Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9XAYVXAW6X1RHDWC1WK71

Run Details

Duration:
26.5s
Cost:
$0.001458
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed the Soho streets, turning gutters into raging streams. Detective Harlow Quinn shoved through the green neon glow of The Raven's Nest's sign, her boots splashing black water. Ahead, Tomás Herrera bolted from the alley mouth, collar up, Saint Christopher medallion glinting under sodium lamps. Quinn's hand flew to her radio. "Suspect fleeing east on Dean Street. Herrera, Tomás. Short curly hair, olive skin. Arm scar. Repeat, visual on Herrera." Dispatch crackled back. "Units en route, Quinn. Ten minutes." Ten minutes. She cursed under her breath, lungs burning as she sprinted. Military precision snapped her strides into rhythm—left foot, right, coat flapping like a broken wing. Her worn leather watch ticked against rain-slick skin. Tomás veered sharp into Greek Street, shoulders hunched against the downpour. He glanced back, warm brown eyes widening in the flash of headlights. No hesitation—he pumped legs harder, darted across traffic. Horns blared. A taxi fishtailed, brakes screaming. Quinn followed, leaped the bonnet. Tires hissed inches from her calves. "Stop, Herrera! Police!" He didn't break stride. Ducked into an alley reeking of piss and rotting bins. Quinn cornered in, pistol drawn low. Shadow swallowed him—gone around the bend. "Control, he's in the alley off Greek. Pedestrians clear." Puddles exploded under her soles. She rounded the corner, glimpsed his silhouette vaulting a low fence into Meard Street. Heart hammered her ribs. Salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her sharp jaw. Brown eyes narrowed on the chase. Tomás hit pavement running, coat tails whipping. Soho's maze blurred—pub fronts shuttered, umbrellas inverted in wind. He cut north, towards Oxford Street's roar. Quinn matched pace, breath steady despite the stitch clawing her side. Eighteen years on the force forged this—pursuit like breathing. "Herrera! You're done patching up your mates off-books. Lost your license for a reason!" He threw a look over his shoulder, lips curling. No words. Just acceleration. Oxford Street swallowed them. Midnight crowds thinned by rain, umbrellas bobbing like buoys. Tomás wove through knots of pissheads spilling from clubs, elbowed a bloke staggering with kebab in hand. "Sorry, mate!" Tomás barked, shoving past. Quinn closed gap. "Met Police! Out the way!" Punter swung wild, meaty fist clipping her shoulder. She powered through, collarbone throbbing. Tomás hit the tube entrance stairs—Tottenham Court Road station—but veered left, not down. Surface buses hulking ghosts in the wet. North he ran, into Fitzrovia. Quinn's radio spat static. "Control, pursuit northbound. Oxford towards Regent's Park. Backup?" "Negative. Gridlock from the storm. You're solo." Bloody perfect. She holstered pistol, freed hands for speed. Rain stung eyes, blurred vision. Tomás's medallion swung like a pendulum as he dashed across Euston Road, dodging a red double-decker sluicing rainwater. Camden loomed—markets shuttered, locks Market's stalls dripping. He plunged into the locks, iron bridges groaning overhead. Canal water churned black below. Quinn vaulted a railing, boots skidding on cobbles. "Herrera! Former paramedic, yeah? Seville boy gone rogue. DS Morris sends regards!" He faltered half-second—name hit home?—then vaulted another fence, into the abandoned yard. Chain-link rattled. Over he went, landed rolling. She hurdled after, wire snagging her coat. Rip of fabric. No time to check. Camden's underbelly beckoned—graffiti-slashed walls, derelict arches. Tomás hit the old tube stairs. Disused entrance, boarded up years back. No—boards pried loose, swinging like broken teeth. He squeezed through, vanished into dark. Quinn skidded halt at the top. Wind howled through the gap. Rain pooled at her feet, trickling down concrete steps into void. Radio hissed. "Quinn? Status?" "Lost visual. Camden, abandoned tube off Chalk Farm Road. He's gone under." Pause. "Evac and secure, Detective. That line's condemned. Cave-ins reported." She peered into black. Faint echofootsteps? Distant murmur of