Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9W6XBHM13XNEQYXRJP3VB

Run Details

Duration:
26.4s
Cost:
$0.001120
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The path to the grove narrowed as they stepped into Richmond Park, but Aurora didn’t slow. Her boots crunched over fallen leaves—oak, she thought, old enough to have seen the grove’s first standing stones, though she’d never seen them before. Silent beside her, Nyx’s shadow seemed to huddle, as if the sun itself made them nervous. Behind them, Isolde glided, a silver trail of hair brushing the grass, no mark where her feet touched. Aurora’s heart thudded, but not from exertion. The Heartstone Pendant against her breastbone pulsed, a faint, stubborn warmth, like a fly trapped in amber. *Hel portal*, she thought. *Eva said—* but Eva’s face was a blur, swamped by the memory of Evan’s fist on the wall. She shucked the thought, pressed her fist to the pendant. The warmth flared, brief, then stilled. “Stop,” Nyx whispered. Their voice was a chill wind through the trees, and Aurora stopped. Ahead, the oak trees thickened, their trunks gnarled, bark scored with runes that glowed faintly when she blinked. Between them, a gap: not a path, but a *crack* in the world. Light leaked through—golden, not sunlight. Not real. Isolde stepped forward. Her lavender eyes widened, but she said nothing. She reached the crack, placed a hand on it, and stepped through. Her shadow dissolved into the light. Aurora glanced at Nyx, who huffed, a sound like embers popping. “Don’t watch me,” they said. “It’s rude.” Aurora smirked, but their hands shook as she stepped toward the crack. The runes flared brighter, sharp as a blade, but the warmth in her pendant grew, steady now. She slipped through. The air hit her first—thick, sweet, like ripe peaches and burnt sugar. She blinked. The trees peeled back, replaced by a sky the color of warm amber, streaked with clouds that looked like spun honey. Below, the land rolled in green hills, dotted with vineyards and orchards. Grapes the size of apples dangled from vines, their skin purple as blood. Pomegranates split open, spilling seeds that glowed like rubies. “Dymas,” Isolde said, her voice soft. “Prince Belphegor’s domain.” Aurora turned. The others stood nearby—Nyx, their form solid, though their violet eyes were narrow. Isolde hovered, her silver hair catching the light. *No footprints*, Aurora realized. She looked down, saw no marks in the grass, not even where Isolde stood. “Excess,” Nyx said, as if reading her mind. “Hel loves to show off. Souls contract to cook, to feast, to make the Envoy *happy*.” They nodded at a figure in the distance, a tall man with a crown of leaves, stirring a pot the size of a cottage. His skin was gray, his eyes milky—Helbound, then. “You eat, you work. It’s the deal. They don’t *die* here. Just… *exist*.” Aurora stepped closer to the nearest vine. A grape brushed her palm, and she tasted something wild on the air—cinnamon, starlight, a hint of iron. She plucked one, bit into it. Juice burst, sweet and sharp, and her pendant flared. She gasped. The grape went limp, brown, as if rotting before her eyes. “Be careful,” Isolde said. “The Heartstone doesn’t like what’s here. It remembers.” Aurora stared at the pendant. Its crimson stone glowed, the inner light bright as a candle. “Who gave this to me?” she asked. Isolde’s lips pressed thin. “A question with a thousand answers. Follow the rift.” She pointed. Aurora turned. A mile away, a low wall of mist rolled toward them, soft and thick, but within it, she saw flicker of light—flame, maybe, or magic. The pendant pulsed again, louder, as if *urging* her. Nyx shifted, their shadow stretching toward the mist. “Wardens?” they said. “Monitoring rift points. The Veil’s weak this time of year.” They glanced at the sky, amber now bleaching to pink. “Winter solstice. Fitting. The Veil’s thinnest when the world’s asleep.” Aurora walked toward the mist. The grass grew taller, its blades silver, and she heard voices—laughter, clinking glasses, a man singing in a language that made her bones tingle. She reached the mist, pushed through. It wasn’t cold, but *thick*, like stepping into a fog that smelled of stew. Behind her, the amber sky faded. The group stood in a clearing, surrounded by stone arches, ivy tangled through the cracks. In the center, a pool of black water, the surface rippling as if alive. “The Gate,” Isolde said. “To Evan’s realm. To… *you*.” Aurora’s breath hitched. Evan. The name tasted like poison. She stepped closer to the pool. The water stilled, and for a moment, she saw his face—pale, twisted, the night he’d raised his hand. She flinched, and the water erupted, a wave of blackness that her Fae blade *should* have stopped, but she hadn’t drawn it. Nyx stepped in front of her, their shadow coiling into a barrier. The wave hit them, dissolved, and Nyx staggered. “Demon,” they said, gritting their teeth. “Hel’s not just feasts. It’s hunger. You can’t fight it with mortal steel.” Aurora drew the Fae blade—Isolde had pressed it into her hand that morning, saying *it cuts what you fear*. It was cold, colder than the grave, and when she gripped it, she felt magic hum beneath her skin. She pointed it at the wave, and it didn’t retreat, but froze mid-air, a black crystal. “Fae magic,” Isolde said. “Cuts through wards. Even Hel’s.” The crystal