Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9PJ5HKASJYW1AB47M0WNG

Run Details

Duration:
11.3s
Cost:
$0.000511
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying pulse as Rory Carter pushed through the heavy door, the scent of aged whiskey and cigarette smoke wrapping around her like an old coat. The place hadn’t changed—same sticky floorboards, same low hum of conversation, same way the light pooled in thick, golden pools over the polished mahogany bar. She’d only been inside a handful of times, always with Silas, but the familiarity of it settled in her bones. She ordered a gin and tonic—neat, no ice—and took a stool near the back, where the shadows clung tighter. The bartender, a wiry man with a salt-and-pepper beard, slid the glass toward her without a word. Rory traced the rim with her thumb, the condensation cool against her skin. Then she saw him. Silas Blackwood stood at the far end of the bar, his back to her, talking to a man in a tailored suit. His auburn hair, streaked now with silver, was cropped shorter than she remembered, the neat beard he’d always kept trimmed sharp enough to cut glass. He moved with that same quiet authority, one hand resting on the bar, the other tapping absently against his thigh. The limp in his left leg was more pronounced than she recalled, a faint hitch in his step that made her stomach tighten. She should’ve left. Should’ve finished her drink and slipped out before he noticed. But she didn’t. The man in the suit laughed, something sharp and practiced, and Silas turned his head just enough for her to see the side of his face. The scar above his eyebrow—she’d forgotten about that. A souvenir from Prague, he’d called it once, years ago, when they’d been younger and still reckless. She’d pressed her fingers to it then, traced the line like a map, and he’d caught her wrist, his grip firm but not unkind. “You’re staring.” His voice cut through the noise like a blade. Rory didn’t turn. “Not staring. Remembering.” Silas exhaled through his nose, a sound that was almost a laugh. “Funny. I’d have thought you’d forget.” She finally looked at him. His hazel eyes—always too sharp, too knowing—locked onto hers. The years had carved lines around his mouth, deepened the grooves between his brows, but his gaze was the same. Unreadable. Waiting. “Took you long enough,” he said. Rory swirled her drink. “Had to make sure it was really you.” The man in the suit cleared his throat, shifting on his stool. Silas didn’t take his eyes off her. “This is business,” he said, voice low. “We can finish later.” The man nodded, sliding off his stool. “Another time, then.” He tossed a few notes onto the bar and disappeared into the crowd. Silas turned fully toward her, propping his elbows on the counter, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the dim light. “You look well,” he said. Rory almost laughed. “You’re the one who’s changed.” His jaw tightened. “We both have.” She should’ve let it go. Should’ve smiled, nodded, played along. But the words slipped out before she could stop them. “You used to be able to dance.” Silas stilled. The muscles in his forearm flexed as he gripped the bar tighter. “Used to be a lot of things.” The air between them thickened, heavy with everything unsaid. Rory remembered the last time she’d seen him—his apartment in Kensington, the night before she left for London. They’d been drunk, laughing, his hands on her waist as they swayed to some jazz record, his knee pressed against hers. *You’re leaving me*, he’d said, but she’d kissed him instead, her fingers tangling in his hair. She’d been twenty-two. He’d been thirty-five. “You still own this place?” she asked, voice lighter than she felt. “Still own it.” His gaze flicked to the door, then back. “You still deliver for Yu-Fei?” “Still deliver.” A beat. The kind that stretched too long, too heavy. Rory took a sip of her drink, the gin burning clean down her throat. “You ever think about what you could’ve been?” Silas asked. She almost choked. “What?” “You. Law. Courts. All of it.” His thumb traced the rim of an empty glass. “You were always too smart for this.” Rory set her glass down hard. “And you were always too stubborn to quit.” His lips twitched. “Some things don’t quit you.” The words hung there, raw. She wanted to argue. Wanted to say she’d chosen this, that she’d made her own path, that none of it was his fault. But the truth was, she’d run. From Evan, from Cardiff, from the life she’d been building—from the life she’d thought she wanted. Silas pushed off the bar, the slight limp more noticeable now. “You’re still living above the bar?” “No.” The word came out sharper than she meant. “I’ve got a place in Camden.” His eyebrows lifted. “Camden. Fancy.” She bristled. “It’s not fancy. It’s just—” “A place to hide,” he finished. Rory’s fingers curled into the bar top. “I’m not hiding.” “No?” His voice was soft, almost amused. “Then why’d you come back?” She didn’t answer. Couldn’t. Silas sighed, running a hand over his face. “You always did have a way of showing up when I least expected it.” The bartender appeared beside them, sliding a fresh glass toward Silas. He didn’t look at it. “You still work for them?” The question was quiet, but it hit her like a punch. Rory’s breath caught. “Who?” “You know who.” She did. The old network. The old games. The things they’d both been part of, back when they were younger, back when the world had still felt like it belonged to them. Silas’s expression darkened. “You swore you were done.” “I am.” “Bullshit.” Rory’s laugh was bitter. “You always did have a way of calling me out.” His eyes held hers, unflinching. “I always did have a way of knowing you.” The weight of it pressed down on her. The years. The choices. The man he’d become and the woman she’d tried to leave behind. She should’ve walked away. Should’ve finished her drink and disappeared into the night like she always did. But she didn’t. Instead, she reached into her pocket and pulled out the small, folded piece of paper she’d been carrying for weeks. She slid it across the bar. Silas didn’t touch it. “What’s that?” “A name.” Her voice was steady. “A job.” His fingers hovered over the paper, then snatched it up. He unfolded it, his eyes scanning the lines. His expression didn’t change, but the tension in his shoulders shifted, coiled tighter. “You’re serious,” he said. Rory took a slow sip of her drink. “Deadly.”
