"The air thickened with the stench of damp concrete and something sharper—ozone, like a storm trapped underground."
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"She'd heard whispers of it in the station's backrooms—supposed urban legend, a black market for the weird and forbidden, tucked away in places like this, vanishing every full moon."
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"Blood pooled thick on the cracked tiles, but it hadn't spread far—contained, almost deliberate."
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"Faded Tube signage hung crooked: \"Mind the Gap.\" But gaps were everywhere here—gaping holes in the walls patched with modern concrete, as if the station had been hastily abandoned mid-repair."
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"And the wounds—deep, precise, but no hesitation marks, no defensive cuts on his hands."
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"Footsteps echoed from the stairs—soft, hesitant."
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"Harlow's jaw tightened. Ritual. The word itched like an old scar—DS Morris, three years gone, vanished on a case with whispers of the unnatural. Unexplained. She gestured at the sigils on the compass. \"Talk.\""
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"Hale wasn't fencing junk; he dealt in the real stuff.\""
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"Occam's razor—simplest explanation.\""
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"And the blood—coagulated too fast."
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"Harlow crouched again, torch inches from the pool. Patel was right about one thing: simplest. But her instincts screamed otherwise. She traced the spray with her light. Droplets suspended? No—dried in mid-pattern, crystalline edges glinting. She scraped a sample into a vial, mind racing. Hale's eyes stared glassily at the alcove, pupils blown wide. Terror, yes, but pinpoint pupils under the dilation? Reaction to alkaloids? Or something mimicking them."
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"\"Compass,\" Harlow said, holding it up. Needle rigid, pointing dead at the alcove. She strode over, ignoring Patel's mutter of \"waste of time.\" The air there hummed, a low vibration up her spine. Concrete wall, but irregular—scratches like claw marks, and a faint outline, rectangular, glowing under UV. Door? No hinges. Rift, the Compass said."
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"Harlow pressed a palm to the wall. Cold, but pulsing warmth beneath, like a vein. She glanced back—Patel's watching, skeptical, but the uniforms had edged away, spooked. Evidence didn't add up: no exit wounds on Hale, but blood everywhere. No weapon, but cauterized cut. Token gripped post-mortem rigor, as if he'd clutched it for entry after death. Impossible."
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"Deduction clicked, piece by jagged piece. Hale hadn't been killed here. The body was staged. Blood spray wrong—gravity-defying arcs suggested vertical force, like he'd been dropped from height. But platform level. Unless... from above the rift. She scanned up: train car roof, accessible by ladder, undisturbed dust except one set of prints, size ten, Hale's."
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"But coagulant in the air—rift residue?"
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"Harlow ignored him, climbing the ladder with precise grips, torch probing. Train roof flat, littered with market leavings: empty vials, a singed feather that crumbled to ash. Drag marks—body weight, from alcove edge to here. Fresh. She dropped down, faced Patel. \"No hatch prints outside."
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"\"Or no killer.\" Harlow's mind whirred. Hale's terror—pre-death. Token in fist: he'd used it to enter the market, crossed a rift chasing a deal. Compass on stall—his? Stolen? Needle pointed to rift because that's where the action was. Symbols on stall matched compass sigils—protective. Hale activated them wrong, rift destabilized, energy backlash slashed him mid-crossing. Body tumbled back through, landed here. No human perp. Accidental death, supernatural style."
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"But that gnawed. Her clique suspects—Aurora's crew, Eva's circle—trafficked here? Morris died chasing similar shadows. Harlow's gaze locked on Eva, who tucked hair nervously. \"You know this market."
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"Consults like this—how many?\""
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"Patel's radio crackled—backup arriving. He shook his head. \"You're seeing ghosts, Quinn."
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"She pocketed the compass vial, watch ticking eleven. Midnight toll. Full moon tomorrow—no, tonight crested. Market shifting? Air hummed louder. \"Ghosts leave footprints."
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"And Kowalski—your books."
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"Harlow stepped back, platform lights flickering. Evidence didn't add up because it wasn't mundane. Rift, market, shades—real. Her partner had glimpsed it, paid. She wouldn't. Precision demanded truth, however shadowed. As techs swarmed the wall, needle in compass twitched—market calling, or fleeing. She glanced at Eva's freckled profile, green eyes sharp now. Colleague? Or thread to pull?"
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"Her torch beam sliced through the gloom, catching flickers of graffiti that glowed faintly under blacklight residue from forensics."
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"A body had turned up on what looked like a makeshift stall, surrounded by trinkets that screamed contraband: vials of shimmering liquid, amulets etched with sym…"
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"Harlow's gaze flicked to the bone token in Hale's rigid fist, thumb-sized, etched with spirals that matched entry rumors for this so-called market."
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"Harlow pressed a palm to the wall. Cold, but pulsing warmth beneath, like a vein. She glanced back—Patel's watching, skeptical, but the uniforms had edged away,…"