Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9S85J1KCJNS4C19WTMMDD

Run Details

Duration:
19.0s
Cost:
$0.000164
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain tasted of iron. It slicked the cobblestones of Richmond Park, reflecting the sickly yellow glow of the streetlights in distorted puddles. Rory pulled her thin jacket tighter, the damp already seeping through the cotton. She’d been walking for an hour, the air growing colder with each step, the trees thickening into a claustrophobic wall. The map, crumpled and damp in her pocket, offered no comfort. It showed a small, unremarkable patch of woodland – The Fae Grove – marked with a single, unsettling question mark. She hadn’t told Eva she was coming. Not really. Just a hurried text: “Need to clear my head. Be back soon.” Eva would have argued. Eva always argued. But Rory needed solitude, a space where the ghost of Evan didn't cling to the air like a particularly persistent fog. The Grove wasn't marked on any official map. Locals dismissed it as a legend, a trick of the light, a place where the old ways still held sway. Rory had found it through a contact – a whispered rumour, a cryptic note slipped into her tip jar at Golden Empress, a small, heavy silver pendant etched with a swirling crimson stone. The Heartstone. It had pulsed against her skin the moment she’d touched it, a strange warmth that had both comforted and terrified her. The standing stones, ancient oaks with gnarled branches reaching like skeletal fingers, materialized abruptly from the gloom. They weren’t a grand, imposing circle like she’d imagined. Just five, weathered and moss-covered, huddled together in a shallow depression. A strange stillness settled over the air, deeper than the rain’s silence. She hesitated, the pendant warm against her chest. It wasn’t a frantic heat, but a slow, deliberate thrum, like a heartbeat struggling to maintain its rhythm. Something pushed against her, a subtle pressure against her mind - not a voice, not a command, just a definite *presence*. “You shouldn’t be here,” a voice whispered, too close for comfort, yet seemingly originating from everywhere and nowhere at once. Rory froze. She swung her head, searching the thickening darkness. Nothing. Only the rain, the trees, and the oppressive sense of being watched. She dismissed it as the rain playing tricks on her ears. She pressed on, navigating through a tangle of ferns and undergrowth. The air grew thick with the scent of damp earth and something else – something floral, sweet, and unsettlingly cloying, like overripe lilies. A twig snapped behind her. She didn’t turn. She forced herself to breathe. It was probably a deer. Richmond Park was full of deer. But the feeling persisted, a prickling unease that crawled beneath her skin. The rain intensified, drumming against the leaves, a frantic, insistent rhythm. The trees seemed to lean closer, their branches interlocking to blot out the remaining light. She pulled out her phone, attempting to get a signal. Nothing. Of course. “Lost, little one?” the voice returned, softer this time, laced with amusement. She spun around, scanning the shadows. Still nothing. "Who's there?" she asked, her voice tight. "Someone who has been waiting a very long time." A flicker of movement caught her eye. A rabbit, white as bone, darted across her path, disappearing into the undergrowth. But as she watched it go, she noticed something else – a flash of crimson amongst the leaves, a brief, unsettling glimpse of the Heartstone pendant. It wasn’t hanging around her neck. Panic tightened its icy grip around her chest. She frantically patted her jacket, her hands searching desperately. The pendant was gone. “Don't bother searching,” the voice said, a hint of malice creeping into its tone. “It doesn’t belong to you.” Another twig snapped, closer this time. She risked a glance, and saw it—a figure partially obscured by the trees, tall and impossibly slender, almost dissolving into the shadows. It wasn’t human. Its limbs were too long, its movements too fluid, its face obscured by a cowl of woven leaves and vines. She didn't scream. She couldn't. Her throat felt constricted, paralyzed by a primal fear she hadn't known she possessed. “You came seeking refuge,” the figure said, its voice a rustle of leaves. “But refuge here demands a price.” The ground beneath her feet began to vibrate, a subtle tremor that grew with each passing second. The standing stones shimmered, their surfaces blurring, as if viewed through disturbed water. The scent of lilies intensified, overwhelming her senses, making her head spin. She tried to move, to run, but her legs felt heavy, rooted