Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9SP79KDWGT0D8P0M8G4HB

Run Details

Duration:
36.7s
Cost:
$0.000249
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The hallway smelled of curry and stale beer. Rory didn’t bother locking the door, just pulled it open a crack, peering out. Rain plastered her hair to her forehead. She expected Yu-Fei to be hounding her about a late delivery. Instead, Lucien Moreau stood there, impossibly dry, framed by the dim light of the stairwell. He hadn't changed. The platinum blond hair was slicked back, the charcoal suit impeccable. His eyes, one amber, one black, fixed on her with an intensity that made her stomach clench. “Lucien,” she said, the word escaping before she could stop it. Years seemed to dissolve in the space between them. His lips curved into a slow smile. “Aurora. Fancy meeting you here.” He tilted his head, an elegant gesture that infuriated her. “What are you doing here?” Rory pushed the door wider, attempting a casualness she didn’t feel. “This isn’t exactly a social call.” “I require your assistance.” He stepped inside, ignoring the invitation, the scent of expensive cologne filling the small space. “And I thought a face-to-face meeting would be more…efficient.” Rory bristled. Efficient. That was always Lucien’s word for everything that involved her. He moved with unnerving grace, his gaze sweeping the flat, lingering on the stacks of books threatening to topple from every surface. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, arched his back, hissing from his perch on a particularly precarious pile of scrolls. “I’m a delivery person, Lucien,” she said, trying to inject a note of dismissiveness into her voice. “I deliver General Tso’s Chicken. I don’t ‘assist’ anyone, especially not you.” “A remarkably versatile skillset,” Lucien replied, his voice smooth as silk. He stopped near the worn armchair, the ivory handle of his cane glinting in the weak light. “But I’m confident you'll find this request… compelling.” Rory crossed her arms, leaning against the doorframe. “Compelling how?” “It concerns a certain artifact.” He paused, his gaze locking with hers. “One you might recognize.” Her blood ran cold. “What artifact?” The question felt thin, inadequate against the weight of the memories he evoked. Lucien didn't answer immediately. He simply studied her, his expression unreadable. “Let’s just say it involves a rather unfortunate incident in Marseille. Several years ago.” Marseille. The word tasted like ash in her mouth. A humid night, a crowded market, a thrill she’d mistaken for freedom. And Lucien, always just out of reach, a dangerous dance of desire and deception. She shuddered, pushing the memory down. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.” Rory pulled away from the doorframe, needing distance. “Don’t play coy, Aurora. It doesn’t suit you.” Lucien’s smile widened, sharper now. “The Serpent’s Eye has resurfaced. And I believe you have a connection to it.” The Serpent’s Eye. A cursed amulet, rumored to grant the wearer immense power, but at a terrible cost. She'd heard whispers about it back then, dismissed them as folklore. Now, standing here with Lucien, the stories seemed terrifyingly real. “I told you,” Rory repeated, her voice tighter, “I don’t know anything about any artifact.” “You helped retrieve it,” Lucien countered, his voice low. “You were quite instrumental, in fact. A rather impressive display of resourcefulness, if I recall correctly.” Rory squeezed her eyes shut, fighting the onslaught of images, the heat of the Mediterranean sun, the intoxicating scent of spices, Lucien’s hand brushing against hers as they navigated the labyrinthine market stalls. She’d been young, reckless, desperate to escape the stifling predictability of her life. “That was years ago,” she managed, her voice barely a whisper. “I was…different then.” “People rarely change entirely, Aurora,” Lucien said softly. He tilted his head again, studying her with unnerving intensity. “Certain tendencies remain. Certain skills persist.” He took a step closer, and Ptolemy let out a furious yowl, leaping from the armchair and launching himself at Lucien’s ankles. Lucien, with a casual flick of his wrist, deflected the cat with his cane, barely registering the feline assault. “Don’t change the subject,” Rory snapped, scooping Ptolemy into her arms. “I’m not doing anything for you. Now, leave.” Lucien’s smile faded, replaced by an expression that was difficult to decipher. It wasn't anger; it was something colder, more unsettling. “You misunderstand, Aurora,” he said smoothly. “I’m not asking. I’m informing you.” He paused, letting the words hang in the air. “The artifact is dangerous. It requires specific handling. And you, it seems, are the only one who possesses the necessary…expertise.” “And if I refuse?” Lucien shrugged, a gesture of careless indifference. “Then I’m afraid there will be consequences. For you. For your friends.” His gaze flicked to a framed photograph on the mantelpiece – Rory, Eva, and a younger, less guarded version of herself. The threat was clear, unspoken but undeniable. Rory's hand tightened on Ptolemy, the cat’s fur digging into her skin. “Don’t threaten me,” she said, her voice low and dangerous. “I prefer to call it…persuasion.” Lucien’s eyes gleamed with an unsettling amusement. "Consider this a professional courtesy, Aurora. Considering our history." He hadn't mentioned it directly, but the subtext was deafening. The history of stolen glances, whispered promises, and a night she’d tried to forget. She felt a familiar ache in her chest, a painful awareness of the connection that still lingered between them, despite everything. “What do you want me to do?” Rory asked, the words tasting like defeat. Lucien’s smile returned, a predatory curve of his lips. “First, you’ll tell me everything you remember about the Serpent’s Eye. Every detail, no matter how insignificant it may seem.” He paused, his eyes fixed on a small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. “And then, we’ll discuss the next steps.” He moved closer, his voice dropping to a low murmur. “It seems our paths have crossed again, Aurora. Perhaps this time, we can reach a more…satisfactory resolution.” Rory stared at him, a whirlwind of emotions churning within her. Resentment, fear, and a treacherous flicker of something that felt dangerously like attraction. She hated him. She should hate him. But despite everything, despite the hurt and the betrayal, a part of her still recognized the allure, the dark charisma that had drawn her in years ago. She looked down at Ptolemy, nestled securely in her arms, his purrs a comforting rumble against her chest. Eva was upstairs, likely immersed in her research, oblivious to the storm brewing downstairs. Rory had to protect them. She had to play along, at least for now. “Alright,” she said, the word heavy with reluctance. “I’ll tell you what I remember.” Lucien inclined his head. “Excellent. Perhaps this won’t be so tedious after all.” He glanced around the cluttered flat, a hint of something akin to anticipation in his eyes. "Shall we begin with Marseille?"
