Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9Q1R96BC54KETGB8Q5T2W

Run Details

Duration:
17.8s
Cost:
$0.001577
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora twisted the final deadbolt with a click that echoed through the narrow hallway. The scent of cumin and garlic from the curry house below seeped up through the floorboards, mingling with the musty tang of old paper from the stacks of books teetering on every surface. She yanked the door open, expecting Eva's familiar grin or perhaps a delivery mix-up from her own shifts at the Golden Empress. Lucien Moreau stood there, framed by the dim glow of the streetlamp on Brick Lane. His platinum blond hair caught the light, slicked back as always, and his charcoal suit hung sharp against the evening chill. One amber eye gleamed, the other black as pitch, fixed on her with that unblinking intensity that always made her pulse stutter. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the tip planted firm on the worn stoop. "Rory," he said, voice low and laced with that French lilt, like smoke curling from a hidden fire. He didn't smile, but his gaze traced her face, lingered on the black strands falling across her forehead. She gripped the doorframe, knuckles whitening. Last time they'd crossed paths, three months back in a shadowed Soho alley, words had flown like knives—accusations about secrets he kept, risks she couldn't stomach in this underworld tangle of demons and deals. Attraction had sparked then, hot and forbidden, but hurt followed, sharp as the blade hidden in that cane of his. Things left unsaid piled up like the scrolls cluttering Eva's coffee table. She thought she'd buried it all when she bolted back to her flat above Silas' bar, throwing herself into deliveries and dodging the supernatural whispers. "What the hell are you doing here?" Her blue eyes narrowed, but she couldn't stop the flicker of heat low in her belly, the way his presence filled the doorway like he owned the night. He tilted his head, amber eye catching a glint from the hallway bulb. "I need to speak with you. Alone." "Eva's not here." She crossed her arms, the crescent scar on her wrist peeking from her sleeve, a pale reminder of simpler days. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, slunk from behind a tower of arcane texts, rubbing against her calf before eyeing the intruder with a low hiss. Lucien's black eye followed the cat's path, then returned to her. "This isn't about Eva. It's about us. Or what remains." She laughed, short and bitter, stepping back but not closing the door. The flat's chaos spilled into view—books splayed open on the floor, notes scribbled in Eva's frantic hand about wards and realms. "Us? There is no us, Luc. You made that clear when you vanished after that mess with the Avaros contact. I waited, you know. Like a fool." He shifted his weight, cane tapping once against the threshold. The sound reverberated, pulling memories: his hand on her waist in that rain-slicked alley, breath warm against her neck as he murmured promises in French she pretended not to understand. Hurt twisted in her chest now, raw as fresh cuts. "I had to protect you. My world—it's not yours to bleed for." "Bullshit." She jabbed a finger toward his chest, stopping short of the wool of his suit. "You could've said that then. Instead, you left me with questions and a half-demon mess on my doorstep. I fled Cardiff for this? For ghosts like you?" Ptolemy leaped onto a nearby shelf, knocking a scroll free. It unrolled across the floor, revealing faded runes that glowed faintly in the low light. Lucien glanced down, then stepped inside without invitation, his polished shoes brushing the edge of the paper. The door swung shut behind him with a soft thud, sealing the cramped space between them. The air thickened, charged like the moments before a storm. Aurora backed toward the kitchenette, where a kettle sat cold on the counter amid Eva's herb bundles. Her heart hammered, betraying the cool she aimed for. At 5'6", she met his gaze level, but his 5'11" frame loomed, filling the room's every corner. He set his cane against the wall, the ivory handle glinting. "I came because I can't stop thinking of you. That night—the way your mind cut through the lies, sharper than any blade. And the way you looked at me, Rory, like I was more than the fixer in the shadows." She swallowed, throat dry. Attraction coiled tight, pulling her toward him despite the ache. "You think pretty words fix the hurt? I trusted you. Let you in, after Evan, after everything. And you shut me out." Lucien closed the distance in two strides, stopping just shy of her space. His heterochromatic eyes locked on hers—one warm amber, promising secrets; the other void-black, swallowing light. "Evan was human poison. I'm something else. But I never meant to wound you." His hand rose, hesitated, then brushed a strand of her straight black hair behind her ear. The touch lingered, electric. She shivered, blue eyes flashing. Things unsaid bubbled up—how she'd craved his world, the thrill of outsmarting demons with her quick thinking, even as fear clawed at her. "Then why now? Why show up at Eva's door like some uninvited specter?" "Because the underworld's stirring. Avaros whispers reach London, and your name's tangled in them." He leaned closer, breath mingling with hers, carrying a faint hint of clove from whatever cologne he favored. "But that's not why I'm here. I need to know if there's still fire between us." Aurora's fingers twitched, aching to trace the line of his jaw, to feel the stubble she'd imagined in lonely nights above Silas' bar. Hurt warred with want, but she didn't pull away. "Fire? You doused it when you left. Or did you forget the argument? The way you said I was too fragile for your games?" His amber eye softened, black one intensifying the pull. "I lied to push you away. For your safety." Lucien cupped her cheek, thumb grazing her skin, rougher than his suits suggested. Ptolemy yowled from the shelf, but they ignored him, the world narrowing to this charged inch between. She grabbed his wrist, not to stop him, but to hold him there. The scar on her own wrist pressed against his pulse. "Lies build walls, Luc. And I'm tired of climbing them." "Then tear it down." His voice dropped, a rumble that vibrated through her. He closed the gap, lips brushing hers—not a claim, but a question. Soft at first, tasting of regret and longing, then deeper as she responded, her free hand fisting his lapel. Aurora kissed him