Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9NFAS2P6SKDAF668951SF

Run Details

Duration:
40.8s
Cost:
$0.000354
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air thickened as they passed between the oaks. One moment, Rory was brushing damp leaves from her jacket, the next, the chill was bone-deep, and the scent of overripe fruit hung heavy and sweet. Richmond Park had vanished. Nyx drifted ahead, their form a shifting silhouette against the backdrop of perpetual twilight. Even their whisper of a voice sounded muted, absorbed by something unseen. “The Grove concedes to those it deems worthy. Or…curious.” Rory tugged the collar of her jacket tighter. She hadn’t expected it to be *cold*. Not just the temperature, but a damp, clinging cold that seemed to seep into her marrow. Isolde moved with an unnerving grace, barely disturbing the wildflowers that bloomed in unnatural profusion, their colors vibrant even in the gloom. The Half-Fae didn't walk so much as…flowed, her silver hair a waterfall pooling around her feet. “Worthy of what?” Rory asked, her voice sounding too loud, too brittle in the stillness. Isolde didn’t turn. “Of a glimpse. Of a forgetting. Of a truth that may unravel you.” Rory glanced at the Heartstone Pendant nestled beneath her sweater, the crimson gem pulsing faintly, a subtle warmth against her skin. It had been radiating more intensely since they’d stepped between the trees, a reassuring thrum against the growing unease. They moved deeper into the clearing. Instead of grass, the ground was covered in a thick carpet of moss, luminous and springy underfoot. Strange, bioluminescent fungi sprouted from the roots of ancient trees, casting an ethereal, green light. The air buzzed with a sound less heard than *felt*—a high-pitched resonance that set her teeth on edge. “Time is…fluid here,” Isolde offered, her pale lavender eyes unfocused. “Pay it no heed. It will try to mislead you.” Rory ignored her, focused instead on the landscape. The trees were impossibly tall, their branches interlacing to form a canopy that blotted out any trace of a sky. She noticed the standing stones Isolde had mentioned, weathered and covered in intricate carvings that seemed to writhe and shift in the periphery of her vision. They weren’t arranged in any logical pattern, but rather seemed to have grown organically from the earth, like skeletal fingers reaching for something beyond. “What is this place, exactly?” Rory asked Nyx, shielding her eyes against the glowing fungi. They didn’t seem to cast shadows, which was…wrong. Nyx paused, their form coalescing, becoming momentarily more defined. “A thinning. A seam between your world and…others. The Fae touch this place deeply. It breathes with their magic.” They continued, navigating a path winding between towering ferns and flowering vines. Rory’s fingers brushed against a petal, soft as velvet, and a jolt of energy—a prickling sensation—shot up her arm. “Look,” Isolde said, her voice a breathy murmur. She pointed towards a cluster of crystalline formations that gleamed in the green light. They weren't ice, Rory realized. They were something…else. The crystals pulsed with an inner light, and a low humming emanated from them. As she drew closer, she noticed symbols etched onto their surfaces – spiraling, geometric patterns that echoed the carvings on the standing stones. “Memory stones,” Isolde explained. “They hold echoes of moments lost, of stories forgotten. Touch them with intent, and you may…taste the past.” Rory hesitated. “What kind of intent?” “A specific question. A yearning. But be warned. Memories are fickle. They show you what you *want* to see, not necessarily what *is*.” Nyx drifted closer to the crystals, their shadowy form passing through one without resistance. “They’re not mere repositories of memory. They’re conduits. Points of intersection.” A sound broke the silence – a delicate, tinkling chime that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. Rory instinctively reached for the Fae-Forged Blade Isolde had given her, her fingers closing around the cold, smooth metal of the moonsilver. The blade felt…right in her hand, a weightless extension of her own will. “It sings to you, doesn’t it?” Isolde said, a faint smile playing on her lips. “A defender’s gift. It feels the presence of the Unseelie Court.” “Unseelie?” Rory asked, her grip tightening on the blade. “The darker side of the Fae. They are not…fond of mortals who meddle in their affairs.” A ripple disturbed the air, a shimmering distortion that resolved itself into a figure standing amidst the crystalline formations. Tall and slender, with skin like polished marble and eyes that glowed with an unnerving silver light. It wasn’t human. Not quite. "Intruders," the figure said, its voice a melodic chime that grated on Rory’s nerves. "You trespass in a realm not meant for mortal eyes." Nyx moved forward, their form solidifying, becoming a dark barrier between Rory and the figure. "We seek knowledge, not conflict." “Knowledge comes at a price,” the figure retorted, raising a hand adorned with rings of twisted bone. “And you, little mortal, possess something of interest." Its gaze fixed on the Heartstone Pendant. "A trinket stolen from the table of Belphegor.” Rory instinctively covered the pendant with her hand. Belphegor. The ruler of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony. So that’s where this had come from. “We know nothing of this Belphegor,” Rory lied, pressing her palm flat against the gem. It pulsed faster, warmer. The figure tilted its head, its silver eyes scrutinizing her. “Do you believe I cannot perceive falsehood? The Fae are rarely deceived.” “She doesn’t *lie*,” Isolde interjected, her voice calm and steady. “She merely…chooses which truths to reveal.” “A clever distinction,” the figure said, a hint of amusement in its voice. “But ultimately, irrelevant. The pendant belongs in Dymas. Return it, and you may leave unharmed." Nyx’s voice was a low growl. “We did not come here to relinquish gifts.” The figure smiled, a chilling, predatory expression. The ground beneath their feet began to tremble, and the bioluminescent fungi pulsed with an erratic, feverish light. "Very well." The figure’s hand flicked. “Then you will learn the price of defiance.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount990
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"intensely"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"intensely"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount990
