"She juggled the greasy paper bag from the curry house below—chicken tikka masala for her, lamb rogan josh for Eva, who was buried in some occult tome in the living room—and nudged the door open with her shoulder."
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"Her straight shoulder-length hair fell forward as she bent to untie her boots, the small crescent scar on her left wrist catching the dim light from the single bulb overhead—a reminder of a playground tumble, innocent compared to the scars life had etched since."
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"The sight of him through the fish-eye lens twisted something deep in her chest—attraction laced with the sharp sting of old hurt. He stood there in the rain-slicked hallway, impeccably dressed as always in a tailored charcoal suit that hugged his lean 5'11\" build, water beading on the slicked-back platinum blond of his hair."
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"Complicated didn't begin to cover it—they'd tangled in more ways than one, bodies and hearts, until his world of demons and deals had clashed with her desperate bid for normalcy."
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"She'd pushed him away, or he'd pulled back; the memory blurred in the hurt."
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"Cool air rushed in, carrying the scent of wet pavement and his cologne—sandalwood and something faintly infernal."
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"Besides, the attraction simmered beneath her skin, unbidden, making her pulse quicken at the sight of him—tall, composed, utterly out of place in the mundanity of Brick Lane."
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"Lucien hung his coat precisely beside hers, the fabrics brushing—a tailored wool against scuffed leather, worlds colliding."
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"He turned, water still glistening on his platinum hair, and surveyed the room with a practiced eye—the chaos of books piled on every surface, the faint glow of a desk lamp illuminating Eva's latest research sprawl."
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"Lucien knew some of it; they'd shared that much in stolen nights, her head on his chest as he traced her scar with a fingertip, murmuring in French."
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"She remembered his touch—confident, electric, igniting her skin in ways that scared her even then."
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"Rory's bright blue eyes searched his face, hunting for the lie, but found only raw honesty—the kind that made her heart ache."
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"\"I know. That's why I couldn't stay away.\" He closed the gap then, his fingers—long, elegant, scarred from blade work—grazing her cheek."
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"Hurt lingered, a thorn in her chest, but so did the pull—the way his amber eye held hers, promising depths she wanted to dive into."
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"She leaned in, her lips brushing his in a tentative kiss—soft at first, testing."
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"Outside, Brick Lane pulsed with life, but in Eva's cramped haven, two worlds tentatively merged—human heart meeting half-demon soul, attraction weaving through hurt toward something unspoken yet profound."
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"She juggled the greasy paper bag from the curry house below—chicken tikka masala for her, lamb rogan josh for Eva, who was buried in some occult tome in the liv…"
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"It was a Thursday night in East London, the kind where the rain pattered against the window like impatient fingers, and Rory's shift at the Golden Empress had l…"
2
"His ivory-handled cane rested lightly against his palm, that concealed blade she knew too well hidden within."
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"Half-demon, information broker to London's shadowy underbelly, and the man who'd walked out of her life six months ago without a backward glance, leaving a trai…"
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"But the pull was there, magnetic and infuriating, the same spark that had ignited in a smoky bar off Silas's place, where he'd bought her a drink and whispered …"
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"But her out-of-the-box thinking, the part that had gotten her from Cardiff's stifling expectations to this chaotic flat above a curry house, whispered otherwise…"
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"She scooped up the cat, holding him like a buffer, his warmth grounding her."
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"Up close, she could see the faint lines of fatigue around his eyes, the toll of his half-demon heritage or the deals that kept him in the shadows."
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"He winced, a rare crack in his impeccable facade, and reached out as if to touch her arm but stopped short."
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"She remembered his touch—confident, electric, igniting her skin in ways that scared her even then."
10
"Rory's bright blue eyes searched his face, hunting for the lie, but found only raw honesty—the kind that made her heart ache."
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"Attraction had sparked over shared smokes on the fire escape, his hand brushing hers, leading to a kiss that tasted of smoke and secrets."
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"She leaned in, her lips brushing his in a tentative kiss—soft at first, testing."
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"He responded with a hunger held in check, his free hand settling at her waist, pulling her close."