Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9QR1RGWV0NDV2MABXQ8DD

Run Details

Duration:
8.0s
Cost:
$0.000299
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon glow of the Raven’s Nest pulsed like a slow heartbeat against the Soho night, casting jagged shadows across the bar’s worn wooden floor. Aurora Carter—Rory, as she preferred—stood at the counter, her fingers brushing the rim of a glass before she set it down with a sharp *clink*. The scent of spiced tea and aged whiskey clung to the air, thick and familiar, but the room felt different tonight. Too many years had passed for that. She hadn’t come here for the usual crowd—drunk students, late-night office workers, the occasional tourist who stumbled in after a night of overindulgence. Tonight, she’d come because she’d been told Silas was here. Because she’d been told he’d changed. The door creaked open, and Silas Blackwood stepped inside, his limp more pronounced than usual. He didn’t look up from the ledger he was flipping through, but his voice carried the weight of years before it reached her. “You’re late.” She didn’t turn. “I’m not late. I’m early.” A beat of silence. The kind that settled between people who’d known each other long enough to know the unspoken rules of time. “You look different,” he said finally, finally meeting her gaze. His hazel eyes were sharper now, the kind of sharpness that came from years spent watching others. She exhaled through her nose, the breath steady. “You too.” Silas set the ledger down with a quiet *thud*. “You’ve got a scar on your wrist.” She didn’t flinch. “I’ve had it since I was ten.” “You’re thinner.” “You’re older.” He leaned back against the bar, the signet ring on his right hand catching the light like a broken mirror. “I’ve been thinking about Prague.” The mention of the city sent a cold prickle down her spine. “You still talk about it like it’s yesterday.” “It wasn’t yesterday.” His voice was low, rough. “It was a mistake. A man died because of it.” She turned then, the scar on her wrist catching the dim light. “I know.” Silas’s jaw tightened. “You should’ve been there.” “You should’ve been there.” The bar’s hum grew louder, the usual chatter of patrons fading into the background. Aurora reached for her glass, the ice cold against her palm. “You’re not the same man who walked into this bar five years ago.” Silas didn’t deny it. “I’m not.” She took a sip, the tea burning her throat. “You’re still here.” “Because I have to be.” The words hung between them, heavy as the weight of all the things they’d left unsaid. The bar’s lights flickered, casting long shadows across Silas’s face. “You’re still working at Golden Empress?” “Part-time. Delivery.” “You’re not in law anymore.” “No.” Silas studied her for a long moment, the kind of study that made her feel exposed. “You’re not the same woman who walked out on me.” She set her glass down. “I walked out on Evan.” Silas’s expression darkened. “You should’ve stayed.” “You should’ve stayed.” The door swung open again, and in walked Eva—Aurora’s childhood friend, the one who’d pulled her out of Cardiff when she was sixteen. She looked different too, her dark hair streaked with silver, her eyes sharp with something like recognition. “Aurora.” Silas didn’t move. “Eva.” Eva’s gaze flicked between them, unreadable. “You’ve both changed.” Aurora didn’t answer. She just stood there, the weight of the years pressing down on her shoulders. Silas reached across the bar, his fingers brushing hers. “We should’ve stayed in touch.” She pulled away. “We should’ve.” Eva cleared her throat. “I’ve got a table.” Silas nodded, his voice gruff. “I’ll be there in a minute.” Aurora didn’t look at him. She just watched Eva walk away, the way she used to, the way she’d always been able to. The way she couldn’t anymore. The bar’s lights dimmed further, the shadows swallowing the space around her. She took another sip of tea, the burn in her throat a reminder of how long it had been since she’d let herself feel anything at all. The door creaked open again, and in walked someone else—someone she didn’t recognize. Silas’s voice cut through the silence. “Who’s that?” Aurora didn’t answer. She just watched the stranger step inside, the way the light caught the edges of their face, the way their eyes locked onto hers for just a second before they turned away. The bar’s hum filled the space, loud and insistent, a reminder of how much had changed. Silas’s voice was low, urgent. “Aurora.” She didn’t look at him. She just watched the stranger, the way they moved, the way they didn’t belong here anymore. The way they didn’t belong anywhere. The door swung open again, and in walked someone else—someone she didn’t recognize. Silas’s voice cut through the silence. “Aurora.” She turned then, the scar on her wrist catching the light. “You’re not the same man who walked into this bar five years ago.” Silas didn’t answer. He just stood there, the weight of all the things they’d left unsaid pressing down on him. The bar’s lights flickered, casting long shadows across his face. “I’m not.” Aurora exhaled through her nose, the breath steady. “You’re still here.” Silas reached across the bar, his fingers brushing hers. “Because I have to be.” She pulled away. “Because you should’ve been.” The stranger stepped forward, their voice soft. “You look familiar.” Aurora didn’t look at them. She just watched Silas, the way he stood there, the way he didn’t know what to say. The way he didn’t know how to fix it. Silas’s voice was rough. “You should’ve stayed.” Aurora’s fingers tightened around her glass. “You should’ve stayed.” The bar’s lights dimmed further, the shadows swallowing the space around them. The stranger stepped closer, their voice a whisper. “I’ve been looking for you.” Silas’s hand shot out, gripping Aurora’s wrist. “Don’t.” She jerked away, the glass clattering to the floor. The stranger’s eyes widened, but they didn’t back down. “You don’t get to decide.” Silas’s voice was a growl. “I do.” Aurora’s breath hitched. The stranger’s voice softened. “I’m sorry.” Silas’s grip tightened. “You’re not.” The stranger’s face twisted, the pain in their eyes raw. “I am.” Silas’s voice was a blade. “You’re not.” Aurora stepped between them, her voice steady. “Enough.” Silas’s hand fell away, the weight of his anger leaving him. The stranger’s eyes locked onto hers, the pain in them unmistakable. “I’m sorry.” Aurora nodded. “You should be.” Silas’s voice was a whisper. “I’m sorry.” Aurora turned away, the weight of the years pressing down on her shoulders. The bar’s lights flickered, casting long shadows across the space around them. The stranger stepped back, their voice soft. “I’ll find you.” Silas’s voice was rough. “Don’t.” Aurora didn’t look at them. She just watched the stranger walk out, the door swinging shut behind them. The bar’s hum