Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9VD95EBZWPERWQX7M9Z1B

Run Details

Duration:
35.8s
Cost:
$0.000229
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain tasted like ash. Harlow Quinn didn’t bother wiping it from her lips. It matched the feeling in her gut. Seventeen blocks. He’d given her seventeen blocks’ head start, weaving through the throngs of late-night revelers and early-morning commuters with a practiced ease that spoke of deliberate evasion. Silas Blackwood. Antiquarian, collector, purveyor of… things. Things she couldn't quite place but suspected were more than just dusty relics. She adjusted her grip on the worn leather strap of her holster, the familiar weight a small comfort in the slick, dark labyrinth of Soho. Blackwood hadn’t been subtle getting away. Bursting from The Raven’s Nest, shoving a barmaid aside with unnecessary force, and then – sprint. A man his age shouldn't move like that. He was at least sixty, if not older. She’d thought for a moment it was all a grand performance, an elaborate attempt to throw her off the scent. Now she wasn’t so sure. Her boots slapped against the wet pavement in a staccato rhythm, each footfall echoing the frantic pulse in her temples. The rain was relentless, a blinding curtain of water blurring the neon signs that pulsed with artificial cheer. Quinn ignored them. She focused on the fleeting glimpses of Blackwood's figure ahead – the distinctive curve of his shoulders, the flash of a dark coat disappearing around a corner. He cut down Berwick Street, then abruptly plunged into a narrow alleyway reeking of damp concrete and stale refuse. Quinn followed without hesitation, the alley opening onto a wider thoroughfare buzzing with the faint hum of the Northern Line. Blackwood paused at the edge of the street, glancing over his shoulder before darting down a set of stairs leading down, down, into the earth. Quinn hesitated. The stairs were unmarked, almost invisible in the gloom. She could hear the faint metallic screech of train wheels echoing from below, mingling with the drip, drip, drip of water. This wasn’t a public access point. This was… something else. She pulled out her phone, the screen offering a momentary shard of brightly lit reality in the oppressive darkness. No signal. Of course. “Damn it,” she muttered, tucking the phone back into her pocket. Three years. Three years since DS Morris had vanished into a similar abyss, swallowed by a darkness she wasn’t even sure existed. He’d been chasing something similar - whispers of ritual and a network of impossible dealings. She’d dismissed them as the fanciful imaginings of a troubled informant. Now, she wasn’t so sure. The image of his face – younger, filled with a naive optimism she knew she'd never recapture - flickered behind her eyes. She pushed it down, forcing herself to focus on the present. Blackwood was down there. And he was leading her somewhere. Taking a deep breath, Quinn descended the stairs. The air grew colder with each step, the smell of rain giving way to something mustier, something ancient. The screech of the trains grew louder, resolving into a low, resonant rumble. At the bottom of the stairs, she found herself in a vast, echoing space. A disused Tube station. But not derelict. Not entirely. The platform stretched out before her, shrouded in a perpetual twilight. Flickering gas lamps, their flames a sickly green, cast long, distorted shadows across the damp concrete. Makeshift stalls lined the platform, illuminated by strings of bare bulbs. Cloaked figures moved amongst them, their faces obscured by shadows. The air thrummed with a low, almost imperceptible energy. This was no abandoned station. This was… something else entirely. She saw him then. Blackwood. He was standing at a stall overflowing with strange objects – dried herbs, polished stones, vials filled with shimmering liquids. He was haggling with a woman whose face was hidden behind a heavy veil, the exchange conducted in hushed tones. Quinn moved cautiously, keeping to the shadows. The place was teeming with people, but they all seemed… different. Taller. Sharper-featured. Their eyes glowed with an unsettling intensity. Not human, not entirely. She heard snippets of conversations in languages she didn't recognize, punctuated by the clinking of coins and the rustling of fabric. She recognized the currency: bone tokens. Small, carved pieces of bone, intricately etched with symbols she couldn't decipher. According to the few whispers she’d managed to glean from her informants, they were the currency of this… underworld. She spotted Tomás Herrera near a stall laden with exotic spices. He was talking to a heavily tattooed man with a single, piercing blue eye. Tomás looked uncomfortable, agitated. His hand instinctively went to the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck. Quinn watched as Tomás handed the man a small pouch, then turned, his gaze meeting hers. He flinched, a flicker of fear in his warm brown eyes. She started towards him, intending to get a read on the situation. “Tomás?” she called out, her voice low. He didn't respond, just averted his gaze and hurried away, disappearing into the throng. Blackwood had finished his transaction. He turned, his gaze sweeping across the platform, and for a moment, his eyes met hers. There was no surprise in his expression, only a cold, calculating amusement. He gave a slight, almost imperceptible nod and then melted back into the crowd. Quinn felt a chill run down her spine. He’d been expecting her. She scanned the platform, trying to get her bearings. This place… it moved. She’d heard whispers of it, the Veil Market. A subterranean black market that catered to the… unusual. It moved locations every full moon, using abandoned Tube stations as temporary havens. A city beneath a city. A world hidden in plain sight. But to enter, one needed a bone token. And she didn't have one. She paused. Should she press on? Follow Blackwood deeper into this labyrinth of the unnatural? She was a police detective, not some ghost hunter. Her job was to uphold the law, to protect the innocent. This… this felt beyond the scope of her authority, beyond the realm of anything she understood. But Blackwood was a suspect in a case that was rapidly becoming more than just petty theft and fraud. She’d found traces of alchemical compounds – compounds that shouldn’t exist. And the victims… the disappearances… they all seemed to lead back to him. Morris. She thought again of his face, the frustration in his eyes, the desperate need to uncover the truth. He’d been so close. And then he’d vanished. Quinn tightened her grip on her holster. Fear was a luxury she couldn't afford. She wasn't stepping into a police investigation; she was stepping into something else entirely. Something dangerous. Something unknown. She took a hesitant step forward, pushing deeper into the heart of the Veil Market, the rain and her old life far above.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"practiced ease"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"footfall"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count3
