Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9R65X4E22QNP4A6NWQH9T

Run Details

Duration:
35.7s
Cost:
$0.001749
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung inward on protesting hinges, spilling yellow light from the flat's single bulb into the dim stairwell. Rory gripped the edge, three deadbolts now thrown back, her straight black hair catching the draft. She blinked at the figure filling the threshold—platinum blond slicked sharp, charcoal suit hugging his frame like a shadow. Lucien's cane tapped once against the frame, ivory handle glinting. One eye burned amber; the other drank the light whole. "Rory Carter." His voice rolled low, French lilt curling the edges. He leaned forward, scent of bergamot and smoke invading the cramped hall. Her fingers tightened on the door. Bright blue eyes narrowed. "Lucien. You pick locks now, or did Ptolemy let you in?" The tabby cat wove between her ankles, tail flicking, oblivious. Lucien’s lips twitched—a half-smile that never reached the black eye. He straightened to his full height, eclipsing the stair light. "Your friend's security flatters her paranoia. Took five minutes." "Get out." She blocked the doorway, shoulder-length hair swinging as she shifted. The small crescent scar on her wrist itched under his gaze, old accident flaring like memory. He didn't budge. Cane planted firm. "We need to talk." "Talk." She crossed her arms, the flat's chaos spilling behind her—books teetered in stacks on every surface, scrolls unrolled across the kitchen counter, notes pinned to walls like frantic maps. Eva's absence hung thick; she'd dashed out hours ago for some occult supplier, leaving Rory to mind the cat and her own unraveling thoughts. "You vanish for three months, no word after that night in the warehouse, and now you show up at Eva's door like some ghost in a suit. Say it and go." Lucien's amber eye traced her face, lingered on the scar. He stepped closer, forcing her back or shut the door. She held ground. Ptolemy yowled, darting inside. "That night." He echoed, voice dropping gravel. "You think I forgot the blade at your throat? Your ex's blood on my hands?" Her laugh scraped dry. "Evan. Yeah. You saved my skin, then ghosted. Left me with questions and a half-demon mess." She jabbed a finger at his chest, fabric crisp under her nail. Heat radiated through wool. Too close. Always too close with him. He caught her wrist—gentle clamp, thumb brushing the scar. Electricity sparked. "Evan wasn't human anymore. You saw the eyes. Black like mine." His black eye locked hers, pulling. "I ended it to protect you. You begged me not to." "Bullshit." She yanked free, but her skin burned where he touched. Stepped back into the flat proper, door banging shut behind him. Deadbolts clicked under her palm—instinct. "You whispered promises in four languages, fucked me against that wall till I couldn't stand. Then dawn hits, and you're gone. Complicated terms? That's cowardice." Lucien prowled in, cane sweeping books aside on the side table. Scrolls rustled. He pivoted, suit jacket straining across shoulders. "Cowardice is running to London from Cardiff, hiding above Silas's dive. Pretending the underworld doesn't call your name." His gaze raked her—jeans hugging hips, faded tee clinging from the humid night. Hunger flickered in amber. She flushed, heat coiling low. "Don't." Turned to the kitchenette, snatched a mug from the sink. Water hissed from the tap. Anything to drown the pull. Ptolemy leaped to the counter, batting a pen. "You deal in shadows, Luc. Information, demons, blades in canes. I deliver noodles by day. We don't mix." His laugh echoed soft, predatory. He closed the gap, hip to the counter beside her. Cane leaned against the fridge. "Lies." One finger hooked her chin, tilted her face. Black eye bored deep; amber smoldered. "You came alive that night. Quick mind, out-of-the-box—saw through my half-truths before I spoke them. Eva warned me about you. Said you'd bolt like her." "Eva." Rory's breath hitched. His thumb grazed her jaw. "She doesn't know half. Doesn't know how you looked at me after, like I was the only real thing in your cursed world." Mug clattered down, water sloshing. She shoved his chest—solid, unyielding. "Hurt like hell when you left. Things unsaid choke me still." He trapped her hands against his shirt, heartbeat thundering under her palms. "Say them." Breath ghosted her lips. Bergamot enveloped. "Tell me you felt nothing. That the pull between realms didn't snag us both." Her knees weakened. Blue eyes searched his—heterochromatic storm. "Felt everything." Voice cracked. "Your demon blood humming in my veins after. The way you kissed the scar, like it mattered. Wanted more. Stupid, reckless more." Pulled one hand free, traced his slicked hair. Platinum strands bent cool under her fingers. Lucien inhaled sharp. Forehead dropped to hers. "Malphora." He murmured the alias she'd used once, in the warehouse shadows. Lips brushed her temple. "I stayed away for this. Avaros calls me home—father's debts. One slip, and it claims you too." "Bollocks." She surged up, claimed his mouth. Hard, demanding. He groaned into it, hands fisting her hips, lifting her onto the counter. Scrolls scattered. Ptolemy fled with a hiss. Tongues tangled, months of silence igniting. His fingers dug into denim, pulling her flush. She arched, nails raking his scalp, disrupting the slick. He broke first, trailing bites down her neck. "Rory." Growl vibrated her skin. "You destroy me." Suit jacket shed in a fluid shrug, revealing crisp shirt stretched taut. Her hands roamed, buttons popping under urgency. She gasped as his mouth found collarbone. "Then stay