"Beyond the last row of trees, the standing stones loomed—ancient oaks hewn into rough columns, their bark furrowed like old skin."
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"She stepped between two stones, and the air shifted—thicker, warmer, like inhaling hot tea."
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"They stepped through the stones as if they were smoke; their shadow form didn’t part them, just flowed through."
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"The clearing hit her like a tide—wide, circular, ringed with more stones, each carved with spirals and stars."
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"But the sky—*the sky*—was a deep, endless indigo, streaked with clouds that glowed faintly, like embers."
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"Not words, exactly—more a hum, a melody in her bones."
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"But here, in this alien light, she felt something else—*weight*."
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"Isolde’s footprints—*none*—marked the grass, but Nyx tensed, their shadow coiling like a snake."
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"The fountain’s water rippled, and the surface split, revealing a tunnel—black, smooth, like obsidian."
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"The walls of the tunnel were lined with carvings—images of feasts, of people with antlers, of a woman with a dagger in her chest (Rory’s breath hitched at that one)."
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"Images flooded her: a hall of mirrors, each reflecting a different version of herself—Evan, the woman who’d screamed for help in the mirror, the girl who’d dared to run, the one in the mirror with the Fae blade, the pendant warm in her hand."
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"Below, a garden stretched out—rows of fruit trees with leaves that shimmered like coins, bushes covered in berries the color of blood, flowers that smelled like candies and rot."
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"On the pedestal, a heart—large, beating, floating in a pool of liquid that glowed like gold."
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"They stepped through the standing stones, and the world shifted back—warmer, calmer, the compass steady in Rory’s pocket."
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"But Rory knew it was there—always, waiting, for the solstice."
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"They stepped through the stones as if they were smoke; their shadow form didn’t part them, just flowed through."
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"Images flooded her: a hall of mirrors, each reflecting a different version of herself—Evan, the woman who’d screamed for help in the mirror, the girl who’d dare…"
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"Below, a garden stretched out—rows of fruit trees with leaves that shimmered like coins, bushes covered in berries the color of blood, flowers that smelled like…"
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"Nyx was beside her, their shadow form twisted, as if trying to protect her."
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"It was the shadow that didn’t leave you, the friend who knew your scars, the dagger that cut through lies."