Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9X37G2W1J2NYJJXXWMVTZ

Run Details

Duration:
21.6s
Cost:
$0.000210
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air hung thick with the smell of ozone and something else, something metallic and faintly floral. Rain slicked the tracks of the abandoned Camden Town Tube station, reflecting the weak sodium glow of the emergency lights. Detective Harlow Quinn surveyed the scene, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her forehead. Water dripped from the vaulted ceiling, echoing in the vast, concrete space. “Not exactly a picturesque welcome,” she murmured, her voice tight. Detective Davies, a younger officer with a perpetually anxious expression, shifted his weight. “The victim’s still here, Detective. Officially. Just… posed.” The victim, a man in a tailored grey suit, lay sprawled on one of the platforms. His face was frozen in a rictus of surprise, a single, crimson bloom blossoming on his chest. Not a knife wound. Not a gunshot. Something else. “What *is* that?” Quinn knelt, ignoring the cold seep of the damp concrete through her trousers. Close examination revealed the stain wasn’t blood. It resembled dark, viscous wax, hardened and cracked. “Looks like… solidified shadow?” Davies swallowed, adjusting his glasses. “The forensics team are baffled.” Quinn examined the surrounding area. The station was sparse, a scattering of rusted machinery and peeling posters advertising long-defunct lines. A single, tarnished bone – a radius, judging by the size – rested on the platform beside the body. A bone token. A key to the Veil Market. “The Market,” she stated, her voice low. “Someone brought him here.” “The Veil Market?” Davies’s eyes widened. “You think…?” “I think we’ve stumbled into something far stranger than a simple murder,” Quinn said, carefully pulling out her worn leather watch. The second hand ticked with a measured rhythm, a stark counterpoint to the unsettling quiet of the station. “The bone, the lack of conventional wounds… the way the shadow’s solidified. It’s all connected.” She turned to Eva Kowalski, who stood a little way back, clutching her satchel of books tightly. Eva, Aurora’s childhood friend, was an occult researcher, and Quinn had reluctantly brought her along. The girl’s knowledge of the supernatural felt like a liability as much as a resource. “Eva,” Quinn said, gesturing to the polished bone. “Can you identify this?” Eva hurried over, pushing her round glasses up her nose. She circled the bone, her fingers tracing the smooth surface. “A radius. Human, but… enhanced. The markings… they’re incredibly faint. Ritualistic. A summoning, perhaps?” “A summoning of what?” Davies asked, his voice laced with apprehension. “I don’t know yet,” Eva replied, her fingers still tracing the bone. “But the energy signature… it’s familiar. I’ve encountered it in fragments of texts regarding Shade artisans. They’re incredibly rare, known for their work with solidified shadow – creating objects imbued with dark magic.” Quinn glanced at the victim’s body again. The solidified shadow was spreading, creeping across the platform like an inverted stain. It wasn’t simply a stain; it seemed to *breathe*. “The Veil Market moves every full moon,” she said, a growing sense of urgency in her voice. “This station… it was active during the last one. And look.” She pointed to a small, almost invisible symbol etched into the concrete near the victim’s hand - a stylized eye within a triangle. "A marker. A channel.” Davies pulled out a small, handheld device and scanned the area. “Detecting faint traces of residual energy. High concentrations near the symbol.” “The compass,” Quinn said, her thoughts racing. “The Veil Compass. It needs to point to the nearest rift. Maybe the victim was trying to find it." She reached into her pocket and retrieved the small brass compass. The needle spun wildly at first, then steadied, rotating slowly towards a dark corner of the station, a section blocked off by a crumbling brick wall. It wasn't aiming at a portal. It was aiming at a place *within* the station. “There’s something behind that wall,” Quinn said, stepping towards it. "Something deliberately hidden.” “Detective, we should call for backup,” Davies protested, his voice higher pitched now. “This is… beyond our usual jurisdiction.” “Not beyond my jurisdiction, Davies,” Quinn snapped. “And I don't think it's going to stay hidden for long.” She examined the wall, running her hand along the rough bricks. It was solid, reinforced with steel. No visible seams. Then she noticed it – a subtle shift in the concrete around one brick, a barely perceptible depression. She pressed on it, and with a grinding groan of rusted metal, a section of the wall slid inwards, revealing a narrow passageway. The air within the passage was significantly colder, carrying a stronger scent of ozone and… lavender. The compass needle swung violently, now pointing directly into the darkness. “Let’s go,” Quinn said, stepping inside. Davies hesitated, then followed, his flashlight beam cutting through the gloom. The passageway led to a small, circular chamber. In the center stood a low, weathered altar, covered in a dark, shimmering residue. The Veil Compass pulsed with an almost palpable energy, locked onto the altar. And on the altar, lay another body. This one was younger, a young man with a shock of dark hair and a single, silver ring on his finger. He was completely encased in solidified shadow, looking eerily like a frozen statue. “This wasn't a murder,” Quinn stated, her voice grim. “This was a sacrifice.” Eva knelt beside the altar, carefully examining the residue. “The sigils…” she murmured, her voice filled with a horrified fascination. “They’re… complex. A conduit. This chamber isn't just hiding something. It’s *containing* something.” She trailed off, her eyes wide. "This isn’t just a ritual... it's a prison.” Suddenly, the shadows around the altar began to ripple and writhe. A faint, whispering sound filled the chamber, growing louder with each passing second. “Something’s reacting to our presence,” Davies stammered, backing away. Quinn drew her pistol, her movements precise and economical, a military precision honed over eighteen years. "Don't move." The shadows coalesced, forming a dark, vaguely humanoid shape. It wasn’t solid, not entirely, but