Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9NWZCQ06ETE95K6MVBYWH

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Duration:
24.2s
Cost:
$0.001459
Provider:
Seed

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door jingled, but not the usual chime—too loud, too fast. Rory looked up from the stack of delivery orders spread across the bar's oak counter. The green neon sign flickered above the door, casting its usual sickly glow on the walls. She shouldered the last box, balanced it on one hip, and turned. "Yu-Fei says you're late," she called, but her voice was lighter than she meant it to be. The person in the doorway froze. It was her. Rory's breath hitched. Eva's hair, once cropped close around her ears, fell in loose waves down her back, streaked with strands of silver. She'd always had the kind of beauty that felt like a secret—sharp cheekbones, a smile that reached her eyes before she even meant to smile. Now her eyes were shaded with tiredness, the skin around them creased like old paper. Her coat was a heavy fur thing, new, expensive, not the patched leather jacket she used to wear. Eva's gaze flickered past Rory to the back of the bar, where a man with grey-streaked auburn hair and a neat beard stood polishing a glass. Silas. He nodded once, slow, as if he'd been expecting her. Or dreading her. "Silas," she said, finally, her voice a rustle of leaves. "Sit," Silas said, without turning. His left leg, the one that limped, thudded a little on the floor. He poured two glasses of something amber—Scotch, probably, the stuff he only brought out when the clientele was dangerous. "Rory'll fix you a drink. Won't you, Rory?" Rory set the box down, her shoulder aching from the plastic strap. "You want a beer?" Eva's smile was brittle. "Whiskey, please. Neat." Silas grunted. "Bourbon. Not that swill Yu-Fei passes off as whiskey." He rotated the glass in his hand, the silver ring glinting. "Sit." Rory said nothing. She pulled a stool from the counter, slid it over. Eva's hand hovered near the edge, then she sat, her coat sliding off her shoulders. The fur caught on a nail in the wood, and Rory watched her yank it free. "You look good," Eva said, after a beat. Rory touched her left wrist, the scar thin and white beneath her sleeve. "You don't." Eva laughed, but it was a harsh sound. "Funny. That's what I was going to say." She picked up the glass Silas set down in front of her, took a sip. "Takes some getting used to. Not seeing you in Cardiff." Rory's throat tightened. Cardiff. The flat above Evan's apartment, the way he'd scream when she forgot to buy milk, the cut on her lip when she'd tried to leave. She'd packed a bag, taken the train to London at three in the morning, her phone buzzing with texts from Eva—*Come. I'll hide you.* She hadn't called. Not for two years. "You shoulda called," she said. Eva's fingers stilled. "Shoulda. Trust issues, y'know? Ran out on the only people who ever gave a damn about you." "Better to run than stay," Rory said, but her voice was weak. She looked around the bar, at the map of London on the wall, the photo of Silas in uniform—younger, leaner, the limp not yet pronounced. "You didn't think I'd come back." "Figured you'd burned the bridges," Eva said. She set the glass down, too hard. It rang against the wood. "Burned *everything*." Rory's breath caught. The scar on her wrist itched. "I didn't burn anything. I just... needed to leave." Eva leaned forward, her hands on the counter. "Needed? Or you couldn't handle it when it got real? When the good parts started to hurt worse than the bad?" Silas shifted behind them, his glasses glinting. "Enough, Eva." Eva didn't look away. "No, let her talk. You told *him* the truth, didn't you? You told *everyone*." Rory stared at the scar. "It's not a big deal." "No," Eva said, quiet now. "It's not. Not compared to..." She trailed off. She reached into her coat, pulled out a photo. It was crumpled, edges frayed. Rory recognized the faces—hers, Eva, a group of friends from uni, laughing outside a pub. Evan was there, too, his arm around her shoulders, a smirk on his face. "We all thought you were dead." Rory's hand flew to her mouth. "What?" Eva nodded. "That night you disappeared. I went to the police. They said you'd run off with a drug dealer. I didn't believe it. I waited. And waited. Then..." She looked away. "Then I got a letter. From a lawyer. Said you'd died in a car crash. In Oxfordshire. A stolen vehicle. They never found your body. Just your phone." Rory's vision blurred. She hadn't known. She'd never known. Evan had kept it from her—burned the letters, the emails, the calls from Eva. "Why didn't you..." "Why didn't I fight harder?" Eva said. "I married, Rory. Had kids. Moved to Manchester. I couldn't keep chasing a ghost. Especially not when the ghost was the one who left me holding the pieces." Rory stood, knocking the stool over. "I'm sorry." Eva stood, too, but slowly, like her knees were tired. "Sorry's a lousy currency, Rory. You can't spend it on the years we lost." She picked up the photo, tucked it back into her coat. "I came here because I needed to know. You left, so I thought you owed me that. But now I know. You're just... you. Changed. But not *that* changed." "What do you want from me?" Rory said. Eva smiled, a small, sad thing. "I want you to look at me and see *me*. Not the girl who left with a suitcase and a broken heart. Not the woman who married a man who didn't love her. Just Eva. The one who used to sneak into your flat to watch scary movies and eat too much junk food. The one who held you when you cried after Evan took your laptop. The one who..." She paused. The bar's silence hung thick. Rory saw it then—the way Eva's eyes still watered when she thought of Evan, the way her hands trembled when she touched her wedding band. "I'm sorry I didn't fight," she said. "I was scared. Scared he'd find me. Scared I'd mess it up." Eva stepped closer. "You didn't mess it up, Rory. We did. We all did. But we're still here, y'know? Still breathing. Still trying." Rory nodded, tears spilling down her cheeks. She reached out, touched Eva's hand. "I missed you." Eva squeezed back. "I missed you, too." Silas cleared his throat. "Yu-Fei'll be closing up soon. You girls want to take it to the flat? I'll stay here and lock up." Rory wiped her face with the