| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 698 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 698 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "porcelain" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "tension" | | 12 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 22 | | markdownWords | 93 | | totalWords | 691 | | ratio | 0.135 | | matches | | 0 | "\"You seek the truth, but truth is a knife with two edges. Cut too deep, and you bleed into the other side.\"" | | 1 | "shifted" | | 2 | "\"This is not a place for the living.\"" | | 3 | "moved" | | 4 | "\"The Grove does not sleep. It watches.\"" | | 5 | "between" | | 6 | "\"We should go.\"" | | 7 | "\"Not yet,\"" | | 8 | "\"The first step is the hardest.\"" | | 9 | "gave" | | 10 | "squelch" | | 11 | "vein" | | 12 | "spoke" | | 13 | "\"You are not meant to be here.\"" | | 14 | "thud" | | 15 | "everywhere and nowhere" | | 16 | "feel" | | 17 | "\"The first vision is never the one you expect.\"" | | 18 | "between" | | 19 | "way" | | 20 | "\"That’s not a path. That’s an invitation.\"" | | 21 | "\"The Grove does not give gifts. It takes.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.47% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 612 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.47 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Grove | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Isolde | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.765 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if testing the limits of their own existence" | | 1 | "quite sunlight" | | 2 | "as if sensing the same unease coiling in her gut" |
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| 55.28% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.447 | | wordCount | 691 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the sky, but from *between* the trees" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 20.94 | | std | 14.23 | | cv | 0.679 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.108 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter—like honeyed wine left too long in the sun." | | 1 | "The Grove wasn’t just a place—it was a wound in the world, breathing." | | 2 | "Ahead, the standing stones loomed—ancient sentinels carved with symbols that made her stomach twist." | | 3 | "Not under her weight—under the weight of something else." | | 4 | "And at its tip—" | | 5 | "Then—" | | 6 | "A gust of wind howled through the clearing—not from the sky, but from *between* the trees." | | 7 | "A *way*—twisting and turning like a living thing, lined with flowers that bloomed upside-down, their petals dripping something dark and sticky." | | 8 | "The scent hit Rory first—rot and something sweet, like spoiled fruit left in the sun." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 619 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.03877221324717286 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006462035541195477 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 8.33 | | std | 5.52 | | cv | 0.663 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 38.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.30120481927710846 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 53.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Slowly, like a heartbeat." |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t recognise them, but" | | 1 | "She was too busy watching" | | 2 | "It coiled upward, twisting toward" | | 3 | "It was *vein*, pulsing with" | | 4 | "Its mouth opened, though there" | | 5 | "She barely kept herself upright." | | 6 | "She could *feel* the Grove" |
| | ratio | 0.113 | |
| 80.97% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped forward, her" | | 2 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 3 | "The Grove wasn’t just a" | | 4 | "Isolde’s voice slithered through the" | | 5 | "Rory ignored the riddle, her" | | 6 | "The moment her palm grazed" | | 7 | "The trees around them leaned" | | 8 | "The air thickened, pressing against" | | 9 | "Some looked like faces." | | 10 | "Others like warnings." | | 11 | "She didn’t recognise them, but" | | 12 | "Nyx’s voice was a breath" | | 13 | "Rory didn’t answer." | | 14 | "She was too busy watching" | | 15 | "The moss here wasn’t just" | | 16 | "Isolde’s silver hair shimmered, catching" | | 17 | "Rory’s hand flew to the" | | 18 | "The metal was cold, a" | | 19 | "The dagger hummed faintly, as" |
| | ratio | 0.758 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 44.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped forward, her boots sinking into moss that clung to the roots of trees with bark like cracked porcelain." | | 1 | "Beside her, Nyx moved like a shadow given form, their silhouette stretching and contracting as if testing the limits of their own existence." | | 2 | "Ahead, the standing stones loomed—ancient sentinels carved with symbols that made her stomach twist." | | 3 | "A *way*—twisting and turning like a living thing, lined with flowers that bloomed upside-down, their petals dripping something dark and sticky." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |