Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9T4Z45EQVBSAZH6JP05B8

Run Details

Duration:
6.5s
Cost:
$0.000348
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered weakly against the rain-slicked pavement, its glow bleeding into the puddles like a dying ember. Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something older—dust, ink, the faint metallic tang of old secrets. Rory paused on the threshold, her breath fogging the glass door before she pushed it open. The bell above the door chimed softly, a sound she hadn’t heard in years. The bar was quieter than she remembered. The usual hum of conversation, the clink of glasses, the low murmur of laughter—all of it muted, as if the place itself had exhaled. She scanned the dimly lit space, her fingers tightening around the strap of her messenger bag. The back corner was empty. The booth by the jukebox, too. The long bar stretched ahead, polished wood gleaming under the dim overhead lights. Then she saw him. Silas Blackwood sat at the far end, his back to her, a glass of something amber in front of him. His auburn hair, once a bold chestnut, was now streaked with silver, and his beard—neat, always—had a few more threads of grey woven through it. He wore a dark suit, the lapels slightly frayed at the edges, as if he’d worn it too many times to count. His left leg gave a slight hitch as he turned, the movement slow, deliberate. Rory’s stomach twisted. “Well,” she said, stepping forward. Her voice sounded too loud in the quiet. “If it isn’t the Spymaster himself.” Silas didn’t smile. He didn’t have to. His hazel eyes—sharp as they’d always been—locked onto hers, unreadable. “Rory.” The name tasted like something left unsaid. “Took you long enough.” She slid into the stool beside him, the leather groaning under her weight. The scent of him was familiar—leather, pipe tobacco, something earthy, like damp soil after rain. “Thought you’d retired from people-watching,” she said, nudging a half-empty glass of gin and tonic toward him. “Or at least pretended you had.” Silas took a slow sip, his gaze flickering to the scar on her wrist—the one she’d gotten when she was twelve, climbing a tree to prove she could. “Pretending’s for amateurs,” he murmured. “Besides, the game’s just changed. The rules are different now.” Rory exhaled through her nose, watching the condensation trail from her glass. “So you’re still playing.” “Always have been.” He set the glass down with a quiet *clink*. “You look different.” She laughed, sharp and brittle. “So do you.” A beat of silence. The jukebox in the corner let out a low, mournful hum, the kind of sound that made you want to dance even when you didn’t. “You’re still working for the restaurant, I take it,” Silas said, tilting his head. “Delivery girl, last I heard.” “Still am.” Rory swirled the ice in her drink. “Yu-Fei’s got me running errands, fetching ingredients, that kind of thing. Keeps me busy.” “And the law?” Silas asked, his voice low. “Still chasing it?” Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. “Left that behind.” “Left it behind.” He repeated the words like they tasted sour. “Or ran from it.” She didn’t answer. The memory of Evan’s hands on her wrist, the way he’d laughed when she’d tried to pull away, still made her skin crawl. She’d thought she’d left all that in Cardiff. Thought she’d outrun it. Silas studied her, his expression unreadable. “You look like you’ve been running for a while.” Rory barked out a laugh. “You always did have a way with words.” “Just telling it like it is.” He leaned forward slightly, his voice dropping. “You ever think about why you came back?” The question hit her like a punch to the gut. She’d come back for Eva. For the life she’d left behind. For the idea that maybe, just maybe, she could outrun the past. But she didn’t say any of that. Instead, she reached into her bag and pulled out a folded piece of paper. Slid it across the bar toward him. Silas unfolded it slowly, his eyebrows lifting. It was a map—hand-drawn, ink smudged in places. A route from the docks to a warehouse on the outskirts of the city. “Where’d you get this?” “Doesn’t matter.” Rory’s voice was steady, but her pulse hammered in her throat. “Someone’s moving something. Something big. And I need to know what.” Silas studied the map, his fingers tracing the lines. “And you think I can help.” “You always could find things out.” Rory’s gaze flicked to the signet ring on his right hand—the one she’d never seen him without. “You still got your ways.” He didn’t look up. “Depends on what you’re asking.” “Just tell me who’s behind it.” Rory’s voice was quiet, but there was steel beneath it. “And why.” Silas finally met her eyes. “You sure you want to know?” She didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. The air between them thickened, charged with something unspoken. The weight of years, of choices made and not made, of lives that had diverged and never quite found their way back. Silas exhaled, slow and measured. “Fine. But you’re going to have to earn it.” Rory’s breath caught. “What do you mean?” Silas pushed the map back toward her. “You want answers? Then you’re going to have to prove you’re still the girl I knew.” She opened her mouth to ask what he meant— But the door chimed again, and a gust of cold air rushed in, carrying the scent of rain and something else. Something sharp. Silas’s head snapped toward the entrance. Rory followed his gaze. And froze.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The name tasted like [like]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.053
