Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9QYNPW27Y9HJ93Z2X4GFW

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Duration:
48.8s
Cost:
$0.000620
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked, then the final one. Rory hadn’t expected him to actually *come*. She’d figured Lucien would send a text, maybe a raven. He was a dramatic man, prone to flourishes, but usually preferred to observe from a comfortable distance. She hadn’t braced herself for the sight of him filling her doorway, charcoal suit immaculate even after braving the London drizzle. He wasn’t smiling, but his mouth tipped slightly at the corners, a habitual expression that didn’t quite reach his amber and black eyes. He held his cane casually, the ivory gleaming faintly in the dim hallway. “Surprise,” he said, the single word a silken rasp. Rory stared. “You didn't knock.” “I did. Three times. Rather insistently, if I recall.” She hadn’t heard anything over the bass thrumming from the street below, a weekly Friday night drum circle that did little for her temper. “Right. Well, you’re here.” “Indeed.” He stepped inside, not waiting for an invitation, though the space felt immediately smaller with him in it. Ptolemy, roused from a nap on a tower of books, arched his back and hissed, then retreated under the sofa. “Charming reception.” “He’s discerning,” Rory said, crossing her arms. She hadn’t quite managed to shed the delivery uniform—Yu-Fei was short-staffed as usual—and she felt distinctly underdressed in faded jeans and a Golden Empress t-shirt. Lucien, as always, looked like he’d walked straight out of a magazine. He glanced at Ptolemy’s hiding place. “A creature of excellent taste.” He turned his gaze back to her, and the corner of her mouth twitched despite her best efforts. “I need your help.” She laughed, a short, brittle sound. “That’s rich. After… everything? You need *my* help?” The color drained from his face. “Don’t. Not tonight, Aurora. Please.” She flinched. He rarely used her full name. It always felt like a deliberate act, a stripping away of the familiar ease of ‘Rory’ that revealed the cold distance he preferred to maintain. “So, you just show up and expect me to fall into line?” she asked, her voice tight. “I wouldn’t expect anything of you,” he said, and the lie hung heavy in the air between them. Their history was built on expectations, on unspoken promises, on a simmering tension that had finally, spectacularly, imploded six months ago. “That’s new of you.” He ignored the jab and moved further into the flat, his eyes sweeping over the organized chaos of Eva’s life, now temporarily hers. Books overflowed from shelves, spilling onto the floor. Maps covered one wall, annotated with swirling script and strange symbols. Empty teacups sat precariously on stacks of research papers. He looked… right at home, strangely. "Eva’s been busy." “She is. Prepping for the symposium next month. Something about thaumaturgical resonance in ancient Mesopotamian textiles.” He raised a brow. “Of course she is.” Rory bristled. “Don’t mock her.” “I wasn’t. I simply find her pursuits… fascinating.” He paused. “The details are immaterial. I need somewhere secure to meet someone.” “Secure? What are we talking about?” She knew better than to push, but she couldn’t help it. He’d pulled her into enough messes over the years, always with a cryptic explanation and a promise of excitement. This felt different. It felt… urgent. “A client. A delicate transaction. I trust your friend’s wards.” Eva had spent years reinforcing the flat’s defenses, layering enchantments and protective sigils into the very structure of the building. It was practically a fortress, albeit a cluttered one. “What kind of delicate transaction?” He met her gaze, his heterochromatic eyes unwavering. "Information. Highly sensitive information." Rory's gut clenched. Lucien dealt in information. It was his currency, his power. But sensitive information usually meant dangerous people. “Whose information?” “That’s not something I can disclose.” “So you expect me to risk my neck—and Eva’s—for a secret?” “I expect you to help a friend.” He said it softly, but the words carried weight. Friend. They’d been something more, once. The memory stung. “We’re not friends, Lucien.” That seemed to genuinely hurt him. His expression shuttered, the carefully constructed composure cracking. “Yes, we are. Or, we were. And even now…” He trailed off, shaking his head. “Even now what?” she prompted, hating the tremor in her voice. He didn’t answer, turning instead to examine a particularly precarious pile of books. "It’s… complex." “Your life is complex,” she retorted. “Mine is relatively straightforward. I deliver noodles. You run with demons.” “A slight exaggeration.” “Is it?” She remembered the pale, ethereal figure she’d seen lingering in his shadow during a gala, the hushed whispers about his father, a powerful entity from a realm she didn’t even want to contemplate. He sighed, running a hand through his slicked-back hair. “Look, I wouldn't ask if it wasn't important. This concerns… a potential disruption to the balance.” “The balance?” “Between realms. Avaros is… restless. There’s a collector. Acquiring artifacts. Things he shouldn't have.” Avaros. The demonic realm Lucien’s father called home. It was bad news if Avaros was restless. Very bad news. “And this