Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9N5HVGD3D41JZYPPWQ1GA

Run Details

Duration:
3.0s
Cost:
$0.000265
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the grove thickened the moment the standing stones hummed beneath Aurora’s boots. The moment she stepped past the last oak, the world tilted. A breath of wind carried the scent of damp earth and something older—something like honeyed smoke. The trees here were not just tall; they stretched, their branches twisting into shapes that shifted when she blinked. The leaves, though green, pulsed faintly, as if alive. A low, rhythmic *thrum* vibrated through the soil, and for a heartbeat, Aurora thought she heard it in her bones. Nyx moved ahead, their form flickering like a candle flame in the dim light. The shadows here were not shadows at all, but something deeper, something that clung to the edges of vision, half-seen, half-feared. They didn’t cast long shadows. They *wrapped* around her, soft and insistent, as if the grove itself was breathing. “You’re sure this is safe?” Aurora asked, voice tight. Isolde didn’t answer. She stood at the center of the clearing, her silver hair catching the light like scattered stars. The air around her shimmered, though no wind stirred. The ground beneath her feet was smooth, as if carved from glass, but when she stepped forward, the surface rippled, revealing a path of glowing moss that led deeper into the trees. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the Fae-forged blade at her waist. The cold metal pressed against her skin, sharp and unyielding. She had never felt it like this before—not just as a weapon, but as a promise. A warning. “You’re not supposed to be here,” Nyx murmured, their voice a whisper that slithered into her mind. “The Veil is thinning. The Wardens will find you.” Aurora didn’t look back. She followed the path, the moss glowing brighter where it curved around a cluster of standing stones. The stones were not carved from stone. They were *veined*, pulsing with a faint, electric light, as if they were alive. Their surfaces were smooth, yet when she pressed a hand against one, it left no mark—no print, no scratch. Just the ghost of her touch, as if the stone itself had absorbed it. A sound cut through the silence—a high, keening wail, like wind through a broken pipe. Aurora spun. Nyx was already moving, their form dissolving into the shadows. The wail came again, closer this time, and then a figure stepped into view. It was a woman, tall and gaunt, her skin stretched too tight over her bones. Her hair was a mass of tangled silver, and her eyes—pale, hollow—locked onto Aurora with something like recognition. She didn’t speak. She didn’t need to. The words were in the way she held herself, the way her fingers twitched toward the dagger at her belt. “You shouldn’t be here,” the woman said, her voice a rasp. “The Fae don’t welcome outsiders.” Aurora didn’t flinch. She stepped forward, the blade still warm against her palm. “We came for answers.” The woman’s lips curled, but it wasn’t a smile. “Answers are a luxury. The Veil is weakening. The Court will come for you.” Aurora’s grip on the blade tightened. “Who?” The woman’s gaze flicked to Nyx, who had returned, their form solid now, their violet eyes gleaming in the dim light. “The Wardens. And worse.” A gust of wind howled through the trees, and the path ahead darkened. The moss glowed dimmer, as if the light itself was fleeing. Aurora took a step forward, the blade still pressed against her skin. “Where do we go?” she asked. The woman’s voice was a whisper. “Anywhere but here.” The path vanished. The stones pulsed, then went dark. The air turned thick, heavy with the scent of damp earth and something older, something that coiled in the back of Aurora’s throat. She didn’t look back. She didn’t need to. She knew the way now.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount647
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount647
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"electric"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"rhythmic"
2"vibrated"
3"shimmered"
4"whisper"
5"electric"
6"silence"
7"flicked"
8"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences59
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords638
ratio0.005
matches
0"thrum"
1"wrapped"
2"veined"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.01% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount579
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.9
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora11
Isolde1
Fae-forged1
Nyx4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
places(empty)
globalScore0.55
windowScore0.833
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like honeyed smoke"
1"something like recognition"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords3.135
wordCount638
matches
0"not shadows at all, but something deeper, something"
1"not just as a weapon, but as a promise"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean33.58
std20.87
cv0.622
sampleLengths
026
164
254
39
461
538
626
775
841
960
1016
1117
1223
137
1425
1536
166
179
1845
98.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"were *veined"
59.65% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs95
matches
0"was breathing"
1"was fleeing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences59
ratio0.102
matches
0"A breath of wind carried the scent of damp earth and something older—something like honeyed smoke."
1"The trees here were not just tall; they stretched, their branches twisting into shapes that shifted when she blinked."
2"She had never felt it like this before—not just as a weapon, but as a promise."
3"Their surfaces were smooth, yet when she pressed a hand against one, it left no mark—no print, no scratch."
4"A sound cut through the silence—a high, keening wail, like wind through a broken pipe."
5"Her hair was a mass of tangled silver, and her eyes—pale, hollow—locked onto Aurora with something like recognition."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount588
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.02891156462585034
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0017006802721088435
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences59
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences59
mean10.81
std6.52
cv0.603
sampleLengths
015
111
216
319
49
520
614
721
85
914
109
113
1217
139
1432
1510
1610
1716
182
1917
209
214
2217
237
2414
2519
2614
2715
282
2910
3014
3115
3218
333
344
3520
3611
375
383
3910
404
419
4214
436
441
4521
464
4713
4811
4912
33.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.288135593220339
totalSentences59
uniqueOpeners17
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"Just the ghost of her"
ratio0.02
97.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences49
matches
0"They didn’t cast long shadows."
1"They *wrapped* around her, soft"
2"She stood at the center"
3"She had never felt it"
4"She followed the path, the"
5"They were *veined*, pulsing with"
6"Their surfaces were smooth, yet"
7"It was a woman, tall"
8"Her hair was a mass"
9"She didn’t speak."
10"She didn’t need to."
11"She stepped forward, the blade"
12"She didn’t look back."
13"She didn’t need to."
14"She knew the way now."
ratio0.306
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences49
matches
0"The air in the grove"
1"The moment she stepped past"
2"A breath of wind carried"
3"The trees here were not"
4"The leaves, though green, pulsed"
5"A low, rhythmic *thrum* vibrated"
6"Nyx moved ahead, their form"
7"The shadows here were not"
8"They didn’t cast long shadows."
9"They *wrapped* around her, soft"
10"Aurora asked, voice tight"
11"Isolde didn’t answer."
12"She stood at the center"
13"The air around her shimmered,"
14"The ground beneath her feet"
15"Aurora’s fingers tightened around the"
16"The cold metal pressed against"
17"She had never felt it"
18"Nyx murmured, their voice a"
19"Aurora didn’t look back."
ratio0.98
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The shadows here were not shadows at all, but something deeper, something that clung to the edges of vision, half-seen, half-feared."
1"They *wrapped* around her, soft and insistent, as if the grove itself was breathing."
2"The ground beneath her feet was smooth, as if carved from glass, but when she stepped forward, the surface rippled, revealing a path of glowing moss that led de…"
3"They were *veined*, pulsing with a faint, electric light, as if they were alive."
4"Just the ghost of her touch, as if the stone itself had absorbed it."
5"Nyx was already moving, their form dissolving into the shadows."
6"The air turned thick, heavy with the scent of damp earth and something older, something that coiled in the back of Aurora’s throat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Aurora asked, voice tight"
1"Nyx murmured, their voice a whisper that slithered into her mind"
2"the woman said, her voice a rasp"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.182
66.8102%