Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9N6C2RHWMS8JHA0PBJQ91

Run Details

Duration:
9.2s
Cost:
$0.000456
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying pulse, casting jagged shadows across the pavement. Rory Carter pushed through the door, the bell above jingling against the weight of her thoughts. The air inside smelled of stale beer and old wood, the kind of scent that clung to places where secrets were traded over pints. She slid onto a stool near the back, her fingers tracing the rim of a half-empty glass left by the last customer. The bar was quiet tonight, just a handful of regulars hunched over their drinks, their murmurs lost in the hum of the jukebox playing something slow and bluesy. Then she saw him. Silas Blackwood stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with slow, deliberate strokes. His back was to her, but she’d know that posture anywhere—the way his shoulders carried themselves, the slight hitch in his step when he shifted his weight. The years had etched deeper lines into his face, silver threading through his auburn hair, but his hands were still the same: steady, capable. She exhaled, her breath catching in her throat. Silas didn’t turn right away. He knew. Of course he did. “Rory,” he said finally, his voice rougher than she remembered. “Didn’t expect to see you here.” She twisted the scar on her wrist, the crescent-shaped mark pulling tight under her fingers. “Neither did I.” A beat of silence. The kind that stretched too long, heavy with things left unsaid. Silas set the glass down with a quiet *clink*. “What’ll it be?” “Whiskey. Neat.” He poured without looking at her, the amber liquid catching the dim light. Slid the glass across the counter. “You look like hell.” She took a sip. Burned. “Thanks.” He leaned against the bar, his signet ring glinting under the fluorescent strip. “You always did have a way with words.” Rory traced the rim of the glass. “You always did have a way of making me feel like shit.” Silas didn’t smile. Just watched her, his hazel eyes sharp. “You left.” “I know.” “Didn’t even say goodbye.” “I was running.” “From what?” She swallowed hard. “From everything.” Silas exhaled, slow and measured. “You could’ve come back.” “I couldn’t.” “Why not?” Because I was scared. Because I didn’t know how to be the person you thought I was anymore. Because I failed at everything I tried. Because I didn’t deserve you. But she didn’t say any of that. Instead, she said, “You look different.” His jaw tightened. “People change.” “You always were the one who stayed.” “And you were the one who left.” Rory’s fingers curled around the glass. “I had to.” “Had to what? Run? Hide?” She met his gaze. “I had to live.” Silas studied her for a long moment, then turned away, grabbing a rag to wipe down the counter. “You’re not the same girl who used to climb those fucking scaffolding sites with me.” “No,” she said quietly. “I’m not.” He didn’t look at her. “What do you want, Rory?” She hesitated. Then, “I don’t know.” Silas set the rag down. “Then why are you here?” Because I needed to see you. To know if you’d still look at me the same way. To see if the weight of what I did would show in your eyes. But she said, “I was delivering a package. For Yu-Fei.” Silas raised an eyebrow. “Golden Empress?” “Yeah.” “You’re working for them now?” “Part-time.” “What, you can’t hack it in the law?” She flinched. “I didn’t hack it anywhere.” Silas didn’t press. Just nodded toward the back. “You want the usual?” She followed his gaze—the hidden door behind the bookshelf, the one that led to the back room where they used to plot missions over stolen whiskey and half-baked schemes. “No.” “Then what?” “I don’t know.” Silas sighed, running a hand over his beard. “You always were terrible at this.” “At what?” “At pretending you don’t need anything.” Rory looked down at her glass. “I don’t.” “Bullshit.” She lifted her chin. “Fine. I need to know if you still hate me.” Silas was quiet for a long time. Then, softly: “I never hated you.” She exhaled, sharp. “Then what?” “Disappointed,” he said. “Angry. But never hated.” Rory’s throat tightened. “I’m sorry.” “For what?” “For leaving. For not fighting. For not being the person you thought I was.” Silas studied her, his expression unreadable. Then, quietly: “You were always more than I thought you were.” She swallowed. “I was never enough.” “That’s not true.” “It is.” “You’re standing here, aren’t you?” She looked away. “Doesn’t mean I belong.” Silas leaned in, his voice low. “You never stopped belonging.” Rory’s hands trembled. “I did.” “No,” he said. “You just forgot.” The jukebox clicked, the needle dropping into a new song—something old, something familiar. The kind of song that made her chest ache. Silas reached across the counter, his fingers brushing hers. “Stay.” She didn’t move. “Just for tonight,” he said. “No plans. No running. Just… stay.” Rory looked at him, really looked at him—the lines on his face, the weight in his eyes, the way his hand still hovered there, waiting. She took a breath. “Okay,” she said. Silas didn’t smile. Just nodded, turning to grab another glass. Rory stayed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.116
