Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9XCDHV59ZWSRFB1JDY636

Run Details

Duration:
48.6s
Cost:
$0.000434
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest cast a sickly glow against the wet Soho pavement. Rain slicked the black coat of Aurora Carter as she pushed through the door, the scent of stale beer and something vaguely floral hitting her immediately. She shook the droplets from her hair, the black strands clinging to her shoulders. Silas wasn't behind the bar tonight; a younger man, all sharp angles and nervous energy, wiped glasses. Good. She wasn’t in the mood for questions. She needed a drink. A strong one. The delivery route had been brutal—a penthouse in Knightsbridge with a resident who tipped in condescension, a flat in Mayfair smelling of old money and regret, and finally, a shouting match over lukewarm noodles in Camden Town. She settled onto a worn leather stool, the cushion groaning under her weight. “Whiskey, neat,” she told the bartender. He poured without comment, sliding the glass across the polished wood. A figure shifted in the periphery, a shadow detaching itself from the gloom near the dartboard. Rory's hand stilled halfway to the glass. It couldn’t be. “Rory?” The voice was raspy, roughened by years and something else she couldn't place. She turned, and her breath hitched. Evan. He was…different. Gone was the polished university student with the easy smile. This Evan was all hard lines and haunted eyes. His jaw was covered in a scrubby beard, streaked with grey. He’d lost weight, the expensive clothes replaced with a worn leather jacket and jeans. There was a network of fine scars around his eyes. He hadn't met her gaze. “Fancy meeting you here.” Her voice came out sharper than she intended. She took a long swallow of whiskey, the burn doing little to thaw the ice forming in her chest. He finally lifted his head, his gaze locking onto hers. The bright green of his eyes seemed faded. “Small world, I guess.” “You ‘guess’?” She raised an eyebrow. “Last I heard, you were building a life in finance, not…haunting Soho pubs.” A humorless chuckle escaped his lips. "The world has a funny way of redrawing your plans.” He ambled over, pulling up a stool a few seats down. “You haven’t changed much.” “Don’t lie.” He flinched, a barely perceptible tightening around his mouth. “Okay, fair enough. You always were brutally honest.” He ran a hand through his hair—dark, but flecked with silver at the temples. “I didn’t expect to see you here. Still doing deliveries?” “Pays the rent.” She kept her voice level, refusing to give him any purchase. “Silas still own the place?” “He does. Though he’s…occupied at the moment.” Evan waved a vague hand. “Overseas business, he said.” “Of course he is.” Rory knew Silas. ‘Overseas business’ usually meant tangled webs of intrigue and shadowy deals. She wondered what he was mixed up in now. He leaned closer, his voice dropping to a near whisper. "You look…good, Rory. Healthy.” "I am healthy." She met his gaze, refusing to let him see any weakness. "What about you, Evan? You look like you've been through a war." He glanced down at his hands, flexing them slowly. "Something like that." “Something like that?” She scoffed. “That’s all you’re offering? After…everything?” The bartender cleared his throat pointedly. Rory ignored him. “I don’t want to rehash old history, Rory.” “Oh, I’m sorry. Is it too painful to remember the exciting tales of your past?” The words dripped with sarcasm. He gripped the bar, his knuckles white. “Don't.” “Don’t what? Don’t remind you of how you treated me? How you made my life miserable?” “That’s not fair.” He looked genuinely pained, and for a fleeting moment, Rory almost felt a flicker of sympathy. Almost. “Fair? You want to talk about fair? You disappeared, Evan. You ghosted me after…after everything, and now you show up here, looking like a refugee, and you want it to just be…water under the bridge?” “I needed to get away.” "From what? From facing the consequences of your actions?” She picked at the label on her glass. The whiskey suddenly tasted like ash. He hesitated. "I got involved in something. A bad situation.” “Oh, a bad situation? Is that what we’re calling it now? You were reckless, Evan. You always were. Chasing thrills, taking risks, never thinking about who you were hurting in the process.” He looked away, his gaze settling on a chipped dartboard. “I made mistakes.” “Mistakes?” Rory laughed, a harsh, brittle sound. “You nearly destroyed me. You made me question my own sanity. And you call that a mistake?” A long silence stretched between them, punctuated only by the murmur of voices and the clink of glasses. “I tried to find you, you know.” “Tried?” She raised her head, a spark of disbelief flickering in her eyes. “You ‘tried’? A few unanswered calls and texts is ‘trying’?” “It wasn’t that simple. Things were…complicated.” “Complicated? What could possibly be more complicated than just saying you were sorry?” He finally met her gaze again, and Rory saw something there that she hadn’t expected: raw, unadulterated regret. It didn’t excuse anything, but it was…something. “I was wrong, Rory. About everything. I treated you terribly, and I’ve been living with that every day since.” She stared at him, searching for any trace of the man she once knew. He was a stranger, irrevocably changed, marked by an unseen weight. “It’s too late, Evan.” “Maybe.” He traced the rim of his empty glass. “But I needed to say it. I needed you to know.” A man detached himself from the shadows