created_at"2026-02-20T19:52:59.892Z" 2/20/2026, 7:52:59 PM
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provider_responses
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Rory pulled away [away]"
1"Lucien said softly [softly]"
2"he said smoothly [smoothly]"
3"He glanced around [around]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.558
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
95.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"intensity"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"efficient"
count2
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"dance"
count1
8
word"desire"
count1
9
word"navigated"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"flicked"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count1
13
word"familiar"
count1
14
word"churning"
count1
15
word"treacherous"
count1
16
word"flicker"
count1
17
word"comforting"
count1
18
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"stomach"
2"efficient"
3"silk"
4"glinting"
5"weight"
6"unreadable"
7"dance"
8"desire"
9"navigated"
10"whisper"
11"flicked"
12"unspoken"
13"familiar"
14"churning"
15"treacherous"
16"flicker"
17"comforting"
18"anticipation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1115
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount806
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.11
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Yu-Fei1
Lucien17
Moreau1
Years1
Rory13
Eva3
Serpent1
Eye1
Mediterranean1
Ptolemy5
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Serpent"
5"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.445
windowScore0.167
29.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like ash in her mouth"
1"seemed terrifyingly real"
2"something akin to anticipation in his eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1115
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
93.88% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean28.59
std13.68
cv0.479
sampleLengths
055
131
220
322
422
528
652
729
836
910
1016
1119
1225
1341
1415
1527
1639
1715
1825
1946
2014
2124
2241
2319
2421
2541
264
2740
2819
2910
3021
3145
3214
3350
3427
3558
3646
3714
3834
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs137
matches
0"was deafening"
83.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences97
ratio0.021
matches
0"It wasn't anger; it was something colder, more unsettling."
1"“Then I’m afraid there will be consequences. For you. For your friends.” His gaze flicked to a framed photograph on the mantelpiece – Rory, Eva, and a younger, less guarded version of herself."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount807
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03469640644361834
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.0161090458488228
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean11.49
std6.62
cv0.576
sampleLengths
08
114
27
311
415
53
611
717
811
99
107
1115
1216
136
1419
159
162
171
1810
1922
2017
2117
2212
2311
2417
258
268
272
2812
294
304
3115
324
337
3414
351
368
3712
3814
396
4015
4113
4214
433
4415
4511
4610
4715
489
4916
61.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3917525773195876
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners38
44.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Instead, Lucien Moreau stood there,"
ratio0.013
38.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences75
matches
0"She expected Yu-Fei to be"
1"He hadn't changed."
2"His eyes, one amber, one"
3"she said, the word escaping"
4"His lips curved into a"
5"He tilted his head, an"
6"He stepped inside, ignoring the"
7"He moved with unnerving grace,"
8"she said, trying to inject"
9"He stopped near the worn"
10"He paused, his gaze locking"
11"Her blood ran cold."
12"He simply studied her, his"
13"She shuddered, pushing the memory"
14"She'd heard whispers about it"
15"She’d been young, reckless, desperate"
16"she managed, her voice barely"
17"He tilted his head again,"
18"He took a step closer,"
19"It wasn't anger; it was"
ratio0.453
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences75
matches
0"The hallway smelled of curry"
1"Rory didn’t bother locking the"
2"Rain plastered her hair to"
3"She expected Yu-Fei to be"
4"He hadn't changed."
5"The platinum blond hair was"
6"His eyes, one amber, one"
7"she said, the word escaping"
8"Years seemed to dissolve in"
9"His lips curved into a"
10"He tilted his head, an"
11"Rory pushed the door wider,"
12"He stepped inside, ignoring the"
13"That was always Lucien’s word"
14"He moved with unnerving grace,"
15"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, arched his"
16"she said, trying to inject"
17"Lucien replied, his voice smooth"
18"He stopped near the worn"
19"Rory crossed her arms, leaning"
ratio0.947
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Now, standing here with Lucien,"
ratio0.013
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"His eyes, one amber, one black, fixed on her with an intensity that made her stomach clench."
1"He moved with unnerving grace, his gaze sweeping the flat, lingering on the stacks of books threatening to topple from every surface."
2"Rory squeezed her eyes shut, fighting the onslaught of images, the heat of the Mediterranean sun, the intoxicating scent of spices, Lucien’s hand brushing again…"
3"Resentment, fear, and a treacherous flicker of something that felt dangerously like attraction."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"she said, the word escaping before she could stop it"
1"she said, trying to inject a note of dismissiveness into her voice"
2"Lucien replied, his voice smooth as silk"
3"He paused, his gaze locking with hers"
4"Rory repeated, her voice tighter,"
5"Lucien countered, his voice low"
6"she managed, her voice barely a whisper"
7"she said, her voice low and dangerous"
8"He glanced around, a hint of something akin to anticipation in his eyes"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory repeated (repeat)"
1"Rory snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.465
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.093
73.7012%