Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9QEJ27YN3S36GQ93PB2JA

Run Details

Duration:
25.8s
Cost:
$0.001340
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bell jangled. Rory paused, towel in hand, and glanced at the clock. 9:17. She’d closed up the restaurant’s late dinner order twenty minutes ago, too wired to sit still. Brushed a strand of hair behind her ear—shoulder-length, black, still damp from the rain she’d run through to drop off a curry to a club in Camden. The bell jangled again, a little louder. She dried her hands on her apron, the one Yu-Fei had insisted she keep, then crossed the room. The peephole showed a man she didn’t expect. Tall, platinum hair slicked back but a few strands sticking up from the drizzle. Charcoal suit, tailored to within an inch of his life. Ivory cane propped against his thigh. She unlocked the three deadbolts, flipped the chain, and pulled the door open a crack. “Rory,” he said. Voice low, accented. French, but not the soft kind—sharp, like a blade honed. She didn’t move. “What are you doing here, Lucien.” He pushed past her before she could say more, stepping into the flat. The door closed behind him, a soft click. The bar below rumbled—Silas was tuning his guitar, the string plucking off-key. Ptolemy, the tabby, stretched on the arm of the chair, then yawned, revealing tiny teeth. “Your place smells like turmeric and regret,” he said, nodding at her apron. “Yu-Fei’s today?” “Who let you in?” She crossed her arms, the scar on her left wrist sliding under her sleeve. It was a crescent, from a kitchen knife when she was twelve, slicing through a melon. Evan had called it “cute” once. “You need something, or can I—” “Silas knows I’m here.” “Of course he does.” She sighed, stepped back, and closed the door. Leaned against the frame, watching him. His amber eye glinted in the lamp light—the left one, the black one just a shadow. He kept his cane pressed to the wall, like he didn’t trust the floor. “Eva’s not here. She’s in Dublin until next week.” He nodded, like he’d known that. Turned, looked at the mess of books—Eva’s research, about fae and runes. A rolled-up map of the city was on the table. “You still hate the shade in here.” “Better than the sun,” she said. “It burns my eyes.” He sat in the armchair Ptolemy had vacated, the cane thumping once against the floor. “I need a favor.” She raised an eyebrow. “You? Asking for a favor? I thought you prided yourself on making people come to you.” He didn’t flinch. “Evan.” The name hit her like a fist. She tensed. “You’re late.” “Past tense, you meant.” He didn’t smile. “He’s in London.” Rory’s throat went dry. She pushed off the doorframe and crossed to the kitchen, poured herself a glass of water. Chugged it. “So?” “He’s打听 about you.” “So let him. I don’t care.” “ He’s been asking about Eva, too. At the bar. Silas said he was standing outside the door when you left this morning.” She stopped halfway to the sink. “What did you tell him?” “Nothing. I don’t talk to louts.” Her hand tightened around the glass. It creaked. “You shouldn’t have come here. I’m done with all of it—Evan, the past, you.” “Are you?” He stood, cane steady. “Because last time you said that, you were crying in my car, because your ex had broken into your flat. Remember? You begged me to stay.” The words hung. She stared at him, her chest tight. He’d always seen the cracks, the parts of her she tried to hide. The Luc who’d fixed her flat when Evan had trashed it, who’d stayed up all night bandaging her hand when she’d cut it on a shard of glass. The Luc who’d left three months ago, without a word, just a note: *I can’t protect you from what’s coming.* What’s coming. She’d found out later, from a contact—something about his demon father’s realm, a war, and he’d been pulled back. Left her to face Evan alone. “You promised,” she said, quiet. “I had to.” “No, you didn’t.” She stepped closer, the water glass forgotten. “You could have stayed. *Tried*.” He opened his mouth, then closed it. The amber eye flickered, darker. “Do you think I wanted to? To leave you? I’d burn Avaros to ash if it meant keeping you safe. You think this—” He gestured to his suit, to the cane, to the knife hidden inside “—is a choice? I’m a weapon, Rory. A tool. You think Evan’s the worst of it? Wait till you see what the others will do once they find out you’re mixed up with a half-demon.” “You called me *mixed up*?” Her voice broke. “I stood by you when your father threatened to have you killed. I didn’t flinch when the fae tried to curse you. But you? You run when it gets hard.” He took a step forward. Brushed a finger over her cheek. Her skin burned where he touched it. “I run because I can’t see you get hurt. You’re the only good thing in this sodding city. The only thing that makes me want to stop being a monster.” The scar on her wrist throbbed. She grabbed his hand, laced their fingers together—his skin cool, hers still warming from the glass. “You don’t have to be a monster with me. You never did.” He leaned in. His breath hit her nose—cinnamon, like he’d been eating a pipe. “I missed you.” She didn’t answer. Let him kiss her, hard, like he meant it—like he wasn’t going to leave again. His cane clattered to the floor, forgotten. She could taste the bourbon on his lips, the same one she’d watched him sip from his flask last winter, when she’d brought him a cold curry that had gone off, because he’d looked lonely. The cat mewed, jumping onto the arm of the chair. He pulled back, forehead pressed to hers. “Don’t make me wait again.” She smiled, a crack in the walls. “Consider it… a second chance.” He kissed her again, slower this time, and for a moment, there was no Evan, no Avaros, no past. Just the two of them, in her cramped flat above a curry house, with a tabby cat judging them from the armchair. The door opened. Silas leaned in, guitar case in hand. “Sorry to interrupt—” He stopped, saw them, and cleared his throat. “—but the regulars are asking for the blues. You two done gawking, or you gonna pay attention?” Rory laughed, still holding Lucien’s hand. He pressed a kiss to her knuckles. “Be right there, Silas.” Silas closed the door, but they could hear him chuckling as he walked down the stairs. Lucien sat back in the chair, pulled her onto his lap. Ptolemy curled up on their feet. “Next time, bring wine,” she said, smiling. He raised an eyebrow. “Wine? You want wine? I’ll go fetch a case.” She kissed him again, deeper. The world outside the door might be terrible, but in here, with him, it felt like a beginning. The bell jangled. Rory sighed, but didn’t move. Lucien smirked. “Silas is *definitely* not bringing wine.” “We can still have bourbon,” she said. He grinned. “Deal.” They kissed again, the world fading away.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1219
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1219
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"flickered"
2"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences94
matches
0"looked lonely"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
97.97% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0.008
matches
0"“He’s打听 about you.”"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords11
totalWords1205
ratio0.009
matches
0"I can’t protect you from what’s coming."