back, fierce, pouring the unsaid into the press of mouths. Hurt lingered in the edges, but attraction flared, hot and undeniable. She tasted salt—tears? His or hers? Didn't matter. The flat's clutter faded, books and scrolls mere backdrop to the heat building. He pulled her closer, hands sliding to her waist, bunching the fabric of her shirt. She broke the kiss, gasping against his neck. "This doesn't erase the past." "No." Lucien rested his forehead against hers, breath ragged. "But it starts something new. If you'll let it." Ptolemy jumped down, weaving between their legs, but Aurora barely noticed. Her mind raced, out-of-the-box paths forming: trust him again, dive into his world, or slam the door on both. She traced the line of his collar, feeling the steady thump beneath. "Tell me everything. No more secrets." He nodded, amber eye gleaming with promise. "From the beginning. Marseille nights, my father's realm— all of it." They sank onto the sagging sofa amid the research notes, his arm around her shoulders, her head against his chest. The three deadbolts held the world out, but inside, words flowed—history unpacked, attraction reignited. Hurt ebbed, not gone, but softened by the weight of his hand in hers. Hours slipped by, the curry house below quieting. Aurora listened as Lucien spoke of Avaros, his voice weaving tales of fire and shadow. She interjected with questions, her intelligence slicing through ambiguities, drawing truths he'd guarded. Ptolemy curled at their feet, purring now, as if approving the fragile bridge they built. When dawn crept through the grimy window, painting the books in gold, she turned to him. "Stay." Lucien kissed her temple, cane forgotten by the door. "As long as you want." The flat, once a sanctuary of solitude, hummed with possibility. Attraction pulsed between them, hurt a scar like the one on her wrist—faint, but part of the story. Things left unsaid hung no longer; instead, they shaped the words yet to come. She stood, pulling him toward the bedroom, the cramped space no barrier. His suit jacket hit the floor first, then her shirt, revealing the curve of her shoulder. Lucien's hands explored, reverent, tracing paths of fire across her skin. Blue eyes met heterochromatic ones, locking in silent vow. They tumbled onto the bed, sheets tangled with Eva's forgotten journals. Kisses deepened, bodies aligning in rhythm born of pent-up need. Aurora arched beneath him, nails digging into his back, drawing a groan that echoed her own sighs. The world outside Brick Lane faded; here, in this haven of books and secrets, they reclaimed what complication had stolen. Sweat-slicked and breathless, they lay entwined after, his platinum hair mussed against her pillow. She traced his cane's hiding spot on the floor with her gaze, then back to him. "We're in this now. Demons and all." He smiled, first real one she'd seen, amber eye warm. "Together." The tabby cat leaped onto the bed, claiming space between them, but neither minded. Dawn fully broke, illuminating the runes on the fallen scroll—symbols of protection, apt for the bond reforming in the light. Aurora's mind whirred with plans: deliveries by day, underworld nights with him. Hurt had forged strength; attraction promised more. The door that opened to complication now led to redemption, one whispered truth at a time. As the sun climbed, they dressed slowly, fingers lingering. Lucien retrieved his cane, but left it leaning by the bed. "I'll return tonight." She nodded, blue eyes steady. "I expect details on that Avaros stir." He chuckled, pulling her into one last kiss—fierce, sealing the pact. The deadbolts clicked open as he left, but the flat felt less empty, charged with echo of what they'd begun. Aurora watched him vanish down Brick Lane, heart full. History rewritten, not erased. The romance, complicated as ever, bloomed anew.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:51:33.396Z" 2/20/2026, 7:51:33 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His hand rose hesitated then [then]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.387
leniency0.774
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.065
97.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1749
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1749
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"lilt"
count1
6
word"traced"
count3
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"glint"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"reverberated"
count1
13
word"charged"
count3
14
word"loomed"
count1
15
word"glinting"
count1
16
word"electric"
count1
17
word"vibrated"
count1
18
word"raced"
count1
19
word"gleaming"
count1
20
word"sanctuary"
count1
21
word"pulsed"
count1
22
word"tracing"
count1
23
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"familiar"
2"chill"
3"intensity"
4"pulse"
5"lilt"
6"traced"
7"stomach"
8"flicker"
9"glint"
10"reminder"
11"weight"
12"reverberated"
13"charged"
14"loomed"
15"glinting"
16"electric"
17"vibrated"
18"raced"
19"gleaming"
20"sanctuary"
21"pulsed"
22"tracing"
23"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1730
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1391
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Golden1
Empress1
Moreau1
Brick3
Lane3
French2
Soho1
Ptolemy5
Aurora9
Hurt5
Lucien10
Avaros1
Attraction3
Things3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Aurora"
4"Hurt"
5"Lucien"
6"Attraction"
7"Things"
places
0"Golden"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"French"
4"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if approving the fragile bridge they built"
26.59% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.734
wordCount1730
matches
0"not to stop him, but to hold him there"
1"not a claim, but a question"
2"not gone, but softened by the weight of his hand in hers"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
82.92% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean41.19
std18.13
cv0.44
sampleLengths
069
172
236
397
435
520
647
721
860
962
1043
1158
1253
1351
1436
1562
1641
1748
1856
1948
2033
2144
2245
2328
2418
2548
2618
2748
2851
2917
3014
3142
3248
3358
3437
3511
3634
3735
3823
3912
4031
4120
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs246
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences123
ratio0.106
matches
0"Last time they'd crossed paths, three months back in a shadowed Soho alley, words had flown like knives—accusations about secrets he kept, risks she couldn't stomach in this underworld tangle of demons and deals."
