| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.438 | | leniency | 0.875 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 990 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 990 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "unravel" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "resonance" | | 6 | "intricate" | | 7 | "navigating" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "crystalline" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "echoes" | | 14 | "yearning" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "resolved" | | 17 | "amidst" | | 18 | "marble" | | 19 | "chilling" | | 20 | "flicked" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 6.80% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "seem to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 986 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "cold" | | 1 | "felt" | | 2 | "want" | | 3 | "is" | | 4 | "lie" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.40% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 731 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.05 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 15 | | Park | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Nyx | 6 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Half-Fae" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.474 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 53.85% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "carvings that seemed to writhe and shift in the periphery of her vision" | | 1 | "chime that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" |
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| 98.58% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.014 | | wordCount | 986 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just the temperature, but a damp, clinging cold" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 29.88 | | std | 17.37 | | cv | 0.581 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 78 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 67 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 55 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 14 |
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| 99.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 123 | | matches | | |
| 1.76% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 81 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "The air buzzed with a sound less heard than *felt*—a high-pitched resonance that set her teeth on edge." | | 1 | "Rory’s fingers brushed against a petal, soft as velvet, and a jolt of energy—a prickling sensation—shot up her arm." | | 2 | "As she drew closer, she noticed symbols etched onto their surfaces – spiraling, geometric patterns that echoed the carvings on the standing stones." | | 3 | "A sound broke the silence – a delicate, tinkling chime that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 735 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.034013605442176874 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010884353741496598 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 81 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 81 | | mean | 12.17 | | std | 6.13 | | cv | 0.504 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 68.31% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.43209876543209874 | | totalSentences | 81 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Even their whisper of a" | | 1 | "Instead of grass, the ground" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t expected it to" | | 1 | "It had been radiating more" | | 2 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 3 | "She noticed the standing stones" | | 4 | "They weren’t arranged in any" | | 5 | "They didn’t seem to cast" | | 6 | "They continued, navigating a path" | | 7 | "She pointed towards a cluster" | | 8 | "They weren't ice, Rory realized." | | 9 | "They were something…else." | | 10 | "It wasn’t human." | | 11 | "Its gaze fixed on the" | | 12 | "It pulsed faster, warmer." |
| | ratio | 0.22 | |
| 27.80% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened as they" | | 1 | "Richmond Park had vanished." | | 2 | "Nyx drifted ahead, their form" | | 3 | "Rory tugged the collar of" | | 4 | "She hadn’t expected it to" | | 5 | "Isolde moved with an unnerving" | | 6 | "The Half-Fae didn't walk so" | | 7 | "Rory asked, her voice sounding" | | 8 | "Isolde didn’t turn." | | 9 | "Rory glanced at the Heartstone" | | 10 | "It had been radiating more" | | 11 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 12 | "The air buzzed with a" | | 13 | "Isolde offered, her pale lavender" | | 14 | "Rory ignored her, focused instead" | | 15 | "The trees were impossibly tall," | | 16 | "She noticed the standing stones" | | 17 | "They weren’t arranged in any" | | 18 | "Rory asked Nyx, shielding her" | | 19 | "They didn’t seem to cast" |
| | ratio | 0.864 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde moved with an unnerving grace, barely disturbing the wildflowers that bloomed in unnatural profusion, their colors vibrant even in the gloom." | | 1 | "The air buzzed with a sound less heard than *felt*—a high-pitched resonance that set her teeth on edge." | | 2 | "The trees were impossibly tall, their branches interlacing to form a canopy that blotted out any trace of a sky." | | 3 | "She noticed the standing stones Isolde had mentioned, weathered and covered in intricate carvings that seemed to writhe and shift in the periphery of her vision…" | | 4 | "She pointed towards a cluster of crystalline formations that gleamed in the green light." | | 5 | "As she drew closer, she noticed symbols etched onto their surfaces – spiraling, geometric patterns that echoed the carvings on the standing stones." | | 6 | "A ripple disturbed the air, a shimmering distortion that resolved itself into a figure standing amidst the crystalline formations." | | 7 | "Nyx moved forward, their form solidifying, becoming a dark barrier between Rory and the figure." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory asked, her voice sounding too loud, too brittle in the stillness" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her voice a breathy murmur" | | 2 | "Isolde said, a faint smile playing on her lips" | | 3 | "Rory asked, her grip tightening on the blade" | | 4 | "the figure said, its voice a melodic chime that grated on Rory’s nerves" | | 5 | "Isolde interjected, her voice calm and steady" | | 6 | "the figure said, a hint of amusement in its voice" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 1 | "the figure retorted (retort)" | | 2 | "Rory lied (lie)" | | 3 | "Isolde interjected (interject)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.344 | | leniency | 0.688 | | rawRatio | 0.364 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |