Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9SSDG6B0RSYAV0341V0YZ

Run Details

Duration:
21.5s
Cost:
$0.000195
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the concrete ceiling of the abandoned Tube station, a relentless drumming that swallowed the city’s usual drone. Water pooled on the tracks, reflecting the weak beams of my flashlight. The air tasted of mildew and something ancient, metallic. “Doesn’t scream ‘crime scene’ to me,” Eva muttered, her round glasses sliding down her nose as she tucked a stubborn curl behind her ear. She held her leather satchel tighter, the pages rustling softly. “It’s quiet,” I replied, my voice clipped. “Too quiet.” Detective Harlow Quinn. Metropolitan Police, eighteen years decorated. Military precision was ingrained in my movements, a habit formed from years of structured training. And right now, that precision felt strained, brittle. The victim lay sprawled on the platform, a tableau of crimson against the damp stone. A man, mid-forties, dressed in a tailored suit – ridiculously out of place here. No obvious wounds. Just… stillness. His eyes were open, staring at a point above the tracks, a vacant, unsettling expression. “Cause of death?” I asked, kneeling beside him. “Preliminary report says cardiac arrest,” Sergeant Davies stated, his voice echoing slightly in the cavernous space. He was a plodding, by-the-book type, and frankly, he always seemed a little overwhelmed by anything remotely unusual. “But there’s something… off.” I ignored him, focusing on the details. The suit was immaculate, despite the grime. No struggle marks. The rain hadn't touched him, not really. It beaded off his jacket, skipping down his expensive trousers. A silver pen lay clutched in his hand, its nib snapped. “Anything in his pockets?” Davies rummaged through the man’s inside jacket. “Wallet, phone, keys. Driver’s license – Charles Beaumont. Investment banker. No known enemies.” “Let’s see the phone,” I said, taking the device. It was locked, of course. Standard procedure. Eva moved closer, her freckled face a study in concentration. “The ambient energy is… chaotic,” she said, her voice hushed. “Like a disrupted current. Strongest near the body.” I glanced at her, acknowledging her observation without commenting. Eva’s expertise in the occult was invaluable, if occasionally unsettling. She’d been tracking strange energy fluctuations for months, pinpointing their source to this… place. The Veil Market. “The bone token,” I said, pulling a small, bleached animal bone from my pocket. It was my key, my entry into this underworld of the strange and the forbidden. I pressed it to the ground beside the victim’s hand. A ripple shimmered through the air, almost imperceptible. The rain intensified, swirling around the bone before fading back to a steady deluge. The silence returned, thicker now, heavier. “Davies, secure the perimeter,” I ordered, my voice firm. “No one in or out.” He nodded, turning to radio for backup. I knelt again, examining the victim’s hand more closely. The silver pen. The way his fingers were curled around it. It wasn’t a desperate grip. It was… deliberate. “He was trying to write something,” I said, my voice low. Eva approached, studying the pen with a magnifying glass she’d pulled from her satchel. “Look,” she said, pointing to a faint residue on the nib. “Trace elements of shadowed ink. Very rare. Only used by Shade artisans at The Veil Market.” Shade artisans. Craftspeople who dealt in enchanted goods, bound to the darker energies of the supernatural. The Veil Market itself was a chaotic, ever-shifting black market that operated beneath London, accessible only through specific, often dangerous, portals. “This isn’t a natural death,” I stated, my gaze sweeping across the platform. “This is something… else.” Davies returned, followed by two uniformed officers. “Forensics are on their way, Detective.” “Hold off on the forensic sweep,” I said. “I want a full spectral analysis. And I want to know everything you can find on Charles Beaumont. His contacts, his investments, his… associates.” He raised an eyebrow. “Associates? With whom?” “Anyone who might have a reason to silence him,” I replied, my eyes fixed on the object in Beaumont’s hand. The broken pen. “This wasn’t a random act. It was a message.” I stood, my hand instinctively reaching for my worn leather watch. It wasn’t just a timepiece; it contained a minuscule, shielded device, capable of detecting and analyzing supernatural signatures. I activated it, directing the scanner towards the victim’s body. The watch’s display flickered, then settled on a complex waveform. “Significant energy signature detected,” a synthesized voice announced. “Complex, layered. Matching the Veil Compass.” The Veil Compass. A small, brass compass crafted by Shade artisans, its needle attuned to supernatural rifts. It was extremely rare, and incredibly valuable. “He was tracking something,” I muttered, a chilling realization dawning on me. “Something he shouldn’t have been.” Eva was examining the walls of the platform, running her fingers along the rough concrete. “There’s a faint etching here,” she said, pointing to a barely visible symbol. “A warding sigil. Ancient. Protective. But it’s been… disrupted.” “Disrupted how?” She traced the lines of the sigil with her