voices. Not rats. Not wind. Her watch glowed 00:47. Partner's ghost flickered in mind—DS Morris, vanished three years back in shadows like these. Unexplained. Supernatural whispers she buried deep. Finger hovered over radio. Call it off. Backup never comes. Write report tomorrow: suspect evaded into derelict tube. Clique laughs it off. But Tomás Herrera patched supernaturals. Off-books. Raven's Nest meetings in hidden rooms. Maps on walls that weren't just old pubs. She flicked torch on. Beam pierced gloom—steps slick with slime, descending spiral into earth. Graffiti twisted into symbols: eyes, bones, spirals that made neck hairs rise. Decision coiled in gut. Follow into the pit—unfamiliar, rumours of squatters, worse. Or let him slip, hunt tomorrow under daylight rules. Torch swept stairs. Footprint gleamed wet at bottom—his boot tread. "Control, hold evac. Entering pursuit." Static swallowed reply. Quinn descended. Steps creaked under weight. Air thickened—dank, laced with incense, ozone. Torch beam jittered, caught rusted rails curving left. Voices swelled. Not English. Accents tangled—Eastern European, guttural clicks, sibilants. Tunnel opened. No station platform. Instead, sprawl of stalls under jury-rigged lanterns. Gas lamps hissed blue. Tables groaned under vials glowing green, amulets pulsing red, blades etched with runes. Veil Market. Whispers from informants clicked: bone token entry, moves full moon. Camden depths tonight. Crowd parted. Hooded figures, eyes gleaming unnatural. Scales on skin. Horn stubs. A woman with feathers for hair bartered fangs. Tomás melted into throng ahead, shoulder bumping a stall. Jars rattled—something inside thrashed. Quinn froze at threshold. Pistol hand twitched. No badge cuts ice here. Her brown eyes scanned exits—three tunnels, all black. Vendor locked gaze—pale face, black teeth. "Token, copper?" She patted pockets. Empty. Herrera had flashed bone at entry—saw it now, tucked in his palm. Path snaked deeper. Tomás paused at crossroads stall, haggled low with tattooed brute. Scarred forearm flexed, knife mark silver under light. Quinn edged forward, torch dimmed. Crowd pressed—elbow from clawed hand, hiss from scaled lips. "Lost?" Feather-woman sidled close, breath like compost. Quinn's jaw tightened. "Looking for a friend." Feather-woman cackled. "Friends don't run." Tomás slipped payment—glinting coin?—and plunged right tunnel. Voices chased him: "Fresh heartblood, half-price!" Quinn followed, pulse thunder. Stall brushed arm; fur brushed back. Something slithered underfoot. Tunnel narrowed. Lanterns thinned. Echoes bounced—drips, murmurs, a scream cut short. Herrera's medallion caught light ahead. He glanced back, eyes wide. Spotted her. "Quinn! Back off. You don't belong." She closed in. "Neither do you, doc. Treating fangs and claws without license. Clique's doctor, eh?" He backed into chamber. Low ceiling dripped. Central table: bones, powders, a heart still twitching. Guards materialized—two hulks, eyes milky. "No token. No trade." Tomás raised hands. "She's Met. Let her pass. Or explain the bodies." Hulks rumbled. Quinn's fingers itched for steel. Radio dead down here. Veil Market pulsed alive. Stalls hawked eyes in jars, whispers of curses. A pixie-thing darted, wings buzzing. Alchemical steam curled, promising forget or flight. Quinn weighed it. Radio upstairs worked. Backup eventually. Herrera cornered here, maybe. But partner’s face flashed—swallowed by dark like this. Unexplained origins. She stepped forward. Hulks parted grudging. Tomás bolted again, through archway hung with skins. Quinn pursued. Torch beam danced on walls slick with ichor. Deeper. Market sprawled endless—alcoves peddling dreams in bottles, futures in entrails. Bargains hissed: "Skin your sins for gold." A stall rat—boy with gills—tugged her coat. "Token trade? Pretty eyes for bone." She shook free. Tomás ahead, haggling urgent at potion cart. "Double strength. Now." Vendor poured viscous red into vial. "Hunt or hunted?" "Both." Tomás swigged, corked rest. Eyes sharpened—unnatural gleam. He dashed left, into fog bank rolling from cauldron row. Quinn coughed through haze. Lungs burned chemical. Visions flickered—ghosts? Morris's