| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 24 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory pulled away [away]" | | 1 | "Lucien said softly [softly]" | | 2 | "he said smoothly [smoothly]" | | 3 | "He glanced around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.558 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 95.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1118 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.08% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1118 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "intensity" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "efficient" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "glinting" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "unreadable" | | 7 | "dance" | | 8 | "desire" | | 9 | "navigated" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "flicked" | | 12 | "unspoken" | | 13 | "familiar" | | 14 | "churning" | | 15 | "treacherous" | | 16 | "flicker" | | 17 | "comforting" | | 18 | "anticipation" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1115 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 806 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.11 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Lucien | 17 | | Moreau | 1 | | Years | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Eva | 3 | | Serpent | 1 | | Eye | 1 | | Mediterranean | 1 | | Ptolemy | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Serpent" | | 5 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.445 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 29.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like ash in her mouth" | | 1 | "seemed terrifyingly real" | | 2 | "something akin to anticipation in his eyes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.88% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 28.59 | | std | 13.68 | | cv | 0.479 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 45 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 50 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 58 | | 36 | 46 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | | |
| 83.95% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't anger; it was something colder, more unsettling." | | 1 | "“Then I’m afraid there will be consequences. For you. For your friends.” His gaze flicked to a framed photograph on the mantelpiece – Rory, Eva, and a younger, less guarded version of herself." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 807 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.03469640644361834 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0161090458488228 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 11.49 | | std | 6.62 | | cv | 0.576 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 61.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3917525773195876 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 44.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, Lucien Moreau stood there," |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 38.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "She expected Yu-Fei to be" | | 1 | "He hadn't changed." | | 2 | "His eyes, one amber, one" | | 3 | "she said, the word escaping" | | 4 | "His lips curved into a" | | 5 | "He tilted his head, an" | | 6 | "He stepped inside, ignoring the" | | 7 | "He moved with unnerving grace," | | 8 | "she said, trying to inject" | | 9 | "He stopped near the worn" | | 10 | "He paused, his gaze locking" | | 11 | "Her blood ran cold." | | 12 | "He simply studied her, his" | | 13 | "She shuddered, pushing the memory" | | 14 | "She'd heard whispers about it" | | 15 | "She’d been young, reckless, desperate" | | 16 | "she managed, her voice barely" | | 17 | "He tilted his head again," | | 18 | "He took a step closer," | | 19 | "It wasn't anger; it was" |
| | ratio | 0.453 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The hallway smelled of curry" | | 1 | "Rory didn’t bother locking the" | | 2 | "Rain plastered her hair to" | | 3 | "She expected Yu-Fei to be" | | 4 | "He hadn't changed." | | 5 | "The platinum blond hair was" | | 6 | "His eyes, one amber, one" | | 7 | "she said, the word escaping" | | 8 | "Years seemed to dissolve in" | | 9 | "His lips curved into a" | | 10 | "He tilted his head, an" | | 11 | "Rory pushed the door wider," | | 12 | "He stepped inside, ignoring the" | | 13 | "That was always Lucien’s word" | | 14 | "He moved with unnerving grace," | | 15 | "Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, arched his" | | 16 | "she said, trying to inject" | | 17 | "Lucien replied, his voice smooth" | | 18 | "He stopped near the worn" | | 19 | "Rory crossed her arms, leaning" |
| | ratio | 0.947 | |
| 66.67% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing here with Lucien," |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 47.62% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "His eyes, one amber, one black, fixed on her with an intensity that made her stomach clench." | | 1 | "He moved with unnerving grace, his gaze sweeping the flat, lingering on the stacks of books threatening to topple from every surface." | | 2 | "Rory squeezed her eyes shut, fighting the onslaught of images, the heat of the Mediterranean sun, the intoxicating scent of spices, Lucien’s hand brushing again…" | | 3 | "Resentment, fear, and a treacherous flicker of something that felt dangerously like attraction." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 24 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, the word escaping before she could stop it" | | 1 | "she said, trying to inject a note of dismissiveness into her voice" | | 2 | "Lucien replied, his voice smooth as silk" | | 3 | "He paused, his gaze locking with hers" | | 4 | "Rory repeated, her voice tighter," | | 5 | "Lucien countered, his voice low" | | 6 | "she managed, her voice barely a whisper" | | 7 | "she said, her voice low and dangerous" | | 8 | "He glanced around, a hint of something akin to anticipation in his eyes" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory repeated (repeat)" | | 1 | "Rory snapped (snap)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.233 | | leniency | 0.465 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.093 | |