back of her hand. "Yeah. That sounds good." Eva turned to leave, then paused. "Rory?" She looked up. "Come visit," Eva said. "Manchester's not so bad. The kids love stories about dragons. And you can teach them to pick locks. You were the best." Rory managed a laugh. "I can't pick locks anymore. Silas trained me out of it." Eva smiled. "You can still teach them. Some things don't change." Rory stood, her legs wobbly. "I'll come. Soon." Eva smiled. "Even if it's six weeks. I'll be here." The call ended. Rory looked up at Silas, who was watching her. "You knew," she said. He nodded. "Eva called. Last week. Said she needed to see you. Wanted the truth." Rory took a sip of beer. "You think it's too late?" Silas grunted. "Life's not a novel, Rory. It doesn't end at the last page. Sometimes, you just have to turn it." Rory smiled. She looked at the scar on her wrist, the one from the kitchen knife Evan had thrown. It didn't hurt anymore. Not really. She reached for her coat, slung it over her shoulder. "Let's go home." Silas stood, his limp more pronounced now. "Home," he agreed. They walked out of the bar, the green neon sign fading behind them. Rory could feel the photo in her coat pocket, the one of her and Eva and the group of friends, and she smiled. It was a start.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:50:55.733Z" 2/20/2026, 7:50:55 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She looked away [away]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.035
92.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1366
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1366
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"glinting"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"glinting"
2"silence"
3"trembled"
4"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen70
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords9
totalWords1355
ratio0.007
matches
0"Come. I'll hide you."
1"everything"
2"him"
3"everyone"
4"that"
5"me"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount820
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity3.29
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity7
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory25
Silas10
Scotch1
Evan5
London2
Eva27
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Scotch"
3"Evan"
4"Eva"
places
0"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a secret—sharp cheekbones, a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1355
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean26.06
std21.14
cv0.811
sampleLengths
077
13
281
350
445
516
67
723
852
915
1041
1160
125
1320
1443
1521
1618
1729
189
1918
2010
2162
227
2360
2426
2535
268
2764
288
2976
3051
3123
3216
337
3424
3514
367
373
3826
3915
4011
418
4210
4316
4415
4511
4621
4725
4813
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"was crumpled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs164
matches
0"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences141
ratio0.057
matches
0"The door jingled, but not the usual chime—too loud, too fast."
1"She'd always had the kind of beauty that felt like a secret—sharp cheekbones, a smile that reached her eyes before she even meant to smile."
2"He poured two glasses of something amber—Scotch, probably, the stuff he only brought out when the clientele was dangerous."
3"She'd packed a bag, taken the train to London at three in the morning, her phone buzzing with texts from Eva—*Come."
4"She looked around the bar, at the map of London on the wall, the photo of Silas in uniform—younger, leaner, the limp not yet pronounced."
5"Rory recognized the faces—hers, Eva, a group of friends from uni, laughing outside a pub."
6"Evan had kept it from her—burned the letters, the emails, the calls from Eva."
7"Rory saw it then—the way Eva's eyes still watered when she thought of Evan, the way her hands trembled when she touched her wedding band."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount828
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.035024154589371984
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008454106280193236
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean9.61
std8.96
cv0.932
sampleLengths
011
115
216
312
417
56
63
73
820
925
1015
1118
1226
131
1410
153
1610
175
1813
1919
208
2112
224
234
243
252
2620
271
283
2910
3015
3116
328
3313
342
358
3623
3710
383
391
4025
4121
426
434
445
453
4617
4712
4825
496
47.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3049645390070922
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
72.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences84
matches
0"She shouldered the last box,"
1"she called, but her voice"
2"It was her."
3"She'd always had the kind"
4"Her coat was a heavy"
5"He nodded once, slow, as"
6"she said, finally, her voice"
7"His left leg, the one"
8"He poured two glasses of"
9"He rotated the glass in"
10"She pulled a stool from"
11"She picked up the glass"
12"She'd packed a bag, taken"
13"I'll hide you.* She hadn't"
14"She looked around the bar,"
15"She set the glass down,"
16"It rang against the wood."
17"She trailed off"
18"She reached into her coat,"
19"It was crumpled, edges frayed."
ratio0.369
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences84
matches
0"The door jingled, but not"
1"Rory looked up from the"
2"The green neon sign flickered"
3"She shouldered the last box,"
4"she called, but her voice"
5"The person in the doorway"
6"It was her."
7"Rory's breath hitched."
8"Eva's hair, once cropped close"
9"She'd always had the kind"
10"Her coat was a heavy"
11"Eva's gaze flickered past Rory"
12"He nodded once, slow, as"
13"she said, finally, her voice"
14"Silas said, without turning"
15"His left leg, the one"
16"He poured two glasses of"
17"Rory set the box down,"
18"Eva's smile was brittle."
19"He rotated the glass in"
ratio0.964
59.52% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Now her eyes were shaded"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
19.74% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she called, but her voice was lighter than she meant it to be"
1"Silas said, without turning"
2"He rotated, the silver ring glinting"
3"Rory said, but her voice was weak"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.246
leniency0.491
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.035
78.8896%