"The Veil Market moved locations every full moon, but she’d gotten word—through a source in the City’s underbelly, one who owed her a debt from Operation Ashdown—at dusk: *they’re here*."
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"The bone token hung heavy in her coat pocket—a molar, filed to a point, its surface scored with a script she couldn’t read but that hummed in her bones."
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"Most of the vendors were gone—probably scared off by the noise, or by the *presence* in the room."
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"They’d been closing in on a supplier, he’d radioed—*something’s not right, Quinn, it’s not human*—before his comms went silent."
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"Eva tucked a loose strand of hair behind her left ear—nervous, always nervous— and pushed her glasses up."
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"The Wraith’s Teeth were a myth, part of the lore Eva obsessed over—creatures that fed on supernatural energy, according to the old texts."
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"A stall had been torn apart—a pile of silver coins scattered on the ground, their edges jagged as if bitten."
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"The victim was a man, mid-thirties, wearing a tailored suit that was stained with something black and sticky—*blood?*—but her first thought was *wrong*."
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"But his posture—relaxed, almost comfortable—was wrong for a dead man."
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"Victims of the market didn’t *rest*; they contorted, their faces frozen in fear, their bodies drained of every ounce of life."
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"And the air—*thinner*."
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"Small brass, its casing etched with sigils that shifted as she watched—*protective* sigils, she realized, the ones Eva had mentioned in her books."
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"But it was *pointing*—not north, not south, but straight at the puddle at the man’s feet."
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"The sigils on the casing—she’d seen them before, on Morris’s body."
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"*That* was why his eyes were empty—he’d stared into the rift, and the Wraiths had taken his soul."
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"Eva’s nervous habit flared—she tucked her hair behind her ear, twice."
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"Eva hesitated, then closed her satchel, her fingers brushing the compass in her pocket—the one Eva had given her for her birthday, three years ago, when Morris was still alive."
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"The puddle rippled again, and this time, she saw it—a flash of white teeth, sharp and glinting, before the darkness swallowed it."
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"The main chamber of the old Tube station was a cavern, its platforms buried under stalls stacked with gilded jars, rusted keys, and books with covers that chang…"
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"His body had been found twenty hours later, face-down in a puddle of water that had no business being there, his eyes wide and empty."
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"She wore round glasses that smudged at the edges, and her freckles were more prominent than ever, as if she’d been running."
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"Her best friend since college, when they’d both stayed up all night discussing *Midsomer Murders* and ancient magic, and the woman who’d just told her about the…"
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"The victim was a man, mid-thirties, wearing a tailored suit that was stained with something black and sticky—*blood?*—but her first thought was *wrong*."
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"It was shallow, no deeper than a knife’s point, but the skin around it was black, as if burned."
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"So were the other vendors, the ones who’d been haggling over a jar of glowing sand when she’d arrived."
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"Small brass, its casing etched with sigils that shifted as she watched—*protective* sigils, she realized, the ones Eva had mentioned in her books."