1"Tried"
2"mixed up"
3"definitely"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount842
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.48
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Yu-Fei1
Voice1
Silas4
Leaned1
Eva2
Ptolemy3
Rory4
Luc2
Evan4
Avaros1
Lucien3
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Voice"
2"Silas"
3"Leaned"
4"Eva"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Rory"
7"Luc"
8"Evan"
9"Lucien"
places
0"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a beginning"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1205
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean24.1
std20.73
cv0.86
sampleLengths
082
153
216
39
448
515
646
74
857
935
1010
1119
1220
134
1411
1510
1623
173
186
1923
2011
216
2222
2332
2471
2527
265
273
2815
2983
3038
3148
3234
3317
3460
3522
3612
3741
383
3935
4017
4133
427
4313
4423
453
4613
477
483
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"been pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs169
matches
0"was tuning"
1"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences126
ratio0.071
matches
0"Brushed a strand of hair behind her ear—shoulder-length, black, still damp from the rain she’d run through to drop off a curry to a club in Camden."
1"French, but not the soft kind—sharp, like a blade honed."
2"The bar below rumbled—Silas was tuning his guitar, the string plucking off-key."
3"His amber eye glinted in the lamp light—the left one, the black one just a shadow."
4"Turned, looked at the mess of books—Eva’s research, about fae and runes."
5"She’d found out later, from a contact—something about his demon father’s realm, a war, and he’d been pulled back."
6"She grabbed his hand, laced their fingers together—his skin cool, hers still warming from the glass."
7"His breath hit her nose—cinnamon, like he’d been eating a pipe."
8"Let him kiss her, hard, like he meant it—like he wasn’t going to leave again."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount617
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03241491085899514
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004862236628849271
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean9.56
std8.77
cv0.917
sampleLengths
03
110
21
316
427
57
618
78
814
910
106
1115
123
133
1410
153
166
1713
188
1912
2015
2113
222
2318
2416
256
266
274
2812
296
3016
3114
329
336
3412
3510
367
376
384
3915
404
414
4216
433
441
457
462
472
487
493
64.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners50
39.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Just the two of them,"
ratio0.012
5.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences84
matches
0"She’d closed up the restaurant’s"
1"She dried her hands on"
2"She unlocked the three deadbolts,"
3"She didn’t move."
4"He pushed past her before"
5"he said, nodding at her"
6"She crossed her arms, the"
7"It was a crescent, from"
8"She sighed, stepped back, and"
9"His amber eye glinted in"
10"He kept his cane pressed"
11"He nodded, like he’d known"
12"He sat in the armchair"
13"She raised an eyebrow."
14"He didn’t flinch."
15"He didn’t smile"
16"She pushed off the doorframe"
17"She stopped halfway to the"
18"Her hand tightened around the"
19"He stood, cane steady"
ratio0.536
13.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences84
matches
0"The bell jangled."
1"Rory paused, towel in hand,"
2"She’d closed up the restaurant’s"
3"The bell jangled again, a"
4"She dried her hands on"
5"The peephole showed a man"
6"Charcoal suit, tailored to within"
7"Ivory cane propped against his"
8"She unlocked the three deadbolts,"
9"French, but not the soft"
10"She didn’t move."
11"He pushed past her before"
12"The door closed behind him,"
13"The bar below rumbled—Silas was"
14"Ptolemy, the tabby, stretched on"
15"he said, nodding at her"
16"She crossed her arms, the"
17"It was a crescent, from"
18"Evan had called it once."
19"She sighed, stepped back, and"
ratio0.893
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The Luc who’d fixed her flat when Evan had trashed it, who’d stayed up all night bandaging her hand when she’d cut it on a shard of glass."
1"She could taste the bourbon on his lips, the same one she’d watched him sip from his flask last winter, when she’d brought him a cold curry that had gone off, b…"
31.25% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"“ He’s, too"
1"she said, quiet"
2"she said, smiling"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She sighed (sigh)"
1"“ He’s (be)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.083
81.1422%