Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9PYYBR4HPMSDMGYDJZ2B8

Run Details

Duration:
2m 1s
Cost:
$0.010353
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory adjusted the strap of her Golden Empress delivery bag over her shoulder, leaning against a rain-slicked alley wall behind the restaurant. She rubbed the crescent scar on her left wrist—an old habit when tension coiled in her gut—before her fingers brushed the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant tucked under her uniform shirt. The crimson gem pulsed, warm enough to seep through the fabric, a thrumming that matched the skip of her heartbeat. A shadow stretched across the wet concrete, and she looked up to find Nyx solidified beside her, their 6’2” form a humanoid silhouette of living darkness, faintly glowing violet eyes cutting through the dim alley light. A whisper carried on the wind, sharp as a shard of ice. The Veil’s rift bleeds here. Winter solstice’s weight frays its threads. Rory’s head snapped to the alley mouth. Isolde stood there, her silver waist-length hair catching the faint streetlamp glow, pale lavender eyes fixed on the pendant at Rory’s throat. She took three steps forward, and Rory’s gaze darted to the concrete—no footprints marred the wet surface, not even a smudge. Isolde’s cold, ethereal fingers tapped the pendant through Rory’s shirt, and the gem’s pulse flared. Crimson stone’s pulse weaves a path to a feast of unbroken chains. The full plate gnaws the empty soul. Rory fumbled for her phone in her bag, checking the time—1:47 PM, then 3:12 AM, then 1:47 PM again. She stuffed the phone back, remembering Isolde’s grove’s time shifts, how an hour inside could melt into minutes outside. Nyx shifted to incorporeal form, slipping through the faint shimmering distortion in the alley wall that marked the Veil’s rift. Rory hesitated for a split second, then grabbed the Fae-Forged Blade hidden in her delivery bag—its moonsilver hilt cold enough to make her flinch—and stepped through the rift. Isolde followed, gliding through without breaking stride. The amber sky of Dymas hit Rory like a wave. She gasped, yanking her uniform jacket open to let the warm, scented air wrap around her. Spices she couldn’t name—burnt sugar, cardamom, fermented fruit—clung to every breath. Sprawling vineyards stretched to the horizon, their rows of vines heavy with fruits that bore iridescent blue and gold rinds, glowing faintly under the amber sun. A distant clink of goblets drifted on the wind, mixed with the low murmur of voices that sounded both sated and hollow. What is this place? The pendant’s never pulsed this hard before. Nyx solidified beside her again, their form flickering slightly as they scanned the vineyards. They gestured to a group of figures bending over the vines, their backs hunched, wrists marked with faint iron cuffs that glowed a dull gray. Rory squinted—their faces looked familiar, like people she’d passed on London’s streets: a man in a tattered suit she’d delivered dumplings to last week, a woman with a faded tattoo on her neck who’d tipped her a pound for a late-night order. They’re helbound souls. Contracted from Earth’s desperate. Their wills drain into the vines, feed the feasts that never end. Rory’s jaw tightened. She stepped toward the vineyards, her delivery boots crunching on a bed of exotic wildflowers that bloomed under the amber sun—something she’d only seen in Isolde’s grove before. Isolde glided past her, plucking a fruit from a vine; its juice dripped onto her palm, glowing crimson like the Heartstone Pendant. She held the fruit out to Rory, pale lavender eyes unblinking. The fruit’s sweet bite tastes of what you crave. The bitter aftertaste tastes of what you owe. No lie lingers, but the truth hides in the crumbs. Rory hesitated, then took the fruit—its rind was smooth, warmer than she expected. She took a small bite, and sugar burst across her tongue, so intense it made her eyes water. Then the bitter hit, sharp as Evan’s verbal lashings, a taste of trapped choices and unspoken regrets. She spat the remainder into her palm, watching the crimson juice seep into her skin. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed faster, its warmth spreading up her neck to her cheek. It’s leading us toward that mansion. Rory pointed to a grand stone mansion in the distance, its spires piercing the amber sky, smoke curling from its chimneys. A long table stretched across its lawn, loaded with platters of exotic meats, glowing fruits, and goblets of amber liquid that looked like spiced wine. Figures sat around the table, laughing loudly, but their laughter sounded hollow, like a recording played too many times. Nyx’s form flickered again, and Rory noticed a faint pull at their shadow—they were a Shade trapped between realms, and Dymas’s Hel energy tugged at their core. Belphegor’s palace. He hosts culinary competitions