, where jars lay cracked open, spilling powders that shifted colors in the …"
2"The humming air, the unnatural warmth of the compass shard, the dust that dissolved."
3"Fungi illuminated faint footprints—Quinn’s size, but leading deeper, as if someone had walked out, not in."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"a young constable greeted, his voice tight"
1"Eva said, her green eyes wide as she adjusted her glasses"
2"Quinn observed, voice echoing"
28.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Eva continued (continue)"
1"Eva insisted (insist)"
2"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
3"Quinn observed (observe)"
4"Quinn ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.171
leniency0.341
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.244
72.2290%