Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9QYENNPMF0M89X0M6EFYS

Run Details

Duration:
2m 57s
Cost:
$0.014297
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory hefted the stack of foiled takeout containers higher on her left arm, the crinkle of their wrappers cutting through the hum of Soho’s evening foot traffic. The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest bleared above her, its glow painting the wet sidewalk a sickly lime that seeped into the cracks between paving stones. She’d never delivered to this bar before—Yu-Fei had pressed the order slip into her hand ten minutes prior, muttering about a regular who’d begged for a last-minute spread of pork buns and braised greens, his voice tight with the kind of urgency that meant a big tip was on the line. Rory pushed the door open. The air hit her first: wood smoke curled from a dormant fireplace in the corner, burnt malt clung to the ceiling beams, and the faint tang of old leather wrapped around her like a forgotten coat. Walls lined with frayed maps of Cold War-era Europe—their edges crinkled from years of being rolled and unrolled—and black-and-white photographs of men in tailored suits clustered around payphones swallowed the dim overhead light. A jukebox in the far corner sputtered a cracked jazz tune, its needle skipping over the same scratch on the record every three bars. Rory scanned the empty bar, her straight black shoulder-length hair falling in a curtain over one bright blue eye. She shifted the containers to her right arm, and the cuff of her faded Golden Empress delivery uniform slid down, revealing the small crescent scar on her left wrist—leftover from a childhood accident where she’d fallen off her dad’s boat while chasing a seagull. She tugged the cuff back up before anyone could see. A figure limped from behind the bar, his left leg dragging slightly over the scuffed wooden floor. He paused mid-step, his grey-streaked auburn beard catching the glint of a wall lamp strung above a map of Berlin. The silver signet ring on his right hand—etched with a raven’s head—caught her eye. She’d seen that ring on the finger of the man who’d taught her to play chess in her dad’s Cardiff study when she was twelve, the man who’d brought her a lollipop after she’d gotten her first stitches for the wrist scar. Silas. She stopped breathing. The takeout containers teetered on her arm, and she tightened her grip until her fingers ached. He moved faster than his limp suggested, snatching the top two containers before they could crash to the floor. He set them on the bar counter, his fingers brushing the foil with a gentleness she’d never seen in the man who’d once lectured her on the importance of unbroken eye contact during a cross-examination. Golden Empress delivery. Yu-Fei said your regular requested three pork buns and a side of braised greens. He flicked a threadbare bar towel over a chipped highball glass that still held a faint ring of condensation, his gaze fixed on the spot where her scar had peeked out from her cuff. You’re Brendan’s daughter. Rory’s jaw tightened. She twisted the strap of her delivery bag around her palm until her knuckles whitened, the rough canvas digging into her skin. I’m Rory. He nodded, his auburn hair streaked with grey catching the light again. She’d last seen him at her dad’s fortieth birthday party, when he’d worn a tailored navy suit and talked about a case that would take him abroad for “a few weeks.” He’d never come back to Cardiff. You vanished. Rory’s gaze darted to a map of Prague taped to the wall, its edges frayed from years of handling and marked with small red Xs. She’d heard whispers from her dad that Silas had taken a job in the city and never returned, but she’d never pressed for details—she’d been too wrapped up in her pre-law studies, too wrapped up in Evan, the man who’d later leave bruises on her arms that she’d hidden under long sleeves. You left first. He leaned against the bar, his left leg shifting to bear less weight, the boot on his left foot scuffing the floor. The signet ring glinted as he tapped his finger against the counter, a rhythm that matched the jukebox’s skipped beat. Prague went wrong. Rory’s throat tightened. She’d read a small article in the Cardiff Post two years prior about a botched intelligence op that left an agent with a permanent knee injury, but she’d never connected it to Silas. She’d thought he’d just abandoned his family friends, abandoned her. My dad never talked about it. He flicked the bar towel again, this time over a stack of paper napkins, folding each one into a neat square before stacking them back up. His neat beard twitched, a sign of irritation she’d only seen once before, when she’d beaten him at chess by moving her knight in a way he’d called “reckless but brilliant, the kind of move that wins wars or gets you killed.” He wouldn’t. Brendan’s code was tighter than a bank vault. He never mixed his barrister work with the mess I got into. Rory tugged her cuff down again, even though the scar was already hidden. She thought of the nights she’d locked herself in her dorm room, of Evan slamming his fist against the door, of Eva begging her to flee to London with her, of the pre-law textbooks she’d left stacked by her bed, unopened for months after she’d dropped out. I left Cardiff too. He raised an eyebrow, his hazel eyes narrowing. She’d forgotten how well he could read people—how he’d once guessed she was hiding a bad contract law test score just by the way she’d avoided his gaze while setting up a chess board. Pre-law didn’t stick. Rory’s face burned. She’d never told anyone but Eva about leaving school, about the delivery job that paid just enough to cover her rent and groceries, about the tiny flat she’d rented above a laundromat before she’d found a cheaper place closer to the restaurant. She’d been too ashamed—ashamed