leniency0.232
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.058
88.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount884
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount884
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"weight"
count4
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulse"
2"weight"
3"tracing"
4"etched"
5"silence"
6"glinting"
7"traced"
8"measured"
9"eyebrow"
10"unreadable"
11"trembled"
12"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences78
matches
0"was scared"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords876
ratio0.005
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount608
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.47
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Carter1
Blackwood1
Silas15
Rory8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.266
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount876
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"know that posture"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs80
mean10.95
std11.85
cv1.082
sampleLengths
059
150
24
364
48
511
616
718
815
912
102
1123
126
1321
1419
1512
162
174
183
192
205
219
222
232
2430
257
266
275
287
297
309
315
328
3333
346
3510
366
3710
3831
3910
406
411
425
431
448
457
4612
4730
482
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"were traded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs115
matches(empty)
58.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences136
ratio0.029
matches
0"His back was to her, but she’d know that posture anywhere—the way his shoulders carried themselves, the slight hitch in his step when he shifted his weight."
1"She followed his gaze—the hidden door behind the bookshelf, the one that led to the back room where they used to plot missions over stolen whiskey and half-baked schemes."
2"The jukebox clicked, the needle dropping into a new song—something old, something familiar."
3"Rory looked at him, really looked at him—the lines on his face, the weight in his eyes, the way his hand still hovered there, waiting."
96.59% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount615
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.04390243902439024
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008130081300813009
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean6.44
std5.87
cv0.911
sampleLengths
019
116
224
322
428
54
613
727
824
98
105
112
124
1310
146
1515
163
174
1811
199
203
212
2213
236
244
254
261
271
2813
298
307
3112
323
337
342
352
364
373
382
393
402
415
424
432
442
454
4614
477
485
497
47.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3161764705882353
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences65
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Of course he did."
2"Just watched her, his hazel"
3"Instead, she said,"
4"Just nodded toward the back."
5"Just nodded, turning to grab"
ratio0.092
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences65
matches
0"She slid onto a stool"
1"His back was to her,"
2"She exhaled, her breath catching"
3"he said finally, his voice"
4"She twisted the scar on"
5"He poured without looking at"
6"She took a sip."
7"He leaned against the bar,"
8"She swallowed hard."
9"His jaw tightened."
10"She met his gaze."
11"she said quietly"
12"He didn’t look at her."
13"She followed his gaze—the hidden"
14"She lifted her chin."
15"She exhaled, sharp."
16"She looked away."
17"She didn’t move."
18"She took a breath."
ratio0.292
83.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences65
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"Rory Carter pushed through the"
2"The air inside smelled of"
3"She slid onto a stool"
4"The bar was quiet tonight,"
5"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
6"His back was to her,"
7"The years had etched deeper"
8"She exhaled, her breath catching"
9"Silas didn’t turn right away."
10"he said finally, his voice"
11"She twisted the scar on"
12"A beat of silence."
13"The kind that stretched too"
14"Silas set the glass down"
15"He poured without looking at"
16"She took a sip."
17"He leaned against the bar,"
18"Rory traced the rim of"
19"Silas didn’t smile."
ratio0.754
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount7
totalSentences65
matches
0"Because I was scared."
1"Because I didn’t know how"
2"Because I failed at everything"
3"Because I didn’t deserve you."
4"Because I needed to see"
5"To know if you’d still"
6"To see if the weight"
ratio0.108
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The air inside smelled of stale beer and old wood, the kind of scent that clung to places where secrets were traded over pints."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said finally, his voice rougher than she remembered"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.116
leniency0.232
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.7797%