1"The flat's chaos spilled into view—books splayed open on the floor, notes scribbled in Eva's frantic hand about wards and realms."
2"His heterochromatic eyes locked on hers—one warm amber, promising secrets; the other void-black, swallowing light."
3"Things unsaid bubbled up—how she'd craved his world, the thrill of outsmarting demons with her quick thinking, even as fear clawed at her."
4"He closed the gap, lips brushing hers—not a claim, but a question."
5"She tasted salt—tears?"
6"The three deadbolts held the world out, but inside, words flowed—history unpacked, attraction reignited."
7"Attraction pulsed between them, hurt a scar like the one on her wrist—faint, but part of the story."
8"Things left unsaid hung no longer; instead, they shaped the words yet to come."
9"The world outside Brick Lane faded; here, in this haven of books and secrets, they reclaimed what complication had stolen."
10"Dawn fully broke, illuminating the runes on the fallen scroll—symbols of protection, apt for the bond reforming in the light."
11"Hurt had forged strength; attraction promised more."
12"He chuckled, pulling her into one last kiss—fierce, sealing the pact."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount537
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.024208566108007448
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean14.07
std7.44
cv0.529
sampleLengths
014
133
222
315
421
522
614
718
818
96
1034
1120
1212
1325
1435
1513
167
1723
1824
1911
2010
2112
2221
2327
2410
2530
2610
2712
2816
2927
3010
3115
3217
3316
3410
3517
369
3717
3811
3940
404
4110
4222
4313
4415
4530
464
475
4823
4913
61.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.37398373983739835
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences101
matches
0"She yanked the door open,"
1"His platinum blond hair caught"
2"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
3"he said, voice low and"
4"He didn't smile, but his"
5"She gripped the doorframe, knuckles"
6"She thought she'd buried it"
7"Her blue eyes narrowed, but"
8"He tilted his head, amber"
9"She crossed her arms, the"
10"She laughed, short and bitter,"
11"He shifted his weight, cane"
12"She jabbed a finger toward"
13"It unrolled across the floor,"
14"Her heart hammered, betraying the"
15"He set his cane against"
16"She swallowed, throat dry."
17"His heterochromatic eyes locked on"
18"His hand rose, hesitated, then"
19"She shivered, blue eyes flashing."
ratio0.406
24.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences101
matches
0"Aurora twisted the final deadbolt"
1"The scent of cumin and"
2"She yanked the door open,"
3"Lucien Moreau stood there, framed"
4"His platinum blond hair caught"
5"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
6"he said, voice low and"
7"He didn't smile, but his"
8"She gripped the doorframe, knuckles"
9"Attraction had sparked then, hot"
10"Things left unsaid piled up"
11"She thought she'd buried it"
12"Her blue eyes narrowed, but"
13"He tilted his head, amber"
14"She crossed her arms, the"
15"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, slunk"
16"Lucien's black eye followed the"
17"She laughed, short and bitter,"
18"The flat's chaos spilled into"
19"He shifted his weight, cane"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.10% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"It unrolled across the floor, revealing faded runes that glowed faintly in the low light."
1"He pulled her closer, hands sliding to her waist, bunching the fabric of her shirt."
2"She interjected with questions, her intelligence slicing through ambiguities, drawing truths he'd guarded."
3"Ptolemy curled at their feet, purring now, as if approving the fragile bridge they built."
4"Aurora arched beneath him, nails digging into his back, drawing a groan that echoed her own sighs."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Lucien cupped, thumb grazing her skin, rougher than his suits suggested"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.032
leniency0.065
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.8654%