78.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount944
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount944
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count2
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"dance"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"flicked"
count1
12
word"charged"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"scanned"
2"gleaming"
3"stomach"
4"unreadable"
5"weight"
6"familiar"
7"silence"
8"dance"
9"pulse"
10"tracing"
11"flicked"
12"charged"
13"unspoken"
14"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords930
ratio0.004
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount722
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.66
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Blackwood1
Silas12
Rory11
Evan1
Cardiff1
Eva1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Blackwood"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Eva"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.669
windowScore0.667
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like something left unsaid"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount930
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean22.14
std18.31
cv0.827
sampleLengths
072
171
24
381
43
519
629
751
843
916
1015
118
1229
1319
1423
1511
169
1715
1838
1915
2013
2121
2233
237
2421
2533
2624
2715
2828
299
3018
3111
327
3331
3414
357
3623
379
3823
396
404
412
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"been—locked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences98
ratio0.092
matches
0"Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something older—dust, ink, the faint metallic tang of old secrets."
1"The usual hum of conversation, the clink of glasses, the low murmur of laughter—all of it muted, as if the place itself had exhaled."
2"His auburn hair, once a bold chestnut, was now streaked with silver, and his beard—neat, always—had a few more threads of grey woven through it."
3"His hazel eyes—sharp as they’d always been—locked onto hers, unreadable."
4"The scent of him was familiar—leather, pipe tobacco, something earthy, like damp soil after rain."
5"Silas took a slow sip, his gaze flickering to the scar on her wrist—the one she’d gotten when she was twelve, climbing a tree to prove she could."
6"It was a map—hand-drawn, ink smudged in places."
7"“You always could find things out.” Rory’s gaze flicked to the signet ring on his right hand—the one she’d never seen him without."
8"She opened her mouth to ask what he meant—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount735
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.036734693877551024
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009523809523809525
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean9.49
std6.37
cv0.671
sampleLengths
024
118
216
314
47
524
616
75
86
913
104
1120
1225
1322
1414
153
165
178
186
193
204
2110
228
234
2413
2515
2617
276
2828
295
3010
3112
324
3312
343
355
363
374
3825
3914
405
419
4214
438
443
456
463
4711
484
493
55.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3877551020408163
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners38
95.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Instead, she reached into her"
ratio0.029
94.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences70
matches
0"She scanned the dimly lit"
1"His auburn hair, once a"
2"He wore a dark suit,"
3"His left leg gave a"
4"she said, stepping forward"
5"Her voice sounded too loud"
6"He didn’t have to."
7"His hazel eyes—sharp as they’d"
8"She slid into the stool"
9"she said, nudging a half-empty"
10"He set the glass down"
11"She laughed, sharp and brittle."
12"He repeated the words like"
13"She didn’t answer."
14"She’d thought she’d left all"
15"He leaned forward slightly, his"
16"She’d come back for Eva."
17"It was a map—hand—drawn, ink"
18"He didn’t look up."
19"She didn’t answer."
ratio0.314
24.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences70
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory paused on the threshold,"
2"The bell above the door"
3"The bar was quieter than"
4"The usual hum of conversation,"
5"She scanned the dimly lit"
6"The back corner was empty."
7"The booth by the jukebox,"
8"The long bar stretched ahead,"
9"Silas Blackwood sat at the"
10"His auburn hair, once a"
11"He wore a dark suit,"
12"His left leg gave a"
13"Rory’s stomach twisted."
14"she said, stepping forward"
15"Her voice sounded too loud"
16"Silas didn’t smile."
17"He didn’t have to."
18"His hazel eyes—sharp as they’d"
19"The name tasted like something"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The usual hum of conversation, the clink of glasses, the low murmur of laughter—all of it muted, as if the place itself had exhaled."
1"Silas took a slow sip, his gaze flickering to the scar on her wrist—the one she’d gotten when she was twelve, climbing a tree to prove she could."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Silas asked, his voice low"
1"He leaned, his voice dropping"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"He repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.105
81.6140%