here—helbound souls cook for his amusement, their rewards a single day of temporary freedom that never comes. Rory grabbed the Fae-Forged Blade from her bag, its slender moonsilver form faintly luminescent even under the amber sun. She tightened her grip, the crescent scar on her left wrist throbbing in time with the pendant’s pulse. Isolde glided to the mansion’s edge, her silver hair catching the light from the goblets, and turned to face Rory and Nyx. The portal hides in the spire’s shadow. The key is the feast’s empty plate. Rory stepped closer to the vineyards, her boots crunching on a fallen iridescent fruit, its rind splitting to reveal a pulp that glowed like liquid fire. She spotted a helbound soul—a teenager she’d delivered bubble tea to last month, his face gaunt, his eyes empty—glance up at her. A flicker of recognition crossed his face before an iron cuff on his wrist glowed, and he bowed his head again, returning to plucking grapes from the vine. Why are they looking at me? Do they see the pendant? Nyx shifted to incorporeal form, slipping between the vines to the teenager’s side. They whispered something in the boy’s ear, and the boy’s shoulders tensed for a split second before the cuff’s glow flared again. Nyx solidified beside Rory, their violet eyes dimmer than before. They feel the Heartstone’s Dymasian origin. It’s a beacon to the trapped—hope and a noose, all in one. Rory’s breath caught. She looked back at the mansion, where the laughter grew louder, more forced. The spices in the air became cloying, sticking to her throat, making her cough. She adjusted her delivery bag, feeling the weight of the leftover dumplings inside—normal, mundane, a link to her life in London, to Yu-Fei’s Golden Empress, to the flat above Silas’ bar. Isolde glided past her, heading toward the mansion’s front doors, and Rory noticed that the wildflowers at Isolde’s feet bloomed brighter, even in Dymas’s alien soil. The feast’s call is a trap for the curious. The empty soul’s hunger is its key. Rory glanced at Nyx, who nodded once, their form flickering with resolve. She tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade, the moonsilver’s cold cutting through the warm air, and followed Isolde toward the mansion’s front doors. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed faster, its warmth seeping into her bones, and she could hear the faint hum of the Hel portal in the spire’s shadow, a sound that matched the thrumming of her own heartbeat. She stepped onto the mansion’s marble steps, her boots clicking against the stone, and paused for a split second to glance back at the vineyards—where the helbound souls continued their work, their hollow eyes fixed on the ground, their iron cuffs glowing faintly under the amber sun.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count2
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"beacon"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
13
word"marble"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"pulsed"
2"whisper"
3"weight"
4"pulse"
5"scanned"
6"familiar"
7"unspoken"
8"warmth"
9"flickered"
10"flicker"
11"beacon"
12"resolve"
13"marble"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"A flicker of recognition"
95.24% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences28
matches
0"g with resolve"
40.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences28
filterMatches
0"see"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences28
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen121
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1240
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount1194
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Golden2
Empress2
Heartstone5
Pendant4
Nyx8
Veil2
Rory20
Isolde8
Fae-Forged3
Blade3
Dymas2
London2
Earth1
Evan1
Shade1
Hel2
Dymasian1
Yu-Fei1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Nyx"
3"Veil"
4"Rory"
5"Isolde"
6"Blade"
7"Dymas"
8"Evan"
9"Shade"
places
0"London"
1"Earth"
2"Yu-Fei"
globalScore0.662
windowScore0.5
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences28
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like spiced wine. Figures sat arou"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1240
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences28
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean51.67
std35.21
cv0.682
sampleLengths
0110
123
265
319
493
585
611
781
819
964
1027
1177
126
1392
1423
1559
1614
1776
1811
1945
2018
2187
2216
23119
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences28
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs190
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences28
ratio0.464
matches
0"She rubbed the crescent scar on her left wrist—an old habit when tension coiled in her gut—before her fingers brushed the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant tucked under her uniform shirt."