filled the space, loud and insistent, a reminder of how much had changed. Silas’s voice was low, urgent. “Aurora.” She didn’t answer. She just watched the door, the way it swung shut, the way it didn’t belong here anymore. The way it didn’t belong anywhere. Silas’s hand found hers, his fingers warm against her cold skin. “We should’ve stayed in touch.” Aurora pulled away. “We should’ve.” Silas’s voice was rough. “I’m sorry.” Aurora’s breath hitched. “You should be.” The bar’s lights flickered, the shadows swallowing the space around them. The weight of the years pressed down on her shoulders, heavy and unyielding. She took a step back, the scar on her wrist catching the light. “I’m not the same woman who walked into this bar five years ago.” Silas’s voice was low, urgent. “I’m not the same man who walked into this bar five years ago.” Aurora exhaled through her nose, the breath steady. “We’re both different.” Silas’s voice was rough. “We should’ve stayed.” Aurora turned away, the weight of the years pressing down on her. The bar’s hum filled the space, loud and insistent, a reminder of how much had changed. She took another sip of tea, the burn in her throat a reminder of how long it had been since she’d let herself feel anything at all. Silas’s voice was low, urgent. “Aurora.” She didn’t look at him. She just watched the door, the way it swung shut, the way it didn’t belong here anymore. The way it didn’t belong anywhere.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:51:56.228Z" 2/20/2026, 7:51:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.014
leniency0.029
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.029
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1396
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1396
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"carried the weight"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"weight"
count7
7
word"flickered"
count4
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count5
11
word"whisper"
count2
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"familiar"
2"carried the weight"
3"silence"
4"unspoken"
5"down her spine"
6"weight"
7"flickered"
8"flicked"
9"unreadable"
10"reminder"
11"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences114
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences181
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1389
ratio0.001
matches
0"clink"
1"thud"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1124
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.76
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Carter1
Rory1
Silas31
Blackwood1
Eva4
Aurora19
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Eva"
6"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.121
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like recognition"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1389
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences181
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs79
mean17.58
std15.49
cv0.881
sampleLengths
078
139
240
38
450
510
616
710
82
92
1025
1120
1218
1314
147
154
1638
176
1812
195
2032
212
225
231
2426
2510
266
273
2841
294
309
3131
325
338
3411
3528
3652
378
3851
396
4027
4120
4224
4332
4411
4514
467
4710
4831
497
99.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"been told"
1"been told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs192
matches
0"was flipping"
63.93% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences181
ratio0.028
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory, as she preferred—stood at the counter, her fingers brushing the rim of a glass before she set it down with a sharp *clink*."
1"She hadn’t come here for the usual crowd—drunk students, late-night office workers, the occasional tourist who stumbled in after a night of overindulgence."
2"The door swung open again, and in walked Eva—Aurora’s childhood friend, the one who’d pulled her out of Cardiff when she was sixteen."
3"The door creaked open again, and in walked someone else—someone she didn’t recognize."
4"The door swung open again, and in walked someone else—someone she didn’t recognize."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1131
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"ice cold against her"
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.038903625110521665
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0017683465959328027
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences181
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences181
mean7.67
std6.16
cv0.803
sampleLengths
025
125
221
37
423
510
66
715
823
92
103
115
124
1319
1410
1517
168
172
189
197
203
217
222
232
2420
255
2612
278
288
2910
3012
312
323
334
344
3514
3611
3713
384
392
409
413
425
4316
4410
456
462
475
481
4916
42.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.11049723756906077
totalSentences181
uniqueOpeners20
29.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"Too many years had passed"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences113
matches
0"She hadn’t come here for"
1"He didn’t look up from"
2"She didn’t turn."
3"he said finally, finally meeting"
4"His hazel eyes were sharper"
5"She exhaled through her nose,"
6"She didn’t flinch."
7"He leaned back against the"
8"His voice was low, rough"
9"She turned then, the scar"
10"She took a sip, the"
11"She set her glass down."
12"She looked different too, her"
13"She just stood there, the"
14"She pulled away."
15"She just watched Eva walk"
16"She took another sip of"
17"She just watched the stranger"
18"She didn’t look at him."
19"She just watched the stranger,"
ratio0.283
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount111
totalSentences113
matches
0"The neon glow of the"
1"Aurora Carter—Rory, as she preferred—stood"
2"The scent of spiced tea"
3"She hadn’t come here for"
4"Tonight, she’d come because she’d"
5"The door creaked open, and"
6"He didn’t look up from"
7"She didn’t turn."
8"A beat of silence."
9"The kind that settled between"
10"he said finally, finally meeting"
11"His hazel eyes were sharper"
12"She exhaled through her nose,"
13"Silas set the ledger down"
14"She didn’t flinch."
15"He leaned back against the"
16"The mention of the city"
17"His voice was low, rough"
18"She turned then, the scar"
19"Silas’s jaw tightened."
ratio0.982
44.25% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"Because she’d been told he’d"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She hadn’t come here for the usual crowd—drunk students, late-night office workers, the occasional tourist who stumbled in after a night of overindulgence."
1"Silas studied her for a long moment, the kind of study that made her feel exposed."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.014
leniency0.029
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.4350%