destroyed." Legs hooked his waist, heels digging. Counter dug into her back—books toppled, pages fluttering like dying birds. His cane clattered, blade whispering free halfway before he kicked it aside. Amber eye lifted, black one devouring. "Can't." Honesty slashed. "Moreau blood dooms lovers. Mother died for less." But his hips ground forward, evidence of lies. Heat pooled where they pressed. "Liar." She nipped his ear, breath ragged. "Eva's notes say half-demons choose. Bind or break." Fingers plunged lower, belt buckle yielding. Leather whispered free. He shuddered, palms sliding under her tee. Skin met skin—electric, alive. "Choose you?" Voice hoarse. "And drag you to Avaros pits?" Thumbs circled ribs, teasing lower. She bucked, chasing friction. "Try me." Challenge laced her words. Pulled him down again, kiss bruising. Worlds blurred—Brick Lane curry fumes seeped under door, Ptolemy scratched at bedroom door, scrolls crunched underfoot. His shirt tore open, buttons pinging glass. Lucien palmed her breast, thumb stroking peak through lace. She moaned, head falling back. "This flat reeks of her research. Potions for demon binding." His whisper hot against throat. "Eva thinks she can cage us." "Forget her." Rory's hand delved, gripping him through trousers. He bucked, curse in French spilling. Fabric strained. "Feel that? Real. Not realms or debts." He spun her sudden, back to his chest. Mirror above sink caught them—her flushed cheeks, his wild eyes, hair mussed by her hands. His arm banded waist, free hand dipping front. Fingers teased zipper. "Complicated." Nipped lobe. "You flee abusers, I am one." "Never." She ground back, sparks igniting. Zipper rasped down. His touch invaded—bold, knowing. Legs trembled. "Evan broke bones. You break walls." Laughter rumbled, dark. Fingers curled, stroking fire. She clutched sink edge, blue eyes locked on reflection. His black eye met hers there—mirror truth. "Hurt you once." Admission punched. "Warehouse. Lied about the blade." "Shut up." Arched into him, pulse racing. Pleasure coiled tight. "Own it now." He spun her again, hoisted onto sink edge. Water dripped cold down spine. Knees parted for him, trousers shoved low. His followed, pooling ankles. Bare now, skin to skin. Amber eye flared as he notched close. "Own you?" "Yes." Hiss escaped. Nails scored his shoulders. Thrust stole breath—deep, claiming. Counter rattled, books avalanched. Rhythm built savage, hips snapping. Sweat slicked, breaths mingled. Ptolemy yowled from hall, ignored. "Rory." Her name prayer and curse. Black eye pinned, unblinking. She shattered first, cry muffled against his neck. He followed, growl tearing free, burying deep. Panting slowed. He didn't withdraw—held her there, foreheads pressed. Fingers traced scar anew, tender now. "Things unsaid." Her laugh weak, arms looped neck. "Plenty left." Blue eyes sparkled wicked. Kissed the corner of his mouth. Door buzzer screamed sudden—shrill, insistent. Eva's code. Lucien tensed, still sheathed. "Company." Rory grinned, clenching deliberate. He groaned. "Ignore." Buzzer wailed again. Footsteps thudded stairs. Deadbolts waited, cane gleamed blade-out on floor. His hand flexed on hip.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:52:10.696Z" 2/20/2026, 7:52:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She ground back [back]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.534
leniency1
rawRatio0.032
effectiveRatio0.032
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1408
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1408
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"unraveling"
count1
3
word"traced"
count3
4
word"echoed"
count2
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"disrupting"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"electric"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"delved"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"shattered"
count1
16
word"clenching"
count1
17
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"lilt"
2"unraveling"
3"traced"
4"echoed"
5"flickered"
6"silence"
7"disrupting"
8"vibrated"
9"electric"
10"whisper"
11"delved"
12"trembled"
13"pulse"
14"racing"
15"shattered"
16"clenching"
17"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences151
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences173
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1384
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount989
uniqueNames27
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Fingers"
discoveredNames
French2
Eva2
Rory5
Heat2
Stepped1
Hunger1
Water2
Black2
Bergamot1
Pulled2
Platinum1
Lips1
Hard1
Suit1
Counter2
Fingers4
Leather1
Thumbs1
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy5
Zipper1
Arched1
Pleasure1
Nails1
Kissed1
Lucien7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Heat"
3"Stepped"
4"Hunger"
5"Water"
6"Bergamot"
7"Lips"
8"Suit"
9"Counter"
10"Fingers"
11"Leather"
12"Thumbs"
13"Ptolemy"
14"Zipper"
15"Arched"
16"Pleasure"
17"Nails"
18"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1384
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences173
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean33.76
std17.78
cv0.527
sampleLengths
074
123
221
339
428
510
685
749
843
939
1052
1155
1252
1360
1453
1534
1649
1740
1852
1935
2039
2130
2224
2330
2435
2535
2624
2743
2821
2933
3013
3138
327
3322
3410
3515
3617
3718
3812
397
4018
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs240
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences20
totalSentences173
ratio0.116
matches
0"She blinked at the figure filling the threshold—platinum blond slicked sharp, charcoal suit hugging his frame like a shadow."
