Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9N1WX9E4QF64CS24NY2RW

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 38s
Cost:
$0.048256
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door creaked open on its reluctant hinges, the scent of cumin and frying onions wafting up from the curry house below. Rory peered through the narrow gap, her bright blue eyes narrowing at the figure standing in the dim hallway light. Rain slicked the shoulders of his tailored charcoal suit, droplets clinging to the slicked-back platinum blond hair like reluctant stars. Lucien Moreau. The Frenchman. The half-demon fixer who'd vanished from her life six months ago without a word, leaving her to piece together the shards of whatever they'd been building. She froze, one hand on the topmost deadbolt, the other gripping the doorframe. Her heart thudded against her ribs, a traitor in her chest. "Lucien," she said, her voice steady despite the storm brewing inside. Cool-headed, that's what they called her. But this? This was a test she hadn't studied for. He tilted his head, that heterochromatic gaze—amber and black—locking onto hers with the intensity of a predator spotting prey. Or perhaps a lover spotting salvation. Water dripped from the ivory handle of his cane, pooling on the worn doormat. "Rory," he replied, his accent curling around her name like smoke from a forbidden fire. "May I come in? The rain is... persistent." She didn't move. The flat behind her was Eva's domain—a chaotic nest of books and scrolls piled on every surface, the tabby cat Ptolemy sprawled across a stack of ancient grimoires like a furry bookmark. Eva was out, chasing some lead on a cursed artifact in Whitechapel, leaving Rory to house-sit. Or hide. Whichever fit the mood. But Lucien here, now, unannounced? It ripped open wounds she'd barely bandaged. "Why are you here?" she asked, keeping the chain latched. Her straight black hair fell across her shoulder as she leaned forward, the small crescent scar on her left wrist itching like a bad omen. Childhood accident, she'd always said. But with Lucien, everything felt like it carried deeper meaning. He shifted his weight, the concealed blade in his cane a secret she knew too well from nights when they'd navigated London's shadowy underbelly together. "I need to talk. It's important." His voice dropped, laced with that multilingual fluency that had once charmed her into stolen kisses in back alleys. French whispers against her ear while demons lurked in the fog. Important. The word stung. Six months ago, in a dingy pub off Camden Market, they'd argued—harsh words about trust, about his demonic heritage clashing with her human fragility. She'd accused him of holding back, of treating her like a fragile mortal instead of an equal. He'd stormed out, leaving her with a half-empty pint and a heart full of unsaid regrets. No calls, no messages. Just silence, while she delivered takeout for Yu-Fei Cheung by day and dodged supernatural scraps by night. And now he shows up at Eva's door? How did he even know she'd be here? She unlatched the chain with a sharp click, stepping back to let him in. Not because she wanted to, but because the rain was turning the hallway into a river, and curiosity—damn it—burned hotter than her hurt. "Make it quick. Eva's cat doesn't like demons." Ptolemy lifted his head from the grimoire pile as Lucien stepped inside, shaking off the rain like a dignified storm. The cat's green eyes fixed on him, tail flicking once in warning before he settled back down. Lucien closed the door behind him, the three deadbolts snicking into place under his precise fingers. The flat felt smaller with him in it, the air thick with the aroma of old paper and lingering curry spices. He set his cane against the wall, peeling off his wet jacket to reveal a crisp white shirt that clung just enough to hint at the lean muscle beneath. Always impeccable, even soaked. "Ptolemy and I have an understanding," he said, a ghost of a smile tugging at his lips. "From last time." Last time. When they'd crashed here after a botched deal with a vampire informant, adrenaline high and hands exploring in the dark while Eva slept oblivious in the next room. Heat flushed Rory's cheeks at the memory—his lips on her neck, the way his amber eye had glowed faintly in the shadows, demonic energy humming under his skin. Attraction had sparked fast, fierce, but so had the complications. His father's realm, Avaros, pulling at him like an invisible tether. Her own baggage—Evan's abuse still fresh, making her flinch at vulnerability. She crossed her arms, leaning against the cluttered kitchen counter to put space between them. Scrolls teetered on the edge, threatening to spill. "You vanished, Luc. No note, no explanation. I thought we were..." She trailed off, hating how raw it sounded. Past the hurt. He ran a hand through his damp hair, the black eye darkening with something like regret. "I know. I was a fool. My father summoned me back to Avaros. A crisis in the realms—demonic politics, the kind that devours the unprepared." He stepped closer, his presence filling the cramped space. At 5'11", he loomed without trying, but it was the intensity that pinned her. "I should have told you. But I thought... if I involved you, it would put you in danger. You're human, Rory. Brilliant, quick-thinking, but mortal." There it was—the hurt, flaring like a struck match. "That's what you always say. Like I'm some fragile delivery girl who can't handle your world." She pushed off the counter, closing the distance herself, anger fueling her steps. At 5'6", she had to tilt her chin up to meet his gaze, but she did it with fire. "I left Cardiff, left Evan, because I was done being treated like I needed protecting. We were partners, Luc. Or at least I thought so." His hand lifted, hesitating before brushing a strand of her black hair behind her ear. The touch sent sparks down her spine, unwelcome and undeniable. "You are more than that. You always were." His voice softened, the French lilt wrapping around the words. "I came back as soon as I could. I've been searching for you—through contacts, whispers in the underworld. Silas mentioned you might be here, watching Eva's place." Silas. Of course. The bar owner below her own flat had a loose tongue for the right price. Rory's pulse quickened at Lucien's proximity, the heterochromatic eyes searching hers. The amber one seemed to warm, pulling