it possessed an undeniable presence, a chilling intelligence. “You shouldn’t have come here,” a voice echoed in their minds, cold and devoid of emotion. “The Veil Market offers opportunities. But it demands a price. And you, Detective, are now in debt.” The figure raised a hand, and the solidified shadow from the victim's body began to flow towards them, not as a stain, but as a tangible wave of darkness. “The Veil Compass,” Quinn ordered, her voice unwavering. “Eva, can you disrupt it?” Eva frantically began flipping through the pages of her satchel, searching for a counter-ritual. “I need… a focusing agent! Something with a strong resonant frequency!” Davies, paralyzed with fear, simply pointed his flashlight wildly around the chamber. Quinn ignored them both, focusing on the figure. It was feeding on the residual magic of the chamber, growing stronger with each passing moment. She thought of her partner, DS Morris. The unexplained circumstances of his death, the strange whispers in the darkened corners of their last case – all the things she had dismissed as coincidence. Now, looking at this being, she realized the truth. The supernatural wasn't a legend. It was a lurking, insidious force, and she had been dancing on the edge of its domain for far too long. “Eva!” Quinn shouted over the rising cacophony. “Find something! Now!” Eva abruptly pulled a small, silver locket from her satchel – a family heirloom, she explained later—and flung it at the figure. It shattered against the figure's form, releasing a burst of shimmering light that momentarily disrupted the shadows. The figure shrieked, a sound that resonated deep within their bones. The flow of solidified shadow slowed, but didn't stop. Quinn seized the opportunity. She fired her pistol, aiming at the nexus of the shadow, the point where it seemed to condense. The bullets passed through the darkness, doing nothing. But the shot disrupted the flow, momentarily destabilizing the creature's form. "We need to collapse the chamber!” Quinn yelled, grabbing a loose piece of concrete and smashing it against the wall. The already weakened structure groaned and began to crumble. Davies and Eva frantically worked to clear a path, desperately trying to escape the collapsing chamber. As the last of the passage crumbled, Quinn turned to face the weakened figure. It was fading, its power waning. “This isn’t over,” it hissed, its voice a mere whisper. “The Veil Market always finds a way.” Then, with a final flicker, it vanished, leaving behind only the chilling scent of lavender and the heavy weight of dread. Quinn stood amongst the rubble, her gun still raised, her face pale but resolute. She looked at Eva, her eyes narrowed. “We need to find the source,” she said, her voice low. “The one who opened this gate.” Eva nodded, clutching her satchel tightly. “And I believe,” she said, “we just found our starting point.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.54
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
69.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1469
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"tightly"
count2
2
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
5
adverb"completely"
count1
6
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"tightly"
2"reluctantly"
3"slowly"
4"deliberately"
5"completely"
6"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1469
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count2
5
word"apprehension"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"sense of"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"gloom"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"palpable"
count1
14
word"complex"
count1
15
word"chilling"
count2
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"tangible"
count1
18
word"unwavering"
count1
19
word"disrupt"
count1
20
word"dancing"
count1
21
word"cacophony"
count1
22
word"shattered"
count1
23
word"disrupted"
count2
24
word"resonated"
count1
25
word"structure"
count1
26
word"whisper"
count1
27
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"weight"
2"measured"
3"stark"
4"tracing"
5"apprehension"
6"familiar"
7"sense of"
8"etched"
9"scanned"
10"racing"
11"gloom"
12"pulsed"
13"palpable"
14"complex"
15"chilling"
16"echoed"
17"tangible"
18"unwavering"
19"disrupt"
20"dancing"
21"cacophony"
22"shattered"
23"disrupted"
24"resonated"
25"structure"
26"whisper"
27"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences105
matches
0"d with apprehension"
1"d with fear"
61.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords1471
ratio0.003
matches
0"is"
1"breathe"
2"within"
3"containing"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Eva abruptly pulled a small, silver locket from her satchel – a family heirloom, she explained later—and flung it at the…"
61.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1136
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.76
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Town1
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn20
Detective2
Davies10
Close1
Veil2
Market1
Eva10
Kowalski1
Aurora1
Compass1
Suddenly1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Detective"
3"Davies"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
6"Aurora"
7"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"Tube"
3"Veil"
globalScore0.62
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a liability as much as a reso"
64.04% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.36
wordCount1471
matches
0"not entirely, but it possessed an undeniable presence, a chilling intelligence"
1"not as a stain, but as a tangible wave of darkness"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean27.75
std15.46
cv0.557
sampleLengths
062
110
221
342
431
514
648
711
88
954
1047
1112
1234
1311
1445
1529
1655
1722
1826
1952
2013
2119
2218
2361
2427
2517
2635
2741
2813
2947
3024
319
3218
3323
3433
3529
3613
3725
3812
3924
4068
4110
4239
4320
4441
4529
4616
4720
4817
4921
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"was frozen"
66.67% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs200
matches
0"was spreading"
1"wasn't aiming"
2"was aiming"
3"was feeding"
8.93% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences128
ratio0.047
matches
0"A single, tarnished bone – a radius, judging by the size – rested on the platform beside the body."