1"Rory’s head snapped to the alley mouth. Isolde stood there, her silver waist-length hair catching the faint streetlamp glow, pale lavender eyes fixed on the pendant at Rory’s throat. She took three steps forward, and Rory’s gaze darted to the concrete—no footprints marred the wet surface, not even a smudge. Isolde’s cold, ethereal fingers tapped the pendant through Rory’s shirt, and the gem’s pulse flared."
2"Rory fumbled for her phone in her bag, checking the time—1:47 PM, then 3:12 AM, then 1:47 PM again. She stuffed the phone back, remembering Isolde’s grove’s time shifts, how an hour inside could melt into minutes outside. Nyx shifted to incorporeal form, slipping through the faint shimmering distortion in the alley wall that marked the Veil’s rift. Rory hesitated for a split second, then grabbed the Fae-Forged Blade hidden in her delivery bag—its moonsilver hilt cold enough to make her flinch—and stepped through the rift. Isolde followed, gliding through without breaking stride."
3"The amber sky of Dymas hit Rory like a wave. She gasped, yanking her uniform jacket open to let the warm, scented air wrap around her. Spices she couldn’t name—burnt sugar, cardamom, fermented fruit—clung to every breath. Sprawling vineyards stretched to the horizon, their rows of vines heavy with fruits that bore iridescent blue and gold rinds, glowing faintly under the amber sun. A distant clink of goblets drifted on the wind, mixed with the low murmur of voices that sounded both sated and hollow."
4"Nyx solidified beside her again, their form flickering slightly as they scanned the vineyards. They gestured to a group of figures bending over the vines, their backs hunched, wrists marked with faint iron cuffs that glowed a dull gray. Rory squinted—their faces looked familiar, like people she’d passed on London’s streets: a man in a tattered suit she’d delivered dumplings to last week, a woman with a faded tattoo on her neck who’d tipped her a pound for a late-night order."
5"Rory’s jaw tightened. She stepped toward the vineyards, her delivery boots crunching on a bed of exotic wildflowers that bloomed under the amber sun—something she’d only seen in Isolde’s grove before. Isolde glided past her, plucking a fruit from a vine; its juice dripped onto her palm, glowing crimson like the Heartstone Pendant. She held the fruit out to Rory, pale lavender eyes unblinking."
6"Rory hesitated, then took the fruit—its rind was smooth, warmer than she expected. She took a small bite, and sugar burst across her tongue, so intense it made her eyes water. Then the bitter hit, sharp as Evan’s verbal lashings, a taste of trapped choices and unspoken regrets. She spat the remainder into her palm, watching the crimson juice seep into her skin. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed faster, its warmth spreading up her neck to her cheek."
7"Rory pointed to a grand stone mansion in the distance, its spires piercing the amber sky, smoke curling from its chimneys. A long table stretched across its lawn, loaded with platters of exotic meats, glowing fruits, and goblets of amber liquid that looked like spiced wine. Figures sat around the table, laughing loudly, but their laughter sounded hollow, like a recording played too many times. Nyx’s form flickered again, and Rory noticed a faint pull at their shadow—they were a Shade trapped between realms, and Dymas’s Hel energy tugged at their core."
8"Belphegor’s palace. He hosts culinary competitions here—helbound souls cook for his amusement, their rewards a single day of temporary freedom that never comes."
9"Rory stepped closer to the vineyards, her boots crunching on a fallen iridescent fruit, its rind splitting to reveal a pulp that glowed like liquid fire. She spotted a helbound soul—a teenager she’d delivered bubble tea to last month, his face gaunt, his eyes empty—glance up at her. A flicker of recognition crossed his face before an iron cuff on his wrist glowed, and he bowed his head again, returning to plucking grapes from the vine."