her in, while the black held shadows of his demonic side. Attraction simmered, the same pull that had drawn her to him initially—his sharp intellect matching her out-of-the-box thinking, his calm under fire echoing her own cool head. But things left unsaid hung between them like fog over the Thames. "Why now?" she whispered, not pulling away from his touch. His fingers lingered on her cheek, cool from the rain. "Because I couldn't stay away." He leaned in, his breath mingling with hers. "Avaros showed me what I was missing. You, Rory. Your fire, your mind. I hurt you, and for that, I'm sorry. But if you'll let me, I want to make it right." Her resolve wavered. Ptolemy meowed from his perch, as if sensing the shift, but the cat's judgment faded under the weight of Lucien's gaze. She could feel the hurt cracking, making way for the ache of want. "Sorry isn't enough," she said, but her voice lacked conviction. Her hand rose to his chest, feeling the steady beat beneath the shirt. Strong, alive, half-human like her own tangled heart. "Then let me show you." His lips brushed hers, tentative at first, a question wrapped in desire. She didn't pull back. Instead, she pressed forward, the kiss igniting like a spell long deferred. His arms wrapped around her, pulling her close, the cane forgotten against the wall. Rain pattered against the window, a rhythmic counterpoint to their Reunion. They broke apart, breathless, foreheads touching. "I missed you," he admitted, vulnerability cracking his polished facade. "Every day in that infernal place, I thought of you. Of us." Rory traced the line of his jaw, her thumb brushing the edge of his black eye. "I thought you'd forgotten. Or worse, that what we had was just a distraction." Hurt lingered, but so did hope. Things unsaid poured out now—confessions of fear, of longing. She'd fled abuse, built walls, but Lucien had slipped through, only to retreat. Now, here he was, forcing them together again. "Not a distraction," he murmured, kissing her wrist, right over the crescent scar. "A necessity." His lips lingered, warm against the old wound, as if healing deeper scars. The flat seemed to shrink further, books and scrolls a forgotten audience to their unraveling. Ptolemy leapt down, weaving between their legs with a purr, breaking the tension. Rory laughed, a soft sound that eased the ache in her chest. "Even the cat approves." Lucien smiled, genuine and rare, his amber eye gleaming. "Then perhaps there's hope." He drew her toward the sagging couch, piled with Eva's research notes, clearing a space with gentle efficiency. They sat, his arm around her shoulders, the rain a soothing drone outside. Words flowed easier now—tales of Avaros, demonic intrigues he'd navigated alone, wishing for her insight. She shared her own months: dodging supernatural deliveries for Yu-Fei, unraveling minor curses with Eva, all while nursing the void he'd left. As the evening deepened, the hurt softened into understanding. Attraction rekindled, fierce and familiar, his hand entwining with hers. Things left unsaid found voice—promises of trust, vows to face dangers together. No more vanishing acts. When Eva's key rattled in the lock hours later, they sprang apart like guilty teenagers, but the spark remained. Lucien grabbed his cane, flashing Rory a conspiratorial grin. "To be continued?" She nodded, heart lighter. "Unannounced visits aside, yes." He slipped out past Eva's surprised hello, leaving Rory to explain. But in the quiet aftermath, with Ptolemy curling in her lap, she felt the complicated terms of their parting shift toward something whole. Romance, after all, thrived in the ruins of what was, building anew.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the hurt flaring like [like]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.613
leniency1
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.053
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1699
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1699
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"intensity"
count2
1
word"predator"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"navigated"
count2
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"lilt"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"quickened"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
13
word"wavered"
count1
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"desire"
count1
16
word"rhythmic"
count1
17
word"facade"
count1
18
word"traced"
count1
19
word"unraveling"
count2
20
word"tension"
count1
21
word"gleaming"
count1
22
word"familiar"
count1
23
word"aftermath"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"predator"
2"chaotic"
3"weight"
4"navigated"
5"silence"
6"loomed"
7"down her spine"
8"lilt"
9"pulse"
10"quickened"
11"echoing"
12"resolve"
13"wavered"
14"could feel"
15"desire"
16"rhythmic"
17"facade"
18"traced"
19"unraveling"
20"tension"
21"gleaming"
22"familiar"
23"aftermath"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences118
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1675
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1410
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Cool-headed1
Eva8
Ptolemy5
Whitechapel1
Rory9
Lucien10
London1
French2
Camden1
Market1
Yu-Fei2
Cheung1
Last1
Avaros2
Evan1
Past1
Silas1
Thames1
Reunion1
Things2
Attraction3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
5"Camden"
6"Yu-Fei"
7"Cheung"
8"Avaros"
9"Evan"
10"Silas"
11"Things"
12"Attraction"
places
0"Cool-headed"
1"London"
2"Thames"
globalScore1
windowScore1
43.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like it carried deeper meaning"
1"something like regret"
2"as if sensing the shift, but the cat's judgment faded under the weight of Lucien's gaze"
3"as if healing deeper scars"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1675
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
61.25% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean57.76
std21.05
cv0.364
sampleLengths
092
151
262
369
450
561
682
761
874
953
1090
1145
1289
1382
1470
1574
1632
1745
1868
1958
2028
2166
2228
2344
2481
2535
2631
278
2846
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs254
matches
0"was turning"
1"was, forcing"
2"was, building"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences128
ratio0.086
matches
0"He tilted his head, that heterochromatic gaze—amber and black—locking onto hers with the intensity of a predator spotting prey."