1"It wasn’t simply a stain; it seemed to *breathe*."
2"“This station… it was active during the last one. And look.” She pointed to a small, almost invisible symbol etched into the concrete near the victim’s hand - a stylized eye within a triangle."
3"Then she noticed it – a subtle shift in the concrete around one brick, a barely perceptible depression."
4"The unexplained circumstances of his death, the strange whispers in the darkened corners of their last case – all the things she had dismissed as coincidence."
5"Eva abruptly pulled a small, silver locket from her satchel – a family heirloom, she explained later—and flung it at the figure."
95.37% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1135
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03700440528634361
lyAdverbCount29
lyAdverbRatio0.02555066079295154
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean11.49
std6.28
cv0.547
sampleLengths
017
120
213
312
410
513
68
716
817
94
103
112
1216
137
148
159
165
175
1815
1919
203
216
227
234
246
252
2621
2718
2815
2917
3015
3115
328
334
3410
3510
3614
3711
3812
3933
407
4113
429
4317
4434
454
4611
4711
487
4919
39.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.296875
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners38
99.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences101
matches
0"Then she noticed it –"
1"Suddenly, the shadows around the"
2"Then, with a final flicker,"
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences101
matches
0"she murmured, her voice tight"
1"His face was frozen in"
2"It resembled dark, viscous wax,"
3"she stated, her voice low"
4"She turned to Eva Kowalski,"
5"She circled the bone, her"
6"It wasn’t simply a stain;"
7"she said, a growing sense"
8"She pointed to a small,"
9"She reached into her pocket"
10"It wasn't aiming at a"
11"It was aiming at a"
12"She examined the wall, running"
13"It was solid, reinforced with"
14"She pressed on it, and"
15"He was completely encased in"
16"she murmured, her voice filled"
17"She trailed off, her eyes"
18"It wasn’t solid, not entirely,"
19"It was feeding on the"
ratio0.277
19.41% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences101
matches
0"The air hung thick with"
1"Rain slicked the tracks of"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn surveyed the"
3"Water dripped from the vaulted"
4"she murmured, her voice tight"
5"Detective Davies, a younger officer"
6"The victim, a man in"
7"His face was frozen in"
8"Quinn knelt, ignoring the cold"
9"It resembled dark, viscous wax,"
10"Davies swallowed, adjusting his glasses"
11"Quinn examined the surrounding area."
12"The station was sparse, a"
13"A single, tarnished bone –"
14"A bone token."
15"A key to the Veil"
16"she stated, her voice low"
17"Davies’s eyes widened"
18"Quinn said, carefully pulling out"
19"The second hand ticked with"
ratio0.881
49.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"Now, looking at this being,"
ratio0.01
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She turned to Eva Kowalski, who stood a little way back, clutching her satchel of books tightly."
1"Eva frantically began flipping through the pages of her satchel, searching for a counter-ritual."
2"It shattered against the figure's form, releasing a burst of shimmering light that momentarily disrupted the shadows."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"she murmured, her voice tight"
1"she stated, her voice low"
2"Eva replied, her fingers still tracing the bone"
3"Quinn said, her thoughts racing"
4"Davies protested, his voice higher pitched now"
5"Quinn stated, her voice grim"
6"She trailed, her eyes wide"
7"Quinn ordered, her voice unwavering"
8"it hissed, its voice a mere whisper"
9"she said, her voice low"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she stated (state)"
2"Davies protested (protest)"
3"Quinn snapped (snap)"
4"Quinn stated (state)"
5"she murmured (murmur)"
6"Davies stammered (stammer)"
7"Quinn ordered (order)"
8"Quinn shouted (shout)"
9"Quinn yelled (yell)"
10"it hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.42
leniency0.84
rawRatio0.524
effectiveRatio0.44
74.4517%