to the spot. The figure glided closer, and she could now make out details—eyes that glowed with a faint, internal light, a mouth that was a thin, cruel line hidden beneath the foliage. “The Grove remembers.” It reached out a hand, long and skeletal, and gently brushed the pendant from the ground. The crimson stone pulsed with a blinding light. “You were told it was a gift. A guide.” The air around her shimmered. The trees seemed to twist and contort, their branches reaching out like grasping claws. The rain intensified, now accompanied by a strange, high-pitched whine. She felt a shift, a subtle alteration in the flow of time. An hour she spent battling an unseen terror, could have been mere minutes, or an eternity. "Hel portals," the figure whispered. "They crave warmth. They crave memory." Rory’s mind flooded with fragmented images—Evan’s face, contorted in rage; the sharp sting of the carving on her wrist; the suffocating pressure of his control. Memories she’d buried deep, resurfacing with terrifying clarity, fueled by the pendant’s pulsing energy. The figure leaned closer, its glowing eyes fixed on hers. “You carry the echoes of your pain,” it said. “And the Grove thrives on sorrow.” She realized then that the 'reason' she had come here wasn't to escape Evan, but to bury him, to sever every last connection to that darkness. She had hoped the Grove’s strange temporal properties might offer a reset, a clean slate. “The pendant served its purpose, little one,” the figure continued, a hint of satisfaction in its voice. “Now, you belong to us.” The ground beneath her feet dissolved into swirling mist. The trees closed in, their branches intertwining to form a cage of thorns. She felt herself being drawn downwards, into a darkness deeper than any she had ever known. A single, crimson flower bloomed at her feet, its petals unfolding with agonizing slowness. It smelled of lilies and iron, and as she stared at it, she understood. The Grove wasn't a sanctuary. It was a collector. A patient predator that lured lost souls into its embrace, feeding on their regrets, their fears, their pain. The last thing she saw before the darkness consumed her was the figure, its face still hidden beneath the veil of leaves, a single, crimson eye gleaming in the gloom. It raised a hand, and with a final, chilling whisper, said, “Welcome home.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She realized then [then]"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.083
86.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1149
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1149
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"gloom"
count2
4
word"imposing"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"oppressive"
count1
7
word"sense of"
count1
8
word"navigating"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"shimmered"
count2
12
word"fragmented"
count1
13
word"echoes"
count1
14
word"sanctuary"
count1
15
word"predator"
count1
16
word"the last thing"
count1
17
word"gleaming"
count1
18
word"chilling"
count1
19
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"gloom"
4"imposing"
5"silence"
6"oppressive"
7"sense of"
8"navigating"
9"scanning"
10"flicker"
11"shimmered"
12"fragmented"
13"echoes"
14"sanctuary"
15"predator"
16"the last thing"
17"gleaming"
18"chilling"
19"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences92
matches
0"d in rage"
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1150
ratio0.001
matches
0"presence"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1038
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.48
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Fae1
Grove4
Eva3
Rory5
Evan2
Golden1
Empress1
Heartstone2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"r comfort, yet seemingly originating from ev"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1150
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean37.1
std20.23
cv0.545
sampleLengths
087
149
284
349
447
520
668
736
839
912
1015
119
1252
1321
1419
1551
1619
1719
1842
1945
2027
219
2257
2311
2439
2525
2641
2722
2838
2955
3043
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"was gone"
1"being drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs176
matches
0"was coming"
1"wasn’t hanging"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences99
ratio0.081
matches
0"It showed a small, unremarkable patch of woodland – The Fae Grove – marked with a single, unsettling question mark."
1"Rory had found it through a contact – a whispered rumour, a cryptic note slipped into her tip jar at Golden Empress, a small, heavy silver pendant etched with a swirling crimson stone."