shattered. Aurora exhaled. Nyx wandered to the pool, their shadow seeping into the water. “Stay back,” they warned. “Portals are tricky. They remember who touches them.” Aurora followed. The water showed her again—Evan, falling, screaming, his face a mask of horror. Then, a figure behind him, tall, with horns like smoke. *Belphegor*, she realized. Evan had been a summoner. A *failure*. “Stop,” Isolde said. Aurora looked up. The silver-haired woman was staring at the sky, her eyes wide. “The Veil’s breaking. Faster than I thought.” Amber light flooded the clearing, not from the sky, but from the pool. The water boiled, and a portal opened—an archway of shimmering mist, through which Aurora saw a glimpse of Earth, of her flat, her boxes unopened, Eva’s voice on her answering machine: *You have to leave*. “The solstice,” Nyx said. “It’s happening. Now.” Aurora felt the pendant burning through her shirt. She grabbed it, and it flared, blinding. The portal swirled, and she saw Evan, not dying, but standing on the other side, a smile on his face. He mouthed *thank you*. “Rory!” She turned. Nyx was running toward her, their shadow stretched thin, as if afraid to touch the ground. “Come on! The Veil’s not the only thing breaking. The Fae Grove—*it’s moving*.” Aurora looked around. The stone arches were shifting, their bases sinking into the grass. The ivy withered, turning to ash. The pool bubbled, then stilled, leaving only a wet spot. “Isolde!” she called. The Half-Fae was already at the edge of the clearing, her silver hair whipping in a wind that didn’t exist. “We have to go,” she said. “Before the Grove takes us with it.” Aurora ran. She felt the Fae blade grow colder as she moved, as if it knew. Nyx reached her first, took her hand. Their skin was ice, but she didn’t flinch. They stepped into the mist, and Aurora followed. The world blurred. One moment, she was in Dymas, with its amber sky and singing halls. The next, she was in the Richmond Park forest, the oak trees closing in, the sun dipping low. She looked at Nyx. They were pale, their violet eyes dim. “We were there for an hour,” they said. “Or a day. Time doesn’t matter here.” Isolde stood nearby, her gaze fixed on the sky. “Winter solstice,” she murmured. “The Veil’s a thread now. One wrong move, and the whole tapestry unravels.” Aurora touched the pendant. It was still, cool now. She thought of Evan, of the portal, of the thing behind him. “What do we do?” she asked. Isolde turned. Her lavender eyes were stern. “You find the summoner. The one who broke the Veil. And you fix it.” She smiled, a rare, sharp thing. “Or the world burns.” Nyx snorted. “Typical Fae optimism. ‘Burn bright, or burn.’” They nodded at Aurora. “Go. The pendant will lead you. And watch the shadows. They’re not just friends here.” Aurora started walking. The sun set, painting the sky in shades of orange and red. She thought of her flat, of the boxes in the hallway, of Eva’s worried face. She thought of the Heartstone, pulsing, waiting. She kept walking.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.561
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1431
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1431
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"grave"
count1
5
word"crystal"
count2
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"tapestry"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"chill"
3"flicker"
4"grave"
5"crystal"
6"shattered"
7"tapestry"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences135
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans17
markdownWords29
totalWords1416
ratio0.02
matches
0"Hel portal"
1"Eva said—"
2"crack"
3"No footprints"
4"happy"
5"die"
6"exist"
7"urging"
8"thick"
9"you"
10"should"
11"it cuts what you fear"
12"Belphegor"
13"failure"
14"You have to leave"
15"thank you"
16"it’s moving"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
48.48% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions76
wordCount1182
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.03
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Aurora24
Nyx14
Isolde13
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Eva4
Evan6
Helbound1
Fae4
Earth1
Half-Fae1
Dymas1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Heartstone"
4"Pendant"
5"Eva"
6"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Dymas"
globalScore0.485
windowScore0.667
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like spun honey"
1"as if reading her mind"
2"as if rotting before her eyes"
3"as if *urging her"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.119
wordCount1416
matches
0"not a path, but a *crack* in the world"
1"not from the sky, but from the pool"
2"not dying, but standing on the other side, a smile on his face"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean35.4
std21.93
cv0.62
sampleLengths
074
162
253
347
432
569
69
741
869
953
1012
1123
1251
1341
1484
159
1675
1719
1854
199
205
2123
2235
2324
2448
257
2639
271
2831
2930
303
3133
3239
3360
3426
3527
3631
3728
3837
393
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs241
matches
0"was staring"
1"was running"
2"were shifting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences153
ratio0.085
matches
0"Her boots crunched over fallen leaves—oak, she thought, old enough to have seen the grove’s first standing stones, though she’d never seen them before."