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"unravel"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"resonance"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"navigating"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"crystalline"
count2
10
word"pulsed"
count3
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"echoes"
count1
14
word"yearning"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"resolved"
count1
17
word"amidst"
count1
18
word"marble"
count1
19
word"chilling"
count1
20
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"whisper"
2"gloom"
3"unravel"
4"warmth"
5"resonance"
6"intricate"
7"navigating"
8"velvet"
9"crystalline"
10"pulsed"
11"etched"
12"echoed"
13"echoes"
14"yearning"
15"silence"
16"resolved"
17"amidst"
18"marble"
19"chilling"
20"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
6.80% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords986
ratio0.005
matches
0"cold"
1"felt"
2"want"
3"is"
4"lie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
47.40% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount731
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.05
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory15
Park1
Half-Fae1
Isolde9
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Nyx6
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Dymas1
Gluttony1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Half-Fae"
2"Isolde"
3"Pendant"
4"Nyx"
places
0"Park"
1"Heartstone"
globalScore0.474
windowScore0.667
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"carvings that seemed to writhe and shift in the periphery of her vision"
1"chime that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once"
98.58% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.014
wordCount986
matches
0"Not just the temperature, but a damp, clinging cold"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean29.88
std17.37
cv0.581
sampleLengths
039
135
269
315
416
540
656
720
878
923
1028
1131
1267
1322
146
1523
1625
1755
1826
199
2016
2141
2224
2320
2440
2524
2619
2722
2816
2928
3014
3125
3214
99.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"was covered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs123
matches
0"was brushing"
1.76% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences81
ratio0.049
matches
0"The air buzzed with a sound less heard than *felt*—a high-pitched resonance that set her teeth on edge."
1"Rory’s fingers brushed against a petal, soft as velvet, and a jolt of energy—a prickling sensation—shot up her arm."
2"As she drew closer, she noticed symbols etched onto their surfaces – spiraling, geometric patterns that echoed the carvings on the standing stones."
3"A sound broke the silence – a delicate, tinkling chime that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount735
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.034013605442176874
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010884353741496598
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean12.17
std6.13
cv0.504
sampleLengths
09
126
24
314
412
59
68
77
816
922
1016
1115
123
1313
1421
1519
166
1717
1815
1918
2010
2110
228
2320
2426
2524
2615
278
289
2919
3012
3119
328
3314
345
353
3614
3723
384
3918
402
414
4223
4314
4411
4520
4622
4713
4815
4911
68.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.43209876543209874
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"Even their whisper of a"
1"Instead of grass, the ground"
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences59
matches
0"She hadn’t expected it to"
1"It had been radiating more"
2"They moved deeper into the"
3"She noticed the standing stones"
4"They weren’t arranged in any"
5"They didn’t seem to cast"
6"They continued, navigating a path"
7"She pointed towards a cluster"
8"They weren't ice, Rory realized."
9"They were something…else."
10"It wasn’t human."
11"Its gaze fixed on the"
12"It pulsed faster, warmer."
ratio0.22
27.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences59
matches
0"The air thickened as they"
1"Richmond Park had vanished."
2"Nyx drifted ahead, their form"
3"Rory tugged the collar of"
4"She hadn’t expected it to"
5"Isolde moved with an unnerving"
6"The Half-Fae didn't walk so"
7"Rory asked, her voice sounding"
8"Isolde didn’t turn."
9"Rory glanced at the Heartstone"
10"It had been radiating more"
11"They moved deeper into the"
12"The air buzzed with a"
13"Isolde offered, her pale lavender"
14"Rory ignored her, focused instead"
15"The trees were impossibly tall,"
16"She noticed the standing stones"
17"They weren’t arranged in any"
18"Rory asked Nyx, shielding her"
19"They didn’t seem to cast"
ratio0.864
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Isolde moved with an unnerving grace, barely disturbing the wildflowers that bloomed in unnatural profusion, their colors vibrant even in the gloom."
1"The air buzzed with a sound less heard than *felt*—a high-pitched resonance that set her teeth on edge."
2"The trees were impossibly tall, their branches interlacing to form a canopy that blotted out any trace of a sky."
3"She noticed the standing stones Isolde had mentioned, weathered and covered in intricate carvings that seemed to writhe and shift in the periphery of her vision…"
4"She pointed towards a cluster of crystalline formations that gleamed in the green light."
5"As she drew closer, she noticed symbols etched onto their surfaces – spiraling, geometric patterns that echoed the carvings on the standing stones."
6"A ripple disturbed the air, a shimmering distortion that resolved itself into a figure standing amidst the crystalline formations."
7"Nyx moved forward, their form solidifying, becoming a dark barrier between Rory and the figure."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Rory asked, her voice sounding too loud, too brittle in the stillness"
1"Isolde said, her voice a breathy murmur"
2"Isolde said, a faint smile playing on her lips"
3"Rory asked, her grip tightening on the blade"
4"the figure said, its voice a melodic chime that grated on Rory’s nerves"
5"Isolde interjected, her voice calm and steady"
6"the figure said, a hint of amusement in its voice"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Isolde explained (explain)"
1"the figure retorted (retort)"
2"Rory lied (lie)"
3"Isolde interjected (interject)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.344
leniency0.688
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.25
70.6365%