Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9XCXY73M2TMXPG2HF1V6S

Run Details

Duration:
31.6s
Cost:
$0.000558
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Richmond Park breathed around Rory, a velvet hush wrapping the last embers of daylight. She killed the engine of the borrowed Vespa, the click echoing unnaturally loud in the gathering gloom. Every instinct screamed at her to turn around, to blame a sudden craving for takeaway and head back to Silas’ warm, smoky bar. But Eva’s voice, tight with worry, replayed in her head. *“You’re the only one who can do this, Rory. Please.”* The Fae Grove. Isolde’s grove, locals called it, though Rory doubted many even knew it existed. She’d read about it, naturally. Months spent down spiraling internet rabbit holes after Eva started talking about… things. Lost time, whispered warnings, and an increasing fear of shadows. Rory, pragmatic lawyer-in-training, had initially dismissed it as trauma. Until Eva showed her the things she couldn’t explain. Rory swung a leg over the scooter, boots hitting the damp, grassy verge. The park’s usual evening bustle—dog walkers, joggers—had vanished. The air, normally scented with horse manure and cut grass, carried a cloying sweetness, like overripe fruit. She tugged her leather jacket tighter. October bit with a damp chill. The Heartstone Pendant, cool under the collar of her shirt, didn't pulse. Not yet. It only reacted to Hel portals, and Eva hadn’t mentioned those, only a “weakening” and a sense of wrongness. Which, Rory admitted, she felt in spades. She walked, following a barely-there path between ancient oaks. Their branches, gnarled and skeletal, clawed at the darkening sky. Richmond Park felt too… still. No birdsong. No rustling in the undergrowth. Just the crunch of her boots on fallen leaves. The standing stones came into view, hulking silhouettes against the last vestiges of light. Old oaks had grown around them, half-embracing the rough-hewn rock. Beyond them, the air shimmered, a heat haze on a cold night. The Grove. “Hello?” she called, the word swallowed by the silence. Stupid. Talking to whatever was out here felt… inviting. She fished her phone from her pocket. No signal. Of course. She pushed through the shimmering distortion, and the temperature dropped. Instantly. A bone-deep cold that seeped into her marrow. The air tasted different, metallic. The Grove wasn't a clearing so much as a pocket, a small bowl of land nestled among the trees. Wildflowers bloomed in riotous colour, a defiant splash of vibrancy in the encroaching darkness. But even the flowers felt off, their petals too vivid, their stems unnaturally straight. A breeze stirred, carrying a scent that wasn’t floral sweetness. Something earthy, like turned soil and… iron? Rory’s hand instinctively went to the Heartstone. Still nothing. She walked deeper into the Grove, her gaze sweeping the perimeter. Something moved at the edge of her vision, a flicker of darkness between the trees. She stopped, heart hammering. “Just a deer,” she muttered, but the explanation felt thin, unconvincing. Another flicker. This time closer. A patch of shadow that resolved into… nothing. She scanned the trees, finding only shifting patterns of light and shadow. “Right,” she said, forcing a steadiness into her voice she didn’t feel. “Time to get this over with.” Eva had given her specific instructions. Find the oldest oak, the one with the hollow at its base. Leave the offering. A silver locket, containing a picture of Eva’s grandmother. It was supposed to… appease something. Rory still didn't understand *what*. The oldest oak wasn’t hard to find. It dominated the Grove, a colossal presence radiating a sense of ancient power. Its trunk was impossibly wide, its branches reaching towards the sky like supplicating arms. And there, at its base, was the hollow. Dark and cavernous, it seemed to absorb all light. Rory knelt, her knees sinking into the soft earth. She took the locket from her pocket, its silver cool against her palm. The air thrummed with a low, resonant frequency, barely audible, but felt in her teeth. “Okay, Eva,” she whispered. “For you.” She placed the locket in the hollow. Immediately, the air crackled. Not with energy, but with… pressure. Like a change in atmosphere before a storm. A twig snapped behind her. Rory whipped around, adrenaline spiking. Nothing. Just the trees, the flowers, the unsettling silence. She told herself it was an animal. A squirrel. A rabbit. But her gut churned with a primal fear. “It's just a park,” she breathed, but the words tasted like ash. She turned back to the oak, trying to regain control. The locket was gone. Vanished into the blackness of the hollow. A good sign, Eva had said. Absorption meant acceptance. But as Rory stood, another sound sliced through the silence. A faint, rhythmic drumming. Distant, but growing closer. It wasn’t the sound of a tool. Or machinery. It mimicked a heartbeat. A slow, deliberate pulse that resonated deep within her chest. She strained her eyes, searching the shadows. The drumming intensified, accompanied by a subtle shift in the air, a perfumed breeze that carried the scent of decay now, layered beneath the sweet floral notes. A shape coalesced at the edge of the Grove. Tall and slender, obscured by the trees. It wasn't human. Its form wavered, flickering like a faulty image on a screen. Rory’s hand clenched around the Heartstone. It began to warm, a faint throb against her skin. Not a pulse, exactly. More like a rising fever. The drumming quickened, echoing in her skull. The shape moved again, gliding towards her with an unnatural grace. It wasn’t walking. It wasn’t running. It simply… *was*, closer now, revealing glimpses of pale skin and long, dark hair. “Who’s there?” she demanded, her voice a strained whisper. The figure didn’t answer. It simply stopped at the edge of the Grove, its face still hidden in shadow. But Rory could feel its gaze on her, cold and assessing. A pressure that settled on her like a physical weight. Then, a voice. Not spoken aloud, but formed directly in her mind. *Lost.* Rory stumbled backward, the Heartstone burning against her chest. It wasn’t a comforting warmth now. It was a warning. A screaming alarm. *You shouldn't be here.* The figure took another step, and a sliver of moonlight caught its face. It wasn’t a face she recognised. And it wasn’t entirely… there. A subtle blurring of features, a hollowness in the eyes that seemed to swallow the light. And a smile. A slow, predatory curve of the lips that didn’t reach its eyes. The Heartstone pulsed again, brighter this time. The air around her crackled with energy. Rory needed to get out. Now.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1093