created_at"2026-02-20T19:51:17.437Z" 2/20/2026, 7:51:17 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.239
leniency0.478
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1128
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1128
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"traced"
count3
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"dance"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulse"
2"traced"
3"stomach"
4"eyebrow"
5"unreadable"
6"dance"
7"flicked"
8"weight"
9"scanning"
10"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences100
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords6
totalWords1115
ratio0.005
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"You’re leaving me"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount915
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.42
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Rory12
Carter1
Silas13
Blackwood1
Prague1
Kensington1
London1
Evan1
Cardiff1
Should3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Evan"
6"Should"
places
0"Prague"
1"Kensington"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.79
windowScore0.833
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"appeared beside them, sliding a fresh glass toward Silas"
1"felt like it belonged to them"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1115
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean19.22
std19.36
cv1.007
sampleLengths
081
149
24
390
416
575
62
715
818
936
106
1112
1230
1323
1428
158
166
1727
1821
1964
206
2112
2216
232
2424
2510
264
2722
2814
298
3050
3117
3215
335
347
356
3610
3712
384
3922
4021
4115
423
4332
448
452
461
4714
4814
4924
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"was cropped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs175
matches(empty)
13.96% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences133
ratio0.045
matches
0"The place hadn’t changed—same sticky floorboards, same low hum of conversation, same way the light pooled in thick, golden pools over the polished mahogany bar."
1"She ordered a gin and tonic—neat, no ice—and took a stool near the back, where the shadows clung tighter."
2"The scar above his eyebrow—she’d forgotten about that."
3"His hazel eyes—always too sharp, too knowing—locked onto hers."
4"Rory remembered the last time she’d seen him—his apartment in Kensington, the night before she left for London."
5"From Evan, from Cardiff, from the life she’d been building—from the life she’d thought she wanted."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount927
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.034519956850053934
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004314994606256742
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean8.38
std6.81
cv0.813
sampleLengths
036
125
220
319
417
513
64
722
825
920
1023
113
1210
133
1426
158
1617
1724
182
199
203
213
2212
236
245
259
2620
271
281
296
304
318
3212
337
347
354
367
3716
3823
395
403
415
423
433
445
455
4610
477
482
4912
42.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2781954887218045
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners37
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Instead, she reached into her"
ratio0.023
61.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences86
matches
0"She’d only been inside a"
1"She ordered a gin and"
2"His auburn hair, streaked now"
3"He moved with that same"
4"She should’ve left."
5"She’d pressed her fingers to"
6"His voice cut through the"
7"She finally looked at him."
8"His hazel eyes—always too sharp,"
9"he said, voice low"
10"He tossed a few notes"
11"His jaw tightened."
12"She should’ve let it go."
13"They’d been drunk, laughing, his"
14"*You’re leaving me*, he’d said,"
15"She’d been twenty-two."
16"He’d been thirty-five."
17"she asked, voice lighter than"
18"His gaze flicked to the"
19"She almost choked."
ratio0.395
23.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences86
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"The place hadn’t changed—same sticky"
2"She’d only been inside a"
3"She ordered a gin and"
4"The bartender, a wiry man"
5"Rory traced the rim with"
6"Silas Blackwood stood at the"
7"His auburn hair, streaked now"
8"He moved with that same"
9"The limp in his left"
10"She should’ve left."
11"The man in the suit"
12"The scar above his eyebrow—she’d"
13"A souvenir from Prague, he’d"
14"She’d pressed her fingers to"
15"His voice cut through the"
16"Rory didn’t turn."
17"Silas exhaled through his nose,"
18"She finally looked at him."
19"His hazel eyes—always too sharp,"
ratio0.872
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The limp in his left leg was more pronounced than she recalled, a faint hitch in his step that made her stomach tighten."
1"*You’re leaving me*, he’d said, but she’d kissed him instead, her fingers tangling in his hair."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.13
leniency0.261
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.5648%