1"One eye burned amber; the other drank the light whole."
2"Lucien’s lips twitched—a half-smile that never reached the black eye."
3"\"Talk.\" She crossed her arms, the flat's chaos spilling behind her—books teetered in stacks on every surface, scrolls unrolled across the kitchen counter, notes pinned to walls like frantic maps."
4"Eva's absence hung thick; she'd dashed out hours ago for some occult supplier, leaving Rory to mind the cat and her own unraveling thoughts."
5"He caught her wrist—gentle clamp, thumb brushing the scar."
6"Deadbolts clicked under her palm—instinct."
7"\"Cowardice is running to London from Cardiff, hiding above Silas's dive. Pretending the underworld doesn't call your name.\" His gaze raked her—jeans hugging hips, faded tee clinging from the humid night."
8"Black eye bored deep; amber smoldered."
9"She shoved his chest—solid, unyielding."
10"Blue eyes searched his—heterochromatic storm."
11"Counter dug into her back—books toppled, pages fluttering like dying birds."
12"Skin met skin—electric, alive."
13"Worlds blurred—Brick Lane curry fumes seeped under door, Ptolemy scratched at bedroom door, scrolls crunched underfoot."
14"Mirror above sink caught them—her flushed cheeks, his wild eyes, hair mussed by her hands."
15"His touch invaded—bold, knowing."
16"His black eye met hers there—mirror truth."
17"Thrust stole breath—deep, claiming."
18"He didn't withdraw—held her there, foreheads pressed."
19"Door buzzer screamed sudden—shrill, insistent."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1009
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02180376610505451
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences173
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences173
mean8
std6.15
cv0.769
sampleLengths
019
116
219
310
410
511
612
76
84
911
1010
1110
1210
139
1412
1516
163
173
184
1930
2024
2131
2210
2310
243
254
267
2715
284
2928
304
312
325
339
342
3517
3611
3711
3811
395
4025
4111
422
437
4431
454
465
4711
485
495
88.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5317919075144508
totalSentences173
uniqueOpeners92
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences134
matches
0"Bright blue eyes narrowed."
1"Always too close with him."
ratio0.015
55.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences134
matches
0"She blinked at the figure"
1"His voice rolled low, French"
2"He leaned forward, scent of"
3"Her fingers tightened on the"
4"He straightened to his full"
5"She blocked the doorway, shoulder-length"
6"He didn't budge."
7"She crossed her arms, the"
8"He stepped closer, forcing her"
9"She held ground."
10"He echoed, voice dropping gravel"
11"Her laugh scraped dry."
12"She jabbed a finger at"
13"He caught her wrist—gentle clamp,"
14"His black eye locked hers,"
15"She yanked free, but her"
16"He pivoted, suit jacket straining"
17"His gaze raked her—jeans hugging"
18"She flushed, heat coiling low."
19"His laugh echoed soft, predatory."
ratio0.41
34.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount114
totalSentences134
matches
0"The door swung inward on"
1"Rory gripped the edge, three"
2"She blinked at the figure"
3"Lucien's cane tapped once against"
4"His voice rolled low, French"
5"He leaned forward, scent of"
6"Her fingers tightened on the"
7"The tabby cat wove between"
8"Lucien’s lips twitched—a half-smile that"
9"He straightened to his full"
10"She blocked the doorway, shoulder-length"
11"The small crescent scar on"
12"He didn't budge."
13"Cane planted firm."
14"She crossed her arms, the"
15"Eva's absence hung thick; she'd"
16"Lucien's amber eye traced her"
17"He stepped closer, forcing her"
18"She held ground."
19"Ptolemy yowled, darting inside."
ratio0.851
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He groaned into it, hands fisting her hips, lifting her onto the counter."
44.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"He echoed, voice dropping gravel"
1"She yanked, but her skin burned where he touched"
2"Mug clattered down, water sloshing"
3"Legs hooked, heels digging"
4"She ground back, sparks igniting"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.017
leniency0.034
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.034
83.2678%