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1093
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count2
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"sense of"
count2
6
word"hulking"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"silence"
count3
9
word"flicker"
count2
10
word"resolved"
count1
11
word"scanned"
count1
12
word"churned"
count1
13
word"rhythmic"
count1
14
word"resonated"
count1
15
word"wavered"
count1
16
word"throb"
count1
17
word"quickened"
count1
18
word"whisper"
count1
19
word"could feel"
count1
20
word"weight"
count1
21
word"comforting"
count1
22
word"warmth"
count1
23
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"echoing"
2"gloom"
3"chill"
4"pulse"
5"sense of"
6"hulking"
7"shimmered"
8"silence"
9"flicker"
10"resolved"
11"scanned"
12"churned"
13"rhythmic"
14"resonated"
15"wavered"
16"throb"
17"quickened"
18"whisper"
19"could feel"
20"weight"
21"comforting"
22"warmth"
23"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences143
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences146
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords17
totalWords1085
ratio0.016
matches
0"“You’re the only one who can do this, Rory. Please.”"
1"what"
2"was"
3"Lost."
4"You shouldn't be here."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Which, Rory admitted, she felt in spades."
83.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1049
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park2
Rory14
Vespa1
Eva7
Fae1
Grove7
Heartstone5
Pendant1
Hel1
Stupid1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Pendant"
places
0"Park"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
3"Hel"
globalScore0.833
windowScore1
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like ash"
1"eyes that seemed to swallow the light"
15.67% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.843
wordCount1085
matches
0"Not with energy, but with…"
1"Not spoken aloud, but formed directly in her mind"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean31
std18.03
cv0.582
sampleLengths
074
162
250
340
440
538
629
771
826
930
1011
1125
1218
1341
1451
1537
166
1725
185
1933
2012
2130
2241
2334
2430
2525
2638
279
2840
2912
301
3122
324
3355
3420
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences143
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs178
matches
0"wasn’t walking"
1"wasn’t running"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences146
ratio0.007
matches
0"The park’s usual evening bustle—dog walkers, joggers—had vanished."
58.72% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount65
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.07692307692307693
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.03076923076923077
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean7.43
std4.8
cv0.646
sampleLengths
014
117
223
310
410
53
613
75
812
91
1010
119
129
1313
148
1517
166
176
1812
192
2019
217
229
2310
244
251
262
275
289
2914
3010
3112
322
339
341
357
361
377
382
392
4010
411
428
435
4419
4514
4614
4710
486
491
62.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.410958904109589
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners60
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences118
matches
0"Just the crunch of her"
1"Immediately, the air crackled."
2"Just the trees, the flowers,"
3"More like a rising fever."
4"Then, a voice."
ratio0.042
97.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences118
matches
0"She killed the engine of"
1"She’d read about it, naturally."
2"She tugged her leather jacket"
3"It only reacted to Hel"
4"She walked, following a barely-there"
5"Their branches, gnarled and skeletal,"
6"she called, the word swallowed"
7"She fished her phone from"
8"She pushed through the shimmering"
9"She walked deeper into the"
10"She stopped, heart hammering."
11"she muttered, but the explanation"
12"She scanned the trees, finding"
13"she said, forcing a steadiness"
14"It was supposed to…"
15"It dominated the Grove, a"
16"Its trunk was impossibly wide,"
17"She took the locket from"
18"She placed the locket in"
19"She told herself it was"
ratio0.305
91.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences118
matches
0"Richmond Park breathed around Rory,"
1"She killed the engine of"
2"Every instinct screamed at her"
3"The Fae Grove."
4"Isolde’s grove, locals called it,"
5"She’d read about it, naturally."
6"Months spent down spiraling internet"
7"Rory, pragmatic lawyer-in-training, had initially"
8"Rory swung a leg over"
9"The park’s usual evening bustle—dog"
10"The air, normally scented with"
11"She tugged her leather jacket"
12"October bit with a damp"
13"The Heartstone Pendant, cool under"
14"It only reacted to Hel"
15"She walked, following a barely-there"
16"Their branches, gnarled and skeletal,"
17"Richmond Park felt too…"
18"The standing stones came into"
19"she called, the word swallowed"
ratio0.737
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.02% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Its trunk was impossibly wide, its branches reaching towards the sky like supplicating arms."
1"A slow, deliberate pulse that resonated deep within her chest."
2"The drumming intensified, accompanied by a subtle shift in the air, a perfumed breeze that carried the scent of decay now, layered beneath the sweet floral note…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she called, the word swallowed by the silence"
1"she muttered, but the explanation felt thin, unconvincing"
2"she breathed, but the words tasted like ash"
3"she demanded, her voice a strained whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Every instinct screamed (scream)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
4"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.7
leniency1
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.714
79.8063%