near the back, wearing a tailored suit. He walked with a deliberate pace straight towards Evan, and stopped beside him. A cold look in his eyes. “There you are. We were starting to think you’d decided to disappear again.” He spoke, never taking his eyes off Rory. Evan visibly stiffened. “Right. Excuse me, Rory.” He glanced at her, a flicker of something unreadable passing across his face. “I have to go.” He stood abruptly, knocking over his stool. He didn’t bother to pick it up. He turned towards the door, flanked by the man in the suit, and disappeared into the rainy night. Rory sat there, numb, staring at the space he’d occupied. The whiskey tasted even worse now. This wasn't closure. It was just…more questions, swirling in the hollow ache where trust used to be. She felt a gentle hand on her shoulder. She looked up to see Silas, his hazel eyes filled with concern. “Rough encounter?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He looked genuinely [genuinely]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.396
leniency0.792
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.042
90.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"intrigue"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"fleeting"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count2
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"gloom"
2"eyebrow"
3"intrigue"
4"whisper"
5"fleeting"
6"flicker"
7"silence"
8"traced"
9"unreadable"
10"encounter"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences75
matches
0"a flicker of sympathy"
1"a spark of disbelief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1082
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount710
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Aurora1
Carter1
Knightsbridge1
Mayfair1
Camden1
Town1
Evan5
Rory8
Silas3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Evan"
5"Rory"
6"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Knightsbridge"
2"Camden"
3"Town"
globalScore0.937
windowScore0.833
62.28% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed faded"
1"tasted like ash"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1082
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean22.08
std14.88
cv0.674
sampleLengths
082
144
230
326
414
57
656
75
831
922
1019
1131
122
1341
1419
1516
1627
1714
1826
1912
2010
219
228
2320
248
2516
2620
2735
285
2923
3010
3132
3213
3324
3418
357
3623
376
3813
3925
4019
4129
4220
4333
4421
4524
4632
4753
482
95.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"was covered"
1"was mixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs127
matches(empty)
61.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences105
ratio0.029
matches
0"Silas wasn't behind the bar tonight; a younger man, all sharp angles and nervous energy, wiped glasses."
1"The delivery route had been brutal—a penthouse in Knightsbridge with a resident who tipped in condescension, a flat in Mayfair smelling of old money and regret, and finally, a shouting match over lukewarm noodles in Camden Town."
2"“Okay, fair enough. You always were brutally honest.” He ran a hand through his hair—dark, but flecked with silver at the temples."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount723
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03319502074688797
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.015214384508990318
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean10.3
std6.94
cv0.674
sampleLengths
017
126
214
317
41
57
64
73
837
913
106
1111
1216
137
143
1514
166
171
182
1910
209
2111
2214
2310
245
2512
2619
2710
288
294
306
3113
326
3321
344
352
369
3722
3810
3914
405
4112
424
437
4411
459
4610
474
4814
4912
56.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.37142857142857144
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences69
matches
0"She shook the droplets from"
1"She wasn’t in the mood"
2"She needed a drink."
3"She settled onto a worn"
4"she told the bartender"
5"He poured without comment, sliding"
6"It couldn’t be."
7"She turned, and her breath"
8"His jaw was covered in"
9"He’d lost weight, the expensive"
10"He hadn't met her gaze."
11"Her voice came out sharper"
12"She took a long swallow"
13"He finally lifted his head,"
14"She raised an eyebrow"
15"He ambled over, pulling up"
16"He flinched, a barely perceptible"
17"He ran a hand through"
18"She kept her voice level,"
19"She wondered what he was"
ratio0.609
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences69
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rain slicked the black coat"
2"She shook the droplets from"
3"Silas wasn't behind the bar"
4"She wasn’t in the mood"
5"She needed a drink."
6"A strong one."
7"The delivery route had been"
8"She settled onto a worn"
9"she told the bartender"
10"He poured without comment, sliding"
11"A figure shifted in the"
12"Rory's hand stilled halfway to"
13"It couldn’t be."
14"The voice was raspy, roughened"
15"She turned, and her breath"
16"This Evan was all hard"
17"His jaw was covered in"
18"He’d lost weight, the expensive"
19"He hadn't met her gaze."
ratio0.971
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"She kept, refusing to give him any purchase"
1"She met, refusing to let him see any weakness"
2"She raised, a spark of disbelief flickering in her eyes"
3"He spoke, never taking his eyes off Rory"
4"He glanced, a flicker of something unreadable passing across his face"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory laughed (laugh)"
1"He spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.083
76.1712%