Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9SZGERDTW1D6DK0EZ6C86

Run Details

Duration:
2m 19s
Cost:
$0.011996
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain lashed London’s Soho sidewalks, turning puddles into dark mirrors that caught the flicker of The Raven’s Nest’s green neon sign—its glow seeping through the bar’s fogged windows to paint the wet concrete in sickly streaks. Detective Harlow Quinn pressed her back to a soot-stained brick wall, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull, her worn leather watch digging into her left wrist as she curled her fingers into a fist. She’d staked the bar for three nights straight, her military precision keeping her motionless through each downpour, each distant siren wailing over Soho’s neon-lit chaos, each murmur of cliquesmen slipping through the hidden back room’s bookshelf door—she’d spotted the hinge glint once, when a bartender had reached for a tattered map on the wall. The Raven’s Nest’s interior hummed with unspoken secrets: old maps of supernatural ley lines tacked to the walls, black-and-white photographs of long-dead clique leaders staring down from above the bar, the faint scent of banned alchemical smoke seeping through the cracks. Then he emerged. A lanky man with a ragged wool coat slung over one shoulder, his hood pulled low to hide his face, his hand clamped around a small, off-white object Quinn’s sharp eyes pegged as a bone token—she’d seen the same pitted trinket in a seized clique ledger two weeks prior, its pages scrawled with notes about the Veil Market’s moving locations and entry requirements. He glanced over his shoulder, his jaw tight enough to make his cheekbone bulge, and bolted. Quinn pushed off the wall. Her boot slammed into a puddle, sending water arching over a parked bicycle’s rusted handlebars. She didn’t yell. Yells wasted breath, gave the suspect a head start to dart into Soho’s narrow alleyways. She tracked his strides, her 5’9” frame eating up the slick asphalt faster than he anticipated—her military training turning each splash of rain into a marker, each skid of his sneakers into a clue. The man darted around a stack of discarded cardboard boxes, his coat catching on a rusted fire escape’s rungs, and stumbled. Quinn closed the gap by three feet, her fingers brushing the edge of her utility belt where she kept her cuffs and a tattered photo of her late partner, DS Morris. He veered north, toward Camden, his sneakers skidding on the wet curbs as he cut through a crowd of rain-drenched tourists hovering outside a kebab shop. Quinn wove through the crowd, her sharp jaw tightening when a tourist’s umbrella jabbed her in the shoulder—she didn’t pause, didn’t apologize, her focus locked on the suspect’s hooded figure. He reached a chained-off subway entrance, its metal grates corroded with age, the words “Camden Town Abandoned” stenciled on a peeling sign above. He fumbled with the bone token, pressing it to a hidden slot on the grate. A click echoed through the rain. The grates swung inward, and he slipped down the stone steps. Quinn skidded to a halt at the entrance. She grabbed the chain, her fingers slick with rain and rust, and tugged. It didn’t budge—not without the token. She scanned the street, her brown eyes darting past closed record shops and graffiti-tagged walls, and spotted him. Tomás Herrera leaned against a flickering lamppost, his short curly dark brown hair matted with rain, his olive skin glistening under the light. His Saint Christopher medallion hung from his neck, bouncing lightly as he shifted his weight, and the scar running along his left forearm stretched when he crossed his arms. Quinn recognized him immediately—intelligence reports linked him to the clique’s off-the-books medical care, his lost NHS license a mark of his ties to supernatural patients he’d treated with unauthorized remedies. She’d tracked his movements for a week, seen him slip into The Raven’s Nest’s secret room twice to patch up clique members with claw marks and alchemical burns. You’re here for the market. Quinn’s words cut through the rain’s drumming, sharp as a knife’s edge. Tomás’s head snapped up, his warm brown eyes narrowing into slits. He pushed off the lamppost, his boots crunching on a broken glass bottle’s shards. You don’t belong here, detective. Quinn stepped closer, her military bearing pinning him in place—her shoulders squared, her posture rigid, every muscle coiled for action. She nodded toward the subway entrance, where the faint hum of the Veil Market’s stalls now seeped through the stone steps. The man I’m chasing slipped down there. He’s got a bone token. He’s part of the clique running enchanted goods through Soho’s back alleys—goods that left a kid in St. Thomas’ with glowing bruises last month. Tomás’s scar tensed as he clenched his fist. He glanced at the entrance, then back at Quinn, his medallion catching the lamppost’s light. He’d been at the lamppost for ten minutes, waiting for a market vendor to sell him a vial of enchanted salve for a clique patient with a supernatural burn that wouldn’t heal. He sighed, then dug a small bone token from his coat pocket—he’d kept it hidden since he lost his license, a last resort for emergency supplies. You’ll need this. But if the market’s enforcers catch you, I don’t know you. They skin cops alive for trespassing, feed their bones to enchanted hounds. Quinn grabbed the token. She tested its weight in her palm, the rough bone’s pits digging into her skin—she thought of Morris, of the night he’d vanished in an abandoned Tube station just like this one, his radio cutting out mid-sentence, a