finger. “The energy flow is like a river, diverted. Someone—or something—forced it to flow in a different direction.” I stepped closer, examining the sigil myself. It depicted a stylized eye, surrounded by swirling lines. A classic symbol of protection, but the disruption suggested a violation. A deliberate act. “Davies, check the ventilation shafts,” I ordered. “See if you can find any recent activity. And Eva, what kind of energy signature are we dealing with? What’s the Compass pointing towards?” Eva fiddled with her satchel, pulling out a small notebook and a miniature spectrometer. “The Compass is reacting strongly to a convergence point – a weak spot in the veil. It’s fluctuating wildly. The energy is… resonant. Like a memory, imprinted on the fabric of reality.” I continued my investigation, my focus narrowing. The victim’s stance, the unbroken pen, the disrupted warding sigil, the Veil Compass needle. It all pointed to a deliberate act of silencing, one shrouded in supernatural intent. This wasn't a simple murder. This was an interference. “There’s something else,” Eva said, her voice suddenly urgent. “The ambient energy… it’s not just chaotic. There’s a trace of *familiarity*. Like a signature from someone who’s been here before.” She paused, her green eyes widening. “Someone who knows about the Veil Market.” I felt a prickle of unease, a shadow of recognition. Three years. Three years since Detective Morris had vanished during a case involving a similar, unexplained event – a ritualistic killing with no earthly explanation. The circumstances had been officially ruled as a suicide, but I'd always suspected something far darker. Perhaps Morris had stumbled upon something he shouldn’t have within the Veil Market. “Davies, contact control,” I said, my voice hardening. “Inform them we have a potential connection to the Veil Market. And tell them to pull up everything they have on Charles Beaumont’s recent financial transactions. I want to know who he was dealing with, and how much money he was moving into and out of this city.” As Davies radioed for backup, I turned back to the victim’s body, studying his face. His vacant stare suddenly seemed less unsettling, more… mournful. He hadn't died of a broken heart, or a sudden illness. He'd been silenced. And the silence, I realized, was only the beginning. My watch beeped, alerting me to a sustained spike in the spectral analysis. I followed the line of energy, the Veil Compass needle spinning wildly, before settling on a single, specific point on the far wall of the platform. Behind a crumbling section of concrete, barely visible in the dim light, I found it – a hairline crack, a shimmering distortion. A gateway. “That’s where he was going,” I said, my hand instinctively reaching for my service pistol. The air grew colder, the smell of mildew intensifying. “Someone wanted to keep him from crossing that threshold.” Eva moved beside me, her face pale. “Detective Quinn,” she whispered, pointing to the crack in the wall. "The Compass isn’t just pointing *towards* a rift. It’s pointing *back*.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.489
leniency0.978
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1322
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"very"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1322
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count3
3
word"disrupted"
count4
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"spectral"
count2
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"complex"
count2
10
word"chilling"
count1
11
word"etching"
count1
12
word"traced"
count1
13
word"potential"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"standard"
2"chaotic"
3"disrupted"
4"shimmered"
5"silence"
6"spectral"
7"eyebrow"
8"flickered"
9"complex"
10"chilling"
11"etching"
12"traced"
13"potential"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences107
matches
0"felt a prickle"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1321
ratio0.002
matches
0"familiarity"
1"towards"
2"back"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount942
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.85
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Veil"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Detective2
Harlow1
Quinn1
Police1
Sergeant1
Davies4
Veil6
Market3
Eva8
Shade2
London1
Beaumont1
Compass3
Morris2
persons
0"Detective"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Sergeant"
4"Davies"
5"Eva"
6"Compass"
7"Morris"
places
0"Veil"
1"London"
2"Beaumont"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1321
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
96.11% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean30.72
std14.94
cv0.486
sampleLengths
041
134
29
331
449
58
638
745
84
920
1016
1128
1236
1339
1428
1514
1635
1711
1841
1937
2017
2113
2232
237
2432
2539
2624
2724
2817
2937
302
3127
3230
3331
3446
3544
3643
3764
3856
3947
4063
4133
4229
92.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences107
matches
0"was ingrained"
1"was locked"
2"were curled"
3"been silenced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was examining"
54.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences130
ratio0.031
matches
0"A man, mid-forties, dressed in a tailored suit – ridiculously out of place here."