2"Something pushed against her, a subtle pressure against her mind - not a voice, not a command, just a definite *presence*."
3"The air grew thick with the scent of damp earth and something else – something floral, sweet, and unsettlingly cloying, like overripe lilies."
4"But as she watched it go, she noticed something else – a flash of crimson amongst the leaves, a brief, unsettling glimpse of the Heartstone pendant."
5"She risked a glance, and saw it—a figure partially obscured by the trees, tall and impossibly slender, almost dissolving into the shadows."
6"The figure glided closer, and she could now make out details—eyes that glowed with a faint, internal light, a mouth that was a thin, cruel line hidden beneath the foliage."
7"Rory’s mind flooded with fragmented images—Evan’s face, contorted in rage; the sharp sting of the carving on her wrist; the suffocating pressure of his control."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount886
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, heavy silver pendant"
1"strange, high-pitched whine."
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03724604966139955
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.014672686230248307
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean11.62
std7.08
cv0.61
sampleLengths
05
118
213
320
411
520
67
72
816
93
1021
118
1220
1333
142
1521
1617
179
1811
1912
208
2118
2221
2320
242
258
261
2712
2811
2911
3023
315
323
335
345
356
3612
3711
3815
3910
401
412
4212
436
442
457
469
477
4813
4926
39.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.31313131313131315
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"Just a hurried text: Eva"
1"Just five, weathered and moss-covered,"
2"Only the rain, the trees,"
ratio0.036
60.96% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences83
matches
0"It slicked the cobblestones of"
1"She’d been walking for an"
2"It showed a small, unremarkable"
3"She hadn’t told Eva she"
4"It had pulsed against her"
5"They weren’t a grand, imposing"
6"She hesitated, the pendant warm"
7"It wasn’t a frantic heat,"
8"She swung her head, searching"
9"She dismissed it as the"
10"She pressed on, navigating through"
11"She didn’t turn."
12"She forced herself to breathe."
13"It was probably a deer."
14"She pulled out her phone,"
15"She spun around, scanning the"
16"she asked, her voice tight"
17"It wasn’t hanging around her"
18"She frantically patted her jacket,"
19"She risked a glance, and"
ratio0.398
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences83
matches
0"The rain tasted of iron."
1"It slicked the cobblestones of"
2"Rory pulled her thin jacket"
3"She’d been walking for an"
4"The map, crumpled and damp"
5"It showed a small, unremarkable"
6"She hadn’t told Eva she"
7"Eva always argued."
8"The Grove wasn't marked on"
9"Locals dismissed it as a"
10"Rory had found it through"
11"It had pulsed against her"
12"The standing stones, ancient oaks"
13"They weren’t a grand, imposing"
14"A strange stillness settled over"
15"She hesitated, the pendant warm"
16"It wasn’t a frantic heat,"
17"Something pushed against her, a"
18"a voice whispered, too close"
19"She swung her head, searching"
ratio0.928
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"It had pulsed against her skin the moment she’d touched it, a strange warmth that had both comforted and terrified her."
1"But the feeling persisted, a prickling unease that crawled beneath her skin."
2"The standing stones shimmered, their surfaces blurring, as if viewed through disturbed water."
3"The scent of lilies intensified, overwhelming her senses, making her head spin."
4"The figure glided closer, and she could now make out details—eyes that glowed with a faint, internal light, a mouth that was a thin, cruel line hidden beneath t…"
5"The trees seemed to twist and contort, their branches reaching out like grasping claws."
6"A patient predator that lured lost souls into its embrace, feeding on their regrets, their fears, their pain."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she asked, her voice tight"
1"the voice said, a hint of malice creeping into its tone"
2"the figure said, its voice a rustle of leaves"
3"the figure continued, a hint of satisfaction in its voice"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"a voice whispered (whisper)"
1"the figure whispered (whisper)"
2"the figure continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.333
72.9169%