single bone token left on the ground where he’d stood. She leaned in, her sharp jaw set so tight her molars ached. I don’t care about the enforcers. I care about the clique that’s hiding the truth about Morris’s death. The supernatural twist no one’s willing to talk about. Tomás’s medallion glinted as he turned his head, listening for the distant clink of market stall glass vials. He recalled the night he lost his license: a supernatural patient with wings tangled in a power line, his NHS supervisor refusing to let Tomás administer the enchanted antidote that would save him, Tomás injecting it anyway and watching the wings fade into thin air—only to be fired the next day. The clique’s been pushing banned alchemical substances on runaways, too. I found a kid last week with a vial of red potion in his pocket, his skin peeling off in scales. I can’t let that keep going. Quinn nodded. She turned toward the subway entrance, the token clutched in her fist. The rain continued to lash the street, but she barely noticed—her focus narrowed to the stone steps ahead, to the suspect’s footprints marking the damp ground. She paused at the first step, her boot hovering over the cold stone, and glanced back at Tomás. If I don’t come back, tell no one where I went. Not my captain, not the coroner. Just burn Morris’s old case file I left in the park bench’s hidden compartment. Tomás crossed his arms, his warm brown eyes locked on hers. He’d seen cops fold under the market’s pressure before, but Quinn didn’t look like she’d fold—she looked like the kind of person who’d fight enchanted hounds with her bare hands if it meant finding the truth. I won’t have to. You’ve got more fight in you than the NHS supervisors who fired me. You’ll come back. Quinn stepped down the first step. The stone was cold, slick with moisture, and the sound of the rain faded behind her as she descended. She could hear the distant murmur of voices now—rough, guttural, laced with accents from supernatural realms—the clink of glass vials, the rustle of enchanted fabrics woven from fairy silk, the faint snarl of an enchanted hound in the distance. She tightened her grip on the bone token, her military precision kicking in as she scanned the dark tunnel ahead. The suspect’s footprints marked the damp ground, leading deeper into the market’s labyrinth—each print smudged with the same alchemical smoke she’d smelled in The Raven’s Nest. She had a choice: turn back, return to the familiar rain-soaked streets and the Metropolitan Police’s rulebook, return to staking out The Raven’s Nest’s green neon sign and waiting for another kid to get hurt. Or press forward into the unfamiliar, dangerous territory of the Veil Market—where banned alchemical substances, enchanted goods, and information about supernatural crimes were sold openly, where enforcers patrolled with enchanted hounds, where the clique’s secrets were hidden in every stall’s shadow. She took another step down the stairs, her boot sinking into a puddle of rainwater that had seeped through the stone, and continued toward the murmur of the market. She didn’t look back. She didn’t hesitate. She just kept moving, her leather watch ticking against her wrist, a reminder of Morris’s unsolved death, a reminder of the fight she’d started three years ago and would finish no matter what the Veil Market threw at her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1519
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1519
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count2
5
word"glistening"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count2
highlights
0"flicker"
1"glint"
2"unspoken"
3"echoed"
4"scanned"
5"glistening"
6"weight"
7"silk"
8"familiar"
9"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched his fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences31
matches(empty)
4.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences31
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"start to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences31
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen266
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1486
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1396
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
London1
Soho4
Raven5
Nest5
Harlow1
Quinn13
Veil4
Market4
Camden1
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
St1
Morris4
Tube1
Tomás8
Metropolitan1
Police1
You5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Market"
5"Herrera"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Morris"
9"Tomás"
10"Police"
11"You"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Camden"
3"St"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences25
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like the kind of person who’d figh"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1486
matches(empty)
59.14% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences31
matches
0"let that keep"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean67.55
std61.67
cv0.913
sampleLengths
0169
182
2124
3111
4155
55
612
725
85
941
1036
1181
1226
1364
1427
1569
1637
1758
1831
1947
2020
21261
93.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences31
matches
0"were sold"
1"were hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs243
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences31
ratio0.419
matches
0"The rain lashed London’s Soho sidewalks, turning puddles into dark mirrors that caught the flicker of The Raven’s Nest’s green neon sign—its glow seeping through the bar’s fogged windows to paint the wet concrete in sickly streaks."