collector…?” “Claims to have a piece of something. Something that could unravel the treaties. Unleash chaos.” Rory wrapped her arms around herself, suddenly cold. This was bigger than a delicate transaction. This was the kind of mess that could end the world. Or at least, this corner of it. “And you need my help because…?” “Because I need a neutral ground. Somewhere untraceable. Somewhere… safe.” His gaze met hers again, vulnerability flickering in the amber depths of his eyes. “And because I trust you, Aurora. More than I trust anyone.” The words were a balm to a wound she thought had long since healed. Trust. He’d broken that trust, hadn't he? Walked away without a word, leaving her to pick up the pieces. Yet, here he was, admitting he trusted her. She looked at him, really looked at him. The lines around his eyes, the subtle weariness in his expression. He was a creature of power, of shadow and secrets, but he was also… lonely. Terribly, achingly lonely. “What time is this meeting?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper. A flicker of relief crossed his face. “Tonight. Within the hour.” “Great.” She managed a wry smile. “Just another Friday night in Brick Lane.” He allowed a genuine smile to touch his lips this time. "Indeed." He paused, then reached into his pocket, drawing out a small, intricately carved silver box. He held it out to her. "A token of my gratitude. And… an apology." She hesitated, then took the box. It was cool to the touch, radiating a faint energy. “What is it?” “Open it,” he said, his eyes fixed on her. She lifted the lid. Inside, nestled on a bed of black velvet, lay a single, perfect blue iris. Her breath caught in her throat. It was her favorite flower. He remembered. “Lucien…” “Don’t,” he said, his voice suddenly rough. “Don't read too much into it. It’s simply a flower.” But she knew it wasn’t. It was a gesture, a silent acknowledgment of everything they’d shared, of everything they’d lost. And as she looked into his eyes, a dangerous hope began to blossom in her chest. A hope she knew she shouldn't indulge, but couldn’t seem to suppress. This night was far from over. And she had a feeling, a cold certainty, that it would change everything.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:52:03.006Z" 2/20/2026, 7:52:03 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He paused then [then]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.345
leniency0.691
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.036
67.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1229
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count2
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"softly"
3"carefully"
4"suddenly"
5"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1229
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"comfortable"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"simmering"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"resonance"
count1
7
word"fascinating"
count1
8
word"structure"
count1
9
word"unwavering"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"constructed"
count1
12
word"complex"
count2
13
word"potential"
count1
14
word"unravel"
count1
15
word"depths"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"flicker"
count1
18
word"velvet"
count1
19
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"comfortable"
1"gleaming"
2"familiar"
3"unspoken"
4"simmering"
5"tension"
6"resonance"
7"fascinating"
8"structure"
9"unwavering"
10"weight"
11"constructed"
12"complex"
13"potential"
14"unravel"
15"depths"
16"whisper"
17"flicker"
18"velvet"
19"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences98
matches
0"A flicker of relief"
84.55% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
3"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1223
ratio0.002
matches
0"come"
1"my"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount893
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien4
London1
Rory6
Friday1
Ptolemy2
Yu1
Fei1
Golden1
Empress1
Eva2
Friend1
Avaros2
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Rory"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Eva"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
7.14% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite reach his amber and black eyes"
1"quite managed to shed the delivery uniform—Yu—Fei was short-staffed as usual—and she felt distinctly underdressed in faded jeans and a Golden Empress t-shirt"
2"looked like he’d walked straight out of a"
3"felt like a deliberate act, a stripping"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1223
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"broken that trust"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean20.73
std15.81
cv0.763
sampleLengths
063
136
29
35
49
528
641
744
833
914
1011
1133
1217
1339
144
1557
163
1716
188
195
2021
2142
2210
2329
245
2512
2622
276
2811
2925
304
3129
3211
3315
3417
353
3635
3725
382
3914
4019
413
4215
4333
446
4535
4641
4737
4812
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"was built"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs174
matches
0"was, admitting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences134
ratio0.007
matches
0"She hadn’t quite managed to shed the delivery uniform—Yu-Fei was short-staffed as usual—and she felt distinctly underdressed in faded jeans and a Golden Empress t-shirt."
