"She’d ducked out mid-delivery run for Yu-Fei’s Golden Empress, a steaming bag of pork dumplings abandoned in her bike’s basket at the edge of Richmond Park—she’d spotted the crumpled note under her delivery bag’s strap before her next drop, its ink smudged like it had been written in a hurry, words blaring Find the Grove—answers about the pendant wait."
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"She paused at the stone’s gnarled base, her left wrist’s crescent scar tingling where the frost nipped at it; the scar’s childhood accident memory flickered—she’d scraped it on a broken fence while running from a stray dog, Evan later mocking her for crying—but she pushed it away."
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"She stepped through the stone’s shadow, and the air shifted—thicker, sweeter, like overripe berries left in a closed jar."
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"She’d hesitated before entering, Eva’s voice echoing in her head (Avoid strange places, Rory—you don’t need more trouble) but the Heartstone’s pulse had been too insistent, a warm thrum that matched the curiosity gnawing at her about the unknown benefactor who’d left it in her flat’s mailbox a month ago."
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"She brushed a strand of hair from her eyes, her fingers grazing the scar on her left wrist—she’d never felt it throb like that, not since the accident."
5
"She bent to pluck a daffodil, its petals soft against her fingers, but when she lifted it to her face, the scent turned to rot—sharp, putrid, making her gag."
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"A sound pricked her ears: not the rustle of leaves, not the hoot of an owl, but the high, thin tinkle of a child’s wind chime—something that had no place in a hidden fae-touched grove."
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"She spun, her jacket’s edge catching on a standing stone, but there was nothing there—only the dark between the oaks, shifting like a curtain pulled by invisible hands."
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"The clock on her phone blurred again, this time snapping to 9:18, but the tightness in her chest told her more time had passed—maybe an hour, maybe more."
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"She reached for her jacket pocket, where she kept a folded delivery receipt she used as a makeshift bookmark for her pre-law textbook—she’d tucked it there that morning before her shift, a reminder of the life she’d fled in Cardiff—but her hand came up empty."
10
"She turned in a slow circle, her boots crunching over grass that now felt like it was wrapping around her ankles—faint, almost imperceptible, but enough to make her yank her foot free."
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"She froze, her bright blue eyes narrowing, her cool-headed streak keeping her from panicking—for now."
12
"No answer, but the shadow shifted again, this time closer, so she could see a flash of something silver—like a chain, but not the thin silver chain of her Heartstone."
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"She wiped at them with her sleeve, and when she looked again, the standing stones had shifted—their positions reversed, so she couldn’t tell which one she’d come through."
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"The moon had shifted so far across the sky it was almost hidden by the oaks—proof that time was warping, just like the grove’s whispered tales she’d dismissed until now."
15
"She thought of her dad’s barrister lectures, of her mom’s Welsh folk stories she’d ignored as a kid, of Eva’s plea to flee Cardiff for London—all of them feeling like distant memories now."
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"She leaned forward, her bright blue eyes scanning the clearing for the source, but there was nothing—only the black wildflowers (they’d turned black while she wasn’t looking, their petals curling into tiny fists) and the shifting dark between the oaks."
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"She pushed off the stone, her straight black hair falling in front of her eyes, and stepped toward the clearing’s center—she had to find the exit, had to get back to her bike, had to finish her delivery before Yu-Fei fired her."
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"A movement caught her peripheral vision again—this time, multiple shadows, all shifting toward her, their shapes twisting like smoke."
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"She’d been so curious about the pendant’s origin, so desperate for answers about who’d given it to her and why, that she’d ignored every warning sign—Eva’s plea, Yu-Fei’s reminder, her own cool-headed sense of self-preservation."
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"She fell to her knees, her hands scraping the frost-dusted earth—she could feel the wildflowers’ tiny fists wrapping around her fingers, pulling her down."
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"She tugged her hands free, her bright blue eyes widening as she saw a figure standing at the edge of the clearing, its face hidden by a hood, its left wrist bearing a scar that glinted in the moon’s faint light—same crescent shape as hers."
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"Cool-headed, quick thinking, that’s who she was, even when she was ditching deliveries to hunt fae-touched groves she’d only heard whispers of in her mom’s old …"
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"She’d hesitated before entering, Eva’s voice echoing in her head (Avoid strange places, Rory—you don’t need more trouble) but the Heartstone’s pulse had been to…"
2
"A sound pricked her ears: not the rustle of leaves, not the hoot of an owl, but the high, thin tinkle of a child’s wind chime—something that had no place in a h…"
3
"She spun, her jacket’s edge catching on a standing stone, but there was nothing there—only the dark between the oaks, shifting like a curtain pulled by invisibl…"
4
"The wildflowers around her had shifted, their petals now facing her, all of them, as if they were watching."
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"She turned in a slow circle, her boots crunching over grass that now felt like it was wrapping around her ankles—faint, almost imperceptible, but enough to make…"
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"She’d dealt with abusive Evan’s mind games, with Yu-Fei’s sharp reminders about late deliveries, but this shadow felt like something she couldn’t reason with, s…"
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"She tugged her hands free, her bright blue eyes widening as she saw a figure standing at the edge of the clearing, its face hidden by a hood, its left wrist bea…"