1"The flat behind her was Eva's domain—a chaotic nest of books and scrolls piled on every surface, the tabby cat Ptolemy sprawled across a stack of ancient grimoires like a furry bookmark."
2"Six months ago, in a dingy pub off Camden Market, they'd argued—harsh words about trust, about his demonic heritage clashing with her human fragility."
3"Not because she wanted to, but because the rain was turning the hallway into a river, and curiosity—damn it—burned hotter than her hurt."
4"Heat flushed Rory's cheeks at the memory—his lips on her neck, the way his amber eye had glowed faintly in the shadows, demonic energy humming under his skin."
5"Her own baggage—Evan's abuse still fresh, making her flinch at vulnerability."
6"There it was—the hurt, flaring like a struck match. \"That's what you always say."
7"Attraction simmered, the same pull that had drawn her to him initially—his sharp intellect matching her out-of-the-box thinking, his calm under fire echoing her own cool head."
8"Things unsaid poured out now—confessions of fear, of longing."
9"Words flowed easier now—tales of Avaros, demonic intrigues he'd navigated alone, wishing for her insight."
10"Things left unsaid found voice—promises of trust, vows to face dangers together."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1426
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.028751753155680224
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0035063113604488078
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean13.09
std8.1
cv0.619
sampleLengths
022
120
220
32
42
526
613
711
811
96
102
118
1219
136
1414
1515
168
173
1832
1916
202
214
225
237
2410
2525
265
2710
2825
2925
3011
311
323
3324
3417
3516
364
3717
388
398
4014
4123
428
4320
4417
4516
4621
4729
484
4917
81.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4921875
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners63
90.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences110
matches
0"Just silence, while she delivered"
1"Always impeccable, even soaked."
2"Instead, she pressed forward, the"
ratio0.027
56.36% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences110
matches
0"She froze, one hand on"
1"Her heart thudded against her"
2"she said, her voice steady"
3"He tilted his head, that"
4"he replied, his accent curling"
5"She didn't move."
6"It ripped open wounds she'd"
7"she asked, keeping the chain"
8"Her straight black hair fell"
9"He shifted his weight, the"
10"His voice dropped, laced with"
11"She'd accused him of holding"
12"He'd stormed out, leaving her"
13"She unlatched the chain with"
14"He set his cane against"
15"he said, a ghost of"
16"His father's realm, Avaros, pulling"
17"Her own baggage—Evan's abuse still"
18"She crossed her arms, leaning"
19"She trailed off, hating how"
ratio0.409
87.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences110
matches
0"The door creaked open on"
1"Rory peered through the narrow"
2"Rain slicked the shoulders of"
3"The half-demon fixer who'd vanished"
4"She froze, one hand on"
5"Her heart thudded against her"
6"she said, her voice steady"
7"This was a test she"
8"He tilted his head, that"
9"Water dripped from the ivory"
10"he replied, his accent curling"
11"She didn't move."
12"The flat behind her was"
13"Eva was out, chasing some"
14"Whichever fit the mood."
15"It ripped open wounds she'd"
16"she asked, keeping the chain"
17"Her straight black hair fell"
18"Childhood accident, she'd always said."
19"He shifted his weight, the"
ratio0.745
90.91% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"if I involved you, it"
1"Now, here he was, forcing"
ratio0.018
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The half-demon fixer who'd vanished from her life six months ago without a word, leaving her to piece together the shards of whatever they'd been building."
1"He set his cane against the wall, peeling off his wet jacket to reveal a crisp white shirt that clung just enough to hint at the lean muscle beneath."
2"Attraction simmered, the same pull that had drawn her to him initially—his sharp intellect matching her out-of-the-box thinking, his calm under fire echoing her…"
3"Ptolemy meowed from his perch, as if sensing the shift, but the cat's judgment faded under the weight of Lucien's gaze."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the storm brewing inside"
1"he said, a ghost of a smile tugging at his lips"
2"He stepped, his presence filling the cramped space"
3"she whispered, not pulling away from his touch"
4"He leaned in, his breath mingling with hers"
5"she said, but her voice lacked conviction"
6"he admitted, vulnerability cracking his polished facade"
53.23% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.258
leniency0.516
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.194
82.6391%