78.35% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount470
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.0574468085106383
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.027659574468085105
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean9.13
std6.47
cv0.709
sampleLengths
08
17
210
317
421
523
613
79
82
93
109
1124
124
1319
1420
152
167
1725
1812
196
2023
214
226
238
246
255
262
276
2825
2917
3018
3121
324
3323
348
3511
369
372
384
393
4016
414
424
432
443
4510
4611
4717
4819
493
69.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.43283582089552236
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners58
78.43% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"Very bad news."
1"Terribly, achingly lonely."
ratio0.024
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences85
matches
0"She’d figured Lucien would send"
1"He was a dramatic man,"
2"She hadn’t braced herself for"
3"He wasn’t smiling, but his"
4"He held his cane casually,"
5"he said, the single word"
6"She hadn’t heard anything over"
7"He stepped inside, not waiting"
8"She hadn’t quite managed to"
9"He glanced at Ptolemy’s hiding"
10"He turned his gaze back"
11"She laughed, a short, brittle"
12"He rarely used her full"
13"It always felt like a"
14"she asked, her voice tight"
15"he said, and the lie"
16"Their history was built on"
17"He ignored the jab and"
18"He raised a brow."
19"She knew better than to"
ratio0.588
30.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences85
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked, then"
1"Rory hadn’t expected him to"
2"She’d figured Lucien would send"
3"He was a dramatic man,"
4"She hadn’t braced herself for"
5"He wasn’t smiling, but his"
6"He held his cane casually,"
7"he said, the single word"
8"She hadn’t heard anything over"
9"He stepped inside, not waiting"
10"Ptolemy, roused from a nap"
11"Rory said, crossing her arms"
12"She hadn’t quite managed to"
13"Lucien, as always, looked like"
14"He glanced at Ptolemy’s hiding"
15"He turned his gaze back"
16"She laughed, a short, brittle"
17"The color drained from his"
18"He rarely used her full"
19"It always felt like a"
ratio0.859
58.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Yet, here he was, admitting"
ratio0.012
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He wasn’t smiling, but his mouth tipped slightly at the corners, a habitual expression that didn’t quite reach his amber and black eyes."
1"She hadn’t heard anything over the bass thrumming from the street below, a weekly Friday night drum circle that did little for her temper."
2"Their history was built on expectations, on unspoken promises, on a simmering tension that had finally, spectacularly, imploded six months ago."
3"Eva had spent years reinforcing the flat’s defenses, layering enchantments and protective sigils into the very structure of the building."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she asked, her voice tight"
1"he said, and the lie hung heavy in the air between them"
2"He said, but the words carried weight"
3"His gaze met, vulnerability flickering in the amber depths of his eyes"
4"she asked, her voice barely a whisper"
5"he said, his voice suddenly rough"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she retorted (retort)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.164
leniency0.327
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.036
77.6873%