"It was past midnight, and Eva's flat on Brick Lane hummed with the distant clatter of late-night diners below—spices and laughter filtering up from the curry house."
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"He wore one of those tailored charcoal suits that hugged his lean frame, the ivory-handled cane resting lightly in his right hand—not for show, she knew, but because the half-demon in him carried old wounds from realms she could scarcely imagine."
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"His heterochromatic eyes met hers: one amber, warm as aged whiskey; the other black, an abyss that swallowed secrets whole."
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"It had been six months since she'd walked away—no, run—from the tangled web he'd spun around her life."
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"Things left unsaid piled up like the books stacking every surface in this flat—unopened tomes of what-ifs."
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"At five-foot-six, she wasn't imposing, but her stance—feet planted, chin lifted—dared him to cross the threshold uninvited."
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"Passion had ignited like hellfire—his hands on her skin, her fingers in his hair, the world narrowing to the heat between them."
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"But dawn brought clarity: he was a bridge to the supernatural underbelly she wanted no part of, a man who spoke four languages but never the one she needed—hearts."
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"\"Me? Last I checked, we're done. You got what you wanted—Evan's gone, and I'm just a delivery girl dodging traffic and tipsy tourists.\" She crossed her arms, the sleeves of her oversized sweater—Eva's, threadbare and smelling of ink—riding up to expose the mark on her wrist."
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"The air hummed with unspoken words, the curry house's aromas mingling with his cologne—sandalwood and something darker, infernal."
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"Brendan—stern, unyielding, the Irish force who'd pushed her into Pre-Law before she bolted."
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"The flat behind her felt smaller, the walls closing in with their weight of knowledge and neglect—books teetering on the kitchen counter, research notes pinned to every corkboard, Eva's chaos a mirror to her own unraveling heart."
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"\"Because I can't stay away.\" Lucien set the cane aside, leaning against the frame with deliberate slowness, his height—five-eleven—bringing him just close enough that she could feel the warmth radiating from him."
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"Things left unsaid surged forward: the nights he'd watched her sleep in that flat above the bar, guarding without her knowing; the way her laugh had cracked his armored heart; the fear that his demonic blood would taint her light."
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"Evan had been the liar, the abuser; Lucien had been the one who'd mended what was broken, his touch gentle even as his world raged."
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"The flat's clutter faded—the books, the cat's purring, the distant street noise—until it was just them, suspended in the doorway."
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"She understood enough—love, too much, destroy."
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"Ptolemy yowled in protest from the counter, but she barely registered it—the world was his touch, the press of his body, the way his heterochromatic eyes held hers in the dim light filtering through the curtains."
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"History unraveled here, in this cramped haven of knowledge—attraction reigniting like a spell long dormant, hurt dissolving in the heat of truths finally spoken."
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"\"And neither can I.\" The flat enveloped them—Ptolemy curling on a fallen book, the scent of old paper and new passion mingling—as they reclaimed what was lost, complication be damned."
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"Aurora's fingers lingered on the last lock, her pulse a steady thrum against her wrist where the old crescent scar itched faintly, as if sensing the chill seepi…"
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"His heterochromatic eyes met hers: one amber, warm as aged whiskey; the other black, an abyss that swallowed secrets whole."
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"He didn't budge, his black eye darkening as if pulling in the light."
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"But dawn brought clarity: he was a bridge to the supernatural underbelly she wanted no part of, a man who spoke four languages but never the one she needed—hear…"
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"Brendan—stern, unyielding, the Irish force who'd pushed her into Pre-Law before she bolted."
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"She surged forward, her hands fisting in his lapels, pulling him across the threshold."
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"Lucien groaned low, his cane clattering to the floor as he backed her against the wall, books tumbling in a cascade from a nearby shelf."
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"Aurora's fingers delved into his slicked-back hair, disrupting the perfect lines, while his hands roamed her sides, mapping the curves he'd memorized in dreams."
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"He carried her to the sagging sofa buried under scrolls, laying her down with a reverence that belied his demonic heritage."
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"Aurora pulled him down, their kisses deepening, bodies aligning in a rhythm born of months apart."