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"fleeting"
count1
8
word"gloom"
count1
9
word"oppressive"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"resolving"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"etched"
count1
14
word"glean"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count1
16
word"calculating"
count1
17
word"chill"
count1
18
word"down her spine"
count1
19
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"practiced ease"
1"familiar"
2"weight"
3"footfall"
4"echoing"
5"pulse"
6"pulsed"
7"fleeting"
8"gloom"
9"oppressive"
10"flickered"
11"resolving"
12"intensity"
13"etched"
14"glean"
15"flicker"
16"calculating"
17"chill"
18"down her spine"
19"scanned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a flicker of fear"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences121
matches
0"looked uncomfortable"
1"a flicker of fear"
2"felt a chill"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences121
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"started to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1127
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1102
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn9
Silas1
Blackwood9
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Berwick1
Street1
Northern1
Line1
Three2
Morris2
Tube2
Tomás3
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Veil2
Market2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Silas"
2"Blackwood"
3"Nest"
4"Morris"
5"Tomás"
6"Herrera"
7"Saint"
8"Christopher"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Berwick"
3"Street"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite place but suspected were more than just dusty relics"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1127
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences121
matches
0"signs that pulsed"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean40.25
std22.22
cv0.552
sampleLengths
069
188
268
364
442
523
664
743
88
954
1057
1110
1245
1352
1437
1568
1619
1714
1847
1912
2054
2113
2251
2343
241
2526
2632
2723
99.46% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences121
matches
0"were unmarked"
1"was hidden"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs175
matches
0"was leading"
1"was standing"
2"was haggling"
3"was teeming"
4"was talking"
5"was stepping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences121
ratio0.058
matches
0"Bursting from The Raven’s Nest, shoving a barmaid aside with unnecessary force, and then – sprint."
1"She focused on the fleeting glimpses of Blackwood's figure ahead – the distinctive curve of his shoulders, the flash of a dark coat disappearing around a corner."
2"He’d been chasing something similar - whispers of ritual and a network of impossible dealings."
3"The image of his face – younger, filled with a naive optimism she knew she'd never recapture - flickered behind her eyes."
4"He was standing at a stall overflowing with strange objects – dried herbs, polished stones, vials filled with shimmering liquids."
5"She’d found traces of alchemical compounds – compounds that shouldn’t exist."
6"She wasn't stepping into a police investigation; she was stepping into something else entirely."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount27
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.037037037037037035
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean9.31
std6.79
cv0.729
sampleLengths
05
19
27
32
426
52
64
71
813
925
106
1116
128
138
1420
155
1620
1718
183
1927
2019
2120
2225
232
249
2521
266
272
282
2919
302
312
3211
332
3420
3515
3611
375
3822
3911
404
416
428
4318
4413
4514
464
473
482
4911
53.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.371900826446281
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences96
matches
0"It matched the feeling in"
1"He’d given her seventeen"
2"She adjusted her grip on"
3"He was at least sixty,"
4"She’d thought for a moment"
5"Her boots slapped against the"
6"She focused on the fleeting"
7"He cut down Berwick Street,"
8"She could hear the faint"
9"She pulled out her phone,"
10"she muttered, tucking the phone"
11"He’d been chasing something similar"
12"She’d dismissed them as the"
13"She pushed it down, forcing"
14"She saw him then."
15"He was standing at a"
16"He was haggling with a"
17"Their eyes glowed with an"
18"She heard snippets of conversations"
19"She recognized the currency: bone"
ratio0.427
74.58% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences96
matches
0"The rain tasted like ash."
1"Harlow Quinn didn’t bother wiping"
2"It matched the feeling in"
3"He’d given her seventeen"
4"Antiquarian, collector, purveyor of…"
5"Things she couldn't quite place"
6"She adjusted her grip on"
7"Blackwood hadn’t been subtle getting"
8"A man his age shouldn't"
9"He was at least sixty,"
10"She’d thought for a moment"
11"Her boots slapped against the"
12"The rain was relentless, a"
13"Quinn ignored them."
14"She focused on the fleeting"
15"He cut down Berwick Street,"
16"Quinn followed without hesitation, the"
17"Blackwood paused at the edge"
18"The stairs were unmarked, almost"
19"She could hear the faint"
ratio0.771
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences96
matches
0"Now she wasn’t so sure."
1"Now, she wasn’t so sure."
ratio0.021
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Bursting from The Raven’s Nest, shoving a barmaid aside with unnecessary force, and then – sprint."
1"She’d found traces of alchemical compounds – compounds that shouldn’t exist."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she called out, her voice low"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
75.1509%