| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1123 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.05% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1123 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "practiced ease" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "footfall" | | 4 | "echoing" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "fleeting" | | 8 | "gloom" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "resolving" | | 12 | "intensity" | | 13 | "etched" | | 14 | "glean" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "calculating" | | 17 | "chill" | | 18 | "down her spine" | | 19 | "scanned" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "looked uncomfortable" | | 1 | "a flicker of fear" | | 2 | "felt a chill" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "managed to" | | 1 | "started to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 121 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1127 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 1102 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 9 | | Silas | 1 | | Blackwood | 9 | | Soho | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Berwick | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Northern | 1 | | Line | 1 | | Three | 2 | | Morris | 2 | | Tube | 2 | | Tomás | 3 | | Herrera | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Blackwood" | | 3 | "Nest" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Tomás" | | 6 | "Herrera" | | 7 | "Saint" | | 8 | "Christopher" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Berwick" | | 3 | "Street" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "quite place but suspected were more than just dusty relics" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 40.25 | | std | 22.22 | | cv | 0.552 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 88 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 64 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 68 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 23 |
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| 99.46% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "were unmarked" | | 1 | "was hidden" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "was leading" | | 1 | "was standing" | | 2 | "was haggling" | | 3 | "was teeming" | | 4 | "was talking" | | 5 | "was stepping" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 121 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "Bursting from The Raven’s Nest, shoving a barmaid aside with unnecessary force, and then – sprint." | | 1 | "She focused on the fleeting glimpses of Blackwood's figure ahead – the distinctive curve of his shoulders, the flash of a dark coat disappearing around a corner." | | 2 | "He’d been chasing something similar - whispers of ritual and a network of impossible dealings." | | 3 | "The image of his face – younger, filled with a naive optimism she knew she'd never recapture - flickered behind her eyes." | | 4 | "He was standing at a stall overflowing with strange objects – dried herbs, polished stones, vials filled with shimmering liquids." | | 5 | "She’d found traces of alchemical compounds – compounds that shouldn’t exist." | | 6 | "She wasn't stepping into a police investigation; she was stepping into something else entirely." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 27 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.037037037037037035 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 121 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 121 | | mean | 9.31 | | std | 6.79 | | cv | 0.729 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 53.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.371900826446281 | | totalSentences | 121 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 49.17% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "It matched the feeling in" | | 1 | "He’d given her seventeen" | | 2 | "She adjusted her grip on" | | 3 | "He was at least sixty," | | 4 | "She’d thought for a moment" | | 5 | "Her boots slapped against the" | | 6 | "She focused on the fleeting" | | 7 | "He cut down Berwick Street," | | 8 | "She could hear the faint" | | 9 | "She pulled out her phone," | | 10 | "she muttered, tucking the phone" | | 11 | "He’d been chasing something similar" | | 12 | "She’d dismissed them as the" | | 13 | "She pushed it down, forcing" | | 14 | "She saw him then." | | 15 | "He was standing at a" | | 16 | "He was haggling with a" | | 17 | "Their eyes glowed with an" | | 18 | "She heard snippets of conversations" | | 19 | "She recognized the currency: bone" |
| | ratio | 0.427 | |
| 74.58% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain tasted like ash." | | 1 | "Harlow Quinn didn’t bother wiping" | | 2 | "It matched the feeling in" | | 3 | "He’d given her seventeen" | | 4 | "Antiquarian, collector, purveyor of…" | | 5 | "Things she couldn't quite place" | | 6 | "She adjusted her grip on" | | 7 | "Blackwood hadn’t been subtle getting" | | 8 | "A man his age shouldn't" | | 9 | "He was at least sixty," | | 10 | "She’d thought for a moment" | | 11 | "Her boots slapped against the" | | 12 | "The rain was relentless, a" | | 13 | "Quinn ignored them." | | 14 | "She focused on the fleeting" | | 15 | "He cut down Berwick Street," | | 16 | "Quinn followed without hesitation, the" | | 17 | "Blackwood paused at the edge" | | 18 | "The stairs were unmarked, almost" | | 19 | "She could hear the faint" |
| | ratio | 0.771 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she wasn’t so sure." | | 1 | "Now, she wasn’t so sure." |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Bursting from The Raven’s Nest, shoving a barmaid aside with unnecessary force, and then – sprint." | | 1 | "She’d found traces of alchemical compounds – compounds that shouldn’t exist." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice low" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |