Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9PAS81DCDDX9NG0P3JCG3

Run Details

Duration:
6.5s
Cost:
$0.000319
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open before Rory could even reach for the handle, the hinges groaning like an old man’s joints. The scent of damp wool and something sharper—like ozone after a storm—filled the air before the man stepped inside. Lucien stood there, his polished boots clicking against the linoleum, the cane tucked under his arm like it was nothing more than an accessory. His tailored charcoal suit clung to his broad shoulders, the fabric whispering against the movement of his chest. One amber eye locked onto hers, the other black, unreadable. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, but his jaw was tight enough to snap a twig. Rory froze, her fingers still curled around the doorknob. "You’re not supposed to be here." Lucien didn’t flinch. "Neither are you." The words hung between them, heavy as the silence that followed. Rory exhaled through her nose, her pulse hammering in her throat. She should’ve known better than to think he’d just leave it alone. Not Lucien. Not after everything. She stepped back, letting the door swing shut behind him. The flat was smaller than his, but it had its own kind of clutter—stacks of takeout menus, a half-empty bottle of whiskey on the counter, the faint scent of soy sauce and garlic lingering from the deliveries she’d made today. Nothing like the sterile precision of his place in Mayfair. Lucien’s gaze flicked over the mess, his lips curling just slightly. "You’ve been busy." "Shut up," Rory snapped, but her voice lacked its usual bite. She crossed her arms, the movement instinctive, protective. "What do you want?" He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he let his cane slide from his arm, the ivory handle catching the light as it settled against the floor. The blade inside was hidden, but she knew it was there. Knew the way his fingers twitched near the grip, the way his body tensed when he thought no one was looking. "Information," he said finally, his voice smooth as aged brandy. "About the man who’s been asking questions at the Golden Empress." Rory’s stomach twisted. "You’re not here about me." "Not yet." His gaze dropped to her wrist, lingering on the faint scar that ran along the inside of her forearm. The one she’d gotten when she was twelve, climbing a tree to prove she could. The one she’d never told him about. She yanked her sleeve down, hiding it. "Then what do you want?" Lucien stepped closer, the scent of him—leather and something darker, something that made her skin prickle—filling her lungs. "A favor." She laughed, sharp and humorless. "You don’t do favors. You do debts." His lips quirked. "This isn’t a debt. It’s a loan." Rory’s fingers flexed at her sides. "I don’t have anything to give you." "Then I’ll take something else." His voice dropped, rougher now, the amber eye burning into her. "Your time." She should’ve walked away. Should’ve slammed the door in his face and called the police if he didn’t leave. But the way he looked at her—like he could see right through her, like he’d always known the parts of her she tried to hide—made her chest tighten. "Fine," she said, her voice steadier than she felt. "But I’m not doing it for you." Lucien’s smile was slow, dangerous. "I know." The air between them thickened, charged. She could feel the weight of everything unsaid, everything left between them—the way he’d walked out without a word, the way she’d let him, the way she’d spent the last year pretending she didn’t still think about him every damn day. "Where’s the man?" she asked, her voice cutting through the tension. "The one asking questions at the restaurant." Lucien’s expression darkened. "He’s not who you think." Rory raised an eyebrow. "That’s not exactly an answer." "It’s the only one I’m giving." He reached into his coat, pulling out a folded piece of paper. "This is his address. Meet me there in two hours." She took the paper, her fingers brushing against his. The contact sent a jolt up her arm, like static electricity. She unfolded it, scanning the address—some industrial district on the outskirts of the city. "Why me?" Lucien’s gaze flicked to her mouth, then back to her eyes. "Because you’re the only one who can get in without raising suspicion." Rory’s breath hitched. "And if I don’t?" His smile was all teeth. "Then I’ll have to find another way." She should’ve been scared. But all she felt was the old, familiar pull—the one that had always made her stupid when it came to him. "Two hours," she said, tucking the paper into her back pocket. "And Lucien?" He turned, his cane tapping against the floor. She swallowed hard. "Don’t make me regret this." His lips curled again, but this time, there was no humor in it. Just promise. "I wouldn’t dream of it." The door clicked shut behind him, leaving her standing there, her pulse roaring in her ears. She pressed a hand to her chest, trying to steady herself, but her fingers trembled. She should’ve known better than to think he’d just leave it alone.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:51:09.875Z" 2/20/2026, 7:51:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.242
leniency0.485
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.061
94.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount870
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount870
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"flicked"
count2
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"roaring"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"silence"
2"pulse"
3"flicked"
4"stomach"
5"charged"
6"could feel"
7"weight"
8"tension"
9"eyebrow"
10"scanning"
11"familiar"
12"roaring"
13"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords861
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.18% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount704
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Lucien8
Mayfair1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
places
0"Mayfair"
globalScore0.932
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
83.86% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.161
wordCount861
matches
0"not a strand out of place, but his jaw was tight enough to snap a twig"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean23.27
std16.96
cv0.729
sampleLengths
039
175
215
36
439
560
614
723
858
921
108
1143
1212
1320
1412
1510
1613
1718
1847
1916
207
2147
2218
238
249
2528
2636
2723
287
2912
3025
3113
328
338
3420
3531
3612
88.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences61
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was hidden"
2"been scared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs129
matches
0"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences86
ratio0.081
matches
0"The scent of damp wool and something sharper—like ozone after a storm—filled the air before the man stepped inside."