of letting her dad down, ashamed of letting Silas down, the man who’d once said she’d make a better barrister than her dad. I deliver food now. He nodded, his gaze softening. He reached under the bar and pulled out a glass of cold water, setting it in front of her. The limp was more noticeable when he leaned forward to push the glass across the counter, his left leg dragging slightly as he moved. It’s honest work. More than I can say for some of the jobs I’ve held. Rory stared at the water, her fingers hovering over the rim. She thought of the way her dad had looked at her when she’d told him she was dropping out of pre-law—disappointment mixed with fear, fear that she’d throw her life away. She thought of Silas, the man who’d once told her she’d argue her way out of a fortress if she had to. You once said I’d argue my way out of a fortress. He laughed, a low, rough sound that didn’t match the quiet bar owner she saw now. He flicked the bar towel over his shoulder, the signet ring catching the light as he did. I still think it. The fortress just looks different now. Rory picked up the water glass, her bright blue eyes meeting his hazel ones. She took a sip, the cold liquid soothing her parched throat. She glanced at the bookshelf in the corner, its shelves lined with dusty spy novels and leather-bound case files, the same bookshelf she’d seen in Silas’s old Cardiff flat, the one he’d used to store classified documents he’d hidden from her dad. You kept the bookshelf. He froze again, his thumb still resting on the edge of a takeout container. He glanced at the bookshelf, then back at her, his hazel eyes darkening. It’s useful. Hides things. Rory twisted the delivery bag strap again, her knuckles turning white. She thought of the years she’d spent avoiding calls from her dad, of the way she’d never checked in on Silas after Prague because she’d thought he’d abandoned her, of the unspoken regret between them—his for not reaching out after his injury, hers for not letting anyone in after fleeing Evan. I should go. Yu-Fei’s waiting for the receipt. He pulled a crumpled receipt from his pocket, scribbling his signature on the bottom with a black ballpoint pen. The signet ring glinted as he handed it to her, his calloused fingers brushing hers—his hands were a far cry from the smooth hands that had once taught her to hold a chess piece correctly, to not grip it too tight. Tell Yu-Fei I’ll add a twenty-pound tip to her account. For the quick delivery. Rory took the receipt, her fingers closing around the crumpled paper. She thought of the way Yu-Fei had told her about The Raven’s Nest, about the bar owner who was “quiet but fair,” about the hidden room behind the bookshelf that only regulars knew about. She didn’t ask about it. Thanks. She turned to leave, but he called out to her, his voice rough with an emotion she’d never heard from him before. Rory. She paused, her hand on the door handle, the cold metal seeping into her skin. She didn’t turn around, but she could hear his limp as he moved closer, his boot scuffing the floor. If you ever need a place to sit. For a drink. Or a chess game. The board’s still in the bookshelf. She nodded, her throat tightening again. She thought of the tiny flat above the laundromat, of the lonely nights she’d spent eating leftover takeout from Golden Empress, of the pre-law student she’d been, of the delivery person she was now, of the man who’d once been her mentor. I might. She pushed the door open, the green neon sign’s glow washing over her. She hefted the empty delivery bag over her shoulder, her left wrist throbbing where the scar was. She walked down the sidewalk, the hum of Soho’s traffic filling her ears, the receipt crumpled in her hand.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1709
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1709
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count3
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"calloused fingers"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"glint"
2"etched"
3"flicked"
4"weight"
5"eyebrow"
6"unspoken"
7"calloused fingers"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences101
matches
0"d with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1683
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions74
wordCount1663
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity0.84
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Yu"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Raven2
Nest2
Yu5
Fei5
Cold1
War-era1
Europe1
Golden3
Empress3
Berlin1
Cardiff5
Brendan2
Rory14
Prague3
Xs1
Silas7
Evan3
Post1
Eva2
London1
Yu-Fei4
You5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Fei"
3"Brendan"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
7"Eva"
8"Yu-Fei"
9"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Europe"
2"Golden"
3"Berlin"
4"Cardiff"
5"Prague"
6"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1683
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"seen that ring"
1"fear that she’d"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean33.66
std33.28
cv0.989
sampleLengths
0111
1166
293
31
419
554
617
734
83
925
102
1149
122
1377
143
1542
163
1746
186
1968
2022
2160
224
2342
243
2572
264
2748
2815
2964
3011
3133
3210
3367
344
3527
364
3762
388
3960
4014
4150
421
4322
441
4534
4621
4748
482
4949
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"being rolled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs286
matches
0"was hiding"
1"was dropping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences101
ratio0.099
matches
0"She’d never delivered to this bar before—Yu-Fei had pressed the order slip into her hand ten minutes prior, muttering about a regular who’d begged for a last-minute spread of pork buns and braised greens, his voice tight with the kind of urgency that meant a big tip was on the line."