1"She’d staked the bar for three nights straight, her military precision keeping her motionless through each downpour, each distant siren wailing over Soho’s neon-lit chaos, each murmur of cliquesmen slipping through the hidden back room’s bookshelf door—she’d spotted the hinge glint once, when a bartender had reached for a tattered map on the wall."
2"A lanky man with a ragged wool coat slung over one shoulder, his hood pulled low to hide his face, his hand clamped around a small, off-white object Quinn’s sharp eyes pegged as a bone token—she’d seen the same pitted trinket in a seized clique ledger two weeks prior, its pages scrawled with notes about the Veil Market’s moving locations and entry requirements."
3"He veered north, toward Camden, his sneakers skidding on the wet curbs as he cut through a crowd of rain-drenched tourists hovering outside a kebab shop. Quinn wove through the crowd, her sharp jaw tightening when a tourist’s umbrella jabbed her in the shoulder—she didn’t pause, didn’t apologize, her focus locked on the suspect’s hooded figure. He reached a chained-off subway entrance, its metal grates corroded with age, the words “Camden Town Abandoned” stenciled on a peeling sign above. He fumbled with the bone token, pressing it to a hidden slot on the grate. A click echoed through the rain. The grates swung inward, and he slipped down the stone steps."
4"Quinn skidded to a halt at the entrance. She grabbed the chain, her fingers slick with rain and rust, and tugged. It didn’t budge—not without the token. She scanned the street, her brown eyes darting past closed record shops and graffiti-tagged walls, and spotted him. Tomás Herrera leaned against a flickering lamppost, his short curly dark brown hair matted with rain, his olive skin glistening under the light. His Saint Christopher medallion hung from his neck, bouncing lightly as he shifted his weight, and the scar running along his left forearm stretched when he crossed his arms. Quinn recognized him immediately—intelligence reports linked him to the clique’s off-the-books medical care, his lost NHS license a mark of his ties to supernatural patients he’d treated with unauthorized remedies. She’d tracked his movements for a week, seen him slip into The Raven’s Nest’s secret room twice to patch up clique members with claw marks and alchemical burns."
5"Quinn stepped closer, her military bearing pinning him in place—her shoulders squared, her posture rigid, every muscle coiled for action. She nodded toward the subway entrance, where the faint hum of the Veil Market’s stalls now seeped through the stone steps."
6"The man I’m chasing slipped down there. He’s got a bone token. He’s part of the clique running enchanted goods through Soho’s back alleys—goods that left a kid in St. Thomas’ with glowing bruises last month."
7"Tomás’s scar tensed as he clenched his fist. He glanced at the entrance, then back at Quinn, his medallion catching the lamppost’s light. He’d been at the lamppost for ten minutes, waiting for a market vendor to sell him a vial of enchanted salve for a clique patient with a supernatural burn that wouldn’t heal. He sighed, then dug a small bone token from his coat pocket—he’d kept it hidden since he lost his license, a last resort for emergency supplies."
8"Quinn grabbed the token. She tested its weight in her palm, the rough bone’s pits digging into her skin—she thought of Morris, of the night he’d vanished in an abandoned Tube station just like this one, his radio cutting out mid-sentence, a single bone token left on the ground where he’d stood. She leaned in, her sharp jaw set so tight her molars ached."
9"Tomás’s medallion glinted as he turned his head, listening for the distant clink of market stall glass vials. He recalled the night he lost his license: a supernatural patient with wings tangled in a power line, his NHS supervisor refusing to let Tomás administer the enchanted antidote that would save him, Tomás injecting it anyway and watching the wings fade into thin air—only to be fired the next day."
10"Quinn nodded. She turned toward the subway entrance, the token clutched in her fist. The rain continued to lash the street, but she barely noticed—her focus narrowed to the stone steps ahead, to the suspect’s footprints marking the damp ground. She paused at the first step, her boot hovering over the cold stone, and glanced back at Tomás."
11"Tomás crossed his arms, his warm brown eyes locked on hers. He’d seen cops fold under the market’s pressure before, but Quinn didn’t look like she’d fold—she looked like the kind of person who’d fight enchanted hounds with her bare hands if it meant finding the truth."
