| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.522 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 76.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1065 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "nervously" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1065 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "gleaming" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "remarkable" | | 5 | "echoes" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "chilling" | | 8 | "glistening" | | 9 | "chaotic" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "oppressive" | | 12 | "hulking" | | 13 | "disrupting" | | 14 | "reminder" | | 15 | "testament" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | matches | | |
| 42.61% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1074 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 888 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.68 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 3 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Nyx | 4 | | Rory | 6 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 2 | | Dymas | 4 | | Veil | 1 | | Isolde | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Prince" | | 4 | "Belphegor" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "something like burnt sugar as they stepped t" | | 1 | "vineyards that seemed to weep crimson juice and orchards laden with fruit the size of fists" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to absorb the light" | | 3 | "ts, their eyes seemingly following their eve" |
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| 13.78% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.862 | | wordCount | 1074 | | matches | | 0 | "not of earth, but of honey" | | 1 | "not words, exactly, but a low, constant hum of contentment" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 51.14 | | std | 30.17 | | cv | 0.59 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 112 | | 1 | 99 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 85 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 65 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 57 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 111 |
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| 92.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "were engaged" | | 1 | "was filled" |
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| 54.01% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "were battling" | | 1 | "were being" | | 2 | "was weakening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 68 | | ratio | 0.132 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thrummed with the murmur of countless voices – not words, exactly, but a low, constant hum of contentment and, disturbingly, desperation." | | 1 | "Nyx shifted, coalescing slightly to become more defined – a tall, androgynous figure draped in shadows that seemed to absorb the light." | | 2 | "They passed tables laden with impossible delicacies – sugared insects, glistening fruits that pulsed with an inner light, and towering platters of roasted meats that exuded a heady, intoxicating aroma." | | 3 | "“Look,” Rory pointed to a courtyard ahead, where a group of demons – grotesque, multi-limbed creatures with eyes like burning coals – were engaged in a fierce culinary competition." | | 4 | "Statues of grotesque figures – bloated figures gorging themselves on endless feasts – lined the streets, their eyes seemingly following their every move." | | 5 | "Then they heard it – a sound like a thousand whispered regrets, a chorus of longing and despair." | | 6 | "The hall was filled with chefs – or rather, what remained of them – suspended in mid-air, their bodies slowly dissolving into a swirling mass of ingredients." | | 7 | "Suddenly, a figure detached itself from the shadows – Prince Belphegor, the ruler of Dymas." | | 8 | "She felt a sudden, sharp awareness of the Veil, a shimmering distortion just visible at the edge of the hall – a thin, fragile barrier between their world and this nightmare." |
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| 98.47% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 641 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.0343213728549142 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0218408736349454 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 68 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 68 | | mean | 15.79 | | std | 8.64 | | cv | 0.547 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 74.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 68 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Then they heard it –" | | 1 | "Suddenly, a figure detached itself" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 70.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "It pressed against her skin," | | 1 | "It wasn't a city in" | | 2 | "She didn't look at them," | | 3 | "It pulsed with a faint" | | 4 | "she said, her voice tighter" | | 5 | "Their voice was a whisper" | | 6 | "They began to walk, following" | | 7 | "They passed tables laden with" | | 8 | "They were battling over a" | | 9 | "It grew louder as they" | | 10 | "They were being" | | 11 | "they said, their voice almost" | | 12 | "He was a mountain of" | | 13 | "He looked at them, his" | | 14 | "he boomed, his voice laced" | | 15 | "she said, trying to keep" | | 16 | "He gestured to a pair" | | 17 | "She felt a sudden, sharp" | | 18 | "It was weakening." | | 19 | "she said, turning to Isolde" |
| | ratio | 0.375 | |
| 22.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of overripe" | | 1 | "Rory coughed, pulling her scarf" | | 2 | "It pressed against her skin," | | 3 | "Isolde moved with a disconcerting" | | 4 | "Dymas pulsed around them, a" | | 5 | "The sky was a sickly" | | 6 | "Buildings, crafted from a dark," | | 7 | "It wasn't a city in" | | 8 | "The air thrummed with the" | | 9 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a" | | 10 | "She didn't look at them," | | 11 | "Rory adjusted the Heartstone Pendant" | | 12 | "It pulsed with a faint" | | 13 | "she said, her voice tighter" | | 14 | "Eva swallowed, her hand tightening" | | 15 | "Nyx shifted, coalescing slightly to" | | 16 | "Their voice was a whisper" | | 17 | "They began to walk, following" | | 18 | "The ground beneath their feet" | | 19 | "They passed tables laden with" |
| | ratio | 0.875 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 46.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Eva shifted nervously, clutching the Fae-Forged Blade in a way that suggested she’d rather be facing a demon than this." | | 1 | "The sky was a sickly warm amber, casting long, distorted shadows over vineyards that seemed to weep crimson juice and orchards laden with fruit the size of fist…" | | 2 | "It pulsed with a faint warmth now, a steady beat against her skin that mirrored the unsettling rhythm of the place." | | 3 | "Nyx shifted, coalescing slightly to become more defined – a tall, androgynous figure draped in shadows that seemed to absorb the light." | | 4 | "They passed tables laden with impossible delicacies – sugared insects, glistening fruits that pulsed with an inner light, and towering platters of roasted meats…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a delicate ripple in the humid air" | | 1 | "she said, her voice tighter than she liked" | | 2 | "Isolde observed, her voice devoid of judgment" | | 3 | "Eva whispered, her face pale" | | 4 | "they said, their voice almost mournful" | | 5 | "she said, trying to keep her voice steady" |
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| 19.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde observed (observe)" | | 2 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.304 | | leniency | 0.609 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.261 | |