| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She realized then [then]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 86.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1149 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1149 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "etched" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "imposing" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "sense of" | | 8 | "navigating" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "fragmented" | | 13 | "echoes" | | 14 | "sanctuary" | | 15 | "predator" | | 16 | "the last thing" | | 17 | "gleaming" | | 18 | "chilling" | | 19 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | | |
| 80.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1150 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1038 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.48 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Eva | 3 | | Rory | 5 | | Evan | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "r comfort, yet seemingly originating from ev" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 37.1 | | std | 20.23 | | cv | 0.545 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 84 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 57 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 55 | | 30 | 43 |
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| 97.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "being drawn" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | 0 | "was coming" | | 1 | "wasn’t hanging" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.081 | | matches | | 0 | "It showed a small, unremarkable patch of woodland – The Fae Grove – marked with a single, unsettling question mark." | | 1 | "Rory had found it through a contact – a whispered rumour, a cryptic note slipped into her tip jar at Golden Empress, a small, heavy silver pendant etched with a swirling crimson stone." | | 2 | "Something pushed against her, a subtle pressure against her mind - not a voice, not a command, just a definite *presence*." | | 3 | "The air grew thick with the scent of damp earth and something else – something floral, sweet, and unsettlingly cloying, like overripe lilies." | | 4 | "But as she watched it go, she noticed something else – a flash of crimson amongst the leaves, a brief, unsettling glimpse of the Heartstone pendant." | | 5 | "She risked a glance, and saw it—a figure partially obscured by the trees, tall and impossibly slender, almost dissolving into the shadows." | | 6 | "The figure glided closer, and she could now make out details—eyes that glowed with a faint, internal light, a mouth that was a thin, cruel line hidden beneath the foliage." | | 7 | "Rory’s mind flooded with fragmented images—Evan’s face, contorted in rage; the sharp sting of the carving on her wrist; the suffocating pressure of his control." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 886 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, heavy silver pendant" | | 1 | "strange, high-pitched whine." |
| | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.03724604966139955 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014672686230248307 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 11.62 | | std | 7.08 | | cv | 0.61 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 39.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.31313131313131315 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a hurried text: Eva" | | 1 | "Just five, weathered and moss-covered," | | 2 | "Only the rain, the trees," |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 60.96% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "It slicked the cobblestones of" | | 1 | "She’d been walking for an" | | 2 | "It showed a small, unremarkable" | | 3 | "She hadn’t told Eva she" | | 4 | "It had pulsed against her" | | 5 | "They weren’t a grand, imposing" | | 6 | "She hesitated, the pendant warm" | | 7 | "It wasn’t a frantic heat," | | 8 | "She swung her head, searching" | | 9 | "She dismissed it as the" | | 10 | "She pressed on, navigating through" | | 11 | "She didn’t turn." | | 12 | "She forced herself to breathe." | | 13 | "It was probably a deer." | | 14 | "She pulled out her phone," | | 15 | "She spun around, scanning the" | | 16 | "she asked, her voice tight" | | 17 | "It wasn’t hanging around her" | | 18 | "She frantically patted her jacket," | | 19 | "She risked a glance, and" |
| | ratio | 0.398 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain tasted of iron." | | 1 | "It slicked the cobblestones of" | | 2 | "Rory pulled her thin jacket" | | 3 | "She’d been walking for an" | | 4 | "The map, crumpled and damp" | | 5 | "It showed a small, unremarkable" | | 6 | "She hadn’t told Eva she" | | 7 | "Eva always argued." | | 8 | "The Grove wasn't marked on" | | 9 | "Locals dismissed it as a" | | 10 | "Rory had found it through" | | 11 | "It had pulsed against her" | | 12 | "The standing stones, ancient oaks" | | 13 | "They weren’t a grand, imposing" | | 14 | "A strange stillness settled over" | | 15 | "She hesitated, the pendant warm" | | 16 | "It wasn’t a frantic heat," | | 17 | "Something pushed against her, a" | | 18 | "a voice whispered, too close" | | 19 | "She swung her head, searching" |
| | ratio | 0.928 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.16% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "It had pulsed against her skin the moment she’d touched it, a strange warmth that had both comforted and terrified her." | | 1 | "But the feeling persisted, a prickling unease that crawled beneath her skin." | | 2 | "The standing stones shimmered, their surfaces blurring, as if viewed through disturbed water." | | 3 | "The scent of lilies intensified, overwhelming her senses, making her head spin." | | 4 | "The figure glided closer, and she could now make out details—eyes that glowed with a faint, internal light, a mouth that was a thin, cruel line hidden beneath t…" | | 5 | "The trees seemed to twist and contort, their branches reaching out like grasping claws." | | 6 | "A patient predator that lured lost souls into its embrace, feeding on their regrets, their fears, their pain." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, her voice tight" | | 1 | "the voice said, a hint of malice creeping into its tone" | | 2 | "the figure said, its voice a rustle of leaves" | | 3 | "the figure continued, a hint of satisfaction in its voice" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "the figure whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "the figure continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.389 | | leniency | 0.778 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |