"The air smelled of iron and jasmine, thick like wet wool, and her boots sank into moss that *moved*—not the slow heave of forest floor, but a quick, skittering pulse."
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"The restaurant owner had pressed the pendant into her palm that morning, her hands shaking, eyes darting to the kitchen where Evan—Evan with his knuckles split from punching a waiter—cleaned a pan."
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"— silence, first."
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"She fumbled for the phone in her pocket—screen cracked, dead."
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"No sunlight, even though it was still night outside; the moon was a sliver, and the sky glowed with a sickly green light, as if the stars had been smothered in paint."
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"Wildflowers bloomed everywhere—orchids, lilies, daisies—but they didn't look real."
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"A *feeling*—like a nail scraping down her spine, like someone whispering *stop* into her skull."
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"She'd heard stories, as a kid, about the Fae—about how they took what wasn't theirs, how a glance too long could unravel a soul."
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"Where it had been a tangled mess, it now formed a shape—a figure, thin as a blade, with limbs that bent wrong, fingers ending in claws like needles."
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"Evan had wanted to *hurt* her; this thing wanted to *unmake* her."
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"It was tall, taller than she was, with a face that was *nothing*—no eyes, no mouth, just a black pit where features should be—but she could *feel* it looking at her, drilling into her skull."
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"She could smell it now—rot and roses, sickly sweet—and the hair on her arms stood on end."
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"\"I'm not a human,\" she said, though it wasn't true—not anymore."
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"Aurora found the standing stones at midnight, the third oak in Richmond Park's northern edge bent low, its bark scored with runes that weren't there when she'd …"
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"The restaurant owner had pressed the pendant into her palm that morning, her hands shaking, eyes darting to the kitchen where Evan—Evan with his knuckles split …"
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"No sunlight, even though it was still night outside; the moon was a sliver, and the sky glowed with a sickly green light, as if the stars had been smothered in …"
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"She'd run from Evan's fists, from a landlord who'd broken her window, but this was different."
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"It was tall, taller than she was, with a face that was *nothing*—no eyes, no mouth, just a black pit where features should be—but she could *feel* it looking at…"
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"She placed her hand on the oldest oak, its bark rough, its runes glowing faintly now, as if waking."