face, screaming silent. No time. She burst through. Platform cavern yawned. Tracks rusted, but alive with carts pushed by shades. Central auction: chained beast, scales iridescent, bellowing. Tomás vaulted barrier, into bidder crowd. Shouts erupted: "Two ounces soul-dust!" Quinn climbed after, coat snagging barbs. Crowd surged—tails lashed ankles, claws grazed skin. "Herrera!" He spun at her voice, vial glinting. Neck cord taut. "Last warning, Detective. Turn back." "Why run? Guilty conscience?" "Survival." He nodded shadows. Figures closed—clique mates? Raven's Nest crew, faces twisted hungry. Quinn drew pistol. "Down. Now." Click-clack weapons. Not guns—crossbows? Bolts tipped glowing. Standoff hummed electric. Rain drummed distant above. Market throbbed heart-like. Her watch ticked. Decision crystallized. Radio backup? Too late. Retreat? Partner's unsolved shadow mocked. Finger tightened trigger. Tomás edged back. "You follow, you stay." Crowd chanted low. Beast roared cage-shake. Quinn advanced one step.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:54:59.43Z" 2/20/2026, 7:54:59 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.171
leniency0.343
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1406
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1406
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"glinting"
count3
1
word"hulking"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"churned"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count2
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"depths"
count1
13
word"gleaming"
count1
14
word"scanned"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"echoes"
count1
17
word"pulsed"
count1
18
word"electric"
count1
19
word"throbbed"
count1
20
word"crystallized"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"hulking"
2"perfect"
3"loomed"
4"churned"
5"echo"
6"footsteps"
7"flickered"
8"flicked"
9"gloom"
10"weight"
11"etched"
12"depths"
13"gleaming"
14"scanned"
15"pulse"
16"echoes"
17"pulsed"
18"electric"
19"throbbed"
20"crystallized"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences214
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences214
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences242
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1353
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.25% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions99
wordCount1157
uniqueNames30
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Harlow1
Quinn21
Raven3
Nest3
Tomás18
Herrera5
Saint1
Christopher1
Greek1
Street4
Meard1
Oxford2
Tottenham1
Court1
Road2
Fitzrovia1
Euston1
Market5
Morris2
English1
Eastern1
European1
Eyes1
Figures1
Rain4
Camden3
Radio4
Torch3
Crowd4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Tomás"
5"Herrera"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Market"
9"Morris"
10"Eyes"
11"Figures"
12"Rain"
13"Camden"
14"Radio"
15"Torch"
16"Crowd"
places
0"Soho"
1"Greek"
2"Street"
3"Meard"
4"Oxford"
5"Tottenham"
6"Court"
7"Road"
8"Fitzrovia"
9"Euston"
globalScore0.592
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1353
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences242
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs90
mean15.03
std9.02
cv0.6
sampleLengths
046
125
29
335
438
514
626
79
836
923
1034
1113
1230
136
148
1533
1617
177
1832
1921
2020
2119
2220
2325
2422
254
2612
2710
2814
2924
3022
3120
3226
3321
3410
355
363
3720
3810
3929
4015
4120
4213
4320
448
4516
4621
4714
487
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences214
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs295
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount37
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences34
totalSentences242
ratio0.14
matches
0"Military precision snapped her strides into rhythm—left foot, right, coat flapping like a broken wing."
1"No hesitation—he pumped legs harder, darted across traffic."
2"Shadow swallowed him—gone around the bend."
3"Soho's maze blurred—pub fronts shuttered, umbrellas inverted in wind."
4"Eighteen years on the force forged this—pursuit like breathing."
5"Tomás hit the tube entrance stairs—Tottenham Court Road station—but veered left, not down."