12"Quinn stepped down the first step. The stone was cold, slick with moisture, and the sound of the rain faded behind her as she descended. She could hear the distant murmur of voices now—rough, guttural, laced with accents from supernatural realms—the clink of glass vials, the rustle of enchanted fabrics woven from fairy silk, the faint snarl of an enchanted hound in the distance. She tightened her grip on the bone token, her military precision kicking in as she scanned the dark tunnel ahead. The suspect’s footprints marked the damp ground, leading deeper into the market’s labyrinth—each print smudged with the same alchemical smoke she’d smelled in The Raven’s Nest. She had a choice: turn back, return to the familiar rain-soaked streets and the Metropolitan Police’s rulebook, return to staking out The Raven’s Nest’s green neon sign and waiting for another kid to get hurt. Or press forward into the unfamiliar, dangerous territory of the Veil Market—where banned alchemical substances, enchanted goods, and information about supernatural crimes were sold openly, where enforcers patrolled with enchanted hounds, where the clique’s secrets were hidden in every stall’s shadow. She took another step down the stairs, her boot sinking into a puddle of rainwater that had seeped through the stone, and continued toward the murmur of the market. She didn’t look back. She didn’t hesitate. She just kept moving, her leather watch ticking against her wrist, a reminder of Morris’s unsolved death, a reminder of the fight she’d started three years ago and would finish no matter what the Veil Market threw at her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount306
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.0196078431372549
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.006535947712418301
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences31
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences31
mean47.94
std51.31
cv1.07
sampleLengths
037
137
254
341
43
563
616
75
815
93
1015
1186
12111
13155
145
1512
1625
175
1841
1936
2081
2126
2264
2327
2469
2537
2658
2731
2847
2920
30261
69.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.41935483870967744
totalSentences31
uniqueOpeners13
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences31
matches
0"Then he emerged."
ratio0.032
78.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences31
matches
0"She’d staked the bar for"
1"He glanced over his shoulder,"
2"Her boot slammed into a"
3"She didn’t yell."
4"She tracked his strides, her"
5"He veered north, toward Camden,"
6"You’re here for the market."
7"You don’t belong here, detective."
8"You’ll need this. But if"
9"I don’t care about the"
10"I won’t have to. You’ve"
ratio0.355
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount29
totalSentences31
matches
0"The rain lashed London’s Soho"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn pressed her"
2"She’d staked the bar for"
3"The Raven’s Nest’s interior hummed"
4"A lanky man with a"
5"He glanced over his shoulder,"
6"Quinn pushed off the wall."
7"Her boot slammed into a"
8"She didn’t yell."
9"Yells wasted breath, gave the"
10"She tracked his strides, her"
11"He veered north, toward Camden,"
12"Quinn skidded to a halt"
13"You’re here for the market."
14"Quinn’s words cut through the"
15"Tomás’s head snapped up, his"
16"You don’t belong here, detective."
17"Quinn stepped closer, her military"
18"The man I’m chasing slipped"
19"Tomás’s scar tensed as he"
ratio0.935
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences31
matches
0"If I don’t come back,"
ratio0.032
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The rain lashed London’s Soho sidewalks, turning puddles into dark mirrors that caught the flicker of The Raven’s Nest’s green neon sign—its glow seeping throug…"
1"Quinn skidded to a halt at the entrance. She grabbed the chain, her fingers slick with rain and rust, and tugged. It didn’t budge—not without the token. She sca…"
2"Tomás’s head snapped up, his warm brown eyes narrowing into slits. He pushed off the lamppost, his boots crunching on a broken glass bottle’s shards."
3"Tomás’s scar tensed as he clenched his fist. He glanced at the entrance, then back at Quinn, his medallion catching the lamppost’s light. He’d been at the lampp…"
4"Quinn grabbed the token. She tested its weight in her palm, the rough bone’s pits digging into her skin—she thought of Morris, of the night he’d vanished in an …"
5"I don’t care about the enforcers. I care about the clique that’s hiding the truth about Morris’s death. The supernatural twist no one’s willing to talk about."
6"Tomás’s medallion glinted as he turned his head, listening for the distant clink of market stall glass vials. He recalled the night he lost his license: a super…"
7"The clique’s been pushing banned alchemical substances on runaways, too. I found a kid last week with a vial of red potion in his pocket, his skin peeling off i…"
8"Quinn nodded. She turned toward the subway entrance, the token clutched in her fist. The rain continued to lash the street, but she barely noticed—her focus nar…"
9"Tomás crossed his arms, his warm brown eyes locked on hers. He’d seen cops fold under the market’s pressure before, but Quinn didn’t look like she’d fold—she lo…"
10"Quinn stepped down the first step. The stone was cold, slick with moisture, and the sound of the rain faded behind her as she descended. She could hear the dist…"
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