10"They feel the Heartstone’s Dymasian origin. It’s a beacon to the trapped—hope and a noose, all in one."
11"Rory’s breath caught. She looked back at the mansion, where the laughter grew louder, more forced. The spices in the air became cloying, sticking to her throat, making her cough. She adjusted her delivery bag, feeling the weight of the leftover dumplings inside—normal, mundane, a link to her life in London, to Yu-Fei’s Golden Empress, to the flat above Silas’ bar. Isolde glided past her, heading toward the mansion’s front doors, and Rory noticed that the wildflowers at Isolde’s feet bloomed brighter, even in Dymas’s alien soil."
12"Rory glanced at Nyx, who nodded once, their form flickering with resolve. She tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade, the moonsilver’s cold cutting through the warm air, and followed Isolde toward the mansion’s front doors. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed faster, its warmth seeping into her bones, and she could hear the faint hum of the Hel portal in the spire’s shadow, a sound that matched the thrumming of her own heartbeat. She stepped onto the mansion’s marble steps, her boots clicking against the stone, and paused for a split second to glance back at the vineyards—where the helbound souls continued their work, their hollow eyes fixed on the ground, their iron cuffs glowing faintly under the amber sun."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount95
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.010526315789473684
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences28
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences28
mean44.29
std32.6
cv0.736
sampleLengths
022
132
220
336
412
511
665
719
893
985
1011
1181
1219
1364
1427
1577
166
1792
1823
1959
2014
2176
2211
2345
2418
2587
2616
27119
61.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.39285714285714285
totalSentences28
uniqueOpeners11
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences28
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences28
matches
0"She rubbed the crescent scar"
1"They’re helbound souls. Contracted from"
2"It’s leading us toward that"
3"They feel the Heartstone’s Dymasian"
ratio0.143
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount26
totalSentences28
matches
0"Rory adjusted the strap of"
1"She rubbed the crescent scar"
2"The crimson gem pulsed, warm"
3"A shadow stretched across the"
4"A whisper carried on the"
5"The Veil’s rift bleeds here."
6"Rory’s head snapped to the"
7"Crimson stone’s pulse weaves a"
8"Rory fumbled for her phone"
9"The amber sky of Dymas"
10"Nyx solidified beside her again,"
11"They’re helbound souls. Contracted from"
12"Rory’s jaw tightened. She stepped"
13"The fruit’s sweet bite tastes"
14"Rory hesitated, then took the"
15"It’s leading us toward that"
16"Rory pointed to a grand"
17"Belphegor’s palace. He hosts culinary"
18"Rory grabbed the Fae-Forged Blade"
19"The portal hides in the"
ratio0.929
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences28
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Rory fumbled for her phone in her bag, checking the time—1:47 PM, then 3:12 AM, then 1:47 PM again. She stuffed the phone back, remembering Isolde’s grove’s tim…"
1"The amber sky of Dymas hit Rory like a wave. She gasped, yanking her uniform jacket open to let the warm, scented air wrap around her. Spices she couldn’t name—…"
2"Nyx solidified beside her again, their form flickering slightly as they scanned the vineyards. They gestured to a group of figures bending over the vines, their…"
3"Rory’s jaw tightened. She stepped toward the vineyards, her delivery boots crunching on a bed of exotic wildflowers that bloomed under the amber sun—something s…"
4"Rory hesitated, then took the fruit—its rind was smooth, warmer than she expected. She took a small bite, and sugar burst across her tongue, so intense it made …"
5"Rory pointed to a grand stone mansion in the distance, its spires piercing the amber sky, smoke curling from its chimneys. A long table stretched across its law…"
6"Rory stepped closer to the vineyards, her boots crunching on a fallen iridescent fruit, its rind splitting to reveal a pulp that glowed like liquid fire. She sp…"
7"Rory glanced at Nyx, who nodded once, their form flickering with resolve. She tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade, the moonsilver’s cold cutting through …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.0572%