1"It wasn’t just a timepiece; it contained a minuscule, shielded device, capable of detecting and analyzing supernatural signatures."
2"Three years since Detective Morris had vanished during a case involving a similar, unexplained event – a ritualistic killing with no earthly explanation."
3"Behind a crumbling section of concrete, barely visible in the dim light, I found it – a hairline crack, a shimmering distortion."
96.92% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount943
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.041357370095440084
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.022269353128313893
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean10.16
std6.93
cv0.682
sampleLengths
020
112
29
324
410
57
62
73
85
915
108
1115
1214
133
141
151
1615
178
1816
1918
204
217
227
233
247
2510
2611
274
287
2913
309
315
322
3310
3410
358
369
3710
3813
391
403
4114
4215
4310
448
4514
466
479
485
497
62.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4153846153846154
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners54
35.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Perhaps Morris had stumbled upon"
ratio0.011
30.53% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences95
matches
0"She held her leather satchel"
1"I replied, my voice clipped"
2"His eyes were open, staring"
3"I asked, kneeling beside him"
4"He was a plodding, by-the-book"
5"I ignored him, focusing on"
6"It beaded off his jacket,"
7"I said, taking the device"
8"It was locked, of course."
9"she said, her voice hushed"
10"I glanced at her, acknowledging"
11"She’d been tracking strange energy"
12"I said, pulling a small,"
13"It was my key, my"
14"I pressed it to the"
15"I ordered, my voice firm"
16"He nodded, turning to radio"
17"I knelt again, examining the"
18"It wasn’t a desperate grip."
19"I said, my voice low"
ratio0.474
7.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences95
matches
0"Rain lashed against the concrete"
1"Water pooled on the tracks,"
2"The air tasted of mildew"
3"Eva muttered, her round glasses"
4"She held her leather satchel"
5"I replied, my voice clipped"
6"Detective Harlow Quinn."
7"Military precision was ingrained in"
8"The victim lay sprawled on"
9"A man, mid-forties, dressed in"
10"His eyes were open, staring"
11"I asked, kneeling beside him"
12"Sergeant Davies stated, his voice"
13"He was a plodding, by-the-book"
14"I ignored him, focusing on"
15"The suit was immaculate, despite"
16"The rain hadn't touched him,"
17"It beaded off his jacket,"
18"A silver pen lay clutched"
19"Davies rummaged through the man’s"
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rain lashed against the concrete ceiling of the abandoned Tube station, a relentless drumming that swallowed the city’s usual drone."
1"Craftspeople who dealt in enchanted goods, bound to the darker energies of the supernatural."
2"The Veil Market itself was a chaotic, ever-shifting black market that operated beneath London, accessible only through specific, often dangerous, portals."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"I replied, my voice clipped"
1"Sergeant Davies stated, his voice echoing slightly in the cavernous space"
2"she said, her voice hushed"
3"I ordered, my voice firm"
4"I said, my voice low"
5"I stated, my gaze sweeping across the platform"
6"I muttered, a chilling realization dawning on me"
7"Eva said, her voice suddenly urgent"
8"She paused, her green eyes widening"
9"I said, my voice hardening"
10"I said, my hand instinctively reaching for my service pistol"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Eva muttered (mutter)"
1"Sergeant Davies stated (state)"
2"I ordered (order)"
3"I stated (state)"
4"voice announced (announce)"
5"I muttered (mutter)"
6"I ordered (order)"
7"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0.381
effectiveRatio0.356
75.1214%