6"Camden loomed—markets shuttered, locks Market's stalls dripping."
7"He faltered half-second—name hit home?—then vaulted another fence, into the abandoned yard."
8"Camden's underbelly beckoned—graffiti-slashed walls, derelict arches."
9"No—boards pried loose, swinging like broken teeth."
10"Faint echo—footsteps?"
11"Partner's ghost flickered in mind—DS Morris, vanished three years back in shadows like these."
12"Beam pierced gloom—steps slick with slime, descending spiral into earth."
13"Follow into the pit—unfamiliar, rumours of squatters, worse."
14"Footprint gleamed wet at bottom—his boot tread."
15"Air thickened—dank, laced with incense, ozone."
16"Accents tangled—Eastern European, guttural clicks, sibilants."
17"Jars rattled—something inside thrashed."
18"Her brown eyes scanned exits—three tunnels, all black."
19"Vendor locked gaze—pale face, black teeth."
20"Herrera had flashed bone at entry—saw it now, tucked in his palm."
21"Crowd pressed—elbow from clawed hand, hiss from scaled lips."
22"Tomás slipped payment—glinting coin?—and plunged right tunnel."
23"Stall brushed arm; fur brushed back."
24"Echoes bounced—drips, murmurs, a scream cut short."
25"Guards materialized—two hulks, eyes milky."
26"But partner’s face flashed—swallowed by dark like this."
27"Market sprawled endless—alcoves peddling dreams in bottles, futures in entrails."
28"A stall rat—boy with gills—tugged her coat."
29"Eyes sharpened—unnatural gleam."
30"Visions flickered—ghosts?"
31"Crowd surged—tails lashed ankles, claws grazed skin."
32"Figures closed—clique mates?"
33"Not guns—crossbows?"
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1206
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"against rain-slick skin."
1"under jury-rigged lanterns."
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.01824212271973466
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0024875621890547263
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences242
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences242
mean5.59
std3.51
cv0.628
sampleLengths
010
119
217
36
419
53
66
72
810
915
108
1111
1212
138
142
155
165
176
183
194
2010
216
226
239
245
2514
264
277
286
297
309
317
3211
339
3414
359
362
372
384
399
4017
416
423
435
448
455
4613
477
485
494
91.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5537190082644629
totalSentences242
uniqueOpeners134
19.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences174
matches
0"Instead, sprawl of stalls under"
ratio0.006
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences174
matches
0"She cursed under her breath,"
1"Her worn leather watch ticked"
2"He glanced back, warm brown"
3"He didn't break stride."
4"She rounded the corner, glimpsed"
5"He cut north, towards Oxford"
6"He threw a look over"
7"She powered through, collarbone throbbing."
8"She holstered pistol, freed hands"
9"He plunged into the locks,"
10"He faltered half-second-name hit home?—then"
11"She hurdled after, wire snagging"
12"He squeezed through, vanished into"
13"She peered into black."
14"Her watch glowed 00:47."
15"She flicked torch on."
16"Her brown eyes scanned exits—three"
17"She patted pockets."
18"He glanced back, eyes wide."
19"She closed in."
ratio0.161
40.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount146
totalSentences174
matches
0"Rain lashed the Soho streets,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn shoved through"
2"Quinn's hand flew to her"
3"Dispatch crackled back."
4"She cursed under her breath,"
5"Military precision snapped her strides"
6"Her worn leather watch ticked"
7"Tomás veered sharp into Greek"
8"He glanced back, warm brown"
9"A taxi fishtailed, brakes screaming."
10"Quinn followed, leaped the bonnet."
11"Tires hissed inches from her"
12"He didn't break stride."
13"Quinn cornered in, pistol drawn"
14"Shadow swallowed him—gone around the"
15"Puddles exploded under her soles."
16"She rounded the corner, glimpsed"
17"Heart hammered her ribs."
18"Salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her"
19"Brown eyes narrowed on the"
ratio0.839
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences174
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Tomás barked (bark)"
1"Bargains hissed: (hiss)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.057
leniency0.114
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.114
83.5416%