1"*Eva said—* but Eva’s face was a blur, swamped by the memory of Evan’s fist on the wall."
2"Light leaked through—golden, not sunlight."
3"The air hit her first—thick, sweet, like ripe peaches and burnt sugar."
4"The others stood nearby—Nyx, their form solid, though their violet eyes were narrow."
5"His skin was gray, his eyes milky—Helbound, then."
6"A grape brushed her palm, and she tasted something wild on the air—cinnamon, starlight, a hint of iron."
7"A mile away, a low wall of mist rolled toward them, soft and thick, but within it, she saw flicker of light—flame, maybe, or magic."
8"The grass grew taller, its blades silver, and she heard voices—laughter, clinking glasses, a man singing in a language that made her bones tingle."
9"The water stilled, and for a moment, she saw his face—pale, twisted, the night he’d raised his hand."
10"Aurora drew the Fae blade—Isolde had pressed it into her hand that morning, saying *it cuts what you fear*."
11"The water showed her again—Evan, falling, screaming, his face a mask of horror."
12"The water boiled, and a portal opened—an archway of shimmering mist, through which Aurora saw a glimpse of Earth, of her flat, her boxes unopened, Eva’s voice on her answering machine: *You have to leave*."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1197
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.015873015873015872
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002506265664160401
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean9.25
std6.56
cv0.709
sampleLengths
016
124
216
318
47
517
64
718
810
96
103
1112
1218
1313
145
152
163
178
1812
196
2011
215
222
2312
2417
253
2612
272
2821
2912
3013
319
326
333
342
3513
368
374
3814
398
4040
418
4213
437
4418
456
469
472
4811
494
58.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.37254901960784315
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners57
31.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"Then, a figure behind him,"
ratio0.009
87.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences106
matches
0"Her boots crunched over fallen"
1"She shucked the thought, pressed"
2"Their voice was a chill"
3"Her lavender eyes widened, but"
4"She reached the crack, placed"
5"Her shadow dissolved into the"
6"She slipped through."
7"She looked down, saw no"
8"They nodded at a figure"
9"His skin was gray, his"
10"She plucked one, bit into"
11"Its crimson stone glowed, the"
12"They glanced at the sky,"
13"She reached the mist, pushed"
14"It wasn’t cold, but *thick*,"
15"She stepped closer to the"
16"She flinched, and the water"
17"they said, gritting their teeth"
18"It was cold, colder than"
19"She pointed it at the"
ratio0.33
11.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences106
matches
0"The path to the grove"
1"Her boots crunched over fallen"
2"Aurora’s heart thudded, but not"
3"The Heartstone Pendant against her"
4"*Hel portal*, she thought."
5"*Eva said—* but Eva’s face"
6"She shucked the thought, pressed"
7"The warmth flared, brief, then"
8"Their voice was a chill"
9"Light leaked through—golden, not sunlight."
10"Isolde stepped forward."
11"Her lavender eyes widened, but"
12"She reached the crack, placed"
13"Her shadow dissolved into the"
14"Aurora glanced at Nyx, who"
15"Aurora smirked, but their hands"
16"The runes flared brighter, sharp"
17"She slipped through."
18"The air hit her first—thick,"
19"The trees peeled back, replaced"
ratio0.896
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Silent beside her, Nyx’s shadow seemed to huddle, as if the sun itself made them nervous."
1"Aurora glanced at Nyx, who huffed, a sound like embers popping."
2"The grass grew taller, its blades silver, and she heard voices—laughter, clinking glasses, a man singing in a language that made her bones tingle."
3"Nyx was running toward her, their shadow stretched thin, as if afraid to touch the ground."
4"The stone arches were shifting, their bases sinking into the grass."
5"The Half-Fae was already at the edge of the clearing, her silver hair whipping in a wind that didn’t exist."
81.52% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Isolde said, her voice soft"
1"Nyx said, as if reading her mind"
76.83% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"they warned (warn)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences41
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leniency0.878
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.146
74.6050%