1"Walls lined with frayed maps of Cold War-era Europe—their edges crinkled from years of being rolled and unrolled—and black-and-white photographs of men in tailored suits clustered around payphones swallowed the dim overhead light."
2"She shifted the containers to her right arm, and the cuff of her faded Golden Empress delivery uniform slid down, revealing the small crescent scar on her left wrist—leftover from a childhood accident where she’d fallen off her dad’s boat while chasing a seagull."
3"The silver signet ring on his right hand—etched with a raven’s head—caught her eye."
4"She’d heard whispers from her dad that Silas had taken a job in the city and never returned, but she’d never pressed for details—she’d been too wrapped up in her pre-law studies, too wrapped up in Evan, the man who’d later leave bruises on her arms that she’d hidden under long sleeves."
5"She’d forgotten how well he could read people—how he’d once guessed she was hiding a bad contract law test score just by the way she’d avoided his gaze while setting up a chess board."
6"She’d been too ashamed—ashamed of letting her dad down, ashamed of letting Silas down, the man who’d once said she’d make a better barrister than her dad."
7"She thought of the way her dad had looked at her when she’d told him she was dropping out of pre-law—disappointment mixed with fear, fear that she’d throw her life away."
8"She thought of the years she’d spent avoiding calls from her dad, of the way she’d never checked in on Silas after Prague because she’d thought he’d abandoned her, of the unspoken regret between them—his for not reaching out after his injury, hers for not letting anyone in after fleeing Evan."
9"The signet ring glinted as he handed it to her, his calloused fingers brushing hers—his hands were a far cry from the smooth hands that had once taught her to hold a chess piece correctly, to not grip it too tight."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1690
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.028402366863905324
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.004733727810650888
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean16.66
std13.9
cv0.834
sampleLengths
027
128
251
35
436
533
624
719
844
910
1017
1120
1214
1342
141
153
1616
1719
1835
193
2014
2134
223
233
2422
252
2612
2737
282
2925
3052
313
3222
3320
343
353
3633
3710
386
3926
4042
412
428
4312
4413
4547
464
478
4834
493
36.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2376237623762376
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners24
36.23% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"More than I can say"
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences92
matches
0"She’d never delivered to this"
1"She shifted the containers to"
2"She tugged the cuff back"
3"He paused mid-step, his grey-streaked"
4"She’d seen that ring on"
5"She stopped breathing."
6"He moved faster than his"
7"He set them on the"
8"He flicked a threadbare bar"
9"You’re Brendan’s daughter."
10"She twisted the strap of"
11"He nodded, his auburn hair"
12"She’d last seen him at"
13"She’d heard whispers from her"
14"You left first."
15"He leaned against the bar,"
16"She’d read a small article"
17"She’d thought he’d just abandoned"
18"My dad never talked about"
19"He flicked the bar towel"
ratio0.609
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences92
matches
0"Rory hefted the stack of"
1"The green neon sign of"
2"She’d never delivered to this"
3"Rory pushed the door open."
4"The air hit her first:"
5"Walls lined with frayed maps"
6"A jukebox in the far"
7"Rory scanned the empty bar,"
8"She shifted the containers to"
9"She tugged the cuff back"
10"A figure limped from behind"
11"He paused mid-step, his grey-streaked"
12"The silver signet ring on"
13"She’d seen that ring on"
14"She stopped breathing."
15"The takeout containers teetered on"
16"He moved faster than his"
17"He set them on the"
18"Yu-Fei said your regular requested"
19"He flicked a threadbare bar"
ratio0.924
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"If you ever need a"
ratio0.011
35.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest bleared above her, its glow painting the wet sidewalk a sickly lime that seeped into the cracks between paving stones."
1"She’d never delivered to this bar before—Yu-Fei had pressed the order slip into her hand ten minutes prior, muttering about a regular who’d begged for a last-mi…"
2"She’d seen that ring on the finger of the man who’d taught her to play chess in her dad’s Cardiff study when she was twelve, the man who’d brought her a lollipo…"
3"He set them on the bar counter, his fingers brushing the foil with a gentleness she’d never seen in the man who’d once lectured her on the importance of unbroke…"
4"The signet ring glinted as he tapped his finger against the counter, a rhythm that matched the jukebox’s skipped beat."
5"She’d never told anyone but Eva about leaving school, about the delivery job that paid just enough to cover her rent and groceries, about the tiny flat she’d re…"
6"She’d been too ashamed—ashamed of letting her dad down, ashamed of letting Silas down, the man who’d once said she’d make a better barrister than her dad."
7"The signet ring glinted as he handed it to her, his calloused fingers brushing hers—his hands were a far cry from the smooth hands that had once taught her to h…"
8"She thought of the tiny flat above the laundromat, of the lonely nights she’d spent eating leftover takeout from Golden Empress, of the pre-law student she’d be…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She thought (think)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
77.5775%