1"The flat was smaller than his, but it had its own kind of clutter—stacks of takeout menus, a half-empty bottle of whiskey on the counter, the faint scent of soy sauce and garlic lingering from the deliveries she’d made today."
2"Lucien stepped closer, the scent of him—leather and something darker, something that made her skin prickle—filling her lungs."
3"But the way he looked at her—like he could see right through her, like he’d always known the parts of her she tried to hide—made her chest tighten."
4"She could feel the weight of everything unsaid, everything left between them—the way he’d walked out without a word, the way she’d let him, the way she’d spent the last year pretending she didn’t still think about him every damn day."
5"She unfolded it, scanning the address—some industrial district on the outskirts of the city."
6"But all she felt was the old, familiar pull—the one that had always made her stupid when it came to him."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount713
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03225806451612903
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002805049088359046
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean10.01
std7.66
cv0.765
sampleLengths
020
119
224
318
410
523
69
76
83
93
1011
1111
1212
132
143
1510
1640
1710
1811
193
2011
218
224
235
2421
2511
2621
2710
2811
293
305
3121
3215
337
347
355
3618
372
385
397
403
417
426
437
4416
452
464
4715
4828
499
61.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3953488372093023
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners34
56.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Instead, he let his cane"
ratio0.017
36.95% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences59
matches
0"His tailored charcoal suit clung"
1"His platinum blond hair was"
2"She should’ve known better than"
3"She stepped back, letting the"
4"She crossed her arms, the"
5"He didn’t answer right away."
6"he said finally, his voice"
7"His gaze dropped to her"
8"She yanked her sleeve down,"
9"She laughed, sharp and humorless."
10"His lips quirked."
11"His voice dropped, rougher now,"
12"She should’ve walked away."
13"she said, her voice steadier"
14"She could feel the weight"
15"she asked, her voice cutting"
16"He reached into his coat,"
17"She took the paper, her"
18"She unfolded it, scanning the"
19"His smile was all teeth."
ratio0.458
19.32% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences59
matches
0"The door creaked open before"
1"The scent of damp wool"
2"Lucien stood there, his polished"
3"His tailored charcoal suit clung"
4"His platinum blond hair was"
5"Rory froze, her fingers still"
6"Lucien didn’t flinch."
7"The words hung between them,"
8"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
9"She should’ve known better than"
10"She stepped back, letting the"
11"The flat was smaller than"
12"Nothing like the sterile precision"
13"Lucien’s gaze flicked over the"
14"Rory snapped, but her voice"
15"She crossed her arms, the"
16"He didn’t answer right away."
17"The blade inside was hidden,"
18"he said finally, his voice"
19"Rory’s stomach twisted."
ratio0.881
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Lucien stepped closer, the scent of him—leather and something darker, something that made her skin prickle—filling her lungs."
1"The door clicked shut behind him, leaving her standing there, her pulse roaring in her ears."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Rory snapped, but her voice lacked its usual bite"
1"he said finally, his voice smooth as aged brandy"
2"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
3"she asked, her voice cutting through the tension"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.152
leniency0.303
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.061
77.8316%